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Posted: 8 years ago
Well yes was also happy for manny and was also sad for her many times when she was cursing her Faye and so called men in her life
But now I can't understand that is her today's behaviour is the result of her past or is reflecting why her past was like that
I mean it can be the case where she might be having trust issues in her relationships also regarding money and all
You never know...
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Posted: 8 years ago
The H Hermit

"I dont get it Manny" he said in his quiet understated way

"Chal chhod dimpal" she insisted
"If u say so" he nodded agreeably
Manya's murky thoughts hinted at her inability to find peace in her relationships, it nagged him, he wanted to talk about it but wont bring it up until she did, he decided
He picked his daughter up and they wandered back into the house.

Ranjan took her from his arms
Nothing was said on the topic, as Nandu went with them too.

Akka refused to send Shravu after she learned Manya was going

She was still trying to be comfy with Manya

The spontaneous warmth was hard to cultivate, however oxymoron-ish that sounded
II's planned visit to Munirka was to in some way repair the Amma-Akka bridge. It wasnt hanging loose because of her doing though
Akka and Amma had been in a rocky phase since Navaratri and II's secret was let out.
Akka had expressed righteous white hot indignation at even the very idea that II and R&B would "plan" their family based on her "Advice"

Amma ended up preaching Akka about how "Your family situation is different from Ishita's and will always be"

A lot was said about how much help II has around the house and how it would be easy breezy for her to have a second one.
and stressing about the Iyer Punjabi differences, Akka took it all to mean "You are not rich II is rich"


Amma couldnt stumble back fast enough and make amends. Akka was hurt

Enough to tell her MIL what Amma had implied and her MIL had called Amma in a dignified way and told her

"Rendu kozhandelayaum pririchu paakadengo" (dont discriminate between the two)

That was hugely hurtful to Amma

She told Appa.

Appa with his soft corner for Akka criticized Amma for unnecessarily celebrating II's wealth and how
II didnt have anything to do with the Bhalla wealth and how easy it must be those "Businessmen Punjabis to make money", and how II shouldnt get "credit" for marrying into wealth
And how R&B is an absentee father so even though II may have "help" Akka has the love and affection of family.
Amma was left glowering on the dining table, simmering in her frustrated juices of how her plan to rearrange the objects in her daughters' lives had gone all wrong.

Appa had left the wood door open as he admonished Amma in the Rohini living room and II had showed up after work JLT

And had heard Appa saying that as she climbed up the last flight of stairs (accidentally getting off with a person on the lower floors)

Appa had been so upset about Akka's feelings being hurt, he had just taken his car keys and headed to Munirka wearing his veshti...

In order to protect one daughter Appa had inadvertently hurt the other one.
The exact opposite of what Amma had done two days ago with Vandita.
Amma and Appa could deliver messages that was both scathing and caring at the same time.
Thats what parents do...
Neither had meant to throw shade at the other child

As they say, families that try to blow each other up are closer than families that say they love each other all the time


II hadnt eaten or drank anything, just excusing herself quickly heading back to MM.

She had returned home cuddled her daughter handed her back to Ranjan and walked up... and over to the office and just given him a random hug

"Long day?" he asked gathering her, her legs slung over one arm

"No... yenn I cat give u a hug?" she asked

"I usualy like for it to be followed by a real meal" he nuzzled her neck his tongue stroking

"And I thought I would be a dessert" she sulked... expressing disappointment at the fact that he equated sex with her to dal roti

He let his hand wander under her shirt... "Does a turkey sandwich work?" he asked bending down and kissing her noisily, on her shirt pocket.

He looked up to see, he found tears.

"what happened"

"Ya sure" she sniffled "U are just waiting for me" "haan" she groaned.

"II" he was being patient and coaxing and so absolutely caring and sexy
Her body heat bloomed under his caress, her mind yearning to offload

AYYYO

"U are contractually obligated to never EVER use it against me!! Seriya?" she spoke hoarsely between whimpering


"I do" he whispered kissing her cheek.

He wondered what caused his wife to be so hurt

She was constantly seeking affirmation and approval of others, the complete opposite of him

"Lets just make love" she said changing her mind

He threw his head back and laughed

She reached and rubbed his neck and jaw with her fingers, leaned forward and kissed that neck with a studied familiarity, groaning and settling back in his arms

"I think Amma and Appa both hate Vanduka and I sometimes" she said choking up

He sighed and exhaled

His wife was a quivering mass of need and unadulterated emotion

"Parents sometimes dont intend to, but end up hurting us". "Just listen to em" he said quietly, followed by another sentence or two

A genius display of compassion and honesty..

