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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was heart wrenching os.
Poor souls, both are in pain and they need each others support to overcome their nightmare

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arilip

Woohhh!! What just happened ? They knew each other from before? Can't wait for the next series😲

Yes!! The next series will explore their past. I hope this series was not too inconsistent. Thanks for your comment.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -afsha-

That was painful

Khushi was just a child but laughing at that point was also not good
Dnt knw what fate have stored for these 2


Why Khushi laughed?? It is an unusual reaction to something so gruesome, I understand. But her condition, especially her mind, while experiencing such horror will be explored in the upcoming chapters. Thanks a lot for your review.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: just4this

Hello

My goodness, both r suffering
U have written it very nicely, it really touched my heart
Right now I am pained to see so much of pain in their life
Hopefully they will help each other .
Thank u

Hi
I am really glad that you found this series worth your time. And thank you for letting me know that you liked it. Really means a lot. Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: honey-sweety

That was heart wrenching os.

Poor souls, both are in pain and they need each others support to overcome their nightmare


Yes, they do. I hope the next series can keep up to your expectation.Thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow, that was one beautifully written emotional chapter. now we know the root of arnav's intense revulsion for khushi. I can't imagine the horror that an 8 yr old girl must have felt seeing her friend, arnav's mother being burnt alive. she was too close with his mother, and her young mind couldn't process what to feel seeing that horror and shouts happening in front of her. arnav should let go of the past. It's very difficult and surely memories like that haunt one for life. But he should make a move. I am eagerly waiting to read Clipped Wings. Hope to see arshi rekindle their friendship.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I guess that arnav's mom was a social activist and maybe quite upfront and strong-willed and so had to face death in the hands of khushi's family who may not have liked her work. I am waiting to see the past unveil more in the next series.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it
Awsone writing dear
Wow! I just fell in love with the story
Cant wait to read more stories from you
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So sad...
Update soon and ping me plz...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poojasidd123

wow, that was one beautifully written emotional chapter. now we know the root of arnav's intense revulsion for khushi. I can't imagine the horror that an 8 yr old girl must have felt seeing her friend, arnav's mother being burnt alive. she was too close with his mother, and her young mind couldn't process what to feel seeing that horror and shouts happening in front of her. arnav should let go of the past. It's very difficult and surely memories like that haunt one for life. But he should make a move. I am eagerly waiting to read Clipped Wings. Hope to see arshi rekindle their friendship.

Hi!! sorry I took a while to reply to your comment. Thanks a lot. I will start the next series as soon as I can. Right now, I am neck deep in my assignments and stuff. Hope you will find the next series as enjoyable.

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