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Posted: 8 years ago
Liked the fact that Suman now wants to expose her family for what they really are. Earlier it was all about escaping. Good progression.

So the story will go till June as well, I remembered April end/May beginning was the plan and was wondering how the loose ends could be tied. We are greedy so don't mind extra details even if the story goes till July 😉.

I hope you have planned a nice epilogue. For Bhavani and Virender hopefully it will be the ending similar to the movie "She Devil".
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Posted: 8 years ago
@pirateking I have not watched She Devil, I have planned an epilogue. Running away doesnt take you anywhere. You will have to face it. And Suman has the best chance. Destiny has given power in her hands, and that is an important part of the story also. I am a person who is completely against fatalistic approach and believe in your actions can change your destiny. I have never approved of the line this is woman's fate blah blah...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 235- The Rebuke, My Devar

It was Sangeet ceremony of Raji's wedding. Maheswari was thankful that Shobha had not come to her with irritating words. Latika Bhabi was handling her quite well. She could see Sourabh continue to irritate Sreedhar and Sreedhar was struggling hard not to lose his patience. For once Maheswari understood what her son would be feeling. If his relation with Suman was acknowledged she knew by this time he would have shown Sourabh his place. But now he was unable to defend openly for her, because her character and also the family prestige was at stake.

As she watched him dance to the tune of latest Bollywood numbers along with others she mused.

" I never knew beta you could carry so much pain inside you and smile. Smile as if you are the happiest person on this earth. I had seen Suman's tears when she ran up seeing you, but wouldn't you have broken my son. Wouldn't you have wanted your mother at that time , near you to understand you. I couldn't even know you were crying. It was a different thing I couldn't understand Tilak or Sudhir, but you Sreedhar, I had thought if you breathe I will know. Still it took me more than a year to understand what has happened to you. Isnt it an irony to know my son's pain I had to understand the tears and anger of my bahu"

It was then Shobha came and sat near her . " Didi have you thought about any eligible girl for Sreedhar"

" Shobha let me come out of the trauma what has happened Murali before I think of tying sehera for Sreedhar" told Maheswari.

" Didi it is because of what happened to Murali I am telling Sreedhar is married quickly. Your so called bahu has cast her evil eyes on him too. I can feel it " told Sobha.

" Shobha Suman doesn't have any evil eyes. She didn't come to Murali's life. We chose her as Murali's life partner. Don't forget you are talking about the girl who has saved my son from the Chandelier, who has fought gundas to protect Aakash and very recently protected family's prestige when dirt was thrown on Sudhir " told Maheswari.

" She is pretending well. Didi her only goal is Sreedhar and he is immature, it is we elders who have to take steps so that children doesn't do mistake"

" Very much Shobha. You told it right. We elders have to take step so that children don't stray. I would suggest before looking at whether Suman has evil eyes or not, fix the roving eyes of your son Sourabh "

" Didi you are accusing my son unnecessarily" told Shobha. Now Latika Bhabi and some other ladies had also come. Latika Bhabi put a hand on Maheswari's shoulder.

" No Bhabi. I was trying my best not to spoil the wedding atmosphere. But my sister is not helping the cause. She sees the evil eyes of Suman latching on Sreedhar. But cant see the roving eyes of Sourabh who has insulted Suman by inappropriately touching her."

" Didi that girl had the audacity to tell you that. She had ..."

" Suman has not told me anything and she is not the type of girl who tells such things. But the way your son is behaving with Sreedhar and the way Bhaiyya is behaving with him I felt something was wrong. I got the information from Sreedhar. Shobha I am warning. If I see Sourabh near Suman one more time I wont hesitate to put him behind bars. So you better correct your son" told Maheswari, got up and sat near another relative leaving a Shobha gaping and almost in tears.

" Bhabi do you really think Maa will agree for our union" asked Suman. They were in kitchen and were preparing dinner. Vindhya had told Suman about Sudhir's plan to tell about her and Sree to Maheswari post their Singapore trip.

" Suman maybe it will take her some time. But I know Maa. If she knows that is what Sree wants, he has waited so patiently, you have supported him in this journey she will approve. She loves you as a bahu Suman. Papa it will be bit more time, but once Maa is convinced she will convince Papa. He also likes you Suman. Just that his traditional thoughts will take some time to adapt to change, just like that of Poornima."

Suman smiled " Bhabi shall I ask you one thing"

" Now what is the question. Sreedhar tells your hobby itself is asking questions" told Vindhya.

Suman giggled. She had seen Sreedhar sharing a very good rapport with Vindhya. " Bhabi how could you feel I was suited more for Sreedhar when you saw my photo. You doesn't know, Sreedhar has not told you about us, then just with a photo"

Vindhya looked at her. She had told her sometime back in one of their casual conversations that she had felt Suman was more suited for Sreedhar.

