It's not controlled AK/AR Note! PG 25 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: erier101

sounds pretty awesome!!! she has three kids...i wonder what she will do when seh falls in love with Angad..the kids r cute 😳 ..post first part soon! 😛 👏

thanks will u have to read and find out what she will do
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: memze

wow seems interesting and i cant wait to read the 1st part pls cont soon 😛

thanks i'll try posting the part tomorrow or the weekend😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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can't wait for the 1st part
bhooomi is cute
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

can't wait for the 1st part
bhooomi is cute

thanks i might post the fist part tomorrow
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Bhoomi is soo adorable!!!! I'm new here and you would probably no cuz i'm your best friend!! Ha!! Anywayz, bye!!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: cherryblossom94

Bhoomi is soo adorable!!!! I'm new here and you would probably no cuz i'm your best friend!! Ha!! Anywayz, bye!!! 😆

thanks and yeah u finally regestired
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guys I forgot one thing is that Shiva, Kripa's dead husband will be played Prithiv and he won't come in the story but just wanted to say that. And yeah I'll post the next part soon don't know when but I'll post it.

Edited by candyprincess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice concept jaaneman 😉

continue sugar 😉 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 1

Kripa stared at the light, she didn't know what to do she really needed a job to support her family. Kripa got up form the sofa and went to the bedroom where there were two beds lye on one she could see Sammy sleeping and on the other on there was Kali and Aaliyah, Kripa went near Kali's and Aaliyah's bed. Kripa looked down at Kali she could see dry tears on her face she rubbed her palm on Kali's cheek. Kripa looked over at Aaliyah who was under the blanket, she heard whispers coming from there, and Kripa walked over to Aaliyah and took off the blanket.

"
Aaliyah you're still awake" Kripa asked as she took Aaliyah into her lap

"Mom'I'I was about to sleep"
Aaliyah said hiding something behind her back

"What are you hiding" Kripa questioned

"Nothing mom"

"Let me see" Kripa pulled the little frame out and saw it was a picture of Shiva

"Mom don't cry"
Aaliyah said putting her little hands on Kripa's cheek

"
Aaliyah " Kripa said with tears forming in her eyes she didn't know what to say

"Mom see that's why I didn't want you to see the dad's photo you always cry"

Kripa was silence she stared at her three year old daughter trying to give a answer that she didn't cry because she saw Shiva's picture but she was crying because she had failed as a mother to make her daughter happy.

"Mom why didn't dad come back"
Aaliyah questioned, Kripa stared how could she say to a little three year old moreover explain that her father isn't in this world.

"
Aaliyah 'I promise I'll tell you but not now" Kripa said as she made Aaliyah lie down

"Now go to bed okay" Kripa ran her fingers through
Aaliyah's hair

Kripa got up to leave when she saw
Aaliyah had fallen asleep, when Kripa reached the door she heard Kali call "Mom" Kripa looked back to kali sitting up and looking at her

"What happened Kali" Kripa said as she came and sat beside Kali

"Mom I'm scared" Kali said, Kripa notice there were tears in her eyes

"About what"

"Everything after dad died nothing's been the same" Kripa stared it was true nothing was the same and never will be.

"Kali I'm trying to make everything better and you have to help you're the biggest right"

"I know mom. I know" Kali said as she hugged her mom, Kripa hugged her back crying her self too.

"Now go to bed you have school tomorrow"

Kali lay down and Kripa left the room. Kripa went and laid herself down on the sofa and closed her eyes thinking about Shiva

"Shiva go get the ball"

"where is it"

"across the street common the kids want to play"


"SHIVAAAAAAA" Kripa stared at the body on the floor covered with blood


"Doctor'doctor please save my husband"


"We're sorry his no more"



Kripa opened her eyes; she pulled her fingers through her hair. Kripa got up and went to the window and looked out as tears rolled down her eyes, nothing was fair in life. She didn't know where she went wrong in life maybe marrying Shiva, she loved Shiva more than herself but she married him right after she graduated high school that was a very early age but her parents didn't like Shiva and the only way was marry him right after finishing high school. Even though marrying Shiva right after high school she finished collage she majored in business. Kripa had Kali when she was eighteen; it was very young age to have a child.

More over Kripa didn't get one thing when she came to Misty, Misty only took care of her and her kids for only two months and then shifted her to this broken down apartment. It seemed as Misty didn't want Kripa and her kids around her and Kripa at the moment really needed someone to help her, the shock of her husband dieing was still with her and she needed comfort, Kripa some times doubted Misty as Misty seemed only making there life's worse not helping it be better, but then Misty was the only person Kripa had to count on.






*Hope you guys liked the part and i'll only update if I get lots of comments*



Edited by candyprincess - 16 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
AWESOME part!!!! 👏 👏 its kinda sad!!! 😭 PLEASE continue soon!!!! 😊

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