Rajveer Naina - An Eternal Love Story- Part 3 Updated Pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: CrazyHasii

Don't worry ! there are lot Rajveer-Naina fans who love to read about them.



Looking forward for the same :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Amazing! read this in wattpad but again reading it here.
You captured Naina's feelings. it's spot on.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Awesome update
I have read this story on wattpad
Glad that you writing here as well
Continue soon
Plz pm me whenever you update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
hey
sorry for late comment ...
I m really busy yr ...
na lekhne ka time milta h na read karne ka ...
great start ...
just one advice if u r comfortable change the name of ur fic ...
iss name se already ek ya do story post h IF pe ...

it's just a suggestion bura mat mana par log confused ho jate h ek he naam ki kai story ho toh ...

keep updating ..n pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Part 2

Naina reaches the portion of the academy where Capt Rajveer has been kept. It is under tight supervision and security. 2 guards are standing outside.

Seeing a cadet at this hour, they ask her: aap yaha iss time kya kar rahi hai?

Naina : Mujhe capt Rajveer se milna hai. Bhaut zaroori kaam hai.

Guards: kya aapke pass permission hai?

Naina: nahi permission nahi hai mere pass par mujhe thodi derr ka kaam hai, usski baad i will leave.

Guards: we are really sorry but bina Brigadier Chandok ki permission ke hum aapko allow nahi kar sakte.

Naina: dekhiye aap samajhne ki koshish kariye, mujhe bhaut important kaam hai unse and jaise hi mera kaam khatam hoga main wapas aa jaungi.. main unki protegee hoon aur...

Naina is about to continue further when she hears sound of somone clapping.. She turns around to see and it is none other than Major Nair. Clapping with an even smirk on his face he comes towards her.

Major Nair: wahh kya baat hai.. aaj capt rajveer ki favourite cedit, unki protege unse milne aayi hai.. and smirking he says, aur woh bhi jail mein..!

Tum capt rajveer se nahi mil sakti cedit aur afsoos ab tum toh kya kal ke baad koi unse nahi mil payega kyuki kal unhe umarked ki saza jo hone waali hai..

Aur kya main jaan sakta hoon ki aisa kaunsa zaroori kaam aa gaya tume tumhare pyaare capt rajveer se ki iss waqt unse milne chali aayi ( He says this stretching on the word "pyaare" )

Agar main chahu toh tumhe issi waqt lights out ke baad apne room se bahar aane ke liye punish kar sakta hoon.

Naina who was listening to all this was trying to control her anger because she knew that now is not the time to create any scene.. It will only harm Capt Rajveer and she wont let that happen at any cost. So controlling her anger and trying to be calm she tells him:

Naina: mujhe Rajveer sir se kal case ke silsile mein kucch baat karni hai.. bhaut important hai..

Major Nair listening to this laughs and says : main issme tumhari koi madad nahi kar sakta cedit Singh..

Agar tumhe Capt Rajveer se milna hai toh tumhe BrIgadier Chandok se permission laani hogi, jo ki iss waqt so chuke honge.

Rules are rules cedit.

Meri maano cedit singh toh tum bhi apna time waste mat karo kyuki ab tumare capt Rajveer ko ( he says this focusing on the word 'tumhare') koi nahi bacha sakta..

Naina with determination on her face says

Naina: thik hai sir agar aap yahi chahte hai toh main Brigadier Chandok se hi permission le kar aaungi..captain rajveer singh shekhawat mere mentor hai.. aaj duniya ki koi takat mujhe unse milne se nahi rok sakti.. and saying this she turns to leave..But then stops and looks at him again

Naina: ek aur baat sir.. kal iss waqt capt Rajveer humare saath iss academy mein KMA mein honge..yeh mera wada hai aapse. duniya ki koi takat ab mujhe capt rajveer ko innocent proove karne se nahi rok sakti.. and yeh mera vishwaas hai.

Saying this Naina leaves from their for Brigadier Chandok's room.

Today she can go to any extent, can face anyone and can do anything just for her Rajveer.

Naina is going towards the staff headquarters when she happens to cross BC's office. She found the lights on from outside.. She wondered what is Bregadior Chandok doing at this hour in his office but she was thankful that she found him here itself and that he hadn't slept and she didnt need to go to his room.

It is true that BC is a very strict person but then his duty had made him so.. he had fought so many battles in his life both personally and professionally which had made him who he is. He had no family of his own. For BC KMA was the only family he had and all the cedits here were like his children for him.. True he is very strict with them, but then every patent has to be, to make sure that there children reach somewhere in there life.

BC and capt Rajveer never got along very well.. But that was because there was a difference in there thinking and views..Rajveer always stood for the truth even if that meant going against the system..but that doesn't mean BC didn't like him..Somewhere deep down BC knew that rajveer couldn't do anything like this.. he knew someone from the system was trapping him.. He was worried for him..

So even he couldn't sleep tonight.. sleep was miles away from his eyes so he decided to come to his office and do some work to divert his mind.. but he just couldn't concentrate..

