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Posted: 7 years ago
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Where r u dear??when will u update??
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Originally posted by: Deepashikar33

When r u going to update? ???

Will update soon dear
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Originally posted by: NAVANT28

Again an excellent update..waiting egarly for anya's chemistry..pls update as soon as possible.

Sure dear.. thanku
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Originally posted by: NAVANT28

Where r u dear??when will u update??

Will update soon dear
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CONTINUE...
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Meeta request navya to go while navya goes downstairs.
VIJAY- what is this Ranbir??
Vijay was shouting at Ranbir while Ranbir was making him silent.
RANBIR- Vijay please be quiet...
VIJAY- what quite Ranbir? Ye ladki se milne bulaya tumne mujhe? Ye aunty??
Commented Vijay about navya. While navya was standing near them shocked to hear it from Vijay.
RANBIR- Vijay .. mind your tongue
VIJAY- please Ranbir.. don't overreact. Tumne tumhare liye ritika jaisi ladki choose ki aur mere liye navya jaisi aunty? God... How can you think of that?
Navya gets more shocked. She was getting emotional to hear it.
RANBIR - but why are you looking at her beauty? Navya bohot achi he, I know her from years. Aur wo bas ritika ki behen nahi Meri best friend bhi he.
Ranbir tried to explain him while he looks unconvinced.
VIJAY- please.. tum jante ho Mera reputation? My status? Wo aunty to koi business party me lekar Jane ke bhi layak nahi he.
This made navya to cry. Ranbir's eyes falls on her. Vijay looks at his way. Navya wipes her tears and came towards Vijay to hand him his cellphone. Vijay took it and left from there.
RANBIR- forget it navya. Wo tumhare layak nahi he.
Navya looks at him.
NAVYA- reality is... Me kisike layak nahi hu.
Saying this she left from there. Ranbir looks at her going and feels sad for her.
***
It was late night, anant return home. He accidentally stands on rangoli design in front of navya's house. He looks frustrated.
ANANT- shit . Ab subah firse wo jhansi ki Rani dategi...
Said anant looking sorry. He was about to open the lock when he heard someone wiping near stairs. He looks confused and moves towards stairs to find navya sitting there. He moves towards her.
ANANT - excuse me
Navya gets frightened. She looks at him and wipes her tears.
ANANT- are you ok?
Navya nodded in yes. She adjusted her specs. Anant sits besides her. Navya looks at him in surprise and move little aside.
ANANT- sab thk he na?
Asked anant while navya looks elsewhere.
NAVYA- tumse matlab?
Anant nodded in agreement. He also looks elsewhere. He took out a cigarette and lighter from his pocket. Navya became surprised
NAVYA- you smoke?
ANANT- yaa .. you want?
Asked anant to share his cigarette while she looks disgusted.
NAVYA- chi... No
Anant started smoking. Navya covers her nose.
NAVYA- don't you know? Smoking is injurious for health?
Anant nodded in disbelief.
ANANT - madam, aap apni life ko itna torcher kyu karti he? Enjoyment matter karta bhi he apko ya nahi?
Asked anant getting irritated. Navya looks elsewhere
ANANT- loud music kyu he, smoke kyu karte ho, drink kyu Kiya, rangoli mitai.. come on Yar... Give me some break..
Navya looks at him in anger.
ANANT- tum sachme isi duniya ki ho na?
NAVYA- nahi hu... Aunty hu me.. modern nahi hu.. samjhe??
Shouted navya. Anant looks in surprise. Navya looks elsewhere
ANANT - tum to gussa hogayi
Anant notice tears in her eyes. He took out his kerchief and offered it to navya. She wipes her tears herself and goes from there while anant looks at her strangely.
***
Next day, door bell rang of Mishra house. Meeta opened the door to find ranbir's mom Savita in front.
MEETA- are bhabi ji... Namaste.. ayiye na
She invited Savita inside. Savita sat on sofa. Deepak looks at meeta while she gave don't know expression.
DEEPAK- ritika to aaj office jaldi chali gayi.
SAVITA- koi bat nahi bhaisahab. Mujhe aap dono se hi bat karni thi
Said Savita looking at them. Meeta smile at her.
MEETA- Ranbir didn't told us about this
SAVITA - actually... Ranbir aur uske papa dono ko nahi pata he ki me yaha ayi hu
Deepak and meeta looks at each other.
SAVITA- bhabi ji, bhaisahab.. me apse directly bat karti hu. Aapne navya ke liye Kya socha he?
Asked Savita while Deepak and meeta gets surprise
SAVITA- Ranbir aur ritika ki sagai hue 3 sal hone ko arahe he bhaisahab. Akhir mujhe ab kab Tak Ranbir ki Shaadi ka wait Karna hoga?
Asked Savita while Deepak bows down and meeta looks tensed.
MEETA- aap sahi keh rahi he bhabi.. par hum bhi to navya ke liye koshish Kar hi rahe he na.. uske liye rishte ate he par bat ban nahi pati..
SAVITA- to bat banayiye bhabi ji. Ek bat to pakki he jab Tak badi beti ki Shaadi nahi hoti tab Tak choti ki nahi hogi.
Said Savita in a orderly tone. Deepak and meeta looks at each other
SAVITA- me navya ki dushman nahi hu bhaisahab. Mujhe bhi uski chinta he. Aur isliye keh rahi hu agar sahi time rehte uski Shaadi nahi hui to badme bht taklif hogi
Savita tried to explain them. Meeta looks down. Savita sigh relief and gets up to go. Deepak and meeta gets up looking at her.
SAVITA- I am sorry to say. But me jyada din Ranbir ki Shaadi ke liye nahi ruk sakti. Jyada se jyada I can wait for 6 months. Tab Tak apne navya ke liye kuch decision nahi liya to... Mujhe ritika aur Ranbir ki sagai todni hogi
This made Deepak and meeta shocked
DEEPAK- aap aisa kyu keh rahi he bhabi?
SAVITA- ek ma hu bhaisahab. Rishtedar sawal puch puchke thak Gaye aur hum jawab dete dete. Aur usse bhi jyada Mere bete ki fikr he mujhe. Mera Ranbir kisi ladki ke liye Zindagi bhar to nahi ruk sakta na. Aap hi batayiye, ek beti ke liye dusri ke sath na insafi karna Kya ye sahi he?
Asked Savita to them. They both looks unanswerable. Savita did a namaste to them
SAVITA- I will wait for your decision. Namaste...
Saying she left from there. This all was heard by navya who was standing at door in pink color suit. She falls on her knees crying loudly. Meeta and Deepak came near her.
MEETA- stop navya... Chup hoja
NAVYA- aisa nahi he ma ki me Shaadi nahi karna chahti.. aisa nahi he ki mujhe kisi ke liye feelings nahi ati. Par koi feeling reciprocate hi nahi karega to me Kya karu?
Shouted navya while crying. Deepak wipes her tears.
DEEPAK- Navi.. beta mujhe pura yakin he Teri life me bhi koi aisa ayega Jo tujhse bht pyar karega
NAVYA- when papa? When? Ritika ki Shaadi tutne ke bad?
Meeta interrupt
MEETA- aisa mat bol Navi.. sab thk hojayega..
Deepak and meeta tried to pacify her...
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TO BE CONTINUED...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
very emotional update..feeling really very bad for navya...waiting for next..update soon dear..


