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Posted: 17 years ago
hehe ak blocked everything except work
i cant wait for the kiss i want no wat goes
on these 2 parts which leads to the kiss.
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Posted: 17 years ago
This is so well written. I think a crisis work wise was the best twist for both of them. Poor Angad.....hes terrified awwww. And Kripa has no clue. Am gonna wait and watch who cracks under the pressure first. Looks like its gonna be Angad esp since Suhit is gonna be there for the shoot.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part
i just wonder hw kripa manages to complete all of angad's work so fast
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Posted: 17 years ago

OMG Prakriti,

Just read the last two parts

conclusion, concussion, concession, and confession…😆not to mention Angu???😆. Like Kripa would say "No Way!!!"
Kripa's better than most romance heroines at connecting the dots (and thank all gods known and unknown for that😉) cause generally they need to be hit on the head with the metaphorical brick before they see what the readers have seen since page 1 or whatever😕. Aww…they were both trying to be all professional and I-don't-give-a-damn, how sweet!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago


The Devil Wears Armani



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Angad and Kripa sat in silence as they rode to the set location, both realizing the severity of the situation. They had a lot to discuss, that was for sure, but this shoot was much more crucial. When they arrived at the location, Angad was quickly hustled off to hair and makeup while Kripa was told to go and wait on the set.

As both of them sat in their respective rooms, doing what they were supposed to, their thoughts drifted off to the incident that occurred this morning. Angad knew what he wanted, and Kripa- well, Kripa was confused.

Angad was her boss, someone who she worked for. She was headstrong- her own parents couldn't dominate her. So how would their relationship succeed if the man she was in love with was her boss? Then there was the fact that people would say that she slept with her boss to get ahead in the business. And how in the world would she refute them? Heck, if she wasn't the girl in question even she would have thought the same thing. Of course, this also brought on the whole celebrity thing- would she be able to handle dating one of the most infamous men in the world? Tabloids made sure that they kept track of his every move; in fact, she was surprised that they hadn't figured something was going on already. Would she be able to see pictures of him with all the leggy models draped across of him?

He also started to think about the future of their relationship. Angad knew that both him and Kripa were headstrong and had dominant personalities- that would lead to many arguments and fights. Could he handle that? What about the tabloids?

"You're done Mr. Khanna. Now if you'd just please follow me into the costuming trailer…" Angad looked up to see the makeup artist walk across the room. He followed her quickly trying to expel the thoughts to the back of his mind.

****

Kripa's jaw almost hit the floor when Angad strode out to the set. She quickly fixed her face and looked around, annoyed to see that pretty much all the ladies (as well as a few men) had the same reaction as she did. Narrowing her eyes, she walked up to Angad and pretended to fix his tie in order to get closer to him, while at the same time to show everyone who he belonged to.

To say Angad was surprised was an understatement. He looked down at her, and after seeing the annoyed expression on her face, he looked around the room. He smirked when he realized what had happened. Kripa was jealous. She was jealous, and he was oh so happy.

Unfortunately the happiness lasted for two seconds before Suhit strolled on the set and called Kripa to his side. She walked to him, not looking Angad in the eye, and hugged him.

"Hey," she whispered, "I need to talk to you."

"Okay, um why don't you come with me to hair and makeup? I doubt they're going to let me just talk right now," Suhit said, looking around. True to his words, some women came and quickly hustled Suhit to the hair and makeup van. When someone was fixing his hair, he turned to her and said, "So what's up?"

Kripa glanced at the hairstylist nervously, not wanting to say everything in front of her. Suhit noticed her hesitation and rolled his eyes.

"Paagal, buhl gayi ki hum loag Hindustani hai- hindi bolna atta hai. Waisa bhi, ye ladki gori hai; isko thori na hindi ati hogi. Toh tum hindi me paata doe kya hua." (Stupid, did you forget hat we are Indian? We know how to speak in Hindi. Anyway, this lady is white; I doubt she knows how to speak Hindi. So why don't you tell me what happened in Hindi.)

Kripa laughed and quickly told Suhit everything that occurred that morning. He nodded once she was done and said, "Took him long enough." Kripa stared at him, her eyes wide.

"What do you mean, long enough?" she exclaimed. Suhit rolled his eyes and motioned for the stylist, who had just completed working on his hair, to leave the room. She walked out and he looked Kripa straight in the eye.

