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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Alai123

Beautifully written OS

Thanks for the pm😉


Thnx dear <3

But I didn't pm for this...had no time
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

My hands r itching for comment lol.

Swagat nahi karogey mera...
Chalo welcome song gaawo mere lye...
Di I m nt back BT I m nt gone too...
I m nt making any promises BT u m trying to b regular if internet raha toh otherwise Duaawo mai yaad rakhna

Hey Shah Sair dear 😊
welcome, to unka kiya jata hai jo chod ke jate hain, aap to yahin ho

Say blessed dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: beyonddarkness

Amazing OS
You have portrayed emotions so beautifully
Frustration , anger can destroy so much if one keeps thing within oneself
As you described arnav's mindset that khushi was a easy target to vent out his emotions which is usually the case with so many people- spouse or any loved one -these are the easy targets because they love and trust you enough
It's like you summarised the whirlwind of emotions through this OS 👏


Thnx beyonddarkness 😊

so good to see you, Miss you and your input with deep insight
Emotions are what makes the relationship...true, anger, frustration destroys you.Spouse is an easy target to throw this anger and all
but Love, trust, sacrifice, all make it work

I am honored, Thank you❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Beautifully written piece in simple prose yet completely succinct
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: sloppyjoe

Amazing and sensitive 👏

A human is a slave towards his emotions and you have captured that train of thoughts and emotions of Arnav beautifully.Khushi doesn't need his words, she knows every meaning of his touch and his look.What a bond of trust and love they share?

The climax is heart touching ❤️


Thnx dear <3

Very well said, Human is a slave of emotions, Like that phrase.
Arnav and Khushi has trained those emotions towards love and trust
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66










Originally posted by: inaara_khan

it was nice...

loved it..







Originally posted by: anarshi

Beautifully written faiqa '







THANK YOU 😊




Edited by Mysticaldivine - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
👏👏

Originally posted by: coderlady

Such a beautiful piece. Have to live through life's frustrating moments.


tHNX coderlady <3

absolutely, you just put the entire thing in one line..👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Roop_P

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched. They must be felt with the heart"
Helen Keller

That is what I felt.The agony , frustration, emotional roller coaster ride of Arnav through his love and trust within facing the faith of his family was portrayed brilliantly.Not easy to express, write of even feel up to that level.Such a small write up but so big as an impact.

Brilliant dear 👏



Nice Quote dear <3

Wow, if you are feeling all of this ,then I am successful in this moment.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: jdd1959

SIMPLY BEAUTIFULLL...

U HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS...GOD GIFTED ...


Thnx dear <3
glad you liked it.

I am honored🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: just4this

Hello friend

A moment, beautiful title, I believe in living in the moment always.

Moments like these makes the relationship stronger, argument, venting out frustration on each other, and then making up for it.

Very nicely written.
Thank u


Thnx mamta <3

We all live in those moments...

Yes, these moments make life stronger, full of experience

Glad u enjoyed.

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