||The Doctor Of My Heart||- TwoShot (Second Part @Pg2)

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A/N-: I'd firstly credit Shano aka MohabbatGirl.x for coming up with this concept, and of course I'm glad that she asked me to write this. 😳 I also have to thank her for helping me wherever I was stuck while writing this TS. 🤗

P.S-: Since the background of this TS is set in Turkey, the following content has certain Turkish terms and I've added the english translation of the same in brackets, right next to such words. 😃

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||Part-One||

The calm & quiet atmosphere at the hospital's reception became somewhat unsettled when a vaguely troubled man stepped in, carrying a 6-7 year old kid protectively in his arms as the receptionist looked at his tensed condition and began arranging for him to fill up the formalities. He hurriedly filled up the hospital form within few seconds and rushed towards the elevator as directed by the receptionist, all the while consoling the unconscious child that he would soon feel better. As the elevator halted at second floor, Sinan stepped out and settled in the waiting area with little Orhan, looking towards the door after every few minutes to check whether there was any doctor coming up to his help.

"Sinan Abi (brother)..." The child tried calling out to him, still being in his same condition.

"Calm down Oglum (son). You're my brave boy, remember? You'll be fine now, just a few more minutes."

He tried to ease the situation for Orhan by gently caressing his head, though he himself grew annoyed with each second's delay as he saw no one there except for 2-3 nurses, who barely paid any attention to the unconscious child and continued with their work despite of Sinan's urgent pleas. However, his frustration was slightly lowered down when he finally saw someone approaching towards him hastily a few minutes later.

"I'm extremely sorry for the delay, let me see the child."

Those innocent words of apology sounded quite melodious to Sinan, as he moved up his eyes to take a good notice of this lady doctor but she quickly rushed towards an empty ward, tenderly holding up the weak child in her arms. He followed her in till she restfully laid Orhan on the bed and began checking his temperature, while he anxiously stood there beside the kid.

"Since how long has he been unconscious?"

"He was feeling uneasy since like an hour or before that... And the moment we reached here, he fell unconscious."

Sinan replied & went on explaining to her about rest other symptoms, though again he made an attempt to look at her, this time trying to read the little name-tag on her apron but he was disturbed by the loud noise of opening & closing of the door in a spur of moment as the doctor's friend joined her in the ward.

"Nilay, what's wrong? I saw you leaving the seminar in between..." The lady could barely complete her question when she already got her answer on seeing the child there, "Ohh!"

"It's a case of heatstroke. Look, how pale he has become, poor kid." Nilay replied thoughtfully, as she continued with her work, "I was informed late about this else I'd have attended to him much earlier."

Nilay didn't pay much interest to her friend's discussion about the seminar in which they both were busy before coming to Orhan, as her sole concern at the moment was to treat the child, though somehow this conversation between them instantly drew Sinan's attention once again towards her. His eyes looked upon her with a glint of elation when he realized how she was one of those very few genuinely dutiful doctors who give priority to their patients, despite of being busy with some or the other work.

"Dr. Nilay Sehin... Interesting."

Sinan mentally noted down her name when he managed to read her name tag, but not before making sure that she didn't caught him doing so and misinterpreted his intentions! It was a few moments later when Orhan was back to consciousness, though he still appeared weak enough as Sinan looked at him worriedly and kissed his forehead.

"You literally scared me, Orhan! How are you feeling now?"

"A little better. But I don't want to stay here, I want to go back." Orhan pleaded innocently to him in response.

"You little master, if you don't want to stay here then you'll have to do as I say, fine?" Nilay spoke up to Orhan, while she passed a slight smile to Sinan and then looked back at the kid, "You have to drink plenty of water even if you're not thirsty, and don't play much out in the sun, else next time I will have to give you an injection too."

"No, I hate injections, they pain a lot."

"So if you hate injections, you'll be a good boy & do as I said, isn't it?"

Sinan probably had no idea how there was a smile constantly glued on his face when he noticed Dr. Nilay getting along well with Orhan, and treating him with much love & care like generally a pediatrician should do. Yes, maybe she was treating him this way because it was a part of her job, or maybe she has actually been fond of kids, but whatever the reason was, he absolutely adored Nilay's softness towards the kid. While she indulged in a playful conversation with Orhan to lighten up his mood, Sinan's curious eyes took notice of her ring finger with a hope of not seeing any signs of her commitment.

"Hmm. It doesn't look like she's either engaged or married." He sighed in relief when he didn't find any ring on her finger, though he still couldn't assure himself about her, "Allah Allah, what if she's seeing anyone? I really hope not... Damn you Sinan! You first have to make a move before concluding about her relationship status."

He mentally reprimanded himself for making conclusions without actually knowing much about the lady, though his thought process was interrupted when she came up to him.

"There's nothing to be worried about now, Orhan is completely fine." Nilay said in her politest tone, flashing a gracious smile to him, "You can take him home now, but please make sure he takes enough roughage in his meals and drinks enough water, even if he's not thirsty."

"Tesekkur Ederim (Thank You)... Dr. Nilay."

Sinan found himself emphasizing particularly on her name, as she had her smile intact and resumed back to the detailing of how he was supposed to take care of Orhan's diet for at least a week and provide a cool environment to him during the hottest hours of the day. Probably at this point Sinan was stuck in between listening to the entire Do's & Don'ts for Orhan and observing those delightful features on Nilay's face that instantly caught his attention ceaselessly. That pair of big blue eyes aptly complimented her milky fair complexion, not to forget her light brown tresses which were loosely tied in a thick ponytail, and oh her lips! Though before Sinan could think further, he was taken aback on realizing how he felt a bit embarrassed whenever she looked at him and he swiftly pretended to have been listening to her instructions carefully, for this wasn't the Sinan who'd show such a reaction. He was always the one who'd make girls around him react this way, but here the tables seemed to have turned for him, as he concluded himself to be a gone case now!

***

Sometime later that evening, Nilay rushed towards her cabin after attending another patient of hers, and it would have barely been a few seconds since she settled relaxingly on the chair with her eyes closed when she heard a loud knock on her door. Her tired eyes became confused at that moment when a worker from reception entered in her cabin with a big beautiful bouquet of red roses in her hand. Upon being asked about the sender of the same, the worker handed over a small piece of paper to Nilay, who still remained confused, though she felt refreshed on inhaling the fragrance of those sweet-smelling roses.

"Hope you like these flowers, I just wanted to thank you properly for attending to Orhan & I don't think there'd be any better way than flowers to thank an amazing doctor."

-Sinan. :)

For a few moments, she stood perplexed on reading the note. Upon recalling about the kid whom she treated in the morning, she quickly went through the documents on her table and read the details of Orhan's form, where she smiled a little amusingly on spotting Sinan's name. Once again looking at the bouquet of flowers, Nilay couldn't understand whether she should name this as the perks of being a pediatrician or she should call it Sinan's extreme generosity... "Did he thank every doctor this way?" This unanswered question lingered in her mind till she kept the flowers back at its place, though being unaware of the fact that her question was soon going to be answered, that too by Sinan himself!

***

The calmness of each new morning was something which Nilay passionately adored about nature, but the moment she set out of her home towards hospital, that calmness promptly got engulfed in the loud, irritating car horns of numerous vehicles on road and she certainly couldn't do anything about it except to wait impatiently in the traffic jam and thinking to write a book someday with the topic The city of Istanbul & its Traffic!', for she wasn't too fond of the jam like various other residents of the exquisite city.

Nilay took a deep breathe of relief when she finally managed to reach at hospital after spending almost an hour in the heavy traffic jam. Parking her off-white shaded vehicle in the assigned area, she got down with her brown handbag & apron in her hands to lock her car, when an extremely alluring & cheerful greeting from behind instantly caught her attention.

"Gunaydin (Good Morning), Doctor!"

"Oh, Sinan Bey?" She moved up her gaze and found this handsome gentleman standing right in front of her, and with his most tempting smile it did seem as if the morning was actually good enough. But his smile became wider & more appealing when she recognized him effortlessly, much to his happiness.

"Ah, I'm glad you remember me, else I was wondering what I can do to make you recall my name!" Came a remark from Sinan in his usual breezy tone.

