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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: vssdp

Awesome updates

Loving the story
Continue soon and thanks for the pm




Thank you :) im glad you liked it! Also pls pm me when you update vampire's love 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
CHAPTER 4


After an hour ...
Naina took the medicines and first went to the kitchen .
She took something from there and then went towards Rajveer 's room ...

Here Rajveer was lost in his own thoughts... He saw Naina after 2 years ... 2 goddam years ...!! And all he gets to hear is hello sir .. I hope ap thik hai .. I mean couldn't she come and hug me like other two did! I have missed her so much in these years and she .. But his thoughts were stopped by the knock on the door... He saw the time on the wall clock .. And thought it would be Shalini..

Come in! He said ... Naina opened the door slowly .. And peeped in ... As Rajveer looked towards the door he was shocked to see Naina in his room at this time !

Naina tum yaha ? Is waqt... ? I know tumne kaha tha ki tumhe neend nahi aayegi but mein sleeping pills apne paas rakhta nahi hu so i really can't help you !

Hogaya? Ya baaki hai ..! 2 saal mein ap bilkul nahi badle... Abhi sarcasm apki naak par baithta hai ...

Achi chize badalni nahi chahiye ... Haina?

Naina gave him a "apka kuch nahi ho sakta " wala look and continued.

Apki medicines di hai doc ne.. Jo apko abhi khaani hai ...

Naina mujhe nahi khaani ... Mujhe

" dawaiyaan kadwi lagti hai "

yaad hai mujhe ... Isliye solution saath layi hu... He gave her a confused look .. While she removed it .. " ICE CREAM " she exclaimed ... It was now Rajveer's turn to give her a "tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta " look!

Are u serious Naina ?!!

Of course i am ! Apko dawaiya kadwi lagti hai na ... To aap medicine khaiye aur uske baad uspar ek spoon ice cream to apko kadwa bhi nahi lagega aur ap medicines bhi kha lenge ...

F9 ! Then Rajveer one by one started eating medicines and took one scoop of ice cream on top of them ! After he finished this ... Naina was sitting on a stool beside him..

Thanks Naina ...

Thanks kis liye sir ?

Tumne meri kahani samjhi aur usse accept kiya ... Sach bolu to mujhe laga tha ki tum ye sunkar mujhse argue karogi ki meine tumhe inform kyu nahi kiya .. Academy kyu nahi aaya .. Navin ka sach batane ke baad bhi use kyu nahi bataya ki mujhe pata hai ... Etc etc... Par tumne to ...

Jaanti hu sir ! Ap kis paristhithi se gujar rahe honge us waqt .. Samaj sakti hu apki pareshani ... Apka dukh jo ap kisi se kabhi baat te nahi hai ... Is liye apne jab bataya to mujhe bura nahi laga ... Balki mujhe sirf is baat ki khushi hai ki mera bhai aur mera pya I mean ap zinda ho ! Although he understood the word yet he wanted to reassure before he opened up his feelings to her ..!

Waise mein ek baat se apse buhut naraaz hu ! Apne pehle bhi nahi batayi aur ap abhi nahi bata rahe hai ... !
Huh kya bol rahi ho Naina ? Naina slowly took out a book which she kept behind her .. She showed it to Rajveer from a safe distance and reality dawned him ! It was his diary ! His personal diary where he had written about all of his happenings in KMA ! And also about his love towards naina.. He had mentioned everything there ...

Kuch yaad aya sir ?

Naina ye meri personal diary hai .. Tumhare paas kaise puhunchi ye ? Aur tumne ise padha to nahi na !

Apke jeep incident ke bad apke kamre mein gayi to waha mili ..! And im sorry to say but meine apki diary ka har ek page padha hai puri tarah se ... !

Naina wapas karo meri diary .. Rajveer tried to snatch it but Naina quickly got up from the bed and started running in the room... Rajveer followed her back pleading her to give his book back ...

To ritu mam apko attractive nahi lagti ? Smiles Naina as she remembers this written in his book ..!

Naina meri book wapas do .. Both of them keeping the chase continued ...

Meri taraf ek strange si feeling ati hai apke man mein ? Naina teased him again... Making Rajveer blush and asking for the book back and back ! And suddenly Naina stopped !

Mein Naina Singh Alluwalia se beinteha mohobbat karta hu! Last line in the diary ...

