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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06

amazing update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Ragini sacrificed her life for her love...😭😭...Raj realises her true feelings for him......Raina gets united...👏👏👏...Ali-Bani gets saved...👍🏼...Huda and Abhimanyu gets their punishment for their evil deeds...🥳...Ritu too dies......but Hats off to Ragini that how selflessly she loved Rajveer......loved it...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...


yup after realisation of her true love... she loved rajveer truely... thanks dear updating in a while
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Posted: 8 years ago


*** Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***
Part 34...

naina:- i love you...

rajveer:- i love you too...

dinner table...

after so long sabhi log sath dinner kar rahe the... aaj ishita ne rishabh naveen bani ke parents ali ke parents sabhi ko invite kia tha... kyuki itna sab hone ke baad sab pehli baar sath the... naina pooja bani shalini kitchen me thi aur baki sab khane ka intezaar kar rahe the... rajveer kamre se aata hai... aur jakar rishabh ke pair chuta hai... aur fir baith jata hai...

ali's father:- bhai saab... in chand dino me jo kuchh bhi hua bahut galat hua hai... hume to yeh tak pata nahi chala ki humare bachhe kidnap ho gaye the... mahaul itna jyada kharab ho chuka tha... par aaj hum chahte hai sari purani baaton ko bhool kar hum sab naye tarike se zindagi suru kare... iska sabse achha tarika yeh hai ki hum ali pooja aur aalekh bani ki shadi kara de...

dadi:- bilkul sahi kaha puttar... mere man me bhi yeh khayaal aaya hai... to viren kya kehta hai...

viren:- ma theek hai... to pandit ji ko bula kar inki shadi aur sagai ki dates nikalwa dete hai... aur (ali's father) bhai saab hum chahte hai ki ali aur pooja ki shadi dono tariko se ho... nikah aur phere dono ho...

ali's mother:- ha - ha jarur... (sabhi girls khana serve karti hai... aur sabhi khane lagte hai...)...

bani's father:- aalekh.. bani theek hai na...? ready ho...?

aalekh:- ji uncle... m ok with it...

viren:- veer naveen... main tum dono se sirf yeh kehna chahta hu ki jo kuchh ateet me hua... jo kuchh tum dono ke beech problems thi sab bhool kar ab aage badho... mujhe ab ateet ka koi bhi saya nahi chahiye... (tabhi ek awaaz aayi...)...

yudi;- aap sab mujhe bhool gaye...

shalini:- are yudi... hum aapko kaise bhool sakte hai...

yudi:- hi all... so kya baat ho rahi hai...

rishabh:- bas aalekh aur ali ki shadi ke bare me baat kar rahe the...

yudi:- great... special invitation to me,.,,,,

ali:- ofcrz doc...

yudi:- oh common ali... ab main is ghar ka hissa hun... kyun dadi... no doc...

ali:- ji jarur...

aalekh:- yudi woh... maine jo mangaya tha...

yudi:- oh ya... here it is,,,,, (passing an envelop...)...

dadi:- oye khote yeh kya hai...

aalekh:- honeymoon ke tickets...

all:- what...

ali:- aalekh bhai abhi se...

aalekh:- are oh yeh mere liye nahi hai... its for veer n naina...

rajveer:- kya pagal ho gaya hai... kya ?

naveen:- nahi rajveer... woh sahi keh raha hai... i know pichle ek sal me jo bhi hua sab galat tha... par ab main yeh chahta hu tum dono apni life jio... tumhare aur naina ke beech hazaro problems rahi hai... par you both need some time...

bani:- bilkul sahi...

viren:- true... so pack ur bags... kabke hai naveen...

naveen:- open hai... jab inka man ho... (bani naina ko elbow mar kar wink karti hai... on which naina blushed...)...

dadi:- hiee... sarmana band kar... aur ha ab mujhe finally par dadi bana dena... (naina tamatar ki tarah laal ho gayi thi... wahi rajveer ke gale me pani atak gaya...)...

rajveer:- woh... main aata hun... (wo apne kamre me chala gaya... all laughs at his reaction...)...

