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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi...i just started reading ur fanfic...is amazin g...u guys r fab...gr8 parts!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part
when is angad coming? 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

great part
when is angad coming? 😕

lol dont worry he'll be in soon... hopfully in a couple of more parts lol!!

keep reading till then

luts of luv and sugar

Hina😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: maham_93

Hi...i just started reading ur fanfic...is amazin g...u guys r fab...gr8 parts!

thnx, u won't believe what we have planned for u guys😉

lot's of love,

Nalni😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 5

Person: "what a pleasent surprise kripa"

kripa: "out of everyone y u?? what have i done to deserve this??"

Person: "i should be asking my self that"

kripa: "shut up shiv"

Kripa just rolled her eyes and sat down1 desk that was away from shiv and then opend up her diary

Shiv: think about it Kripa no1 is in here right now… except that guy

He pointed at an old teacher sitting on the teachers desk sleeping

Kripa looked up at this and made a weired face hearing the old teacher snoor

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzmoozzzzzzzzaaazooo

Kripa thought: wat a freak and

went back into her diary

Shiv: and I don't think it'll matter if we're even in here so let's get out of here

Kripa didn't look up at shiv she was too busy flipping through pages in her diary reading her previous entery. And how nervouse she was just then she felt a hand snatch her diary away.

Kripa: SHIV! Give that back

Shiv: hmm.. wat do we have here Kripa Sherma's personal diary ..

Kripa: shiv give that back write now and don't u dare read it!

Shiv didn't seem in any mood of giving it back instead he was toatly into knowing wat Kripa had wrote in it!

Kripa: shiiivvv… give that back PLEASEEEEEEE

Shiv looked up and saw her pleading eyes

Kripa: Please….

Shiv looked at it and then back up at Kripa… then he thought of sumthign and smiled

Shiv: hmm.. so wat do I get in return??

Kripa: ANYTHING u want!

Shiv raised an eye brow

Shiv: Anything

Kripa: yes Anything u want… WAIT wat do u have in mind?


Shiv laughed and smiled

Shiv: to late now darling! Ur gonna have to give me whatever I want!

Kripa: fine… wat is it?

Shiv: well.. I don't really know right now but I'll think about it

Kripa: fine but until then can I get my diary back

Shiv: fine.. but u better give me wat ever I want when I ask for it

Kripa: ya ya.. w.e just give me my driary back

Shiv handed back her diary and then got up and started to walk away

Kripa: yo where do u think ur going??

Shiv: u really think im going to stay here for an hour.. im going home!

Without thinking twice Kripa grabbed her books and followed Shiv out

Kripa: wait up!! Im coming too

Shiv did here her but decided to ignore just to annoy her and so he just started walking

Kripa noticed that and got annoyed

Kripa thought: ahhh!! O god I hate him soo much

In the parking lot Shiv opened the car door just then Kripa came out talking to someone on the cell phone. By the time she hung up shiv was getting settled in his car when he put in the key and tried starting it.. it didn't start

Shiv: damn! wat the hells wrong with this car now! He looked out the window and saw Kripa standing smiling

Shiv: o that little witch!!

Kripa knew exactly wat shiv said even though she was to far away to here but she was good at reading lips

Kripa: AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just then a white car appered from the main entrance and stopped right in front of Kripa. Kripa smiled and sat down on the back seat she instructed the driver to take a U turn and when he did she told him to stop right in front of Shiv. Kripa rolled down her window and gave shiv a "get in the car look"

Shiv just rolled his eyes and got in without saying anything

It was a very silent ride both were too annoyed at each other to say anything

Soon the car stopped again infornt of the Khanna mansion and Shiv got off

Shiv: bi

SLAM

Kripa yanked at the sudden noise of the door getting shut

But then smiled realizing she had made Shiv mad without even doing anything

Kripa: let's go home driver

When Kripa got home she entered the house her mom and dad were having tea and having a little conversation which was interrupted when Kripa walked in and all their attention went on Kripa and her big smile

Suraj: hmm.. looks like someone had a good day

Gyatri smiled and got up and hugged a cheerful Krip

Gyatri: how was school hun?

Kripa: awesome mom! Everything went great

Gyatri: well I can tell by ur face it did

Kripa then noticed that she was still carrying her smile

Suraj: anything special dear?

Kripa: ofcourse mom! U should've seen Shiv's face he was soo annoyed at me

Suraj: my daughter the evil genius!!

Gyatri: Kripa! That's so mean why do u bug that sweet guy all the time?

Kripa: sweet my foot he's so annoying mom u have no clue! Hes only nice infront of u otherwise he's so mean!

Gyatri: please kripa I don't want to here anything against Shiv!

Saying that Gyatri got up and left and Kripa and surag mocked her voice!

Kripa and surag: "please Kripa I don't want to here anything against Shiv"

And they both laughed at that

Suraj put an arm around kripa and she rested her head on his chest

Suraj: tired?

Kripa: a lot!!

Suraj smiled and parted from her

Suraj: then I guess my little princess u go rest

Kripa kissed suraj on the cheek and ran to her room

Once she was in he her room she locked her door and took out her diary once again and started to write in it

Dear Diary,

Hahah today was awesome everything went great except that little brat who was so rude to me! The best part that I got a chance to get Shiv so mad lol only if I could've token his picture when his car wouldn't start! It was so funny how Naina would keep on blushing when ever we passed by Bahi or sumthing! I really hope something happens between them and I can imagine them both married in a couple of years and omg thought of Naina being Nain bahbi is so great we would do everything togeth:D:D and holly it was soo close Shiv got a hand on Diary god knows wat I would do if he ever read it I would just die out of the shock! Hopefully tommarow would be a good day as well!!




Edited by goldi2 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so here's hina's part. sorry for the wait. my part will be on thursday!! so please do read and leave comments.😊.
lot's of love,
Nalni
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Posted: 18 years ago
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coool part....got bit confused....some places u wrote navi n then u wrote naina....neways continue sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowow...well what has kripa written in her diary tht if shiv reads he will get a shock??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

coool part....got bit confused....some places u wrote navi n then u wrote naina....neways continue sooon 👏

im sorry for the confusion but acctully since we decided to change the name i kinda sometimes still end up wrting naina.. but if u guys ever soo naina please jsut ignore it cus i do mean Navi

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg awesome ff!! ok so i got a question is shiv played by iqbal and if not then is there an angad?

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