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Plz continue with new twist

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do continue with the twist...but want lots n lots of RN

Thanks for suggesting! For now on, there will be lots of RN! The new twist will also contain lots of RN!
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Before you read further, I want to say something. I am not familiar with the rituals and procedures of Indian weddins, as I am not an Indian. So, if I make a mistake, please forgive me.

Chapter 28

Another man comes and says to Rajveer, "ye ladki jhoot nahi bol rahi hai...jhoot tum bol rahe ho...tumhe is se aaj or abhi issi waqt shaadi karni paregi...warna hum tum ko nahi choorege.."

Poor Rajveer had no other choice. He was just staring at Naina while Naina just gave Rajveer a wicked smile. Rajveer, Naveen and dadaji had no idea why suddenly Naina was doing all this.

"Gaoo waloo dekhiye inhe, dekhiye ye mujhe kaise dekh rahe hain jaise ye mujhe abhi kha jayege", says Naina while pointing a finger towards Rajveer.

"oye bhaisahab, aaj issi waqt iss ladki se shaadi karege warna...", says a man to Rajveer

"HAAN HAAN! Abhi karni hogi shaadi mujhse", teases Naina!

Rajveer had no words at the moment. He was surprised and shocked at the same time. Rajveer first looked at Naveen then at dadadji. They were both equally confused.

Rajveer went up to Naveen and asked, "ab mein kya karoon salay? Teri behan ne mujhe kahin ka nahi choora."

Naveen who was serious and confused at this time, suddenly started laughing. "maan gayya mein Naina ko! Wohi hai jo tujhe kaboo kar sakti hai! Bhagwaan ne sahi Jodi banayi hai tum dono ki", replies a laughing Naveen.

"Kaminay yahan mera ye haal hai or tujhe itni hansi aa rahi hai. ab bol mein kya karoon?", asked an irritated Rajveer.

Naveen suddenly stopped laughing and said, "dekh Raj! Abhi koi or chaara nahi hai, tujhe abhi Naina se shaadi karni paregi, warna ye log tumhara jo haal karege wo toh mein bayan nahi kar sakta."

Rajveer goes back to where Naina is, she is standing on a chair.

"theek hai! Mein abhi or issi waqt Naina se shaadi karne ke liye tayaar hoon", decides Rajveer.

Listening to Rajveer's words, a smile creeps on Naina's lips. She suddenly comes down and hugs Rajveer. Still hugging him, she whispers in his ear, "ab toh aapko mujhse shaadi karni hi paregi". Rajveer, who was serious and frustrated all this time, smiles naughtily and whispers back in her ear, "shaadi toh mein tumse kar loongaa, or uske baad or bhi bohut kuch karoonga, tayyar rehna, meri honay wali biwi, Mrs. Naina Singh Shekhawat."

Hearing this from Rajveer, it gives her shivers in her entire body. Her cheeks turn hot and red. She knows exactly what he is talking about. Turning all shy, she tries to break the hug, but he hugs her even tighter. Rajveer knows her situation very well. Enjoying her vulnerably, he whispers back in her ear, "nahi Naina! tumne jitna bhaagna tha tum bhaagli, aaj ki raat tum mujhse bach ke kahan jaogi?".

Not able to take it anymore, she breaks off the hug successfully. Rajveer notices her pink cheeks and her eyes down out of shyness. He surely enjoys this situation.

"Chalo paas hi ek mandir hai, wahan shaadi hogi abhi". says a man

After 10 minutes, Rajveer, Naina, Naveen and dadji reaches the Temple along with others.

In Mandir -

"Pandit ji, inh dono ko abhi shaadi karni hai", says dadaji to a Pandit

"theek hai wase bhi abhi ka bohut acha maurat hai, widi ka sara samaan tayyar hai, aap dono apni jagah pe padhariye", replies Pandit and he tells Rajveer and Naina to take their places.

Suddenly, a woman comes there and hands a beautiful red dupatta for Naina to put over her head. Rajveer takes the dupatta from her hands and puts it over Naina's head.

Wedding rituals starts right away.

After whatever is needed for the wedding, Pandit tells Rajveer to put sindoor in her maang and manglasutar around Naina's neck.

Taking the sindoor, Rajveer puts it into Naina's manng. Then, taking the manglasutar, Rajveer puts it around Naina's neck.