"Angad and I are friends," he started, "well I mean not best friends or anything, but considering how much we work and travel together, we share a pretty good relationship. Well at least, we did. I don't know how much he likes me now, considering I'm 'dating' his lady love," he winked as Kripa blushed, "but I know him well enough. I actually noticed that he had feelings for the first time I met you in the elevator."

"That far back? Really?" Kripa asked.

"Yep, when I greeted you for the first time, I saw his face get all cloudy. It was pretty amusing I have to admit, so I kept flirting with you," then he hastily added, "I mean not that you're not hot. 'Cuz you are. Hot, I mean. I totally thought you were hot. I just wanted to mess with him."

Kripa raised her eyebrows at his blabbering, "I'm not offended, continue."

Suhit sighed in relief and continued, "And for all the time I've known him, this was definitely a first. I mean he was always with hot girls, but it was the first time that I saw him actually care about a girl not related to him. So I decided to step in and mess with his head; I knew he would do anything he could in order to not admit to himself what he felt. And I wanted him to come out of his shell; finally find a companion that he trusted and loved. He was so damn lonely all the time, and it was really sad when I saw it. But the jealousy stuff, regardless of how clich it was, worked. You should've seen his face when I kissed you! Man, it was priceless. So yeah, now that he's finally realized how he truly feels we should end this whole fake relationsh-"

Kripa stared at a suddenly silent Suhit (nice alliteration there), "Why'd you stop talking?" When he didn't reply, she rolled her eyes and smacked him lightly on the head. "Hello? Suhit? Why'd you stop talking?"

"Because of me."

Kripa gulped as she turned around slowly. There stood Angad Khanna regarding them both with a furious look on his face.

Could this day get any worse?!

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Hey everyone! Ok, this was the second to last part. I really don't like this part; it's got a lot of problems with the flow and stuff. But regardless, it's a part I guess. It's not that long, but I didn't know what else to do. I'm running low on time, with school only like seven days away (blah). Anyways I'd like two days or three days for the last part- I'll try to make it long and tie up everything so I need some time for that. Oh and actually proofread too so comment away on this part! And anything you wanna see in the ending please let me know. PM me or comment it here; whichever.

Note:

I know I said I would reply to all the comments but I have to get off the computer and finish my summer reading (I procrastinate way to much for my own good ) or else my mom's going to kill me. I just wanted to address one comment really quickly from deeya123- thanks! And I know it seems like she does everything really quickly but that's just because the story doesn't follow her when she does. One reason for that is because I don't know all the technicality that goes with all the things she has to do as I' ve never done it, so I don't want to mess things up and tell ya'll wrong things. Also, Kripa is supposed to be intelligent and very adept. She got the job because of her wits and skill. I have never portrayed her as someone who is incapable of doing things. So yes, she does do things faster than most people are capable of, but it still takes her time. This last task took her three hours- I thought it was enough. Thanks for your comment!

All the other amazing commenter's- thank you all so much! I read each and every comment- they were all amazing. I'm glad you all like that Kripa isn't like your typical serial heroine & all melodramatic. She's very levelheaded and strong, which is another reason why she doesn't break down all and cry all the time. Thank you all so much and I hope you continue to comment!

Prakriti
Edited by prakriti - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OH MY GODD....WHAT DID ANGAD HEAR??

I hope he didnt hear everything!! oh god...and even if he did....i hope he doesnt get angry and distance himself from Kripa.......they're not even together properly yet......cant have a separation now!!!😭

continue soon
you left a cliffy.....lol...
Edited by love_iqbal_khan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey i luved it do cont soon!
❤️twinkle!
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG, Angad knows about Krips and Suhit's plan. Kripa is in deep trouble. I am happy they r gonna get together but sad the next part is gonna be the last one.
Good work!
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Posted: 17 years ago

prakriti ....man u r really fast when u put ur mind to it..............u really mean to finish it b4 the 3rd sep...............

has angad heard the whole convo...............kripa's really gng to get into trouble with a capital T..................but maybe it'll be a precussor of better things to come..............................mayb now angad will also declare his intentions openly instead of gng around them to make kripa's life hell.............
gr8 update as usual...huns buns.......lolzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago

Only one more part? That's harsh😭…but I loved the part. Suhit is such an adorable idiot; I'm finding him more and more attractive each time😳. The way he was babbling about being attracted/not attracted to Kripa was so cute😆. And I agree a very nice alliteration indeed😉. But I hope Angad heard the entire speech or he might think they were playing him. Guys and their huge egos…what can I say?🤢

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