"You actually don't need to do anything, your roses did the work. I really wanted to thank you for the bouquet, though you didn't need to send that." Nilay walked forward after locking her car, while Sinan too joined her leisurely, not being in a mood to end the conversation with her.

"Of course I needed to do so, else how would I let you know that you're one amazing doctor? I know how you left some seminar in middle for Orhan that day. And I'm grateful for that."

"Oh, it's not a big deal. How is Orhan by the way? Is everything fine?" She asked in a slightly anxious tone.

"He's much better now. But why do doubt if all is fine or not?"

"Umm... Because I don't think that you or any other person would come to the hospital just as a time-pass or to have some chit-chat with a doctor, so I assumed you need some kind of aid here."

"You see, I can't stay away from this hospital if it has beautiful doctors like you. Or... You mean that I need to fall sick to get your appointment?" Sinan proudly seemed to get into his usual form of being flirtatious to the women he came across, this time slowly taking a step forward towards Nilay, who became baffled at his words.

"Excuse me?"

"Does it look like I'm gonna excuse you, Doctor?"

"Aye, seems like you tripped somewhere & hit your head on a rock." Nilay grew perplexed at his sudden change of attitude.

"Well, I haven't been able to concentrate anywhere else since the moment I saw you. So it's your fault if I trip & hit my head somewhere." He replied in the same tone, carefully trying to read her expressions.

"I think we should probably end this conversation here, it's making me uncomfortable."

Nilay tried to shrug away that playful attitude of Sinan patiently & sweetly, though he wasn't the one who'd easily let go of the chance to spend some time with her, and he'd gladly come straight to the point if making some cheesy remarks to her wasn't enough to win over her.

"Okay so how's this idea- You come on a date with me, and I promise not to make you feel uncomfortable."

"A date?" Nilay had her eyes popped out in extreme disbelief, for she absolutely wasn't expecting such a straight-forward suggestion from him, "And why should I go on a date with you?"

"I suppose a date is meant for two people to know each other in a better way. And taking you on a date would be an immense pleasure to me." Sinan once again gave his patent smile, which nearly became adorable to her, though obviously she wasn't in a mood to accept it.

"Wait a minute... So the bouquet which you sent to me that day was not to thank me but actually for asking me out?" She looked at him a little suspiciously, to which Sinan mischievously cocked his both eyebrows, making her amused. "I'd have rejected back the bouquet that very moment itself if I knew about it."

"But now since you've accepted it already, you can't bring back the moment and reject my bouquet...And my indirect proposal." He had a captivating smirk on his face, as he gave stress on the last few words of his statement.

"Oh, is that so? I think you better ask someone else out for your immense pleasure, because I'm thoroughly not interested. Anyway, have a nice day and kolay gelsin (Good Luck)... For finding a new date."

With those firm words conveyed to him in a polite manner, Nilay quickly walked away from there, leaving behind a little dejected Sinan. Nevertheless, even with that dejection he was somewhere aware of the fact that she would never agree to come on a date with him merely after their first encounter. Not that it was some kind of an offense to do so, but after having this short, abrupt but sweet conversation with her, Sinan concluded that she was thoroughly a tough nut to crack.

"Are you okay my buddy? Seems like you're too smitten by her."

Sinan turned back his head a little to give a displeased expression to Murat, who lightly patted on his shoulder and flashed a cheeky grin on seeing his friend being rejected by a girl, perhaps for the first time in his whole life!

"To be honest, you're right. I just cannot stop thinking about her, and she is easily able to ignore me." Sinan sulkily looked at his friend, who helplessly put up with his overdramatic reaction, "Dude, she's ignoring me, Sinan Erinc! I mean, there are girls dying to go out with me and here I'm dying to go out with this girl!"

"That's fine Mr. Sinan Erinc', this issue can be discussed later on, we should get going now." Murat stated, trying to pull Sinan back towards their car, "I mean I still can't believe you postponed the meeting just to see this doctor lady!"

Murat steadily drove away from there once he managed to drag his friend back in the car and resumed back to ranting about how they'd end up looking like idiots if the boss himself reached late in the meeting room, though Sinan didn't look like he was in a mood to listen to those complaints, since his mind was still stuck in the thoughts of his new found lady love and he began making a mental note of trying all those things that could help him getting her attention, and maybe a chance to know more about her.

On the other hand, Nilay didn't seem too intrigued by her little patient's guardian, though she remembered Sinan's words and let out an amusing smile, wondering how cheesy can a guy be. She certainly didn't belong to the category of those girls who easily become impressed by such guys, but for the time being, she couldn't even overlook how adorable Sinan appeared while trying to ask her for a date.

***

*A day later*

"Allah Kahretsin (God Damn)!"

Those words were exclaimed in sheer disbelief when Nilay opened the door of her cabin and saw numerous bouquets of red roses and various other flowers evenly kept at a distance from one another, filling the atmosphere there with its divine fragrance. She hastily moved in to find if there was the name of sender in any of the bouquets or not, when she heard the phone buzzing in her handbag. Still being astounded by the condition of her cabin, Nilay received the call at once.

"Hello?"

"Merhaba... I'm guessing that you must have liked the decoration at your cabin, doctor. And I also wonder, are these many bouquets enough to please you?"

"You.. Sinan Erinc?" She exclaimed in a mixed tone of uncertainty & surprise, "Where did you get my number from?"

"You're forgetting Missy that you're a doctor. And doctors have a visiting card if I'm not wrong?" Sinan indicated, making her recall how she handed him over her visiting card the first time when they met.

"Uff yaa, what kind of a weird stalker you are?" Nilay grew annoyed with each remark from him, "And.. What should I think about all these flowers? You've made my cabin look like a little garden and it surely doesn't make me comfortable."

"Well, I suppose you're mature enough to understand why a guy would send you flowers, am I right?"

"I seriously don't understand you."

"Tamam (Okay), if you want this to be formal, then, will you go on a date with me, Miss Nilay Sahin?" Sinan once again came up with the same question, though not being exactly sure if she'd agree or not.

"There you go again!" She sighed, "A date? You've got to be kidding me!"

"Why do you say so? Is there like a rule or something that doctors don't go on dates? Or are you seeing someone else?"

"Eh, evet (yes). I'm dating someone else." Nilay relied upon that tiny bit of lie, but in a confident tone, "Now please stop bothering me."

"Allah Allah! Such a liar doctor! You'd have told me about your so-called I'm-dating-someone-else' guy when I invited you on a date for the first time."

"I... I mean... I'm telling you clearly, I'm genuinely not interested in going on a date with you or knowing more about you. So kindly keep your flirtatious attitude to yourself."

"And I'm telling you clearly that I'm taking your rejections in an encouraging way till you agree to come on a date with me."

"Geri Zekali (Idiot)!"

Sinan let out a slight chuckle when he heard her murmuring those words to him out of pure annoyance before disconnecting the call, though he found her reaction adorable and innocent enough to sweetly keep her bugging till she actually gave into his persuasion and came on a date with him!

***

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Obviously Sinan wasn't even that much of a gentleman to keep away from a pretty lady despite of having her contact number. Although he didn't push himself to the edge of annoying Nilay through calls or messages, he made sure to keep reminding her about his date proposal by texting or calling her once in a while, and as he expected, she turned deaf ear to his words! But at some point, she found herself smiling amusingly at his messages instead of being thoroughly annoyed like she used to be initially. "But he's surely a Geri Zekali!"

So if his words and a variety of other flower-bouquets weren't enough for convincing her, then Sinan instantly took help of other little things that would indeed help him in pleasing his lady love, and what else could be better than to get numerous boxes of chocolates, with the collection of Ferrero Rocher being the most preferred one. And with the assortment of these sweet bits, Sinan made sure to flood her working place with cute modest notes only to remind her about his presence around her, after which Nilay would do nothing except to show some signs of being extremely annoyed and then get those chocolates distributed in the children's ward as a reward for those tiny tots on taking medicine timely.

***

One fine day, Nilay stood flummoxed upon noticing a familiar individual approaching towards her with poised steps, as he flaunted his pleasingly mischievous smile at her that unknowingly brought reddish tinge on her cheeks when she recognized him.