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Excellent chapter
Loved it so much
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey everyone... Will update tomorrow
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CONTINUE...
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Ritika was sitting in hall at night reading magzine. She was turning pages when her eyes falls on an article of a random model. She read the topic- "A story of a small town girl which will inspire all of us". She got curious and started reading the article. The article state that how the model was ordinary and average looking and how she changed her lifestyle and became a successful. Ritika thought about navya. She runs into navya's room. Navya was working on her laptop. Ritika goes and sits besides her.
NAVYA- Kya hua?
Asked navya. Ritika smile at her
RITIKA- is temporary problem ka permanent solution mil gaya he mujhe
Navya looks confused and adjusted her specs.
RITIKA- di... Why don't you have your makeover??
NAVYA - Kya..??
Asked navya in a surprise. Ritika shows her the magzine.
RITIKA- read this. Is model ne dekho kaise khudko change kiya he. I think tum bhi karlo. Stylish kapde, hairstyle, beauty treatment.. sab..
NAVYA- aur usse Kya hoga?
Asked navya getting angry
NAVYA- me wo ban jau Jo me hu hi nahi? Fir isse koi ladka mujhe pasand Kar bhi le to isme achi bat Kya hogi.? Me chahti hu jaisi me hu waise mujhe koi accept Kare.
Said Navya and continued her work. Ritika looks at her in disbelief.
RITIKA- Tum Jo chahti ho woh sahi hai Dee par kabhi kabhi practically bhi Soch na padta hai.
Navya looks at her while Ritika tried to explain her.
RITIKA- It's a changed world di. Aaj kal Jab Pyar Hota Hai Toh sirf andar ki beauty se nahi balki Bahar ki beauty se bhi Hota Hai. And it is absolutely correct.
NAVYA- What is correct in this Ritika?
RITIKA- Tum Hi Batao Di.. Nahi chahti Tumhara life partner is Duniya ka sabse handsome ho?
Asked Ritika while Navya goes in thoughts. Ritika keeps the magazine near her and goes from there. Navya looks at the magazine and adjusted her specs. She tried to read the article but then looks elsewhere.
NAVYA- nonsense things... Aisa kabhi nahi hota
She tried to take her mind elsewhere and convince herself. She was not able to...
***
Next day Navya was working on her table in office. She was in orange colour cotton salwar suit with hair plated. Concentration was still on what Ritika told her yesterday. She adjust her specs. She look around herself to find number of females colleagues well and modern dressed. She then looks at herself
NAVYA- kya sach mein yahi reason hai mujhe baar baar rejection milne ka?
She asked herself, Took a deep breath. Ritika's words again surround her mind. She open the Google page of her PC and searched-" top beauticians in Mumbai". She open the first sight and started reading few of them. Suddenly her eyes falls on a photo. She looks confused. she read the name - Aparna Dixit.
NAVYA- aparna Dixit.. maine Kahi Dekha he inhe..
She tried to remember her. suddenly She got to know.
NAVYA- yeh toh wahi Ladki Hai jo us din wo housewarming party mein Anant ke ghar par thi..
She Nodded in agreement. She started reading about her. She also check her website
NAVYA- call kar ke Dekhti Hoon
She dial the number which was there on website
LADY- hello Aparna Dixit salon
NAVYA- hello main Navya bol rahi hoon
LADY- how can I help you mam?
Asked the lady. Navya adjusted her specs
NAVYA- actually I wanted to ask about makeover
LADY- sure mam. For that you have to take appointment.
Navya checked her watch and then at the calendar.
NAVYA- kitne baje ki appointment mil sakti hai?
LADY- kitne baje?? Sorry ma'am there is no free slot till next month
This made Navya shocked
