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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4
The next day, all college students go out for the picnic like camp. All are traveling by bus. Veera's friend asks Veera, what had happened to the proposal?

Veera: What had to happen? Baldev and Gunjan are siblings but there is a vast difference between them. Even my dog rejected Baldev. Even if he had married my dog, the child would be bad.

Everyone began to laugh.

Baldev starts fuming. He looks for an opportunity to put Veera down. The driver takes a break for 15 minutes. Everyone gets down.

Veera: I am going to the restroom to dress up. Please give me a ping once all are ready.
Baldev overhears their conversation. Veera is on her way to the restroom. Baldev reaches earlier than Veera and exchanges Ladies and Gents toilet board. Veera sees the ladies board and goes in but is shocked to know that she has entered the gents toilet. Baldev & the boys roared with laughter. Veera fumes. Everyone gets into the bus and reaches the destination. All the students are given different rooms. Veera finds Baldev's room and changes the number from 6 to 9 and enters his room. Baldev innocently enters the room and lies on the cot, not knowing that Veera is there. Baldev is about to sleep. Suddenly, everyone hears a girl screaming for help.

The principal, staff and the students enter the room and are shocked to see Veera and Baldev in a room.

Veera: This person entered my room and tried to take away my dignity. If you had not come, my life would have got screwed up.

Baldev: No she is lying. Ask her what she is doing in my room. It is all her plan.
Principal: Get out and don't show me your face hereafter. Guys, get into your rooms.
Baldev packs his bags and leaves. Veera waves him goodbye with a smirk.

Later, he meets Gunjan.
Baldev: Trust me. I have not done any such thing. It is all Veera's plan.
Gunjan: I trust you but at the same time, I cannot distrust Veera either. I don't know whom to trust.
Baldev: You know me very well. Please think at least as a sister. Ask yourself whether I can do such a thing.
Gunjan closes her eyes and gets the solution that Baldev cannot to such a thing.
She said, "I trust you. Don't think that you are alone. I am with you."
She then goes to Veera and said, "I know that you and Baldev have been fighting but I never thought that you would stoop to such a low level. Don't tell me that Baldev did that. You can fool the world but not me. I know my brother very well. He can make fun of someone but cannot do such a wicked thing."
Veera: then why he has played dirty pranks with me? He has to pay for messing up with me.
Gunjan: Whatever he did, he did but what did you do? You began to fight with him. You have made him fight with a person who has been a karate champ for 3 years. It is a good thing that he won otherwise, he would have got killed or his bones would have broken. If you cannot tolerate people making fun of you, you too don't make fun of others.
Veera: Oh shut up. Enough of your lectures.
Gunjan: Fine, I will tell Ranvi and your parents.
Ranvi comes. He overhears the conversation. He said, "Veera, you did not do the right thing. You go to the principal & withdraw the complaint immediately.
Veera: If I take back, it won't have any value.
Ranvi: You should have thought about it before making false allegations on Baldev. If you don't, I will call mom & dad & tell them the matter.
Veera: Fine.
She is on the way to the principal's office. Baldev comes from behind & carries her to a hut. He closes the door & starts unbuttoning his shirt, ripping her clothes.
He said, "You have falsely accused me of rape. I will show you what is rape."
Veera: Don't dare to touch me.
Baldev still comes forward.
Veera: Anybody is there? Help.
Baldev: This place is isolated. No one can hear your voice.
Veera: Please let me go. I am sorry. Please forgive me. I will not be able to show my face to the world. Please forgive me.
Baldev: Now you understood what is rape? If I want, I can still do everything with you & spread it to the world but I won't do that because I can play pranks on others but cannot play with anyone's lives. But you have spoilt my life with your mere words. Now you go away. I don't want to look at your face & won't stop you.
Veera cries. Baldev takes out his jacket & covers her body. He said, "Remember one thing. Don't ever commit this blunder again because not all the boys are like Baldev."
Ranvi & Gunjan are on the way to the principal's office to testify Baldev. Veera & Baldev meet the principal.
Veera: I am withdrawing my complaint against Baldev. He has not done anything. I've framed him.
Principal: You have not done right. I've never expected this from you. Baldev's life could have got spoilt only because of your ignorance.
Veera cries: Baldev, I am sorry.
The camp ends. Veera falls in love with Baldev. However though Baldev looks at Veera, he ignores her. Everyone are stunned that the environment has become quiet.
Veera writes the love note & throw it before Baldev. His friend picks up the note & said, "There is a note for you."
Baldev: I don't want to read it.
His friend opens the note & said, "This is a love note for you."
Baldev reads the content, "Baldev, I love you."
However, he laughs.

Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
wow nice update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
the first pic is ratan's..not veera's.
baldev did toilet prank with veera which was bad.but veera's revenge was unbearable. poor baldev was accused of rape. loved baldev sharing his feelings with gunjan and gunjan supporting him was nice.baldev scared veera and made him understand what rape is.loved baldev saying that though he plays prank on others he never plays with others loved and all men are not like baldev.loved veera apologizing to baldev and confessing her mistake by proving his innocence.surprised that veera fell for baldev.but didn't he believe her love note?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Veeba playing each other but what veera did not right. .love gunjab support baldev..
Baldev make veera scared... Veera appoligzed.. & She fall for baldev let's see what will happen waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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changed that pic.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

the first pic is ratan's..not veera's.

baldev did toilet prank with veera which was bad.but veera's revenge was unbearable. poor baldev was accused of rape. loved baldev sharing his feelings with gunjan and gunjan supporting him was nice.baldev scared veera and made him understand what rape is.loved baldev saying that though he plays prank on others he never plays with others loved and all men are not like baldev.loved veera apologizing to baldev and confessing her mistake by proving his innocence.surprised that veera fell for baldev.but didn't he believe her love note?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb update dear
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Baldev pranking veera
Agreed she did take her revenge too far
But even baldev was to blame for instigating her
At least she took back her complaint
Now she loves baldev
N looks like he's gonna make fun of her now
Looking forward to next update
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 5

Veera goes to Gunjan & said, "I am sorry for falsely accusing Baldev & being rude to you. Please give me a chance."
Gunjan: Our fights always go on. You go & persuade Baldev. He looks very lost after this incident. You apologize to him. If he forgives you, it means that I have forgiven you. You know very well how much I love my brother. If any of my friends hurt him, I won't mind losing my friendship with them. I am your sister-in-law but we have been more like friends.
Baldev is with his friends near the tree. Everyone has to leave the next morning. Veera thought, "I should somehow make Baldev's mood right."

Baldev is lost in Veera's thoughts. Veera touches his shoulders from behind. Baldev turns back. Suddenly, Veera smooches Baldev.

Baldev: What is this you are doing? What kind of drama it is.
Veera: Unless you forgive me. I won't leave you.
Baldev: I read your note. Do you even mean what love is?
Veera: You can scold or abuse me as much as you want but I love you and will love you till the end.
Baldev: Oh really, what can you do for me? I am not as rich as you are. There is a lot of difference between you and me.
Veera: When my brother can marry your sister, why can't you accept me?
Baldev: My sister is very much adjustable but I don't find you compatible.
Veera: I don't know all these things. I love you. If I do what you say, will you accept me?
Baldev: What can you do for me?
Veera: Anything and everything.
Baldev: Fine, jump into the nearby pool.
Veera: Fine.
She goes to the pool and jumps.
Baldev is shocked and saw that Veera is drowning. He jumps into the pool immediately and saves her. Veera is unconscious. Baldev presses her abdomen and takes out the water. Veera gains her consciousness.
Baldev: You took my words so seriously.
Veera: Whatever I say I mean it. I love you but it is my problem if you don't love me back.
Baldev: Veera, I love you.
Veera: Just to make you say this I have to prove myself. It means that you have not really forgiven me. I don't know whether to thank you or blame you for saving me.
Baldev: I only said that at that moment.
Veera: You saved me thinking about my Veerji right?
Baldev: I wanted to test you but I didn't even ask whether you know to swim or not. If anything had happened to you, Ranvi will not leave me. I am convinced that you love me. I love you.
Veera: What can you do for me?
Baldev: You are delivering my dialogues to me. I am giving your answer to you. Anything and everything.
Veera: Jump with me in the pool once again.
Both jump to the pool.
Baldev: Control your breath else you will drown.
Veera controls her breath and learns to swim.
Baldev gets naughty and both dip themselves into the pool again.
Balde
The background song is
Mujhe neend na aaye, neend na aaye, neend na aaye
Mujhe chain na aaye, chain na aaye, chain na aaye

Mujhe neend na aaye, ho
Mujhe neend na aaye, mujhe chain na aaye
Koi jaaye zara dhoondke laaye
Na jaane kahan dil kho gaya... (Repeat 3 times)

Mujhe neend na aaye, mujhe chain na aaye
Koi jaaye zara dhoondke laaye
Na jaane kahan dil kho gaya... (Repeat 3 times)


Haalat kya hai kaise tujhe bataaoon main
Karvat badal badalke raat bitaaoon main... (Repeat once)

Poochho zara poochho kya haal hai
Haal mera behaal hai... (Repeat once)
Koi samajh na paaye kya rog sataaye
Koi jaaye zara dhoondke laaye
Na jaane kahan dil kho gaya... (Repeat once)

Na jaane kahan dil kho gaya... (Repeat once)

Jaan se bhi pyaara mujhko mera dil hai
Uske bina ek pal bhi jeena mushkil hai... (Repeat once)

Tauba meri tauba kya dard hai
Dard bada bedard hai... (Repeat once)
Kabhi mujhko hasaaye kabhi mujhko rulaaye
Koi jaaye zara dhoondke laaye
Na jaane kahan dil kho gaya... (Repeat once)

Both come out of the pool.

Mujhe neend na aaye, neend na aaye, neend na aaye
Mujhe chain na aaye, chain na aaye, chain na aaye

Mujhe neend na aaye, mujhe chain na aaye
Koi jaaye zara dhoondke laaye
Na jaane kahan dil kho gaya... (Repeat once)

Na jaane kahan dil kho gaya... (Repeat once)

Both hug each other. Ranvi & Gunjan come there.


Veeba breaks their hugs after seeing them.

Ranvi & Gunjan: So your theft is caught. Both have fallen for each other & marry right?
Veera & Baldev blush.
Ranvi: The bus is about to leave so we have brought your luggage. Everyone gets into the bus. Veera & Baldev sit next to each other. All are amazed.

Later everyone goes to their place. Ranvi & Gunjan informs Mehra & Hazariprasad about Veeba's decision to get married.

Mehra & Hazariprasad are elated & plan for Veeba engagement.



Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago

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