Somehow she was amused on thinking about how Sinan reached up at the hospital's canteen merely in her search, though what actually surprised her was the fact that instead of being furious at him for loading her cabin with countless stuff, she found herself having a little exultant smile when she saw him after so many days. "Oh, he looks handsome in his business suit, like always." Wait, why did she all of a sudden think this way?

"Doctor! I'm not feeling well today... Will you please check me?" Sinan exclaimed in a dramatically sulky tone as he stood in front of her.

"Very funny. But I'm a pediatrician, you may have to look out for some other doctor." Nilay gazed at him as if he was the sole source of entertainment for her, "Oh I'm sorry, I forgot that you're still a kid at heart who adopts some corny ways to impress someone."

"Hmm. So you've begun noticing me off-lately!" He exclaimed in a naughty tone, "Seems like my idea of Ferrero Rochers was a good one, damn I should've sent you those first instead of flowers!"

"What's your problem, Sinan Bey? First those numerous bouquets, now these chocolates & cards... Are we celebrating something like Valentine's week?"

"Ah, only if you just say yes to a date with me, I promise we'll be celebrating each Valentines' day together in future!" This came as a dreamy suggestion from Sinan, who appeared quite enthusiastic about his own words.

"You seriously need to work on your flirting skills, because I'm so not impressed by you."

"So you actually want me to flirt with you, is that so, Doctor?"

"Stop acting smart! And.. What do you think I am?" Nilay glared at him in sheer frustration, especially when she saw him smirking at her, "Let me make it clear to you that I'm not like those girls who are easily smitten by you and go 'Ooh Sinan, Aah Sinan' on looking upon you as if you're the most desirable bachelor left in the world!"

"I don't know about the whole world, but I can prove to be a desirable bachelor for you."

"That's what you think, Sinan Bey. You may keep on trying your luck, but I'm absolutely not interested in you."

"Oyi, that makes me a little upset, seriously." He pouted his lips a little to show the signs of being clearly upset, though it was obvious that neither he was genuinely upset nor he'd give up, "But now that you've especially mentioned, I'll keep on trying my luck because I have enough confident on myself."

Every time Sinan appeared in front of her, Nilay couldn't figure out what was that thing which actually made her speechless towards him despite of replying back to him quirkily. Even now when she looked at him in complete amazement as he walked away in the same manner, all her mind could think about was him. Did he usually win the women around him this way or was he particularly treating her in a special way?

***

"Listen, next time I don't want even a single stuff from this guy Sinan Erinc. Whatever he sends in here, either return it back to him or distribute it among the kids in children's ward. But dare if I see even a single petal of rose or some other stuff in my cabin from him!"

The chubby lady sitting at the reception became nearly frightened to a great extent when heard those words from Nilay in a furious tone and then fearfully nodded to her orders.

Being moody was what aptly described Nilay, and so if at times she laughed off by Sinan's efforts to convince her, then she grew annoyed the other times whenever she continuously received some or the other stuff from him, though she found those small notes cute which had smileys. Somewhere she realized that she was being kind of rude by constantly rejecting to Sinan in return to those lovely gifts and his sweetest permission of date, but it wouldn't be wrong to say that she began enjoying how he was hell bent to earn a 'yes' from her.

"Cool down, girl! What is annoying you so much?" Esra gave a light knock on the door and entered in, settling herself on a chair in front of Nilay, "And... Who sent you those flowers? I just saw them when you kept it on the reception, they were pretty!"

"Meet my lover, Sinan Erinc." Nilay gave a sarcastic reply, enclosing her both hands across her chest, "The idiot, big time flirt and too proud-of-himself jerk who has nothing to do apart from sending me these stuff like every day."

"No kidding... Sinan Erinc? The Sinan Erinc?" Esra looked at her friend in disbelief, "That... Smart, sexy, dashing & charming businessman who has some telecom business or something?"

"I guess so... Why? What's so special about this now?"

"You're one crazy & idiot girl I've ever seen in my life. The Sinan Erinc, who's like every lady's dream hunk, is after you and here you sit down complaining about it? Have you lost your brain somewhere while being in training period?"

"Why I'm not surprised on hearing your words! Because obviously Sinan is a womanizer and here my crazy friend goes on obsessing about how good-looking and sexy guys are out there!" Nilay rolled her eyes with her I-don't-give-a-damn attitude.

"Okay fine I know I'm crazy, but girl, Sinan is Sinan! I've been following him in almost every business magazines."

"Oh! So Sinan Erinc is the reason why you show keen interest in business magazines despite of not knowing even a bit about business stuff?" She flashed a cheeky grin to Esra, though being somewhat interested to hear more about him from her "And... What did you read about him so far, by the way?"

"Who told you that I read about him, when there's nothing to read actually? I just love looking at his photos in the magazines, the man is freaking sexy!" Esra confessed absent-mindedly as she recalled about Sinan's looks, though a glare from Nilay brought her back to senses, "Actually, he doesn't speak much about his personal life in interviews, all he talks about is his business stuff, that's it!"

"Hmm... So he's a weirdo." She muttered inaudibly under her breathe.

"Nilay, I was thinking, how amazing it would be if I make some investment in his company shares? Maybe that way I can get to know more about him?"

"Yeah why not? Sinan Bey will personally visit your house to offer you shares, isn't it?"

Nilay absolutely enjoyed indulging in a playful conversation with her friend, though she noticeably seemed to show interest in Sinan after hearing Esra's views, even though which were not proper enough for her to judge him. But at this point of time, it would be unfair to say that she completely ignored him. Rather, the more she tried to overlook him, the more she ended up thinking about him. She began looking upon at him as an adorable 'Geri Zekali' almost at all instances whenever his thoughts crossed her mind, though apparently she wasn't in that state of mind to accept the fact that she was smitten by Sinan!

***

*A random fine day*

Sinan silently stood behind the door as he watched the innocent little kids in the children's ward enjoying in the joyful company of Dr. Nilay, who looked after their needs & nave demands and gave each one of them their bitter medicine with her loving & caring assurance. He had an unremitting smile curved on his lips when he carefully observed how gentle & empathetic she was from within despite of wearing that stern expressions, especially in front of him.

However, his smile at once changed into surprised expressions when Nilay made her way out of the ward and walked past him, being too indulged in the documents that she carried in her hands.

"Looks like you have a very busy schedule today, doctor!"

"A-a, what are you doing here?" Nilay turned behind and witnessed her major source of irritation standing right in front of her, giving his usual charming smile to her.

"I realized that maybe my gifts aren't reaching at their beautiful destination, so I came in to check here if every thing is fine or not."

"You know, I actually have a very busy schedule today, so if you please excuse me..." She could barely finish speaking & turn behind to walk away when Sinan immediately moved forward and tenderly held her hand, causing her to look back at him in bewilderment. "What do you think you're doing bey?"

"I'm just asking for a date, is that considered something offensive?" He questioned back subtly, taking a step closer to her.

"This is a hospital, don't you think you're supposed to behave yourself? Let go of my hand." Nilay looked around cautiously to make sure that no one was present there.

"So I could hold your hand if we were at some other place?" Sinan cocked his eyebrow at her words, to which she once again gave him a death glare.

"Look, I tried to ignore you but now I think you're being too much."

"That's what I don't want. I don't like to be ignored, especially by a beautiful girl like you." He took baby steps to cover the distance between them, though Nilay felt relatively helpless at the moment, with him standing extremely close to her.

"You're too proud of yourself, aren't you?" She somehow tried to keep herself unaffected by his actions.

"This is not called being proud, this is called being confidently honest."

"You're being ridiculous, Sinan. Let go of my hand." Nilay tried resisting his advances by continuously saying such things, but it only made him more determined, since he took another step closer to her, with his

"Do you realize that I don't joke around whenever I ask for a date with you? Trust me, I really want to know you in a better way. I want to know about that ordinary girl hidden in this strict doctor who might become my someone special."

Nilay didn't need much persuasion to be aware of the strange honestly with which he said those things to her. She was rather driven by herself to realize this, though her mind almost stopped working as she felt his hot breathe tantalizingly brushing against her exposed skin beneath her earlobe. She involuntarily shut her eyes when she felt a thrilling pleasure within herself on inhaling that sharp musky aroma of his cologne, while Sinan didn't let go of this chance to notice the affect he was having on her that obviously filled him with pride, though he was happier at the fact that he was nearly successful in winning her heart.

