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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: armaghan0

cool just feels like reading someones diary

i'll join u too😉. next part 2morrow.

lots of love,

Nalni and Hina❤️

Edited by nkdidi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
sorry about the mistake. hina had some difficulty posting the part up. the new one is up and ready, so please do read. then again, srry for the inconvience.
lots of love,
Nalni
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Posted: 18 years ago
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4th part 2morrow.

hints
kripa and navi's lunch together. "girl talk."
what about kripa's detention?????

think about it and do comment. hope u enjoyed hina's part. and please stay tuned for my part thats coming tomorrow 😊

lot's of love,
Nalni
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
awwww poor kripa got detention.....coool part cont sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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next part some time 2night 😃. hope u guys r looking 4ward 2 it.
lot's of love,
Nalni and Hina ❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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here it goes.......

PART 4

"SO HOW DID 2ND PERIOD GO??"

LOOKING UP AT NAVI, KRIPA DRANK SOME COKE.

KRIPA: "ARYAN GOT ME A DETENTION. GOD, AND NOW AFTER SCHOOL I HAVE TO GO TO THE DETENTION ROOM."

NAVI: "LOL, GOD LUCK IN DERE. U NEVER NO WHO U MAY FIND. ANYWYS…. ADITYA YAAD HAI??? HE'S IN MY CLASS"

KRIPA: "U TALKING ABOUT HE MOTTA KID FROM LASY YEAR."

NAVI: "YEAH, BUT TRUST ME, HE LOOKS WAYS BETTER. HE IS SO NOT FAT ANYMORE."

KRIPA: "REALLY!!!! I THOUGHT IT WAS IMPOSSIBLE!!"

NAINA: "WELL, IT WAS POSSIBLE!! I'M STUFFED, CAN WE GO FOR A WALK OUTSIDE??"

KRIPA: "Y NOT!"

AS THE WERE WALKING AND TALKING ALL OF A SUDDEN NAINA FROZE. KRIPA WHO ENDED UP TALKIN TO HER SELF REALIZED NAVI WASN'T THERE. LOOKING AT NAVI, KRIPA WONDERED Y SHE WAS LOOKING THROUGH A CLASS ROOM. THEN WEN SHE LOOKED SHE NOTICED HER BHAIY IN THERE. THEN KRIPA WEN CLOSE TO NAVI AS QUIET AS POSSIBLE AND……………..

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH………………." (YELLED)

STARTLED NAVI LOOKED AT KRIPA AND THEN BACK THROUGH THE CLASS WINDOW. EVERYONE WAS LOOKING AT NAVI. KRIPA WHO WAS LAUGHING HER HEAD OF WAS LOOKING AT AN EMBARESSED NAVI.

"GOD I'M GOOD" SAID KRIPA.

NAVI: "KRIPA U BETTER START RUNNING"

KRIPA STARTING RUNNING FOR HER LIFE.

KRIPA: "GOD!! Y DON'T U EVER REMIND ME THAT SHE IS A ATHLETIC RUNNER?!?!"

FINALLY WHEN NAVI CAUGHT UP TO KRIPA THEY WERE ALREADY OUTSIDE. TIRED THEY SAT AND LEANED ON A TREE.

NAVI: "U NO HOW EMBARESSING DAT WAS, U GONNA PAY FOR IT!!!"

KRIPA: "YA WHAT EVER, O LOOK DERES BHAIY, HE'S COMING TOWARDS US."

AS SOON AS KRIPA FINISHED HER SENTENCE NAVI TURNED AROUND AND ASKED HER WHERE???

KRIPA: "U REALLY LOVE HIM DON'T U??"

NAVI: "U LIED!! HE'S NOT THERE."

KRIPA: "SORRY NAVI. HOW DO U NO U LIKE HIM??'

NAVI: "I REALLY DON'T KNOW KRIPA. WHEN EVER I SEE HIM I GET SO HAPPY ALL OF A SUDDEN. IT'S LIKE MAGIC!"

KRIPA: "REALLY, BUT WHAT IF BHAIY ASKS U OUT…. THEN WHAT WOULD U DO THEN??? WOULD U GO OUT WITH HIM OR REJECT HIM???"

NAINA: "UMMMMMMMM…………………"

JUST THEN THE BELL RANG AND BLUSHING NAVI GOT UP.

NAVI: "GOTTA GO TO CLASS, DON'T WANNA GET LATE.

BY SAYING THAT SHE RAN TOWARDS THE SCHOOL.

KRIPA: "SHE REALLY LOVES HIM!!"

KRIPA AND NAVI BOTH WENT TO THERE SEPARATE CLASSES. KRIPA HAD GYM THEN ART. NAVI HAD FRENCH THEN DRAMA.

FINALLY WHEN KRIPA THOUGHT THE DAY WAS OVER SHE REMEMBERED ABOUT HER DETENTION. THEN KRIPA MET UP WITH SAHIL.

KRIPA: "HEY BHAIY, CAN U DROP ME OFF AT THE DETION ROOM, I'M NOT SURE WHERE IT IS…"

SAHIL: "SURE IT'S RIGHT DOWN THE HALL, I'LL WALK U THERE. HOW DID U GET A DETENTION??

KRIPA: "IT'S A LONG STORY…………"

AFTER EXPLAIN WHAT HAPPENED TO SAHIL THE REAHED TO THE DETENION ROOM.

SAHIL: "WELL, GOOD LUCK WALK HOME CAUSE I GOTTA GO OUT"

KRIPA: "BUT BHAIY…."

SAHIL: "SRRY SIS, BETTER LUCK NEXT TIME!"
BY SAYING THIS SAHIL WALKED AWAY.

KRIPA WAS VERY NERVOUS. SHE OPENED THE DOOR AND……..

KRIPA: "OH MY GOD, NOT U…………….."

WHO IS IT???


hope u guys like it. please do leaze comments and predictions..
lot of love,
Nalni and Hina
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Posted: 18 years ago
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shiv......... again!!!!! 😆 😆 AWESOME part!!!!!! 👏 👏 continue soon!!!! 😊

p.s. who is Shiv palyed by?????
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

shiv......... again!!!!! 😆 😆 AWESOME part!!!!!! 👏 👏 continue soon!!!! 😊

p.s. who is Shiv palyed by?????

thnx. well, shiv is played by basically anyone u want!!! me and hina just thought the name shiv suited the character.😊 but from my point of view, shiv should be played by shahid kapoor. simply cause his looks kind of match the way we want shiv to be. innocent but fun to be around.

lot's of love,

Nalni

Edited by nkdidi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

awsome part cont soon 👏 👏

thanx!!

and i would've poisted the part tonight but im really busy today with all the homework and all.. soo hopfully tommarow but if i get finnished early today which i doubt.. i will post it!!

luv ya all!!

Hina

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part!! i wonder who it is....cont soon 😛 👏

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