dadi:- hieee... yeh itna sharmata hai... mera sapna kab pura hoga... (naina kitchen me chali gayi...)...

ishita:- kya ma... aap bhi... sab bade baithe hai...

dadi:- oye badi hogi tu... main to bas ab apne par poto aur potiyo ke sath khelna chahti hu... (shalini laughs...)...

shalini:- control dadi... bechare mere bhai ko embarass karti rehti ho...

ishita:- bhai saab main kal pandit ji se muhurat nikalwa lungi...

after their dinner ali bani aur unke parents aur yudi chale jate hai...

naveen:- raj... wo... mujhe tumse kuchh baat karni hai... may i...

rajveer:- ya... ( dono rajveer naina ke room me jate hai...)...

naveen:- naina tu bhi aa... (naina nods aur teeno room me jate hai...)...

rajveer - naina's room...

rajveer:- ji...

naveen (hath jod kar);- bahut sari galtiyaan ki hai maine... bas ek mauka chahiye... humare rishton ko normal banana chahta hun... shalini ki manfi ka intezar to akhiri dum tak karunga... bas aaj shalini ke bhai aur apni behen ke pati ki manfi chahiye mujhe... ab boz sa lagta hai raj... itne kareeb ho kar bhi itne door... main... main bas... (rajveer held his hand)...

rajveer:- bhaiya... ( naveen n naina both have smile and looked at rajveer,... bcz it was the first time rajveer addressed naveen as bhaiya not by his name...)... agar mere dil me abhi bhi aapke liye koi nafarat ya bair hota to aaj naina mere sath nahi hoti... kyuki man me bair lekar main use sachhe dil se apna hi nahi pata... jhuth nahi bolunga... agar aaj meri di sahi nahi hui hoti.. to sayad mere dil me aapke liye jo nafarat thi wo bhi nahi jati... par ab mere dil me na aapke liye koi bair hai... na papa ke liye... kyuki dad aur papa ke beech jo bhi hua sabki jad abhimanyu aur ritu ke dad the... aur jahan tak galtiyon ka sawaal hai toh... maine kam galtiyaan nahi ki hai... agar aap sab mujhe manf kar sakte ho... to main kyun nahi... sabse bada gunehgaar main naina ka hun... usne mujhe manf kar dia... mujhe kuchh nahi chahiye... (naveen hugs him...)...

naveen:- thankyou raj... thanks...

rishabh:- rajveer... (all looks at the door jahan viren aur rishabh khade the... dono ander aate hai...)... maine tumhare sath bahut galat kia hai... mujhe bhi manfi milegi... maine apne ahenkaar me apne bete ki zindagi barbaad kar di... aur naina ki bhi karne chala tha... use tumse alag karke...

rajveer:- aap bade hai... manfi mat mangiye... aashirwaad dijiye... (rajveer unke pair chuta hai... n he hugs him...)...

rishabh:- ab se mere ek nahi do - do bete hai...

aalekh:- kya yaar meri to koi value hi nahi... chal beta aalekh... sab tujhe bhool gaye... (all looks at door... naveen n naina laughs)...

rajveer:- nautanki...

aalekh:- kya bola... (in his ears)... jyada bola na to abhi tera honeymoon cancel karwa dunga...

rajveer:- maine kaha kuchh bola...

viren:- are bahut ho gayi emotional batien...

rishabh:- ha ab hum chalte hai... (naina ke sir pe hath rakh kar...) khush reh... (naina hugs him...)...

next day ishita pandit ji ko bula kar bachho ki sagai ka muhurat nikalwati hai... aur 3 din baad hi inki sagai ka muhurat tha aur shadi 2 mahine baad... sab khush the... par ab rajveer naina apne second happy honeymoon ke liye... inki sagai ke baad jaayeinge... sabko yeh baat bata di gayi ki aalekh - baani aur ali - pooja ki sagai 3 baad hai... to sab log lag gaye taiyariyon me... sagai ki rasham shekhawat vila me hogi... sabhi ko kam saup diye gaye... aur dadi sabhi kam ki head hai...