"You're blushing." He whispered sensuously, much to Nilay's uneasiness as she moved away from him a little.

"No, I'm not. Why do you say so?"

"Because it looks like you're blushing. I can even hear your heart beating faster."

"Shut-up, and let go of my hand." Nilay protested in a low but firm tone.

"I left your hand much before, doctor!"

She swiftly looked down, only to realize that Sinan actually left her hand, and probably he wasn't wrong even when he pointed out how she was blushing, since she too could feel her cheeks turn hotter when he stood that close to her.

Without saying a single word, highly restless Nilay reached in her cabin and shut the door with such a loud bang that it was nearly audible to Sinan. He stood at the same place and smirked mischievously, since he could easily notice the signs of a strange pleasure on her face they were hardly few inches away from each other, and her silence at that very moment assured him that somewhere she too was fascinated by him.

As he ecstatically walked outside the hospital, Nilay looked down at him from the window and the moment he raised up his head to have a look at her before leaving from there, she abruptly pulled down the curtains & settle back on her chair, with her heart beating rapidly. That restlessness was still there in her eyes, though it slowly began to fade away when she looked at her wrist that Sinan held a few moments ago, and to her own surprise, her cheeks turned pink as she recalled his words.

"Sinan..."

She whispered his name in a soft tone, as her fingers gently caressed the same wrist where she could still feel his lingering touch. Surely he was a weirdo for her, in fact he was an amusing big time flirt to her, but with each passing day and with everything that Sinan came up with just to impress her, Nilay felt herself being drawn towards him in an intriguing way, which she wasn't yet ready to accept, but now it became difficult for her to even deny it!

Edited by whiterose29 - 8 years ago
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You have no idea Aashicim, how much I've waited for your exams to get over and make you write this!
Thank you so much for working so hard on this concept just for me. 🤗
Like I say, I knew I had to love it. 😳

To begin with Sinan Erinc. <3
You know I thoroughly love his character from all the videos you've sent me. Being Flirty, Rich And Hot runs in Sinan's blood but I still love he's got such a soft heart with kids spcly orphans. ❤️
The way he was getting so panicked and worked up about Orhan as if he's his own son was beautiful. I can just visualize it happening in front of my eyes. 😳
Enter Nilay and our Chhora is smitten by her! 😆😆
Sinan Bey, I think it's not only the way she lovingly deals with kids but also her beauty that has captivated you. 😉
The way he was checking her relationship status, and noticing her features while Nilay was instructing him about Orhan's health. 🤣
He went up to her lips, not bad. 😉
Those roses were a perfect thank you to her, I liked how he even left a personalized note. 😆

But now this guy won't stop here and I was so right that he would turn Nilay's cabin into a flower garden along with Ferrero Rocher chocolates. 🤣
I love those!! Mind sending me some of those boxes Sinan Bey! ❤️
His visiting the hospital once in a while to meet Nilay and ask for a date, calling her to ask for a date was freaking cute and hilarious. 😆😆
Nilay trying to lie about her status and his Allah Allah, such a liar doctor! 🤣🤣
Uber Uber Uber cute and sexy!!
Nilay shouting at the receptionist to not send any gifts to her cabin. 😆😆
I liked how she used to distribute all the sweets amongst the kids, though what I love about Sinan the most is despite of having her number, he didnt turn into a stalker. 👏👏

Esra is such a fangirl of Sinan, planning to buy shares in his company and Nilay suggesting her that Sinan Bey would personally come to explain her. 😆😆
Though I liked how she tried to convince her friend to give the guy a chance at least. 😳
Murat is another sweetness who knows that it's girls who run after Sinan but this time it's the opposite. 😛
Like Sinan says, Nilay is a hard nut to crack. 😆

That final scene between them in the hospital where he holds her hand was sensous and beautiful! ☺️☺️
The way Nilay took in that sharp intake of his cologne, the way he is so close to her, the way he tells her that she's blushing but she refuses! Plain Beautiful!
Nilay touching her wrist, but when Sinan turns around to look, she ducks in. ❤️
I loved it to bits.
To add, those cute Turkish bits were love. <3
Especially when Nilay called him Idiot. 😆❤️

Update Real Soon, Canim. :*
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First of all, So sorry for being late. Was badly stuck in studies and entrance exams.
But now I'm free finally..

Another brilliant piece of writing from you on Bugra! 👏
Sinan Erinc.. <3
Let me just begin with I love this name and the character is even more lovable.. 😳

He's rich, flirt, hot and to combine it with that effortless charm, he's everything a girl wants. My heart literally melted reading the way he panicked for Orhan and stayed by his side until he was fine. Such a cutie..

So baby is totally smitten by Dr Nilay.. Ahh.. I love the way he was checking her relationship status while Nilay was explaining him abt preventions for Orhan.. 😆 That had to be the cutest of the whole sequence.
Roses and personalized note for Dr Nilay was super cute.. Sinan Bey has started working towards impressing her already.. 😉
I loved how Nilay was wondering if he thanked every doctor with roses.. 😳

Cabin turns into Rose Garden, Box of Ferrero Rocher Chocolates.. 😆 Can this man get anymore cuter?!
Seriously, that's the cutest way I've read any man trying to convince a girl for date!!
I mean, Nilay, babe, an evening is all the man is asking for, come on!
But I understand, what's the fun if she agrees on the first try itself.. 😆
Hard nut to crack alright, Sinan Bey!

Nilay lying abt her relationship status and Sinan going Allah! Allah! Such a liar doctor was freaking adorable and cracked me up bad! 🤣

Esra's fangirling was cute and I loved how she was planning on to buy some shares of his company.. Nilay's suggestion that Sinan would personally come explain her.. 🤣

But what stood out in whole part 1 had to be that final scene between Nilay and Sinan.. ❤️
That sensual tension, Nilay inhaling his musk cologne and then her touching her wrist. Beautiful.

Loved the part totally. Now I'm eager for the next installment. Update soon!

Lots of love
Nandini
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Originally posted by: .Archangel.

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Unres.
You have no idea Aashicim, how much I've waited for your exams to get over and make you write this!
Thank you so much for working so hard on this concept just for me. 🤗
Like I say, I knew I had to love it. 😳

I tell you, it was a pleasure for me to write for you but it was even a pressure... Pressure as in if you'd like whatever I write or not. 😆 Glad you loved this. 🤗

To begin with Sinan Erinc. <3
You know I thoroughly love his character from all the videos you've sent me. Being Flirty, Rich And Hot runs in Sinan's blood but I still love he's got such a soft heart with kids spcly orphans. ❤️
The way he was getting so panicked and worked up about Orhan as if he's his own son was beautiful. I can just visualize it happening in front of my eyes. 😳

Sinan is exactly what you wrote about him. He's fun, flirtatious, and will even boast about himself in the most adorable way, but you just cannot ignore him. ❤️ His love & concern for kids, especially for orphan ones is really note-worthy, and the reason for it you'll know as I update the second part. 😳

Enter Nilay and our Chhora is smitten by her! 😆😆
Sinan Bey, I think it's not only the way she lovingly deals with kids but also her beauty that has captivated you. 😉
The way he was checking her relationship status, and noticing her features while Nilay was instructing him about Orhan's health. 🤣
He went up to her lips, not bad. 😉

Do you think that a man like Sinan would miss to check her out? 😛 He was too captivated by her, so much that at a point he even forgot why he landed up at the hospital. 😆

Those roses were a perfect thank you to her, I liked how he even left a personalized note. 😆

But now this guy won't stop here and I was so right that he would turn Nilay's cabin into a flower garden along with Ferrero Rocher chocolates. 🤣
I love those!! Mind sending me some of those boxes Sinan Bey! ❤️

I had to include Roses in this TS, you know the reason. 😛 Ferrero Rocher are my favorite chocolates and I'm pretty sure you also love them. 😳 Poor guy thought that he'd easily convince his doctor for a date but alas... He realized that she was a tough nut to crack. 😆