And Naina kept staring at Rajveer trying to find an answer in his eyes ... ! -

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Love,palak 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
CHAPTER 5

Precap - "mein naina singh alluwalia se beinteha mohobbat karta hu " last line in the diary
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Naina kept staring at Rajveer waiting for him eagerly to open up his mouth ... While all Rajveer could do is stare at her expressionless ... Rajveer couldn't understand what was going on ... First he found out that his personal diary was with Naina ... Moreover Naina had read his whole diary where he had written about his at Naveen's relation, about Dr. Mishra , his real work in KMA, his feelings towards her , everything... !! And now she told me about it openly ... Actually questioned me ..! Well you've learnt to speak a lot is all what Rajveer could make a mental note about ... He was staring back at Naina unable to understand of what should he say ... Should i confess my feelings to her ... I think its the time ... Ughh Naina vo mein ...

Knock Knock !!

"Raj darvaza khol " "
Naveen"
"BHAI" both exclaimed together ... Mein kholta hu... Said Rajveer and went towards the door .. He opened the door ... Naveen smiled and entered when he saw his sister standing there inside ...

"Naina tum yaha kya kar rahi ho ..? "

"Vo Bhai mein actually Rajveer sir ko dawai dene aayi thi ... Actually shalini mam ko late ho raha tha to unhone mujhe kaha ki mein de du so ... Dene aayi thi ab mein chalti hu goodnight... And Naina was about to leave when Rajveer called from behind ..

"Naina vo diary mujhe dedo!" Said Rajveer with a big smirk in his eyes saying that now you don't have an option cadet ! But Naina being a tough one..

"Sir ap pehle daudna seekh lijye " said Naina with a victorious smile and walked out of the room closing the door behind ... Naina left the room and went in the hall room and sat on her favourite place where she sat the moment she entered this house ... Yes, the bar table ! She sat there and was lost in her own thoughts ...

"Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tune bhi peena suru kar diya hai ." Naina got scared first hearing the voice but cooled her rapid heart beats ...

"Are Alekh tu kab aaya ..? "

Bas abhi ... "Hmm" Aur kya chal raha hai... Khush to tu buhut hogi ye mujhe pata hai ... Par tera chehra bata raha hai ki tune kuch to kiya hai ... Ab batayegi ki mujhe wait karna padega... Vo actually ... And Naina tells him the whole incident ...

"Yar agar bhai nahi aaye hote to sir ne bol diya hota ... " Vo to aise bhi bata denge tujhe .. Ab jab unhe pata hai ki tu bhi yahi chahti hai to vo wait kyu karenge ... "Ya i think you're right" Aur madam in sab ke chakar mein apne pyare bhai ko mat bhulna ... Naina vo tujhe itne salo baad dekhke unhe kitni khushi hui hogi ... Par tune unse baith kar baat bhi nahi ki hogi ... Tujhe pata tha ki vo zinda hai par jab vo tere saamne aaye .. Unhe nahi pata tha ki tujhe pata hai ki vo zinda hai... Vo kitna kuch expect kar rahe honge ... Ki tu baithegi unse baat karegi , unse apni feelings share karegi par tune aisa kuch nahi kia hoga ... " Alekh tu sahi keh raha hai yar... Bhai se to meine bat hi nahi ki ... Mein Rajveer sir ke baare mein sochti rahi ... Aur ek baar mein ek hi kaam kar sakti hu na mein ...! Hmmm.. To ek kam karte hai .. Kal mein sab ko bahar lekar jaaonga ... To tujhe dupher tak ka time milega tujhe jo baat karna hai Rajveer sir ke sath kar lena .. Aur phir shaam ko bhai ke saath baithkar sab samja dena ... Samjhi ?! Yes boss !! Said Naina pulling Alekh's cheeks ... -
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Awesome update
Bas jaldi se raina ek ho jaaye
As usual Aalekh was awesome
Continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
CHAPTER 6