After few minutes the Pandit tells them to get up for pheras. Getting up from the places, Rajveer and Naina take the required pheras as they make promises to each other. They make promises to love each other until their last breath. They promise to stick by each other's side for better or for worse. They promise to be there for each other in sickness and in health. They promise to be there for each other in any type of situation.

After completing the pheras, Rajveer and Naina do all the required rituals for the wedding. After everything is done, the Pandit announces, "Vivah sampan hua! Aaj se aap dono pati patni hain. Ab aap dono sab ka arshiwaat lijiye.".

Rajveer and Naina takes everyone's blessing. At the end, Naven and dadaji are left.

Rajveer and Naina, first reaches Naveen who is standing there with a huge smile on his face. When they both go down to take his blessing, he stops them and says, "tum dono ki jagah toh mere dil mein hai", and he hugs them both. After breaking the hug, Naina sees tears in Naveen's eyes. She wipes them off and ask, "ye kya bhaiyya? Aap kyun ro rahe ho? Mein kon sa mar rahi...". Without letting Naina to complete her sentence, Rajveer pits a hand over her mouth and warns her by saying, "khabardar Naina jo aaj ke baad tumne dubara aisi baat ki."

Seeing the love Rajveer and Naina have for each other, Naveen smiles and says, "bhagwaan kare tum dono hamesha khush raho! Aaj mein nishchint hogayya hun kyun ke Naina ko tum se zayada yuaar or koi nahi kar sakta, Raj! Shayad itna pyaar mein bhi nahi karta aapni gudiya se."

Rajveer and Naina, they both go to dadaji to take his blessing. When they go down to take his blessing, he stops them and says to Naina, "betiyaan paon nahi chuti", and he hugs her while she hugs back. Now, taking Rajveer's ear with his hand, he warns Rajveer, "oye khotay, khabardaar jo tune meri pyaari si bahu ko kabhi bhi tang kia, warna teri khair nahi", and he hugs Rajveer.

Flashback ends

Present -


As Naveen finishes off with the story of Rajveer and Naina's marriage, they all have a bright smile on their faces.

"Wase Naina, tumne aisa kiya kyun Rajveer ke sath? I mean tumhe yoon Rajveer se shaadi kyun ki?", asked Gunny

"aray wo kia hai na Gunny, issay dar tha ke mein kahin bhaagh na jaoon, issi liye toh mujhse aisay zabardasti shaadi ki.". teases Rakveer

"stop it, Raj!", warns Naina, "Gunny wo kia hai na, wase toh pata nahi ye mujhse kab shaadi kartay, toh maine soocha ab or itni dair kyun karni. Wase toh inhoon ne seedhay tareekay se manna nahi tha, toh mujhe inh ki tarah ulta tareeka azmaana parah.", teases back Naina.

"Okay guys, baatein bohut ho gayi, ab haemin plan ke baray mein discuss karna parega.", interrupts Naveen

"You are right Naveen! Haemin apna plan jaari rakhna hoga. Ab tak toh Chauhan or Nandini ko yakeen ho gayya hoga ke mein or Naina ek doosray se bohut nafrat karte hain. Ab haemin Nandini or Chauhan ke khilaaf sabot ikatha karne hoonge. Mein us admi ke paas gayya tha jis ne camaras fit kiye thay KMA mein Chauhan ke kehne pe. Us ne mujhe cameras ki receipts ki copy di hui hai.", explains Rajveer.

"lekin us receipts ka kya faida?". Gunny asked.

Naina explains, "us receipts pe Abhimaniyu sir ke signatures hain jis se ye saaf saaf prove hota hai ke wo cameras unhoon ne hi liye thay."

"Lekin Raj, ye sabot kafi nahi hoonge unh dono ka sach samne lanay ke liye", Naveen

"I know Naveen, wo proofs kafi nahi hain. Issi liye haemin ek strategy banani ho gi jis se hum or zayada proofs hasil kar sakein", explains Rajveer.

Suddenly, a smiles creeps on Naina's lips. "of course, Raj hain na Communication and Strategy ke genius ", teases Naina, "kyun SIR? Aapne ne hi toh mujhe ye sab parhaya tha".

Another smiles creeps on Rajveer's lips as he gives the "mein tumhe nahi chooroonga" wala look to Naina. They all start laughing!