His visiting the hospital once in a while to meet Nilay and ask for a date, calling her to ask for a date was freaking cute and hilarious. 😆😆

Can you imagine how Nilay must have freaked out every time he showed up in front of her just to ask her out? 😆 Sinan too realized it but he still kept trying, cute isn't it? 😳

Nilay trying to lie about her status and his Allah Allah, such a liar doctor! 🤣🤣

That was Nilay's failed attempt to keep Sinan away. 🤣 But Sinan turned out to be smarter than her. 🤪

Uber Uber Uber cute and sexy!!
Nilay shouting at the receptionist to not send any gifts to her cabin. 😆😆
I liked how she used to distribute all the sweets amongst the kids, though what I love about Sinan the most is despite of having her number, he didnt turn into a stalker. 👏👏

As we say, Sinan may be a big time flirt, but he'd surely never turn into a stalker. That's the hidden gentleman in him. <3

Esra is such a fangirl of Sinan, planning to buy shares in his company and Nilay suggesting her that Sinan Bey would personally come to explain her. 😆😆
Though I liked how she tried to convince her friend to give the guy a chance at least. 😳

Esra is the biggest known fangirl of Sinan to Nilay. 😛 That girl almost planned to do everything just to have an encounter with Sinan in person, and buying shares in his company was her initial plan which greatly amused Nilay. 😆

Murat is another sweetness who knows that it's girls who run after Sinan but this time it's the opposite. 😛
Like Sinan says, Nilay is a hard nut to crack. 😆

That final scene between them in the hospital where he holds her hand was sensous and beautiful! ☺️☺️
The way Nilay took in that sharp intake of his cologne, the way he is so close to her, the way he tells her that she's blushing but she refuses! Plain Beautiful!
Nilay touching her wrist, but when Sinan turns around to look, she ducks in. ❤️
I loved it to bits.

The final scene was just a glimpse of how passionate Sinan can be. Till now Nilay saw only his playful & flirty side, but it was in this particular scene that she actually recognized the sincerity in his eyes & in his way of convincing her. ❤️

To add, those cute Turkish bits were love. <3
Especially when Nilay called him Idiot. 😆❤️

Well the term Geri Zekali is cute in itself, and it became even cuter when Nilay used it for Sinan Bey isn't it? 😆

Update Real Soon, Canim. :*

Thank you for such a warm & detailed comment. 🤗 Actually, thank you for loving whatever I wrote... It really encourages me you know. 😳

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Thank you. 😃
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Originally posted by: pcnsb

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First of all, So sorry for being late. Was badly stuck in studies and entrance exams.
But now I'm free finally..

Never mind dearie. 🤗 You see how late I am to update the second part?! *facepalm* 🤣

Another brilliant piece of writing from you on Bugra! 👏
Sinan Erinc.. <3
Let me just begin with I love this name and the character is even more lovable.. 😳

He's rich, flirt, hot and to combine it with that effortless charm, he's everything a girl wants. My heart literally melted reading the way he panicked for Orhan and stayed by his side until he was fine. Such a cutie..

Sinan is like the dream man every girl would desire for, since he has all those qualities that make him such a perfect bachelor. But above all he has a heart of gold, else you would rarely see anyone being so concerned about an orphan and then even treat him like his own kid. <3 To mention precisely, he's too protective & affectionate towards orphans. He doesn't sympathize with them, rather he loves them like his own family. ❤️

So baby is totally smitten by Dr Nilay.. Ahh.. I love the way he was checking her relationship status while Nilay was explaining him abt preventions for Orhan.. 😆 That had to be the cutest of the whole sequence.

Well, didn't he seem too lost in her to even listen to the precautions carefully? 😆 But multi-talented chhora hai apna, he had his eyes on her and his ears on her words. 😛

Roses and personalized note for Dr Nilay was super cute.. Sinan Bey has started working towards impressing her already.. 😉
I loved how Nilay was wondering if he thanked every doctor with roses.. 😳

Only if Nilay knew that she mesmerized him in such a way that he had to thank her with those roses & personalized note. 😳 And only if she knew that he didn't thank any doctor like this till now! ❤️

Cabin turns into Rose Garden, Box of Ferrero Rocher Chocolates.. 😆 Can this man get anymore cuter?!
Seriously, that's the cutest way I've read any man trying to convince a girl for date!!

Roses & chocolates might definitely seem as a cliched way of impressing/asking out a girl, but it's still sweet & romantic IMO. <3 And every girl loves them, hai na? 😳

I mean, Nilay, babe, an evening is all the man is asking for, come on!
But I understand, what's the fun if she agrees on the first try itself.. 😆
Hard nut to crack alright, Sinan Bey!

You never know, maybe Sinan too began enjoying to convince her with his usual flirty yet adorable ways! 🤪

Nilay lying abt her relationship status and Sinan going Allah! Allah! Such a liar doctor was freaking adorable and cracked me up bad! 🤣

His Allah Allah has become a famous catchphrase indeed! 🤣 He looks really adorable while doing that you know. 😳

Esra's fangirling was cute and I loved how she was planning on to buy some shares of his company.. Nilay's suggestion that Sinan would personally come explain her.. 🤣

But what stood out in whole part 1 had to be that final scene between Nilay and Sinan.. ❤️
That sensual tension, Nilay inhaling his musk cologne and then her touching her wrist. Beautiful.

That was of course the highlight of the update, I say this as a writer. 😳 It was the moment when she realized that Sinan was a person with intense passion, depth, and most importantly, he was a sincere gentleman. ❤️

Loved the part totally. Now I'm eager for the next installment. Update soon!

Thank you for this lovely detailed comment. 🤗 Update coming up right away! 😎

Lots of love
Nandini

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||PART- TWO||

After spending a good amount of long day hours with a hectic schedule, whenever Nilay hit off her bed into a deep peaceful slumber, all she had in her mind was Sinan Erinc' and at that very moment, her all exhaustion seemed to vanish away for a while or so. Taking her mind away from the next day's appointments, she would let her fingers gently roll a strand of her hair and merely think about his numerous cheesy remarks, his amusing yet charming ways of flirting, and not to forget those mischievous gestures he gave to her through his eyes which instantly turned her cheeks redder... Well, if these were annoying Nilay initially, she couldn't even ignore how these aspects actually drew her attention towards him. Whether he waved a lazy goodbye to her, or he flashed his See you soon' smile to her, above all these, one thing which appealed to Nilay about him the most was the genuineness in his eyes each time he proposed for a date with her. He always appeared in front her as this flirtatious Sinan, but it wasn't very late when she could clearly notice the sincerity, the desire in his intense gaze. She was surprised at how Sinan made a significant place in her mind simply in just few encounters, though she cherished to have him in her thoughts while shutting her eyes with a little coy smile curved on her lips.

***

Looking behind at the kids rushing out of their rooms in high spirits a while later, Sinan chuckled wholeheartedly on seeing how ecstatic the tiny tots became jovial as soon as they were set free to play out in the large garden owned by the orphanage, though he very well remembered how he also was one of such kids in the past when he would eagerly wait to be taken out in the garden, and then a little Sinan would immediately grab his football to have a match with his fellow friends.

Of course, spending an entire childhood in any orphanage wasn't something to be happy about, but like others, Sinan too had some precious memories from his early days which he would always treasure, no matter even if he had no one to call parents, no one to call family; this entire orphanage has been his family since he began familiar with the world outside.

"I'm sorry..." Sinan exclaimed when he stepped aside to have a proper look at the kids playing in the garden, but instead he accidentally clashed to the person walking behind him. Though just a second later he had a huge grin on his face as he saw his beloved doctor being the one to whom he collided, "Oh look, it's you again!"

"I can't believe this!" Nilay rolled her eyes a little annoyingly, not being pleased at all to meet someone familiar at an orphanage.

"Well, you might have to believe in the little games that destiny plays."

"What?"

"Don't you think that even our destinies want to bring us together? Maybe this is why our paths keep crossing with each others..." Sinan looked away ponderingly, trying to appear serious about his own comment, "Aah, I've begun to believe in destiny now."

