Restless Heart--THE END pg-42 - Page 16

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Posted: 18 years ago
hmmmmmm wat to say.......i wonder whether angads behind the dooor..........i bet he is....im sure hes willing to do tht.....it was a great part as usual.....good luck 4 ur exams.....and i hope u continue this n kpks very very sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
thats defineteley gotta be angad right,pls say im right and i just wanna say i love ur ff,me and my mates in school all read it ,well my frens are silent readers and they only have one word to say to u "amazing"anyways it was a gr8 part but u left it hanging 😭 ab continue karo cant wait
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: del_geo

i am glad that you continued but suspense kills me wonderful part. continue soon

lolz well it will soon coom to an end...well not really😆 thanx luv.

hey huni!

So many fanfics uv been writing that i didnt no about - n have no time to read any these days!!

But this one is really gd -im so sad about the fact that KYPH is over still and that IQ left KAA - but hey until u lot keep writing stuff about them.... its alll gd!! lolz...

awaiting the next part...

p.s. Sahil should get sick n Angad has to move back to take care of him, but he only comes - ONCE Kripa asks him too - the prss dont find out coz they think he is gone on his break.... the deal has been delayed one month anyways - in between this time Rupali or whoever she was comes back to Angads life - the jealousy takes away kripa's confusion of who she actually loves, Das comes to her in a dream n tells her to move on with Angad - admist all this it gets out to the press they really arent divorced.... n have been living together this whole time... but i dont how they would get out of that one... just a random thgt i had while writin this too u- lol!

anyways,

continue sooN!
Chandini (",) 😆

firstly...you remind me of this friend i have soooo much its not even funni. n her name is chandini too lolz. 😆 and thank you and lolz i keep ur sugguestions in mind while writing next time.

Originally posted by: Andekhi

Awesome Part!!! 👏 👏 👏

Not fair you left us in suspense still!!

If it counts – I am all in for choice # 1 b/c choice # 2 is a bit problematic! Two guyz w/ the same face, and one is her husband – o boy I would be way too confused!!! 😕 😕 Unless, this Das guy turns out to be a total jerk, but so far he hasn't, and I had like it if he still stayed the nice guy, so I am all for choice 1.

Anyways, this ff keeps getting interesting day after day!! 😃 Please do CONTINUE SOON! I will be eagerly waiting for the next part 😃

well lets make a deal..u cont MM n i'll cont this okay. lolz well i decided on not using any of the two story lines, but thanx anywayz. hope u like the next part too.

hmmmmmm wat to say.......i wonder whether angads behind the dooor..........i bet he is....im sure hes willing to do tht.....it was a great part as usual.....good luck 4 ur exams.....and i hope u continue this n kpks very very sooon 👏

thanx soo mcuh. hey wut ur real name cu zi dun wana b callin to gaurav cuz i dun think ur a guy..lolz. and well u jus have to wait n see.

Originally posted by: memze

thats defineteley gotta be angad right,pls say im right and i just wanna say i love ur ff,me and my mates in school all read it ,well my frens are silent readers and they only have one word to say to u "amazing"anyways it was a gr8 part but u left it hanging 😭 ab continue karo cant wait

well hmmm i duno..uu gotta read to see. and aww ur soo sweet n so r ur freinds. but tell them to comment too!!!! it'll make me feel better!!! lolz thanx for the complements. and hey can u gimme the pic of Iqbal n Neha on ur avi please

Okay guys,how you doin'? LOLZ. Anywayz the next part will be up in likea second so hang tight😃

Karishma



Edited by Desi Pride - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Kripa stepped into the kitchen to see none other then Betty at the other side cooking their breakfast. She felt as if someone had just sucked the sir out of her. It was Angad she thought in her head and kept repeating…it wasn't Angad. That made her sad and happy at the same time, talk about slip personalities.

"Good Morning Ma'am", said Betty while frying the eggs with melted cheese on top. Kripa returned the greeting and sat down for a while. Betty handed her coffee and said casually, "Dr. Das had come this morning". Kripa thought she would faint, she could swear to God that she was about to faint. Her hands and fingers felt numb and it was as if she had no knees suddenly. Betty must of noticed her uneasiness because she quickly added, "He left of course. He just came by to see Sahil and then he left. He also gave me a kiss on the cheek and said I made devil eggs to die for". Betty blushed as she had always had a secret crush on Das ever since she started to work in this house.