"ab haemin aagay kya karna hai?", asked a worried dadaji

"Aap fikar mut kijiye dadaji, hmein apna plan jaari rakhna hoga. Naina or mujhe pretend karna hoga ke hum dono ek doosre se nafrat karte hain. Hamein KMA mein wase hi pretend rehna hoga. Jab tak aap Chauhan se or zayada jaankari jaanne ki koshish kariye. Wase bhi us ko aisa lagta hai ke aap us ke sath hain.", explains Rajveer.

Gunny interrupts, "kya mein koi help kar sakta hoon?"

Naveen smiles and replies, "of course Gunny, tum hi help kar saktay ho. Tumhe Naina ke sath flirt karna parega sab ke samne."

"Lekin thori door se or hadh mein reh ke", warns Rajveer

Gunny looks at Gunny as jealousy is evident in Rajveer's voice. Gunny smiles and explain, "Don't worry, Rajveer! Mein aapki biwi ke sath sahi tareeke se behave karoonga. Wase bhi wo sirf meri ek achi dost hai! Mein to kisi or se pya...", stops Gunny realising what he was about to say.

He looks towards everyone and sees a smile on everyone's face. This confession of Gunny ensures Rajveer that Naina is in safe hands! "Mein chalta hoon", says Gunny and runs from there.

"okay guys, ab haemin KMA chalna chahiye", says Naveen, "or tum dono", points towards Rajveer and Naina, "khabardaar jo ab tum dono doobara lare!"

Along with dadaji, Naveen leaves from there leaving Rajveer and Naina behind.

As soon as Naina realises she is alone with Rajveer, she decides to escape from there. Understanding exactly what Naina is thinking, Rajveer grabs her wrist before Naina could escape.

"aray choriye mera hath, ye kya kar rahe hain aap?", says Naina as she tries to free her hand from his grip, but, miserably fails.

Pulling her towards him, he says, "aray mein toh apni biwi ke sath thoora romance karna chahta hoon! Pura haq hai mera, biwi ho tum meri! My officially married wife!"

Naina lowers her eyes out of shyness as her cheeks turn hot red. Seeing her like this, Rajveer smiles and whispers in her ear, "aray tum toh aise sharma rahi ho jaise hum ne pehle kuch kia na ho, yaad nahi wo raat?"

Rajveer reminds her of that night. Naina looks into his eyes slowly as they remember the beautiful night spent together!


Flashback -

After the completion of their marriage, Rajveer, Naina, Naveen and dadaji decides to go back.

Before they could leave Rajveer says, "Naveen, mein Naina ko aaj raat apnay farm house lejana chahta hoon, agar teri ijazaat ho toh?"

Smiling a little, Naveen says, "Raj, Naina teri biwi hai, tujhe mujhse ijazat maang ne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai."

"per Bhaiyya...mein...kaise..", says Naina as she hesitates because she knows Rajveer's intensions very well.

"Naina, tu apnay pati ke sath ja rahi hai, toh kya mathlab kaisay? Tujhe Raj ki saari baatein maanni chahiye, wo pati hai tera", explains Naveen.

Naina, now knows that she doesn't have any choice, but to go with Rajveer. It's not like she does not want to go with him. The reason she is hesitating is because she knows that if she goes with him, she won't be able to control herself. She knows she might end up showering her love on him. She is the only one who knows how she is controlling herself all these days. She only knows how she is staying away from her hot husband! She looks towards Rajveer who has a naughty smile on his face and an expression which clearly says, "ab tum kaise bachogi Naina?"

After few minutes, Rajveer and Naina reaches his farm house.

Raj -naina in Rajveer's Farmhouse -

Ignoring Rajveer, Naina goes inside the farm house and tries every possible way to ignore him as she knows what exactly he wants right now. Understanding her situation exactly, Rajveer smirks as he enjoys her vulnerability.

Suddenly, Naina notices Rajveer, who is coming towards her as he starts to unbutton his shirt, with a naughty smirk on his face. With every steps he takes, Naina's heart skips a beat. Her cheeks turn bright red and she looks down out of shyness.

Naina starts moving back while Rajveer starts moving towards her. This process repeats until Naina hits the wall, and she suddenly closes her eyes.