Standing outside BC's office, taking a deep breath Naina gently knocked on the door. BC who was just sitting on his chair got surprised hearing the knock as he wasn't expecting anyone at this hour.

In his authoritative voice he said: Come in.

Naina hearing his command enters his office.

BC: Cedit singh tum lights out ke baad yaha kya kar rahi ho. Tume apne room mein hona chahiye.

Naina: I'm sorry sir. I know iss waqt mujhe yaha nahi hona chahiye but mujhe aapse permission chahiye sir

BC: permission? kaisi permission?

Naina: sir main capt rajveer se milna chahti hoon.. mujhe unse kal case ke baare mein important baat karni hai.

BC : I'm sorry cedit singh lekin main tumhe aisi koi permission nahi de sakta. Tum iss waqt capt rajveer se nahi mil sakti. Now Dismiss

But today Naina wont get dismissed so easily..Today she knows that if she doesnt fight then she can loose her rajveer forever and she cant let that happen.. So today she is going to fight. For them

Naina: I'm sorry sir.. but I wont be dismissed so easily sir. Sir aaj yaha ek insaan ki zindagi aur maut ka sawaal hai.. usski zindagi bharr ki mehnnat, usske career ka sawal hai, usski izzat ka sawaal hai. aur sir aaj main chup nahi baithungi.

Sir yeh baat toh aap bhi jaante hai aur main bhi ki capt rajveer aisa kucch kar hi nahi sakte. Unhe fasaya jaa raha hai. Aur sir agar aaj humne kucch nahi kiya na toh kal ek nirdosh insaan ko saza ho sakti hai.. uss insaan ko saza ho sakti hai jo iss desh ke liye apni life apna sab kucch sacrifice karne ke liye tayyiar hai.. Sir,capt rajveer ne hume sikhaya hai sach ke liye ladna.. sahi ka saath dena..

Toh aap bataiye sir ki kya yeh sahi hai ki hum sirf rules ke liye, ek insaan se usski zindagi cheen le.. Rules itne bade aur zindagi kucch bhi nahi..

Aap mujhe capt Rajveer se milne ki permission nahi de sakte toh thik hai, mat digiye.. lekin phir agar capt rajveer ko kal kucch bhi hota hai toh usske zimedaar sirf aap honge sirf aap.. aur agar aisa hua na sir, toh phir kal ke baad logo ka sachai par se vishwas uth jayega. kal ke baad iss academy ka ek bhi cadet sahi ke liye awaaz uthane se darrega..aur usske zimedaar bhi sirf aap honge..sirf aap..

After saying this and looking at BC, she turns to leave when she heard BC's voice.

BC : cadet singh

Naina stops hearing him. and turns to look at him.

BC get up from his chair and comes towards Naina and stands in front of her.

BC: aaj tume dekh kar Cedit Singh, tumhare bhai capt Naveen singh Alluwalia ki yaad aa gayi.. tum bilkul usske jaisi ho.. Naveen bhi bilkul aisi hi, humesha wahi karta tha jo sahi hota hai.. kabhi mere saamne bolne se darra nahi woh, jaise aaj tum nahi darri.

Mujhe khushi hai cedit, ki tumne apne mentor ke liye stand liya. Unke liye aawaz uthayi, sach ke liye awaaz uthayi aur main tumhari aawaz ko ansunni nahi karunga..

main tumhe capt Rajveer se milne ki permission deta hoon..

Hearing all this Naina's eyes get teary and at the same time she has a smile on her face..

Finally she will be able to meet her Rajveer..Finally she will get to see him.. and now she can talk with him and make him understand..

She has a new sense of hope in her now... that yess, everything will be okay..

Naina : Thankyou so much sir, Thankyou..

BC hands over the permission letter to her and smiles at her and puts his hand on her head, silently giving her blessings and the strength she needs..


sumedha34 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Amazing! read this in wattpad but again reading it here.
You captured Naina's feelings. it's spot on.

Thankyou so much :)
i'm glad you liked it 😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Nice dear
Thankyou 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Awesome update
I have read this story on wattpad
Glad that you writing here as well
Continue soon
Plz pm me whenever you update

Thankyou so much 😊
I shall pm you about the updates :)
sumedha34 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#19
hey
sorry for late comment ...
I m really busy yr ...na lekhne ka time milta h na read karne ka ...
great start ...
just one advice if u r comfortable change the name of ur fic ...
iss name se already ek ya do story post h IF pe ...

it's just a suggestion bura mat mana par log confused ho jate h ek he naam ki kai story ho toh ...

keep updating ..n pm me

Heyy.. Thats completely fine yaar.. read and comment at your own pace. Their is no rush.
Thankyou for liking the story :) and i will definatelythink about the name part :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Awesome update
Naina wants to meet raj
But ye major nair hamesha beech mein aa jata hai
But naina won't give up that easily
She takes permission from BC to meet raj
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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