rajveer naina' room...

rajveer office se ata hai,... aur naina uspe chilla rahi hai...

naina:- kaha tha na aapko jaldi aana... sabki shopping ho gayi hai siwaay humari kal inki sagai hai aur main yahan ahhh... aap na,,,,, bas office.. office office... meri to kisi,.,,,, (naina apne bad bad me dekhti hai ki rajveer use hi ek cute si smile ke sath dekh raha hai... wo apni kamar me hath rakh kar khadi ho jati hai...) what... jaiye... late ho raha hai...

rajveer:- u know what... u r behaving like a typical wife now a days...

naina:- ab yeh typical wife kya hota hai ha... ab biwi hu to waise hi bolungi na,,,,,,

rajveer:- nhhh... (rajveer naina ke kareeb jata hai... aur uski kamar se use hold karke apni ore pull karta hai...)... mujhe to tumme meri girlfrnd ko dekhna hai...

naina:- oh aur wo kaise...

rajveer:- woh aise ki... (naina closed her eyes...) ki...

naina:- ki...

rajveer:- ki...

naina:- hmmm... (rajveer naina ke ear ke pass jata hai... aur halke se kiss karta hai...)... ki...

rajveer:- wait macau me bataunga...

naina:- hmmm...

rajveer:- ab der nahi ho rahi naina...

naina:- ha... (naina opens her eyes... rajveer left her haste hue washroom me chala jata hai. naina apne sir me hath marti hai...)... main bhi na... kya ho jata hai... he always driving me crazy...

mall...

naina aur rajveer mall me the... naina bas ek shop se dusri shop ja rahi thi... rajveer irrirate ho raha tha bcz naina ko kuchh pasand jo nahi aa raha tha... rajveer ki shopping to 10 minute me ho gayi... but naina...

rajveer:- naina plz... ab yahan se kuchh bhi lo aur chalo...

naina:- kya raj kuchh achha hai hi nahi... aur time lagta hai...

rajveer:- naina dont test my patience ok... its been 4 hrs... tumhe kuchh pasand nahi aa raha hai... kuchh toh... (tabhi rajveer ki nazar ek statue pe gayi jisme bahut hi jyada khubsurat si red aur golden color ki heavy saree thi...) naina look at that... (naina looks at that direction...)...

naina:- wow...

rajveer:- perfect... its final tum wahi pehnogi... par...

naina:- par kya...

rajveer:- ek baar try karo na...

naina:- par kyun... its perfect...

rajveer:- plzz main dekhna chahta hu ki tum kaisi lagogi...

naina :-ok...

naina trial room me jati hai... aur change karke bahar aati hai... rajveer uski taraf dekhta hai... aur sab kuchh bhool jata hai... kyuki aaj uske saamne uska pyar uski patni uske pasand ke kapdo me khadi thi... n she is looking stunning in that saaree... naina rajveer ke pass aati hai... wo notice karti hai ki us shop ke sabhi log naina ko dekh rahe the...

naina;- raj... raj...

rajveer:- ha.. ha...

naina:- main kaisi lag rahi hun.. aur yeh sab mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe hai... main itani bekar lag rahi hu kya...

rajveer;- wo is liye mrs rajveer kyuki aap.. itani khubsurat lag rahi hai ki... kisi ki bhi niyat kharab ho jaaye... (naina blushed hard...)...

naina:- kuchh bhi ha... main change karke aati hun... (naina daud kar ander chali jati hai... rajveer agal bagal ke logon ko stair karta hai... sab apne kaam me lag jate hai... aur rajveer... jaldi se trial room me ghush jata hai... naina use dekh ke stunned reh jati hai... wo apni saree utarne hi wali thi ki ruk jati hai...),,,, aap...

rajveer naina ko peeche se hug kar leta hai... naina ke hath se uska pallu chhut jata hai... he starts kissing her on her neck... aaj pehli bar rajveer naina ke itane kareeb tha... she is feeling butterfies in her stomach...