After few seconds she opens her eyes and finds herself pinned against the wall. She finds Rajveer extremely close to her as she can feel his breath on her face. This gives her the chills in her entire body. She looks on her left and her right side and finds Rajveer's hands blocking every possible way for her to escape.

Rajveer leans in a bit as Naina closes her eyes. Rajveer gently purse his lips and as softly and gently, he massage her lips between his. He starts with her bottom lip and then move to her top lip. After gently massaging her lips for a while, he changes tactics a little bit. Rajveer starts to get a tiny bit more aggressive and instead of massaging her lips between his, he squeeze them. Naina reciprocates back with the same intensity.

After few minutes, they both pull back to catch their breath. Rajveer looks at Naina, whose eyes are closed due to shyness. Rajveer smiles a little and says something that shocks Naina.

Leaning in a bit, he whispers in her ear, rather asks, "kya mujhe ijaazat hai Naina?"

This question of Rajveer surprises Naina. She gets shocked as she knows that her Rajveer does not need her permission to do anything, in fact it is his right. Looking into his eyes intensely, she smiles and replies, "Raj, aap ko meri ijaazat lene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, ye aapka haq hai."

A little smile comes on Rajveer's lips and it melts his heart hearing Naina's words. Still looking into her eyes, he says, "Nahi Naina, main aisa kuch bhi nahi karoonga jo tum nahi chahti."

Another smile creeps on Naina's lips. Leaning in a little, she whispers in his ear, "or agar mein kahoon ke mein ye chahti hoon toh?"

After saying this, she immediately looks down out of shyness, still smiling! As soon as he hears this, he looks at her. Without wasting a single second, he picks up Naina in his arms and walks towards the bed.

Placing her on the bed carefully, he stares into her eyes directly. Slowly he moves on top of her. He starts kissing on her lips, while he opens the doori of her kurti and she unbuttons his shirt.

Moving down a little, he starts placing wet kisses on her neck all the way to her shoulders. Still kissing her all over her neck, he takes his shirt off and throws it across the room. He, then, helps Naina to undress while Naina helps him to undress completely.

Now, being completely undressed, Rajveer moves down a bit kissing every part of her body, leading her to moan with sweet pleasure. He places wet kisses, on her stomach, her legs, he waist, her hands, and everywhere else.

Knowing that Naina is completely ready, Rajveer decides to ask her again for her permission. He looks into her eyes and smiles as her eyes gives him the consent to continue.

This was the only thing Rajveer needed, her permission! Without wasting a second, he starts kissing her all over again. He, now, knows that Naina is completely ready. This is when Rajveer completes her by entering inside her. While all this time, Naina first moans with pain, but after some time, that pain leads to sweet pleasure!

After few minutes, they both pull back. Rajveer looks into Naina's eyes while she looks into his eyes. They became one today, by body and by soul. Nothing can separate them.

Naina places her head on Rajveer's chest as they lay in bed smiling and thinking about the beautiful night that they spent!

Flashback ends

Present-


Still looking into each other's eyes, Rajveer and Naina both smile remembering the beautiful night spent.

"kyun kya kehti ho Mrs Shekhawat, hojaye phir se ek baar?", Rajveer whispers in her ear.

Hearing his words, it makes her to blush and her cheeks turn hot red. She smacks him playfully on his chest and says "bohut naughty hogayye hain aap! Sharam kijiye!"

"jis ne ki sharam, us ki phootay karam!", replies Rajveer with a smirk.

Rajveer and Naina both laugh at his comment and decides to go back to KMA.


In KMA -


Two people talking over the phone -

1st person - "kaam hua?"

2nd person - "haan kaam hogaya, mujhe pata chal gayya hai unh logo ka plan. Wo Rajveer or Naina dono shaadi shuda hain. Wo Gunraaj Singh Randhawa bhi unh ke sath mila hua hai Ab agay kya karna hai?"

1st Person - "kal mujhe KMA ke bahir milo sharp at 1800 hours, baki ka plan hum wahan discuss karege"

They both disconnect the call.

End of Chapter


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How did you all like this part? Who are those two people talking over the phone? What is Rajveer, Naina, Naveen, Dadaji and Gunny's next step towards their plan?

Please do comment with feedback, questions, concerns or suggestions!

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Hahahah 😊 is comment ne mujhe bohut hasaya!!!
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Thank You 😊
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Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

Excellent update

Please cont soon


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Thank You! 😊
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