IPKKND SS:Ruthless on Request C6 p47 3rd Jan! 2016 new - Page 21

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks guys, have very merry Christmas and i'll be back with an update as soon as possible. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
I wouldn't call that brilliant - the way Arnav handled HP though I found it hilarious just as Khushi did. The HP matter did highlight the love, and respect Arnav has for Khushi, and I for one am in total admiration of this Arnav.
I just love how Arnav notices things about Khushi. I like how he sees her, and senses that something is not quite right with her. And the care and tenderness he showed in addressing that was incredibly hot as well as sexplosive 😉!!

Loved it and it was worth waiting 👏


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Posted: 8 years ago
Ha ha ha want to replace HP with coffee machine
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wow..you captured the essence of Khushi's ASR very well..intimacy btw the couple portrayed beautifully..yet you showed the ruthless ASR and his crazy Khushi very well..A mother and sister in khushi too done a good job..Arnav's care and concern for Payal..I really appropriate it.He is the best husband .. 😊
his way of dealing with hp is superb..I feel like whistling in that scene ..khushi in bathroom...water sound..ha..ha..and the following moments show the passionate and gentle love of his for his wife..they both are comfortable in sharing each one views..I loved it. .

Merry Christmas dear friends
Edited by gprs - 8 years ago
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about to post a quick update..
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just a quick update ..


Chapter 5

Following his mornings routine Arnav returns from his morning jog like one would. As he enters the house he passes his water bottle to Hp who trades it for the morning paper like every weekday morning but of course Hp is a little quiet today after the bashing his boss had given him yesterday.

That wasn't the only thing Arnav noticed, he also saw that Aakash and Payal were at the breakfast table together and that too looking happy together. He smiled at Payal who caught sight of him and headed off towards the stairs.

Just a second or so later did he hear Payal call out to him and he turned around.

She explained that Hp had mixed up the newspapers and this the one that he wanted. That obviously didn't surprise Arnav it was Hp after all. He thanked Payal but before walking away he did think to ask her something.

"Khush?" he said knowing exactly what he was questioning her on she smiled nodding a ye .

"Ji thank you Arnavji "she said whole heartedly because everything was much better now, Arnav pleased to hear so struck the newspaper playfully on Payals head and walked of with a smile.

Not only did Payal appreciate her brother in laws support but Khushi who was taking one of her husbands dry cleaned suits up to his room also witnessed the goings on and was ever so happy. Even overwhelmed.

She'd often seen Payal very unhappy and naturally it upset her too but today seeing her smile and get on with Akaash so well felt like a weight of her shoulders. She was happy and there was one person behind all of that her husband.

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As Arnav took a call at the poolside after coming up to the bedroom he could see Khushi approach she put a towel around his neck and insisted he sit down on the deckchair beside the pool. He gave her a confused look but continued his conversation with Aman. She later returned with his washbag and he watched her take out his shaving materials. What an earth was she doing he thought. His crazy little wife was being crazy he thought and didn't fuss too much, he just lay back that little as the chair allowed for and let her apply the shaving cream to his face. When the conversation was finally over could he ask her what was going on.

"Khushi love I'm getting late for work .."

"hmm tabhi toh - And that's why I'm helping you .."

"Ok what's going on ..? he says suspiciously

"Khushi???

"Kyun ham apna pyaar nahin jata sakte kya .." she stresses with her big brown eyes now clearing away the left over shaving cream from his face.

"Aap ne joh payal jiji ke liyey jo kiya .. woh .." (What you did for Payal,.. )

"Thank you.. you didn't have to .." he watched her look overwhelmed her eyes filled with joy."I'm so happy Arnavji.. I really am.."

he was happy to see her happy but he was forgetting that she meant the world to him and he'd do anything to see her pleased.

"Hmm is that all, I could have thought of a few alternative ways for you to thank me. " he said teasingly.

Tabhi toh .. - I go there first Mr Raizada!. She said with a smug face. As much as he was enjoying this he had a day ahead of him. He kissed her forehead with a smile and began to make his leave to head for the shower.

"I'm going to have to go jaan ..i'll back in time for this evenings dinner"

Of course they were to have dinner as a family this evening and included dadi too which had slipped Khushi's mind completely.