NAVYA- What next month?
LADY- aparna Dixit Itni easily available nahi rehti hai mam. If You are interested then you can book appointment for next month
NAVYA- it's ok thank you
LADY- thank you mam have a nice day
Saying Navya disconnected the call
NAVYA- next month?? itna busy schedule?? This proves logo ko Kitna interest hai khud ka makeover karne ka.
Navya noted in disbelief..
***
At night navya was in her night suit roaming from one corner of room to other. She remembers what Ritika said yesterday.
NAVYA- is it really necessary??
Ask Navya to herself getting confused. She Goes towards mirror and checks herself. She Touched her specs and then looks at her self from top to bottom. She remembers what Vijay called her - aunty..
NAVYA- aunty?? Am I really a...??
She stops in between. She looks frustrated. Her eyes falls on one photograph which was kept at shelf. It was of Ritika's and Ranbir's engagement. She remembers What Savita, Ranbir's mom told Deepak and meeta. She was feeling restless. She moves towards table and had a glass of water. She took a deep breath and goes from there.
***
Door bell Rang of Anant's house. Anant was shirtless watching TV. He looks Confused.
ANANT- is time Kaun aa gaya?
He goes to open the door. Navya looks surprised looking Anant shirtless. She looks other ways making Anant confused.
ANANT- excuse me?
Interrupted anant. Navya looks uncomfortable.
NAVYA- I... wanted to talk to you...
Said Navya in a hesitance.
ANANT- say it...
NAVYA- aabbb... Tum Pehle... Shirt peheno..
She said in a go. Anant nodded in disbelief. he goes inside.
ANANT- come in..
Navya Slowly looks at his direction and gets inside. She sits on sofa and looks here and there. Anant wear his shirt and moves towards her
ANANT- is it ok?
Asked Anant for which Navya nodded in yes. Anant sits beside her.
ANANT- so??
Ask Anant while Navya searched for words to say. Anant waited for her
ANANT- puri Rath kya Mein Aise Hai Tumhare bolne ka wait Karne Wala Hoon??
Navya nodded in no. She tried to speak.
NAVYA- meri family Mere Liye Ladka Dhund Rahi Hai. From last 5 years
Anant looks confused
ANANT- So?
NAVYA- teri shaadi fix nahi ho Pa rahi hai. And ritika KA kehna Hai ki Shayad Mujhe makeover kar lena chahiye
Anant gets more confused while Navya looks here and there
ANANT- yeh Sab tum mujhe kyun bata rahi ho??
NAVYA- aparna Dixit Tumhari friend hai right??
Now Anant understands it. He nodded in disbelief.
ANANT- tumhe main appy... Matlab Aparna ka PA Lagta Hoon? Jo Tum Yahan appointment Lene Aayi Ho
NAVYA- nahi nahi...I Don't want to say that. Actually many unke office mein call kiya tha is busy till next month
ANANT- so agle month ki appointment Lelo
NAVYA- wohi to... I wanted to meet her as soon as possible. Next month tak wait main nahi kar sakti..
Navya try to explain him
ANANT- toh tum mujhse Chahti kya ho??
Ask Anant while Navya gulped to speak
NAVYA- tum please mujhe Unse milwa do.. Tumhari friend hai wo so please meri help kar do...
Requested Navya. Anant looks surprised. He got up.
ANANT- raat ke 11 baje yeh Kehne Tum Yahan Aayi Ho??
Ask Anant getting angry. Navya gets up looking at him
NAVYA- listen please mera Unse Milna bahut zaroori hai. Meri shaadi jald se jald nahi hui To Meri behan ki Sagai Toot Jayegi..
Said Navya getting emotional..
ANANT- tumhari Shaadi tute ya Tumhari behan ki.. Main Kya Karoon?? Mere paas bahut se kaam hai ok..
Navya tried to convince him but Anant denied.
ANANT- leave
Said Anant when Navya look sad. She goes from there while Anant kept on looking at her...
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TO BE CONTINUE...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Welcome back dear.. looking for next..pls update soon na..

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