Arshi FF: Holding it together- Completed-Note pg 114

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Luna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

So sorry!! I took long to comment, but you see I am drowning in despair. Despair of four assignments and two book reviews. So back to the story, mystery, mystery, mystery.. Arnav fell from the pedestal? taking Khushi with him most probably. I can't wait for the mystery to unravel. Also who is him? Payal's him? I have an inkling it is Akash! And talking about Akash, my heart goes out to Stella. And to see one's mother killing herself, I wouldn't know the pain. You have done a great job exploring each character. Will be waiting for the next chapters. 'A bientot.

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swtsam

@swtsam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Amazing awesome...

Plz do PM me ur updates

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Sandya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Deepa876
Wow what a wonderful story you have penned here. I started reading the prologue and could not stop myself till I reached till the end of chapter 7. This is an interesting web of lives interwoven together. Waiting eagerly to read more.
Also please don't doubt yourself. You are doing an amazing job & I'm sure pretty soon your story will have tons of readers. So don't even think of stopping this amazing ff and keep writing till its end. Please consider this as an humble request...or threat :), whatever suits you most. But seriously don't stop cos you are an awesome writer with an equally awesome writing skill. Thanks.

Thank you so much for reading, commenting and your kind words. I cannot tell you how much reading comments mean to an amatuer writer like me. It also motivates me to bring out a chapter as soon as I can :).

Also, dont worry about me stopping a story in between. I have a a slight OCD when it comes to incomplete things and can never ever leave a story incomplete 😛

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atipreet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Since a year I was searching a good and sensible story on IF and now came across it finally. It's a story which will make me coming on IF for updates again and again I guess. Didn't read all the parts yet but I know it will be worth reading. Looking forward for more no of updates..

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Sandya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: atipreet
Since a year I was searching a good and sensible story on IF and now came across it finally. It's a story which will make me coming on IF for updates again and again I guess. Didn't read all the parts yet but I know it will be worth reading. Looking forward for more no of updates..

Thank you! I hope the story lives up to your expectations :)

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

So Akash is Khushi' jijubhai. Where is Payal? Prologue said she heard her jiji to open the door where as up till now what I deduced is Payal is no more. Akash wants to move on and Khushi too is changed.
Amazing story.

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surtikapadia

@surtikapadia

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Great update but please write the chapters asap
Eagerly waiting for the updates to read the story ahead

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Great part.

So akash is khushi's jiju ... waiting to see what happened because of which Payal and akash are no longer together.

Also now that akash has realised that anjali loves him...will he accept her love and move on.

Continue soon

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Sandya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: surtikapadia
Great update but please write the chapters asap
Eagerly waiting for the updates to read the story ahead

I wish I could write more than one chapter a week..truly. But my schedule currently doesn't allow me too much time to write. I do update at least one chapter a week. Hope you do stick around for the story to unfold. Thanks for reading.