...

Khushi felt uncomfortable like she was being judged every single minute of the day since Dadi had arrived. On everything and today she had already pointed out so many things. From the way Khushi was dressed , to the words she used or to how she behaved and yes she had tried so hard to make an effort to please his grandmother today.

It was a tough day but in no time at all was it dinner time and to set eyes on Arnav was one thing that would make her happy and it did. As soon as she saw him walk through the door did she smile. He was just in time for dinner and everyone else was at the table too.

You look beautiful he complemented her because it wasn't often that she dressed up in her saari this way. Just occasionally, Thank you. She said but Arnav took note of how his wife's smile seemed half hearted and he soon found out why. Dadi seemed to have the most horrible attitude to Khushi. He knew they had differences but this was beyond acceptable. Everything dadi said and did seemed to be a dig at Khushi.

Arnav observed as dadi rejected a dish after hearing Khushi had made it and despite that Khushi kept quite. Not even sitting at the table but serving the family in accordance to please dadi.

Although Khushi prayed that Arnav would overlook It, it wasn't so.

"Akaash book dadi's train back will you.. she'll leave tomorrow morning." That was music to everyones ears they just wouldn't confess it that was all.

Dadi did not take it lightly either.

"Kyun Arnav ham apne parivar ke saath vakt bhi nahin bita sakte.." (Why can I not spend a little time with my family. )

He didn't raise his voice because the weight of his words was enough.

"Bilkul reh sakti hai but when you learn how to treat people well.. Akaash tickets!" he said whilst Khushi was lost for words infact she could see Dadi's glare upon her and rather have not been present in that moment. She walked off into the kitchen to take in all that had just occurred.

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"Khushi.. What an earth is wrong with you!" he found her in the kitchen later with her back turned to him at the sink. He didn't like it when people turned their back to him whilst he was speaking so he turned her around himself. Threw away the towel and made her listen.

"Dadi gives you a hard time and you just take it!.

That isn't my wife alright that's not what I taught you.. I said you would have to stand up for your self in this family Khushi.!"

She was just quiet for a second and unusually quiet because when they argued she shouted equally as much as he did she always stood her ground with him then why not dadi.!

"I don't feel like I'm good enough .." she said softly.

"What ..?" he asked her confused what was that supposed to mean.

"Dadi ..she makes me feel as if I am not good enough for you for this family".

WHAT RUBBISH..! he snapped but then took note of khushi's eyes that carried insecurity.

They fell silent for a moment Arnav switched off the running tap and picked up the kitchen towel. He understood more than she realized.

"I used to feel that way ..my father used to make me feel that way.." he said to which Khushi lifted her eyes up to him "but you I SWEAR TO GOD YOU EVER PUT UP WITH SHIT LIKE THAT AGAIN I'll ..- and he lost his words at the sight of Khushi looking up at him with those eyes of hers.

"Just come here alright.. " he said in a softer tone to which Khushi stepped closer towards him and put her arms around him whilst he comforted her.


...Next...

Now that Arnav had done asked she had asked of him he'd probably go back to being the teddy bear he was before she thought. Aarav had learnt his lesson, Hp had his eye on the post in case Arnav actually was going to replace him with a coffee machine, Payal and akaash were fine and dadi was gone with a one way ticket it seemed but then all of a sudden it hit her that meant she was next!

...

Anav looks for his blue tie and fails to find it getting frustrated he decides to go for the red one but that too is missing and the green one!

Later on as he takes a seat at the sofa in raizada lounge he finds one of his ties behind the sofa. As he gets a drink in the kitchen he finds one of his ties sitting on the kitchen table, and even one around Laxmi ji's neck who crosses his path.

Raising an eyebrow..arnav mutters under his breath at the absurd nature of what he was seeing.

Edited by jagrutid - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Khushi is funny😛What is she up to now
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I love this Arnav..he gave it back to dadi..being elder is not the right to taunt others..as he said she has to stand for herself..he is the perfect man for his family...precap ha..ha..her crazy mind is definitely upto something
Edited by gprs - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Interesting teaser
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update so next is khushi 😆

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