"How dramatic can you be, Sinan Bey? And I don't believe this destiny story when I'm pretty sure that you have been following me here!" Nilay rebuffed him, yet he kept walking forward with her.

"Allah Allah, you think I'm a stalker?"

"For a person who constantly keeps sending stuff to my workplace even when I refuse him, I'd think him to be a stalker, what else!"

"I could feel offensive at that, but I'll take it as a compliment because at least you think about me!" He let out a cheeky smile, which amused Nilay.

"Too smart, aren't you? But your ways aren't really impressing me." She looked disdainfully at him, "You know, maybe you'll have to try something unique other than these ordinary ways of asking me out?"

"Really, is that what you want? No worries, Nilay Hanim. I'll surely come up with a unique way for my date proposal... Something that you can probably never expect from anyone."

Sinan declared proudly before excusing himself and walking away from there. Nilay knowingly gazed at him in the same manner as she very well knew how he would definitely turn back once again to wave at her like he did every time they met, and then she flashed a fake impolite smile at him when he actually did that. Though now being used to his own charming ways, all she wondered about was what Sinan would do now to spend an evening with her, since the vibe he gave to her about it was both annoying her and making her curious at the same time.

***

Nilay couldn't even finish her dinner properly, because all she wanted at this moment were just a few hours of good sleep. She walked into her bedroom & clumsily fell on the bed, since spending one busiest day in the hospital exhausted her to a great extent and the only relief which she had at this moment was the next day being an off for her. As she took a deep breathe while falling asleep, she heard a car continuously tapping on the horn, much to her exasperation. She initially tried to ignore it by grabbing a pillow from the other side of her bed and pressing it tightly against her ear, though it didn't prove to be much helpful. Thankfully she was living in a society filled with concerned people, almost all of whom woke up to the irritating noise and stood at their windows, wondering who this person in the car was.

"What the hell?!"

These words were Nilay's exact expression when she too peeped out of her window, only to see a shiny black car standing outside her building and the person sitting in being no one else but Sinan. She tied her hairs into a loose bun and hurried outside, continuously blabbering about how annoying this man could become.

"Why are you here? Have you lost your mind?" Nilay saw him stepping out of his car as she angrily approached him.

"I tried calling on your phone, but you've switched it off I guess so I had to disturb you this way."

"But why?"

"I'm here to take you on a date with me!" Sinan replied genuinely.

"Date? At 10 in the night?" She looked at him in utter disbelief and wished this to be a joke, though she realized that he was serious when he still looked at her keenly for some response. "You immediately need a brain check-up!"

"Nope, doctor. I need a heart check-up. And that's possible only if you come with me right now."

"You're unbelievable."

"Well, I'm just asking for a date. Is it really so wrong that you can't come with me?"

"I've just had a hectic schedule, and your presence is not at all helping. So please leave."

"I'm not going anywhere till you come with me. Now be a good girl, and follow me." Sinan hastily held her hand as if she would run away from him, though she was extremely surprised at his behavior

"Aye, leave my hand."

"No way!"

Any third person watching this situation would surely assume Sinan to be a weird stalker who literally forced a girl to come on a date with him, though this perception would be right in a way. But only Nilay could feel the gentleness even in his firm grip on her wrist, and she looked amusingly at him as he guided her towards the car.

"Uff, at least let me change my clothes!" She exclaimed as soon as her gaze fell upon the night suit she had put on, not being much excited with the idea of going on a date wearing such clothes, "Do you want to take me on a date with this night suit?"

"Umm, I wouldn't mind that but... Since it's our first date, so you can go & change." He left her wrist at once, though he didn't let her go in before an adorable warning, "But don't go in & get back to sleep. You know I can take help of my car horn."

"Ah how can I forget that!" Nilay didn't wish to experience that irritating noise once again.

"Eh, what kind of a grumpy hostess you are, you don't even ask the guests to come in and offer them some water?" Sinan tried sounding as cutely sulky as he could when he saw her go back in aloofly, "I've been feeling thirsty for like twenty minutes!"

"I adopt this behavior for guests like you, who show up at my door unexpected and that too at a very inappropriate time. Anyway, please come in, Sinan Bey." She forced a smile on her face, "Would you like to have some water?"

"Why not? And please get ready quickly. I'm not going to sit here & drink water, waiting all night for a half asleep doctor!" Sinan stated blatantly, as they both reached at the dim lit living room in her home and she offered him a glass of cold water.

"Geri Zekali!"

"I heard that!" He exclaimed mischievously, as he heard her murmur roughly under her breathe.

"Good for you!"

She once again glared at him before running up towards her room. Sinan chuckled a little on seeing an annoyed Nilay, wondering how adorable she appeared to him every time she called him an idiot. He seated himself comfortably on the couch and finished off the water in a single sip, waiting for his lady love with a baited breathe. It was not like he was always this nervous on every date, but there was definitely something different for him with Nilay; unlike other girls she easily gave him goosebumps merely by her presence, and Sinan was so enjoying these mixed feelings of anxiety & excitement.

On the other hand, Nilay couldn't figure out why exactly this person became so appealing to her despite of all his pestering antics to please her that she finally gave into his request and agreed to give him a chance. Having these thoughts in her mind, she quickly came out of washroom after freshening up, opened the cupboard and stood confusingly in front of it, not being able to decide what dress to pick up for the date.

"Maybe the orange one? No, that highlights my fat curves & I won't take that risk. Umm.. This blue one? This is better... Nope, this looks quite ordinary. How about the red one? Uh, I don't have any earrings to go with this. Aghh, I badly need to go for shopping the next weekend, I'm a doctor and I don't have even a proper dress for a date? Shame on me! Maybe I should wear this one."

After passing critical remarks for almost every dress in her closet, Nilay finally changed into a lavender colored silk dress, which was long enough to reach till her knees, while the netted portion around her neck till her elbows sexily gave a glimpse to her milky white skin. A minimal amount of make up was good to go for her, while adding to that was her favorite raspberry lip balm that she preferred over usual lipsticks.

In a quick move she stuffed all the necessary things into her black cling bag and then hanged it loose from her left shoulder, standing in front of the mirror once again just to make sure that she didn't miss anything. Though there was still something that didn't go nice with her look. Oh, those silky black hairs tied in a loose ponytail! Nilay pulled off the small rubber band and combed her tresses to leave them open, now having a perfect look. Nevertheless there was still a doubt in her mind- Did she look as beautiful as those girls who were always around Sinan?

Oh well, where did that thought come from all of a sudden?! Maybe now she was experiencing the nervousness about this first date with Sinan!

***

"This is a surprise!"

Nilay instantly stood surprised to see the view in front of her the moment she reached downstairs. Her adorable yet not-so friendly with strangers Labrador played cheerfully with Sinan as if he had known this person since ages, "Bruno doesn't gels up this good with anybody else, how come he's so comfortable with you when he has seen you for the first time?"

"That's what you call Sinan's Magic. I tend to win everybody's hearts, and I actually love pet pals you know." Sinan lightly winked at Nilay, as she turned her head aside in amusement while he smiled at the cute Labrador, patting him gently on his head, "And you've got a nice name, Bruno."

Bruno wiggled his tail in ecstasy, as if he understood each word said by Sinan and that was again a surprise to Nilay, though she couldn't help but smile a little on seeing the two bonding so well with each other. Maybe he was right- He certainly had a charm that would instantly capture anyone's attention, and this is exactly what the doctor had been thinking about since past few days.

"Eh, now if you're done playing with him, can we please leave?"

"Look who's so eager to come with me?!"

Sinan exclaimed wickedly, as she again glared back at him in her usual way which was her gesture to shut him up. They walked out of the apartment and settled quickly in his car, while Sinan tried cheering her up with his usual flirtatious yet adorable remarks as she still appeared quite dull, all thanks to her increased working hours. But he seemed to be way too smitten by this beauty to point out her tiredness, though he obviously did feel guilty for disturbing her at such late night hour.

"Don't worry Doctor, I'm taking you to a nearby place, it's not too far..." He flashed a modest smile to the lady sitting beside him, but a second later he was baffled on seeing her asleep, "Oh please don't tell me that you're gonna sleep now!"