Next day... It was 7 in the morning ... Everyone in the house were dozed off to sleep ... *some snoring* while *some were lost in their dreams* except two people who were & are really punctual who else can it be, Mr. Navin and Naina ! As it was an old habbit of jogging , he couldn't resist himself from exploring the beautiful Shimla in its early rise ... So he wore his running shoes and was out of the house for a great walk..! While Naina could gain only a few hours sleep that too by flook .. She couldn't refrain herself out of the thoughts that were bothering her since last night ...
"Why did Bhai come to Rajveer sir's room so late ? His room is with Yudi and Captian chauhan.. If it wasn't an imp talk he wouldn't have been there ... But what could it be ? ! Naina already had a lot to handle .. She had to talk to Navin first , she had to tell Rajveer about her feelings , she had to bring the truth of their existence in front of the whole world .. She was so tensed that she decided to cook breakfast for everyone ! "Cooking is a stress -buster " I don't know about others but for me it proves really anazing! So Naina quickly went and took a bath first .. And then went down towards the kitchen ... "Kya pakau... Umm.. Let me see whats there ..! Umm ok Rajveer sir ke favourite sunny side up omelettes .. Bhai ka favourite pancake with maple syrup ( and i just told my mom to make one) and aalekh ka favourite sandwiches .. Best! Get to work Miss Naina ! She praised herself and began cooking ...

After an hour ... In Rajveer's room ..
The beautiful sun rose up and the sparkling rays found out some gap between the curtains and crept up till Rajveer's face only to wake him up from his wonderful sleep ... He cuddled like a baby and went upside on his stomach hiding his face in the fluffy pillow .. After doing this several times he gave up ... He got from his bed , slowly walked towards the washroom to straighten up his dull-dying face.. He came out of his room only to get startled by the beauty in front of him . There was Naina , in a baby pink salwar kameez , her dupatta tied sideways , little amount of flour on her fore head and some in her hand .. Busy on her phone while trying to move her hair strands that are disturbing her in her work... "How i wish to blow those hair and flour behind " thought Rajveer .. "Control your desires boy!! " he scolded himself ! Here Naina was on the phone waiting for shalini to pick it up .. "Hello mam ! Please kahi jaayega nahi .. Jaldi tayar hokar idhar aa jaye .. Meine breakfast banaya hai .. Yup bye ..! And she kept the phone only to get busy in preparing the batter for her pancake .. Rajveer walked upto her to the kitchen.. But Naina was too busy to notice it .. He came and stood beside her watching her how patiently she was cooking food for everyone ..

Naina .. He called out .. She looked at him .. She smiled a bit .. Good morning she said and again got busy in her cooking .. Mein kuch mada.. But his sentence was interrupted by a ring on the door bell.. Ugh! Mein dekhta hu... Rajveer went and opened the door . There they were ... The Mr. The Huda the Mr. Ali and Navin who was back from his jog.. Good morning Raj! Tum in logon ko jante ho ... Meko to aise ghur rahe the jaise inhone koi atma dekh li aur ab... Ab dekho tumhe bhi ... Hello ... Excuse me guys .. Navin snapped in front of Huda and Ali's eyes to bring them back on normalcy .. Rajveer smiled at this ...

" Hi cadets.. ! Kaise ho tum log? .. Navin ye Naina ke hi batchmates hai ... Huda aur Ali ... Oh right kal vo kya naam hai uska .. Yodha! Nahi .. Yudi! Ha yudi! Ne bataya tha par vo teesra.. Alekh ... Vo aya kya? Mein yahi hu! Said Alekh coming inside from the garden ... Bahar walk kar raha tha.. Hello Rajveer sir he said while he went and hugged him .. Soon they were joined by Huda and Ali.. Navin saw their affectionate hug and then called them back to reality ...

Guys chalo andar.. Navin said .. Raiveer , Alekh , huda and ali went inside and Navin was about to close the door when shalini called out ...

Ek min navz! Mein reh gayi .. She said smiling ... She came upto him.. And Navin smiled her back .. But before letting her in .. He slowly came near her and kissed her cheeks softly ...

" tum tab bhi aur aj bhi itni hi beautiful ho shal" .. He said while finishing his kiss on this cheek and he moved towards the other side .. "Aur mein iss beauty ko kabhi reh jane nahi dunga " he said while he finished his kiss and winked at her and went away leaving behind a flabbergasted Shalini!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
So cute and beautiful update
Loved it
Please unite RN soon
Continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
hiii
I will soon read n give my feedback
tab tak ke liye sorry plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
CHAPTER 7

In the evening ... The whole gang was sitting in the hall room .. Some chatting away , while some lost in their thoughts ... Huda had gone out to ask the whereabouts of sameera ... Huda came back..