Betty handed Kripa a note, "He left this for you", she said going back to her work while humming a song from The 70's Show. Kripa thanked Betty and quietly walked out of the kitchen into the family room. Her heart was beating fast, the could feel the sweat gather at her forehead. A cyclone of thoughts whirled in her head again. All telling her that she herself caused this cyclone, this hurricane, this destruction. Her thought then went into how the survivors of hurricane Katrina felt after the homes and lives her torn into two. That's exactly how she felt at this exact moment. She wouldn't mind a Katrina or a Elma or whatever they were called to hit her and tear her into two right this second.

Kripa didn't open the letter. She stood there with it for about an hour with fear of what would be in it. Yet at the end, she simply placed in the pocket of her jeans. Then she heard it again, the mother ****ing silent wind blew across her face. She hated it, the silent wind kept taunting her over and over. She hated it.

Throughout the day Kripa noticed a major change in Sahils behavior. He seemed a lot happier, a lot cheerier. It surprised Kripa, because Sahil had told her this morning that his father had come to tell him he was leaving forever, and yet Sahil seemed so happy. A few days ago, Sahil would pass for a child being abused at home with all the crying he did, and now…pure happiness.

Maybe there was more in the letter…maybe something else Angad told Sahil, and told he through the letter she hadn't read yet. Did Angad really leave as Sahil said he did? There had to be more to it.

With a brave heart Kripa opened the envelope and took the letter out. Her hands were shaky as she read it. It scared her, she could actually see Angad's face floating upon the words and she read.

Dear Kripa,
First and foremost I really want to thank you for the time you let me spend in your world. I could only dream to live as Das. Being with you and Sahil was living the time of my life, time that I would never dare to forget. Kripa I'm sorry, I know what I take as a blessing, you take a living in hell. Please forgive me for my rude behavior. I presume after that night we spent together, I began to believe that you…anyway what's done is done. This letter is to jus t let you know that I'm leaving, in going upstate to a small town were I got a job as a professor in a college. Yes, I know…I'm the least intelligent person, but after living like Das for so long…I now talk and act like him too. But honestly Kripa, I'm sick of being Das. I want to be Angad again, that is who I am. I notified the lawyer, he's expecting your call to send the divorce papers to the judge. We'll be divorced when you want it. I loved being your husband Kripa, I loved you. Give my love to Sahil, and take care of yourself. You're a strong woman Kripa, one any man who proudly own up to.

Angad


The assurance of knowing her plan had succeeded and finally came to an end bought with it strange emotions. The fact the Angad was gone didn't seem to satisfy her the way she thought it did. It actually seemed to upset her. God Damn the human heart for being so confused and so damn restless. For never being at peace…

To Be Continued…

Comments Please (even the silent readers!!)

PROMO-: Kripa thought back to that night. It hadn't been the first time she and Angad slept together. This was after their "divorce", after Angad's accident. It was a night never mentioned before. It was their night…as husband and wife.

Karishma ****

PS- Guys read my new ff "From the Dark". I duno if its gona b gud or not,but i'll try my best. its very different...like rly different. 😆 and look forward to the next part of RH cuz its very passionate...i decided since Angad is no where in sight, i'll try to give u guys a treat 😆
Edited by Desi Pride - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg lovedddd it!!! continue soon hun!! i really hope kripa finds angad i mean being rich got some advantages lol!
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Posted: 18 years ago
GRT part!!!!! 👏 👏 i REALLY like the concept of ur new FF!!! 😃
PLEASE continue soon, cant wait for the PASSIONATE part!!!! 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part!! thanx for the suspense karishma, last time i could sleep a bit but this time i cant wait for teh passionate part!! 😡 😳 ...lol..torture...i love the concept of your new ff!! lookin forward to that one 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg omg...amazing part...i am having butterflies in my stomach...u hav to cont soooooooooon 😡 ...cnt w8 for the nxt prt...nite afta divorce!!!!!!!! means wen he came home post accident lol wen did it happened...cnt w8 to know!!!!!!!plz continue 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Desi Pride

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thanx soo mcuh. hey wut ur real name cu zi dun wana b callin to gaurav cuz i dun think ur a guy..lolz. and well u jus have to wait n see.

hey hun my real names Rach😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Loved the part. did i read passionate somewhere?? 😳 lol. I think Angad said something to Sahil, other wise he wouldn't be so happy after his father leaving him. Can't wait for the next part. continue soon

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