New Arshi FF : Void space (part 1 updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Roshini-

Interesting.continue soon[BR]Welcome back :)

Thank you :-) Yes I will
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: srilathas

Dear[DIV]Interesting start :)[/DIV][BR][DIV]Is there someone in IF with the same ID?? She had written Prince Charming, Can't forget the past etc[/DIV][BR][DIV]But you have mentioned that this is your first story on Arshi! That's why I'm little confused[/DIV][BR][DIV]:)[/DIV]

Thank u.. No this is my first ff on Arshi. Will,continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: srilathas

Just now I found out[DIV]Her id is "shraddska" :)[/DIV]


I have also read some of her work. She is too good :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So here is the first part. I hope u enjoy.

Part I

"For the last time Khushi, No!" Arnav shouted as he stomped towards their room.

But Khushi had never taken that order particularly well. In fact, she had not taken it at all. "Oh, come on, Arnav" she whined following him. "I am not asking u to go shopping with me"

Without even looking he bit out, "That is what exactly it is. We had a deal. You don't drag me to your shopping and I don't drag u to gym"

Rolling her eyes she stood in front of her irritated husband , " It is not a shop so our deal remains as it is. It is a kind of historical house that's been set up for..."

"Will u be able to purchase things there?" he questioned

"Well, yes... "

"Then it's a shop" He reached for his laptop on the table "Now move"

Khushi pouted, "Please Arnav, I have a lot of things to do. There will be really heavy machines. How will I carry it? I could really use ur help."

"Then call Siddharth" He snapped.

Suddenly her arms crossed across her chest and she glared at him "What's wrong with u? Is it too much too ask to help me with gardening or with the dishes. You are just never..."

A hand clasped her mouth shut with his hand, " Now, now the only reason I don't help u with that work is because u don't do it yourself. You have lots of workers to do that."

She shrieked & used both her hands to remove his palm from her mouth but in vain. He loosened his grip & she stepped back.
"Damn it,Arnav. I know you don't like it and I know it goes against the deal but my life will be easier if you could help me out. Yes, I can call Siddharth but between your anger and his childishness I will always choose you."

He closed his eyes & took a deep breath. She knew the answer, she smiled but..

"I am not going with you"

"What the hell?" Her eyes snapped

"Look there is no way I am going to shopping with you for some antique technology machine. But if you call me after you are done. I'll help you to get it here."

Her features softened. It was rare of him to offer help. "I think that's wonderful" She kissed him on the cheek & grabbed her purse "I'll call you in about 3 hours. Thank you. I love you :-)

"I know" he replied.

It was not romantic but it was enough for her. She turned to leave bit paused, instead of working immediately he was still looking at her. She dropped her purse & ran to him. Simultaneously, they reached for each other and shared a deep kiss. A knock on the door interrupted them.

"Papa, Are u done? We have to go" Aarav called.

They broke apart, allowing their son to enter the room. She said good bye and left, but he could tell something was not right today.

An hour later, the father son duo was at Raichand villa. Arnav hated going there. But his son needed his partner in crime, Karan. While Siddharth was also playing there.

After a few minutes, Arnav's phone rang. An unexpected fear gripped him.

"Hello"

"This is Sameer. Come to city hospital right now"

"What happened?"

"Arnav uncle please..." the boy pleaded.

"What the hell happened?" He shouted bringing the kids play to an halt.

"Khushi met in an accident. We need you right now"


How was it? good, bad, very bad?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hope everything is fine.nice start.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting story khusi met with an accident n i hope nothing bad happens
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well written, loved it heartily. Can't wait for update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start love to read more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start
Omg hope khushi will be fine
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Interesting start .. lets see how Arnav feel now

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