"Hey, you wanted me to come on a date with you, I agreed. But you can't order me about my sleeping schedule. Had it not been for you, then I'd have been having a pretty good sleep at my home now." Nilay replied back to him in a half asleep tone, with her eyes still being shut and a little smile curving on her lips as she tried dozing off once again.

"I sincerely apologize for disturbing you but trust me, I didn't mean to do so. Actually, I planned an amazing evening for both of us today, but I had this urgent meeting to attend at that very time and hence I had to postpone our date by a few hours and... Oh, you're asleep?" Amidst his continuous chattering, Sinan realized that she had been sitting in the car with her eyes closed, "Well, never mind..."

Oh man, how cute she looked with her eyes shut like a little baby! He would've loved to admire his lady as long as he could, only if he wasn't driving. He immediately shifted his gaze from her towards the road & tried suppressing his own yawn, which clearly depicted his own tiredness due to a line-up of meetings & some work issues at office. But finally being able to convince this tough nut for a date was quite an achievement for Sinan, as he rejoiced about the same instead of thinking about business.

Adding to his achievement, the fact that he disturbed Nilay too was a major reason why he was quite anxious about their date. He had done all the arrangements & even double-checked them, made sure that the surrounding would be comfortable for her, but even then somewhere this nervousness crept within him, unlike his other previous dates where he didn't put in much effort to impress a girl. He silently wished for the time to go smoothly & the date to be a special one for her, so that she wouldn't regret coming with him just because of his persuasion.

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About half an hour later...

"Time to wake-up, my beautiful Doctor!"

"What is it?" Came a sulky question from a sleepy Nilay, who couldn't be anymore frustrated after Sinan woke her up with the loud horn once again.

"I didn't wish to wake-up a sleeping beauty like you but...We've arrived at our destination."

Nilay clumsily rubbed her eyes upon hearing his words and leaned forward to have a proper look at the surrounding through the glass window, while Sinan cutely smiled at her reaction when she surprisingly exclaimed how huge the bungalow was, and she was indeed right. They stepped out of the car and he guided her towards the entrance, as she fanatically looked all around.

"Welcome to my farmhouse, Nilay Hanim."

Sinan gave his warmest welcome to her in a lovable tone, and while the two walked inside, Nilay kept on gushing innocently about how the farmhouse appeared extremely exquisite & serene even though being dimly lit, much to his amusement. Sinan simply loved to see her feeling delighted like a little kid, and she behaved so not because she was thrilled with his richness; it was merely because she was pleased with the loveliness of the place.

"It's amazing." She voiced with twinkling eyes, as he unlocked the door for her & they both went in.

"Please make yourself comfortable, I'll get some coffee for us."

Sinan quickly rushed towards the kitchen that was a little messed up, all thanks to his way of arranging for the date in such a hurry because of which he was left with no time to clean it up. Ignoring the mess, he grabbed two coffee mugs from the cabinet and began preparing the coffee, mentally assuring himself that the date will go smoothly. Well, he also considered making a mental note to himself to stop being anxious like a teenager on first date!

"So this was your unique way for bringing me on a date, by literally persuading me to come with you?" Nilay looked at him with a bit curious eyes when Sinan came back to her with two mugs of coffee, and seated himself in front of her.

"Well, I wasn't planning exactly like this... But.. I thought I'd take you to a nice restaurant, order your favorite dishes and we'd have a proper conversation to know each other better." He continued in a slightly gloomy tone, "But... I got stuck in the meeting & then...I had to rush back here, arrange for the date and then bring you with me."

"Honestly, I think I like this idea better than you taking me to a restaurant."

"Are you saying this genuinely or did the little nap in my car did some sort of magic on your tired brain?" Sinan remained a little surprised at her confession, which he guessed was obviously a genuine one, since she let out a laugh at his remark. "But you know, I still can't believe that I finally convinced you for a date, a little forcefully though."

"Little?" Nilay stared at him with her eyes popped out in astonishment, "You almost planned to bring me here in my night suit! But anyway, now I shouldn't complain much since we're here to spend some good time."

"Whoa, the nap actually made your mood jovial. Or maybe... You couldn't resist my charm... That you're being so polite to me?" He didn't seem to keep away his usual flirty self for a long time, especially when he enjoyed teasing Nilay.

"Umm... I apologize for being too cranky." She said these words probably in her sweetest tone ever to him. "But even you weren't any less in annoying the crap outta me. I mean, who shows up at a girl's house at 10 in the night just to take her on a date?"

"You can expect anything from me, isn't it?"

"Well yeah, I realize that now. You know you're an idiot, right? But a nice one."

"Nice one?" Sinan looked up at her perplexedly.

"Hmm... I don't come across people like you everyday who fool others with their indifferent attitude but deep within they are extremely caring & generous."

Nilay's words still confused him, this time a little bit more as he keenly looked at her with questioning eyes. It was only a second later when she disclosed to him about the reason why she said so- The other day when these two bumped into each other at the orphanage and after he left, she was told by one of the management members that Sinan frequently visited the orphanage with numerous gifts for those little ones living there. Not only this, but he also made regular donations for the kids there so that they can make the best out of their unprivileged lives, something which even he did after he spent his own childhood in the same orphanage for quite a long time.

"Sinan Bey is one kind person we've ever seen. We are actually proud to see where he stands today, and despite of being successful, he is very compassionate."

As Nilay recalled those words of appreciation about Sinan, she realized that he always showed himself to be cheerful & easy-going only to hide his lonely self behind the happy mask. He often remained surrounded by his admirers, but except for his best friend Murat, Sinan couldn't genuinely love or trust any other person around him- Maybe because he witnessed some unhappy days during his childhood due to the cruelty & indifference of the society towards poor & orphans. Sinan appeared as a friendly & an outgoing person, but it was also true that he never ever opened up to people easily, only because of the fear that he may appear as a weak person.

He felt a bit uneasy to realize that Nilay now had a newfound respect for him, and for a few seconds he even cursed himself for coming across her that day in the orphanage. Of course Sinan wanted her to give him a chance, but he surely didn't want her to have any sympathy for him as that wouldn't be the kind of love he wanted from a woman in his life.

"It's not like I'm doing something extra-ordinary by helping orphan kids. I do that because I find happiness & satisfaction by helping them. They're like a family to me, and people help their families isn't it?"

"You're right."

Nilay agreed while taking the last sip of her coffee as he gave his own reasons, though somewhere he could clearly read her gaze only to realize that she was sitting at his place not because of sympathy, but because she truly wanted to give him a chance... Maybe this is why she indirectly persuaded Sinan to ask her out in a unique way! Had sympathy been the reason for her consent to the date, then she wouldn't have taken a liking for him or found his annoying antics adorable. And well, she didn't even take long enough to realize that he was really too charming to be ignored!

"You made all these by yourself?" Nilay looked at the little centre table in the room that Sinan enthusiastically decorated with all mouth-watering dishes from kitchen within a few seconds, much to her bewilderment.

"Big deal? I have my cooking book with me, it helps me whenever I want to impress people!" He replied casually while gesturing towards a large thick cook book kept at the kitchen counter, making her giggle in amusement.

"Hmm. So how many girls have you impressed by your cook book till now?"

"You really want to know that or you asked it out of jealousy?"

"Jealousy? Oh please!"

In an attempt to ignore his remarks that were somewhat true, Nilay let out a little hysterical laugh and paid attention to the food served in her plate by him, while Sinan made sure to carefully read her expressions & then interpret what was going on in her mind, something which he loved to do. Hence he didn't miss her tiny frown that she tried to hide while chewing innocently on her sandwich bite.

"But you should know that I don't make much effort for every other person. I wanted to make our first date special for you."

Those words took Nilay by surprise as she quickly looked up at him and then moved her gaze down in slight awkwardness, though Sinan thoroughly enjoyed watching the effect his declaration had on her, since he couldn't stop that smile curving up on his lips when he observed her eyes sparkling in delight. And why wouldn't she be delighted? It's obvious for a girl to react that way whenever she's given a hint of being special to someone by various sweet gestures...And Sinan was an expert when it came to such gestures!