rajveer (seductive tone):- naina... (rajveer was making patterns on her bare tummy... ki bahar se kuchh awaaz aai,,, naina ne apni aankh kholi aur rajveer ko push kia...)...

naina:- yeh aap... bahar jaiye... koi kya sochega...

rajveer:- jo sochna hai sochne do... apni biwi ke sath hu...

naina:- are toh aapko yeh trial room hi mila hai... jaiye...

rajveer:- kya yaar... sare mood ka bhaji pala kar dia...

naina:- raj plzz...

rajveer:- theek hai jata hun... waise help karun...

naina:- kisme...

rajveer:- change karne me... ( he winks...)...

naina:- raj just go... (aur use dhakke mar kar bahar nikal deti hai... rajveer agal bagal dekhta hai... and he thanked god... as use koi dekh nahi raha tha... naina change karke apne suit me bahar aati hai...) chale... ab jwellery...

rajveer:- ha chalo...

dono jwellery dept me jate hai... aur naina kuchh matching jwellery kharidti hai... rajveer yahan wahan tahal raha tha... ki uski nazar ek platinum ke elegent se set pe gayi... jo bhari nahi tha... but itna sunder tha ki use ek pal me pasand aa gaya... wo naina ki taraf dekhta hai... aur wo set pack karwa leta hai... aur apni pocket me rakh leta hai... naina aati hai... dono payment karke ghar chale jate hai... ghar aane par,,,, sab kaam me full busy sagai ka muhurat dopahar ek baje ka tha... kaam itna tha ki sab full on busy ho gaye...

aalekh - bani & ali - pooja's engagement day...

bas kuchh der me inki sagai thi... sab ready the... rajveer naina apne kamre me ready ho rahe the... naina wahsroom se half ready hokar bahar aati hai... aur dekhti hai ki rajveer apne baal bana raha tha... rajveer ne black armaani pehna tha... he is looking danm handsome...
naina lowers her gaze.. as she rushed to the bed..settling down..she slipped on her heels..as she kept her eyes on the clock..and then picked up her bangles that were scattered on the bed..placing them on her arms..she took her earrings and inserted them in her ears..with a matching necklace to go with it..

naina: main taiyaar ho gayi hoon ab chale isse pehle ma gusaa ho jaye...

He turns around to look at her..for a moment he just froze in the moment..he had to admit she looked beautiful..he couldn't move his gaze...

rajveer: haan..woh...chalo..main taiyaar hoon...tumhara intezaar kar raha tha... waise naina... mera man nahi kar raha neeche jaane ka...

naina:- kyun... ?

rajveer:- woh... woh tum... nahi kuchh nahi chalo... late ho rahe hai...(He lowers his gaze and looks away as he waits for her..)

naina: haa wahi to main keh rahi thi...ghar ki party me late jana achcha nahi...

She looks at him and then gets up from the bed..as she stands on her feet just glancing in the mirror for the last time..and then moves towards rajveer taking a step..as she moved forward she tripped over her saree..but quickly gathered herself together and prevented herself from falling... woh gir hi jati but she managed... jaise hi usne agla step lia... rajveer smile ke sath use dekh raha hai... as she was struggling... use mehsoos hua ki uski saree uski heel me stuck ho gayi thi...she sighed as she looked at it and then held onto her saree..gathering it in her palm..when she tried to bend over to take it out...she suddenly stopped realising her bangles had got stuck between her saree..and were tangled...this couldn't be happening she thought..the situation was getting worse..she was stuck..and was half bent half straight..she tried moving up when her earrings got stuck in her pallu..she closed her eyes in frustration..trying not to scream out.. aur rajveer ki hasi nikal gayi... naina gusse se rajveer ko dekhti hai... he stoped... and then he looked at her as he walked up towards her...whilst she was thinking of what do..when she gently turned her head and saw him stood there..hurting her ear in the process as she felt a pull..she winced in slight pain..

naina: ouch..