" Suman do you know one thing. I was just thirteen when my engagement happened with Sudhir. On my engagement day I didn't see Sudhir. In those days in my home a girl could see her husband only post marriage. Those were the days of face covering seheras and face covering ghunghats for wedding and all. Sudhir's dadi was against such practice in marriage, but for engagement the rituals were maintained. Sreedhar was seven years old and he had tagged along with Maa and Dadi to my room. Dadi told from now on she is your bhabi.

I still remember him calling me bhabi for first time and sitting beside me. That was the first relation I formed in this house. Bhabi before bahu. Once they went my dadi told me Bhabi is only second to Maa and asked me to always treat my devar as my first child itself. I didn't understand it that point. But then I had a special bond with him. Myself and Sudhir were married five years post our engagement as you know Maa wanted me to complete Plus two and attain eighteen. In those five years for every Diwali and Holi someone from here will come with sweets and dresses for me. He will also come. Sometime Murali was there, sometimes he alone. I played with him, I used to take him in and around our place. I used to feed him too.

Then when I came here post marriage your Jethji was always busy with work. Maa will ask him to accompany me so that I can visit places in Jaipur. Over years I never knew when he became my son than my devar. Even I didn't realize it. But when I knew he loves you, I knew it was because I knew him like a mother I could guess you were more suited for him.

I guess Maa also knew. Maa also felt something. She was never sure of your wedding to Murali, but just went along

Now what happened we cannot change Suman. But then whatever we do now can usher in better things. "

" Bhabi Sreedhar had always talked about his family in college. You don't know how much he had trusted his family. I could never connect to that, because in my family there was no love, no trust, I didn't even know what it meant in true sense. But living here each day I realize he was correct. He can never hurt anyone of you and he never will " told Suman and they heard Sudhir's foot steps and Vindhya went to receive him.

Edited by shruthiravi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aw poor Shoba she should have kept quiet instead of talking to Maheswari about Suman 😆😆. She would have never imagined her sister will tell her son will be behind bars if ever he comes near Suman 😊😊.
Vindhya and Sree's bond that's so sweet .. relation explained in that young age bloomed into a lovely bond..
Though Maheshwari is lamenting that she missed to understand her son's pain, Vindhya explains Maa just went with the flow and she will understand them. Suman sees a completely loving,caring, doting family at Sree's place where her maayka didn't have anything special to call it a family.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb part
Shobha , what is the need to open mouth .. she n her big mouth ...MV did reply good way..perfectly..
I loved the fact how a MIL standing for her DIL...much needed...
MV's thought process n feeling the pain of Sree so beautifully depicted...Mother's dilemma ...
Loved the convo between Suman n Vindhya n how vindhya , sree met n how they become more mother son than devar bhabi...
loved it
Vindhya understand suman is perfect for Sree like MV also but that time with she agreed with it...may be all happen cause of some reason...
By choosing Suman , GOD has chosen to bring down all evil force ...
continue soon
Edited by Krishna_Sourav - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you so much for this part.. wow Vindhya's side of story is heart warming.. pls do write abt Sree's side too.. y shouldn't Suman not share how Sourabh misbehaved with her?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yes Rakhi MV is feeling what Sree's condition is, what his deliberation is
@Ria why would Suman talk about it. She know it can destroy family relations and no lady will want that. How many of us have talked about eve teasing we have faced in childhood to our parents. When I look back not even once I had spoken neither my friends. We dealt with it our own way.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Yes Rakhi MV is feeling what Sree's condition is, what his deliberation is

@Ria why would Suman talk about it. She know it can destroy family relations and no lady will want that. How many of us have talked about eve teasing we have faced in childhood to our parents. When I look back not even once I had spoken neither my friends. We dealt with it our own way.


Shruthi I understand that relations are to be maintained but maintaining them at the risk of ur safety is 🤢 the relationship that would have broken up with her speaking is already kind of broken so her speaking would have at least made her more closer to the relations that matter. After all problems do bring families closer.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ria why should she tell MV. Sreedhar knows, MVs family knows. Mamu did punish Sourabh. So there are people out there who will put guard when they see Sourabh and Suman is around.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Ria why should she tell MV. Sreedhar knows, MVs family knows. Mamu did punish Sourabh. So there are people out there who will put guard when they see Sourabh and Suman is around.


I understand that she need not say. my surprise was because isn't it unsafe to expect Suman not to inform anyone about a pervert to her mil. shobha i expected to expect such thinking yet maheshwari to say that Suman not sharing anything with her as a virtue

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