Their conversation drifted towards the general discussions on their family background, regarding which Sinan had pretty nothing much to say but he gladly mentioned about Murat, his best friend-cum-brother. Nilay seemed to be keen enough to hear from him and smiled affectionately as he went on telling about how Murat was the closest & perhaps the only true friend he had, besides being his business partner. She couldn't understand what amazed her the most at this moment- Whether his cooking skills because of which she was merrily relishing the food or the fact that how men like Sinan could be so grounded despite of having all comforts & luxuries in their lives.

Hmm... Girls aren't to be blamed if they fall for Sinan, after all how could they overlook his charm?!

On the contrary, Nilay had a lot to tell him about herself. Becoming a doctor wasn't something that she dreamt about since childhood, but it was only as a grown-up adult that she took the decision of pursuing in that field. She did enjoy the perks of being a single child to her parents, but she often used to feel the void of a sibling in her life. Still, such a void didn't even bother her much as she had numerous cousins & a couple of her close friends too whom she considered as an important part of her life. Sinan loved listening to her endless chattering, since her face beamed with extreme cheerfulness on talking about her family members and in fact he remained amused for a while when she didn't seem to stop anytime soon. Well, that wasn't anything for him to complain about as he was already smitten enough by her, and would gladly listen to her chattering forever!

***

What else could have been better than being seated on the bench in little garden and enjoying the chocolate chip ice-cream under the brightly shining stars on a clear night sky. For Sinan this sight wasn't something about which he would be startled, but Nilay definitely was thrilled by the serene atmosphere and to top it, enjoying that mouth-watering dessert under the open sky with cool breeze caressing her skin was something which made her even more delighted. And above all, she seemed to be genuinely enjoying Sinan's company, which she could probably not even imagine just a few days ago!

"You really have a beautiful farmhouse, Sinan. If I were in your place, I'd have spent hours in this garden, doing nothing but simply gazing at these stars. You like stars?"

"I have a star sitting right beside me." He replied in an ever so dreamy tone, looking intently at her and being fascinated by every reaction of hers.

"Oh come on, stop being so flattering. Look above, these little things are twinkling so graciously."

"I can only see your twinkling eyes. And how can I look anywhere else when this pair of eyes is so captivating?"

Sinan was still in the same trance, or probably he lost himself more in the enchanting beauty of her eyes. Nilay, who was initially amused by his words thinking it to be his usual way of flirting, now had an eccentric thrill run down through her spine when she realized the depth of his tone. She found it difficult to look elsewhere, and wondered how she was ever supposed to describe the perfection of those light chocolaty brown eyes in words which blatantly looked at her as if no other thing or person existed around him!

"Has anyone ever told you that your eyes are so breathtaking?"

Sinan voiced his thoughts while still keeping his gaze intact into her eyes, which were filled with mixed emotions of excitement, anxiety & restlessness at the same time. With each passing second, she found it difficult to hold herself together on realizing the nearness between them. He felt himself being subtly drawn towards Nilay as his eyes drifted down to her velvety soft lips from her eyes, but somewhere he too was hesitant- whether she would let him to do that or not?

Much to his exhilaration, Nilay slowly shut her eyes as a way of giving him the needed consent. Being too overwhelmed upon seeing how she also moved an inch nearer to him, Sinan brought his fingers to tenderly stroke her cheeks, and the next moment he leisurely took her lips in a sweet little kiss. He gently sucked on to her lower lip, and found a way to plunge his tongue in when she let out an ecstatically slight moan as a response to his teasing actions.

He devoured the sweetness of her mouth bit by bit, creating a strange but gratifying havoc on her mind since Nilay couldn't hold herself back any longer. Her hands involuntarily reached up to his broad shoulders, with her fingers circling around his neck while she took pleasure in reciprocating back to the kiss with equal fondness. Their kiss turned into an incredibly romantic & enthralling one, though it was only the need of some air that they unwillingly let go of each other from that mind-numbing experience, with their hearts still pounding heavily.

"I did really force you to come with me, isn't it?" Sinan asked in an amiable tone, still caressing her cheeks adoringly.

"Yes. But... You won't have to do that the next time!"

Nilay replied back to him in a playful tone, though she was quite serious with her words. Sinan couldn't have been any more satisfied to hear that as he let out a jovial smile while she moved towards him to draw him into another spellbinding kiss.

Edited by whiterose29 - 8 years ago
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The first thing, what I love about Sinan is the way he cares about the orphans and treats them as his only family. <3
It may come from the fact that he himself grew up in an orphanage, but ppl definitely change when they're bestowed with money and status. He didn't and that's what makes me respect him. 😳
How adorably he watches them running out to play, reminiscing his own childhood where little Sinan would go to play a game of football with his own friends.
And Special Credit To You Here, for working and writing so strenously to develop the backstory and reasons for his heartwarming, lovable attitude. So a Hug! 🤗

I loved how he bumped into Nilay and then talked about Destiny's. 😆😆😆
And I don't blame Nilay, if she kept thinking about him, cuz honestly he's too adorable and his antics though flirtatious yet don't cross the limit of decency. <3 It's hard to keep avoiding or refusing a man like that.
I loved how you kept that she thinks about him, curling a strand of hair around her fingers. Girly but Cute. 😆😆
Her hint to ask her out in a unique way, was cute. Sinan Bey is intelligent enough to get it. 😉
Then His Allah! Allah! 😆😆❤️
Whenever he does that, I want to shower his face with kisses. :*

The whole scene where he kept honking and Nilay tried to sleep had me in splits. 🤣 Even the neighbors came out and thought of Sinan as some stalker. 😆😆😆
Though Sinan is adorable, to take her along in nightsuit but thank God Nilay stopped him right there. 😆😆
Aww, how he wanted to come in and have water and called Nilay an impolite host. God, he's adorable. 😆😆😆
And Nilay's Geri Zekali which Sinan heard and Nilay's Good For You! 🤣🤣
Another very girly scene where Nilay didn't have anything to wear but her dress was beautiful, I love the color lavender. *_*
And she surely must be looking very pretty. <3

Aww, Sinan made friends with Nilay's cute Labrador Bruno. ❤️
I personally love Dogs and Sinan Magic was hilarious yet cute. 😆😆😆
Nilay was sleeping the entire way, even when Sinan Bey was talking about how he had to cancel his earlier planned date. 😆😆😆
But still, it was so so adorable when he was was stuck with Nilay sleeping form. 😳
Sinan Bey's Farmhouse, definitely it would've been beautiful and I loved how Nilay was gushing about it. Not cuz she's impressed that he's rich but genuinely.
Their conversation over Coffee was cute. 😃
Personally, I agree with Nilay when she pointed out that she loved how he brought her to his farmhouse instead of some posh restaurants. A date isn't supposed to ideally posh and show of status, rather cosy and private where two ppl can actually interact with each other.
I loved how he made her dinner and Nilay was so inquisitive about how many woman did he impress by his cooking. 😆😆❤️

They bonded over their families and background, and I loved how Nilay apologized for being cranky. She then truly understands how much Sinan is genuinely caring about those orphan kids and I'm glad that Sinan understands that Nilay isn't sympathetic about him, rather she's genuinely impressed by him. 😳

Hayee! Their ice cream under the stars and that too chocolate chip. Yom Yom! 😛
But it was one Beautiful Beautiful Scene, where Sinan finally let's out what he was holding for long. <3
I loved loved how he complimented her eyes, the way he said Breathtaking was uff, my heart. ❤️
I can imagine my Bugs Bunny saying that and Nilay is at loss of words to describe the beauty of his own light chocolate orbs.
This is FEELS!
And their kiss, Uff.
Allah Allah, It was so so so BEAUTIFUL yet Passionate.
Dayyum, I loved IT! <3
You nailed it Canim, it was just Breathtakingly Beautiful. ☺️❤️
I loved how Nilay, gave in and shifted closer to him. 😳
Sinan realized that he's literally forced her for the first date, but the way Nilay added that he won't have to for second while they kiss was perfect. <3

Aashicim, I've waited long enough to read this, but I knew it was worth it. 🤗
Loved every every every bit of it. ❤️
Thank you so much for making this story so special. :*
Now I'm waiting for Epilogue. ☺️
Update Real Real Soon. :*
Edited by .Archangel. - 8 years ago

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