rajveer looked at her and then moved his hand forward towards her ear..she felt his touch and shivered slightly..as she opened her eyes looking straight into his eyes she just held her gaze..continuing to look into his eyes..as he kept his eyes on her..he gently untangled her earring from her pallu..straightening it beside her ear as she felt the back of his fingers lightly touch the back of her ear..she closed her eyes momentarily... slowly opening her eyes again..when she felt his hand on her arm..he moved a little closer to her as he started to untangle her bangles from her saree..gently pulling the material of her saree out from it...he then released her arm as he took her hand into his as he knelt down... he placed her hand on his shoulder for support as he slowly lifted her saree up a little from the bottom... concentrating on what he was doing..when he looked up at her...

rajveer: apna pair thoda upar karo

naina: hmm...kya kaha aapne...

rajveer:- naina pair..thoda sa upar karo

naina: hmm..kar rahi hoon...

She tightens her hold on his shoulder a little..as she lifted her foot..ballencing on one foot..whilst using his shoulder as support..whilst he gently took out the saree from below her heel...and then gently placed his hand on her leg.. then he make the plates gently... and purposly touched her tummy...making her gasp... then he looked at her... she has her eyes closed... he kissed her on her tummy... she pressed her hands on his soldour...she held her breath whilst he used her leg as a support to lift himself up...as he stood infront of her...her hand still holding onto his shoulder he softly spoke...

rajveer:- naina... (naina opens her eyes...)... theek ho gayi...

naina:- kya...

rajveer:- tumhari saree... chale... (rajveer smile ke sath neeche chala jata hai... naina bas usi direction me dekh rahi thi... thodi der baad naina neeche aati hai... rajveer ki nazar naina pe thi,... aur naina use itani sharam aa rahi thi ki wo rajveer ki taraf dekh bhi nahi rahi thi... thodi der bar ali - pooja aur aalekh - bani ek dusre ko anghuthi pehnate hai... aur inki sagai ho jati hai...

dadi:- oye khoteyo chalo inni sukhi - sukhi sagai nahi hogi is ghar me,,,,, oye naina puttar teri nand di sagai hai... kuchh dhamaal kar... veer... naveen... shalu...

aalekh:- ha ha... chalo yaar...

dadi:- oye sirf yeh sab ke sab...

bani's mother:-
oh mehendi rang laai... aj laadi teri sagai...
mehendi rang laai... aj laadi teri sagai...

ali's mother:-
oh mehendi rang laai... aj laadi teri sagai...
mehendi rang laai... aj laadi teri sagai...

ishita:-
tere hanthaan pe sajde ne.. rang birange boote...
tere hanthaan pe sajde ne.. rang birange boote...

dadi:-
mangdi ha... assi duaayein... rang kabhi na chhoote...
mangdi ha... assi duaayein... rang kabhi na chhoote...

shalini:-
oh mehendi rang laai... aj laadi teri sagai...
mehendi rang laai... aj laadi teri sagai...

yudi aata hai... aur rajveer ke kaan me kuchh kehta hai... rajveer yudi ko aankh mar kar... center me jata hai... and he starts dance...

rajveer:-
oye kudiye... oye kudiye... tere tan se fisal na jaaye...
oye kudiye... oye kudiye... tere tan se fisal na jaaye...
tera laal dupptta mal- mal kaa...
tera laal dupptta mal- mal kaa...

(rajveer naina ki ore ishara karke dance kar raha tha... aur shalini naina ko uske pass push kar deti hai... rajveer naina ka pallu pakad kar dance karta hai...)

naina:-
oye mundeya... oye mundeya... seene se nikal na jaaye...
oye mundeya... oye mundeya... seene se nikal na jaaye...
armaan tere dil... paagal kaa...
armaan tere dil... paagal kaa...

rajveer:-
aashique majnu awaara tha...
sabki nazaro ka mara tha...
kya chain se udta firta tha...
kitna khush haal kanwaara tha...
(rajveer naina ko wink karke aalekh ke pass chala jata hai... jo wahi bani ke sath khada tha...)