Oh ji ... Sab suno ! Meri friend se meine baat kar li hai , aur usne sameera se bhi ... Wo ap logon ki story jaane ke liye abhi thodi der mein aa rahi hai ...

Everyone was really happy with this news arrival ... ! Naina smilingly looked at rajveer when sye found him in a total different state ... When Rajveer noticed Naina looking at at her , he faked a smile at her and looked away , but naina was much aware of Rajveer's habits and ifs and buts ... Later when everyone was waiting for sameera to arrive .. Suddenly the bell rang ...

Mein kholta hu said chauhan and went towards the door ... When he opened the door he was amazed at the beauty in front of him ... A girl in occur shirt tugged in black trousers with a bit of heal shoes and brown hair ...

Hi! Im sameera ... Sameera rathore ... Huda hai yahan? Chauhan sahab coming out of his thoughts ... Huh .. Ha .. Ha.. Aaye na ...

Thank u ... And Sameera went inside ... Everyone smiled at her and she sat down ... Everyone was looking at her but rajveer's eyes were num! He was shocked, suprised , overjoyed , all his emotions were mixed .. When Naina looked at him she found something really weird...

So.. Ap mein se navin aur rajveer kon hai ?

Ye dono said naina ...

Ap log mujhe pls story batayenge ... ? While Navin dictated the whole story and huda ali and alekh also heard it to understand the truth... Navin showed all the proofs and Sameera was quite impressed .. This is just amazing! She exclaimed ... I mean i dont want to hurt you'll but this story is breathtaking...! And ill also try my best to get you'll your duties back with honour! She said ...

Everyone was happy ... Sameera had dinner with them and then left telling them to reach her office tomorrow at 10, cause they'll bs going live at 12 ! Later in the evening almost everyone were in their rooms .. Naina saw Rajveer going towards the terrace .. She decided to talk to him .. She was about to go when she saw Navin sitting on the porch alone ... So she decided to first clear out things with him and then go to Rajveer ...

Hi bhai! Naina said while sitting besides him ... Navin smiled back at her ..

Um .. Bhai mujhe aapko kuch batana hai ...

Ha bol na ... Bhai i know aapko kitna ajeev laga hoga ki aapko 3 saal ke baad dekhne ke bad bhi mein itni cool kaise thi... Wo actually ...
Flashback... It was the first year cadets last day and naina was entering rajveers room when she heard him talking to someone on the phone ..

"Navin ko kuch nahi hona chahiye aur ye treatment covered hi rehni chahiye .. Kam se kam 1 saal hume usse bacha kar rakhna hoga... Ii ... Jai hind and he kept the call and turned around only to find naina on the door with teary eye ..

Sir.. With a half broken voice .. Sir .. Kya bhaiya .. ? And tears were rolling down her cheeks ...

Ha vo naina pls baitho mein tumhe sab bata ta hu ... And he told her about how had he rescued him and had been given anti- injections for the ones he had been injected .. He was in cover in the jungle but wounded ... He was out of their track but then one day they received a call from him and they tracked him ... They took him to a new cover where his treatment was going ... Rajveer didnt allow naina to meet him and she had agreed ..! Flashback ...

Bhai rajveer sir apko pehle hi sab batana chahte the lekin meine hi mana kiya tha .. Mein nahi chahti thi ki aapki recovery mein koi rukawat aaye .. Im sorry... Im really sorry ...

Naina ro mat ... Mujhe tujpar bilkul bhi gussa nahi hai... But ha mujhe ek baat buhut buri lagti hai .. Meri naina badal gayi hai ... Aur buhut ajeeb bhi .. Jo sirf hot shorts aur off - shoulders pehenti thi ab vo ye salwaar kameez pehenti hai ... Naina pls normal ban ja im missing that Naina ... Pls ab to mein vaapas aa gaya hu na ...

Ok bhai ... Let me graduate and then you'll get back the real naina .. She said smiling .. She gave him a hug and went towards the terrace to her Rajveer ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Hii
I have read this on watt pad
This is an fabulous ff
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: MANNNAYAK

Hii
I have read this on watt pad
This is an fabulous ff
Thanks for the pm




Thank you ! Let me know your account on wattpqd .. do you also write fanfics ? 😛 😛

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