New SS: Right In Front Of Me (Ch.4: Filmy Pg.6) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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first part is amazing
nd 2 part is superb love this story
pls continue :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hiii Nikiii 🤗
Long weekend hai na. Would we receive any updates ? 🤡 It's always nice to be hopeful 😆
I'm hopeful
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb one dr...love to get pm for the updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Princex178

Wooow cute part😊 but sanjana prems g.f😕

But no worries i know u make prem fall for heer any ways😆
Thanks for the update please update next part soon



Hey Sam (can I call you that? 😆 )
thank you for taking the time to read and comment It really means a lot.
Yes Sanjana is Prem's gf...but all is not well in paradise ;)
Next part coming up shortly/

much love,
nikki ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: tarannum6

Wowww superb Update Nikki
loved loved loved it
love premeer scean ❤️
nd Gay3 nd Heer scean
you are amazing writer Nikki ⭐️
pls next part jaldi update karna 😃



hey!
Thank you hun! I'm glad you liked the scene between heer and gayatri.
thank you for compliment hun. I will continue to improve
😊
next part coming soon!

nikki ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: sana.harshiti

The story is getting interesting ..

Loved the 2nd part .
Plz Nikki update soon



Thank you for commenting. hope you love the next one as well!!
nikki ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: AASUS

Nikki hope everything works out for your benefit at personal front.🤗 You're a lovely soul and wish all good things come your way.

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wow wow I lob the story. This part is even more fun than 1st 😲

Heer cho chweet and cute 😳 Her admiring that bracelet made me think of the PH situation where Prem buys her pink salwar suit which she admired at the shop. I'm guessing this will be something like that also. Heer will end up receiving this. Could be he finds out somehow or H2H happens.

Entire update was awesome. Wonder y Heer doesn't builds up her career graph if all she needs is a certificate 😳 to get proper title as Executive assistant or something more and go up the ladder. 🤔

Prem was nice and civil in this chapter. See I knew you were gona show different side of him and you did. 🤗

Precap is hilarious. Ya I remember biji in the show - she cracked me up with her dialogues too.
This one seems v similar. 😆 The lady who stayed with Jzoo I mean.

oh yes can't wait for this pooja and party. Wonder Preet will make appearance as it's his party after all? 🤓

Eagerly waiting to read next ch. Pretty pls aap yahaan aajao on time. ☯️





Haila!! I love your comment yaar ❤️
thank you sweetie. you are too kind. I hope the very best for you as well!!

the bracelet scene lol. wait and read hun. though I will let you know, nothing anytime too soon.;)

Heer's career path will be revealed in the coming updates. but I will let you know, she is working on her certificates.
😊
As all characters, there is no solid shade. each character will have their soft and hard moments.

Preet may or may not show up... 😈 we shall see... 😆

oh beeji. I don't know if you ever seen kasam tere pyaar ki..but Rishi's beeji in that show is kinda what im hoping to develop here. 😆

Again, I love reading your comments hun. next chapter will be up soon!

Nikki ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: tanuharshiti

first part is amazing
nd 2 part is superb love this story
pls continue :)



thank you! I hope you enjoy the coming update as well.

nikki
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: shirlys

Superb one dr...love to get pm for the updates



Welcome to my story! thank you for the comment and like. I will be starting a pm list :)

nikki

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