rajveer:-
oye goriye... oye goriye... tune udte panchhi ko...
oye goriye... oye goriye... tune udte panchhi ko...
dil ke pinjre me band kiya...
dil ke pinjre me band kiya...
dil ke pinjre me band kiya...
dil ke pinjre me band kiya...
(rajveer bani aur aalekh ko tease karta hai... aur fir ali aur pooja ke pass jakar dance kar raha tha...)

naina:-
aa hose me aa nadaan zara...
tu maan mera ehsaan zara...
chal dekh meri in aankhon mein...
meri chaahat ko pehchaan zara...
(naina center me dance kar rahi thi... aur rajveer ko tease karti hai...)

naina, pooja, bani:-
oye pagle... oye pagle... kaise tujhko samjhaaun...
oye pagle... oye pagle... kaise tujhko samjhaaun...
kyun maine ise pasand kia...
kyun maine ise pasand kia...
kyun maine ise pasand kia...
kyun maine ise pasand kia...
(fir jakar bani aur pooja ko kheech kar laati aur teeno dance kar rahe the...)

rajveer :-
mera bhai sheedha sada hai...
yeh ladki chail chabeeli hai...
hai rang roop ki theek - thaak...
bheje se thodi dheeli hai...
(rajveer aalekh ke sath bani ke saamne aata hai... aur ga raha tha...)

rajveer n naveen:-
oye mere yaar jamegi kaise...
mere yaar jamegi kaise...
oye mere yaar jamegi kaise...
mere yaar jamegi kaise...
gilli dande ki jodi hai...
gilli dande ki jodi hai...
gilli dande ki jodi hai...
gilli dande ki jodi hai...
(rajveer naveen ko kheech kar lata hai... aur dono dance kar rahe the... on thier words bani ka muh ban jata hai... aur aalekh hasne lagta hai... but bani ko dekh chup ho jata hai...)

bani:-
mano mera kehna logon...
meri sunderta se jalta hai...
sach kehti hun... mujhko to yeh...
bhai ka chamcha lagta hai...
(bani rajveer ke pass aati hai... aur uske pair pe laat mar kar aalekh ki ore ishara karke dance karne lagti hai...)

naina:-
oye chhaliye... oye chhaliye... zara dekhle tu aayina...
oye chhaliye... oye chhaliye... zara dekhle tu aayina...
tere mann me koi chori hai...
tere mann me koi chori hai...
tere mann me koi chori hai...
tere mann me koi chori hai...
(naina bani ka sath deti hai... aur rajveer ko dekh kar dance kar rahi thi...)

ali:-
chhono na yun takraar karo...
khushiyon ki ghadi hai pyaar karo...
ek duje se uljhoge...
mere saamne tum iqraar karo...
(ali pooja ka hath pakad kar beech me lata hai... aur sabke sath gane lagta hai...)

aalekh:-
oye heeriye... oye heeriye...
yeh toh bhola bhala hai...
mat maan bura is raanjhe ka...
mat maan bura is raanjhe ka...
mat maan bura is raanjhe ka...
mat maan bura is raanjhe ka...

rajveer:-
oye kudiye... oye kudiye...
seene se nikal na jaaye...
armaan mere dil paagal ka...
armaan mere dil paagal ka...
tera laal dupptta mal- mal kaa...
tera laal dupptta mal- mal kaa...
tera laal dupptta mal- mal kaa...
tera laal dupptta mal- mal kaa...

sabhi loge bahut dance karte hai... aur hasi khushi se pura function ho raha tha... ishita ek jagah khadi apne bachho ko dekh rahi thi... naina uske pass jati hai...

naina:- ma.. kya hua... ap aise akele kyun khadi hai... (ishita naina ka hath apne hath me leti hun...)...

ishita( with tears):- naina thankyou... aaj mujhe mere veer aur shalu purane veer aur shalu dikh rahe hai... veer hasna bhool gaya tha... jeena bhul gaya tha... par aaj mujhe aisa lag raha hai jaise mere bachhe mujhe wapas mil gaye... dekh unhe... sab teri wajah se...

naina:- nahi ma yeh toh hona hi tha... burai chahe kitani bhi takatwar kyun na ho... ek din jeet sirf sachhai ki hoti hai... hai na...? ( ishita nods in yes... n both hugs...)

sabhi log thak chuke the... aur sagai ki masti me choor the... to sab apne ghar chale gaye... aur apne kamre me... par sayad is sagai ke chakkar me kisi ko yaad nahi raha ki kal kya hai... par do aise loge jinki life ka sabse important din hai kal wo hai rajveer naina... kyuki kal inki shadi ko ek sal ho jayega... inki first wedding anniversary... sab kam nipta kar naina apne room me jati hai... to andhera hai...

naina:- raj... raj... itna andhera kyun... (tabhi lights on hoti hai... aur naina hairan reh jati hai... kyuki rajveer ne kamre ko jannat ki tarah decorate kar lia tha... sabhi jagah flower cented candles and all... naina ko bahut kuchh samjh bhi aa raha tha... jis kaaran she was blushing...

rajveer was standing besides the door... he locked it... and goes behind her... n huged her very tighlty... she closed her eyes and placed her hands on his above her tummy... she turned and rests her head on his shoulder as he tightened his hold on her...

naina: Raj...this is beautiful...bahot hi khubsurat hai...mere khawab se kayi jyada,,,

Rajveer looks at her and gently walks upto the bed..placing her on the bed as he sits down infront of her...)

Rajveer: tum bhi tho mere khwabon se kahin zyada khoobsoorat ho...yakeen nahin horaha ke is duniya ki sabse zyada khoobsoorat ladki ab meri ho chuki hai...

naina: sabse jyada khubsurat ka to muje pata nahi...lekin aapki ho chuki hoon humesha se...

Rajveer: maine apni zindagi mein tumse zyada haseen na kissi ko dekha hai...aur na hi kabhi dekhunga..is baat ka mujhe poora yakeen hai...kyunki meri naina ki khoobsoorati ka koi muqabla kar hi nahin sakta...jaanti ho...aaj jab maine tumhe taiyaar hone ke baad dekha na... to ek pal ke liye meri saansein tham gayi thi...waise tho tum humesha hi khoobsoorat lagti ho par aaj tum humesha se kahin zyada khoobsoorat lag rahi ho...itna ke agar mein lafzon mein kehna chahun tho woh kam par jaaenge..

naina: to apni aankhoin se hi bata dijiye...(Rajveer looks at her intently with his eyes showing pure love for her...)...

Rajveer: ek baar agar tum meri aankhon me dekhogi to tumhe pata chal jayega ke meri nazar me tum kitni khoobsoorat ho.. (naina looks in his eyes then goes forward hugging him...He holds her tightly in his arms as he gently runs his hands along her back...)...

Rajveer: i love you naina...

naina: I love you too Raj... I love you so much... (He tightens his hold on her as he holds her close to himself...)...

Rajveer: naina...kya main tumse kuch maang sakta hoon?

naina: hmm..kahiye...

Rajveer:- aaj mujhe meri naina chahiye... kya tum meri banogi...? kya izazat hai mujhe...?

naina( placed her hand on his cheek):- yeh naina to humesha se sirf aapki thi... sirf aapki hai... aur sirf aapki rahegi... aapka mujhpe haq hai... aapko meri izazat ki zarurat nahi hai... (Rajveer moves back as he looks at her with love overflowing from his eyes... )

Rajveer: aaj main tumhe itna pyar dunga ke tum is pal ko zindagi bhar nahin bhool paaogi...

Meri... adhuri kahaani... lo daastaa ban gayii...
ohhh... tune chhuaa.. aaj aise...
main kya se kya ban gayi...
(He lets go of her face and gently moves his hand towards her head...gently taking off her pallu and dropping it besides her...she closes her eyes as he moves towards her while taking off her earings one by one...whilst kissing the tip of her ears...)...

sahme hue... sapne mere...
haule - haule... angdaaiyaan le rahe...
(he moves back and gently holds her hand in his...kisses her palm and gently starts taking out her bangles one by one whilst staring at her...he moves back...gently lifting her saree a little from the bottom... he takes off the anklets... and kissed her on her feet... she closed her eyes...)

thahre hue... lamhe mere...
nayi - nayi.. gehraiyaan le rahe...
zindagi ne... pehni hai muskaan...karne lagi hai...
itna karam... kyun na jaane...
karwat lene lage hai... armaan, fir bhi...
hai aankh num... kyun na jaane...
ooo... saiyyann...
(he lifts his head and looks at her and sees that her eyes are closed so he holds her face in his palms placing his lips on her forehead...his lips run down to her nose as he gently kisses the tip of her nose...then gently lifts her face a little while placing his lips on top of hers... naina closes her eyes even more tight then before while running her hands from his shoulders to his back ...she pulled him on top of her as she lies down on the bed...)

odhu teri kaya... solah singaar... main saza lun...
sangam ki yeh raina... ispe tyohar main mana lun...
khusboo teri chhoo ke... kasturi ho jaaun...
kitani feeki thi main... sinduri ho jaaun...
(As he fell on top of her Rajveer broke their kiss for a moment so that they can catch their breath...then places his lips on her's once more kissing her passionately as his hands caress her arms...She moves her arms from his hold and wraps them around his neck with her fingers playing with his hair...naina's response to Rajveer's kiss was like they were kissing for the first time ever...As her hands play with his hair Rajveer deepens the kiss and his hands creep to her back touching the knots of her blouse...)

sur se zara behaki hui... meri duniyaan thi badi besuri...
sur me tere... dhalne lagi...bani re... piyaa main baansurii...
zindagi ne... pehni hai muskaan...karne lagi hai...
itna karam... kyun na jaane...
karwat lene lage hai... armaan, fir bhi...
hai aankh num... kyun na jaane...
.(he holds onto the end of her bottom string as he opens it...they break their kiss and Rajveer rests his head between her neck and shoulder...there he can feel her uneven breathing as his breath kisses her neck...he bends forward kissing her neck passionately whilst opening the strings of her blouse...she closed her eyes feeling his love shower all over her today...he moves her sleeve from her shoulder while trailing the new path with his kisses...she opens her eyes and looks at him then places her lips on his neck kissing him...Rajveer moves back looking at her...)

ooo... saiyyann...

Rajveer: i love you jaan...i love you so much...

naina: I love you too...

mere aasnmaa se... jo humesha...
gumsuda the...chaand taare...
tune gardisho ki... lay badal di...
laut aaye... aaj saare...
(her hands went to undone his kurta... then his hand is enclosed with hers as she tightens her hold on his hand...then she releases her hand from his trying to find the way to the night stand...she feels the switch of the night lamp and turns it off...That night belonged to the two lovers, a night that united them forever...two souls became one...)
...
...
ooo... saiyyann...
(n bcz of the air coming from window candles blown off...)

next day morning...

End of Part 34
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yeah i had got the PM i checked carefully ... sorry by the way nice update... do PM when u update next... .. Hey one request can u pleasr write a story on Kaya after ur exams ..please...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Raj and Naina Conversation was so Cute.😳
The Dinner part was so Nice.😊
Raj and Naian Conversation with Viren was so Nice.😊
Raj and Naina Love Moments were so Romantic.😳
Raj and Naina became together,it was so Nice.😳
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
fab update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Rajveer forgives Naveen......Alekh-Bani and Ali-Pooja gets engaged...🥳...Rajveer gets naughty with Naina...😉😛...Rajveer-Naina finally becomes one...👏👏👏...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome ud
Raina romance was so ... 😳
Cont.soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

amazing update👏👏


Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi
The up is really good
So finally all r happy
Raina became one
Waiting for the honeymoon trip
Please cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
Woww!!! Amazing !!! Update fast fast pls!!! Honeymoon 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thnkew for pm...dear..nd apne villains ki chhutti kr di to mujhe laga story is going to end.But my goodluck,I can read few more parts. 👏 👏
Well..starting line was too good.kafi romantic starting huyi...then dance...and My fav. Part...RaiNa's romance. 😳 😳
I like it.
I m waiting for next some romantic updates..
Thnkew for such a nice update.

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