"Handsome hermit!!!" she whispered

"More like horny hermit" he rubbed her tush between his legs, holding her by her waist... back and forth... back and forth, stroking himself

He fingered her lips and bend down

When he lifted his head up, they were both clawing for oxygen

"Whatever I am on right now is causing me to confide in you" she said softly

"Ofcourse" he nodded approving

"U think being married to me is difficult?" she asked quietly

He looked at her intensely

"Why would you ask that?" he asked

"Nothing is simple no?" she asked

"Its not... and it shouldnt be" he said hugging her tight


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"Nothing is simple no?" she asked

"Its not... and it shouldnt be" he said hugging her tight

Beautiful.



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Posted: 8 years ago
These two are just so good together
The best
They are like medicines for each others wounds and scars which heal the other to the core
Simply beautiful Nisha
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Posted: 8 years ago
"Its not... and it shouldnt be" he said hugging her tight
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Posted: 8 years ago
Too good, Nisha any update on II songs down south. Her financial management has it improved? Is she still the reckless money spender or she has become wiser in managing her money. Mihir has been missing from scene too. Too long list but can't wait to ask e.
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Posted: 8 years ago
II is really like a child - if she is fighting with her parents, she is super nice to RB but if she gets a lot of bhav at Rohini things are going good work wise, she becomes cocky and gives RB a hard time.
well, it certainly is nice to see her being nice to her husband for once. and RB WOW, hes at his most compassionate, caring, sexy and talkative best . Wonder when another bomb will phato!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Pathology of Prosperity

After the golf game the Bhalla siblings had congregated on the terrace. News media had moved on to the next big scandal. An occasional news truck cruised outside hoping for a tid bit.
Ranjan sat in a corner, letting Nivi eat grapes out of his palm, she tried to stuff more than two at a time, fearing Ranjan would eat them

He laughed, his old body shaking in amusement at the child's fear
Mahavir always chopped those giant fruits into threes, but yet she was fearful.

"Sambhalke gudiya" "Naa mere raja" "na puttar" he scolded her every now and then

She danced and sat on the rug, she jumped up on his lap "Aaadooo?" aadooo?" she cooed to him

"Haanjee, aadooo" he smiled joyously

His kids sat on the far right, on one of the many sets of rattan sofas. The glass coffee tables glimmered under the tiki torch flames

The gas dome like fireplace surrounded by a steel cage of sorts protecting Nivi.

"Are u settling out of court?" Tan enquired

"Dont know" R&B muttered

"Tan" Sam signaled

"Yaar poochh raha hoon" Tan was irritated

"Sam, its fine. I am not made of jello" R&B chuckled

"How many layers there are?" Sam asked

"Ab tu kyon uska sar kha rahi hai?" Tan scolded

"I dont under the process or structure of financing" Sam said

"U shudnt have to worry about it unless u are willing to help Tan full time" R&B chuckled

"Dushman ho mere" Sam scolded

"Daddd aidar aa jao" Manny yelled

"Naa betaji, yeh yaha masttt" Ranjan gathered her and hugged Nivi


"Tha tha tha tha tha" (give give give) Nivi screamed at Manny

"U have to come here. Bua wont get up" Manny laughed at the fat toddler

Nivi looked at Ranjan's face "aaadooo?"

"Na gudiya bua beer pee rahi hai" Ranjan shook his head

Nivi imitated and they both got a good laugh out of it for a good 20 minutes

"Sun... gudiya kithey?" he hollered to his son

"Vandita's" he said

"Is waqt?" he asked

R&b nodded

"think about it. He cud use you. You could use some geting out of the house" R&B reminded

Tan's face fell

His parents were still here. Unwilling to get along. Unwilling to go back to the US

"I havent worked... EVER" Sam muttered

"Start going to Spectrum na?" Manny urged

"Aur TUUU?" "Shaadi hai teen mahiney mein" Sam teased

"I dont have to be employed. I am marrying a fauji" Manny blushed

"Look at her... puppy love"

Tan gently kicked her toes

"Jeej.. does she ever blush for u?" Manny asked

"Only in bed beta" Tan winked

"TANNN" sam shouted

"TMI" "Time out" R&B gesticulated

"Baat sun saale" Tan stopped R&B as he atempted to get up

"Umm?" he paused

"OK Jeej does she blush EVERY nite?" Manny laughed hysterically

"Abhi 4 mahiney se weekly, waise mostly every nite" Tan spilled the beans (his parents were the cause of the slow down)

"OK Ive had it" R&B gently knocked Manya's head with his bottle

Pulling his phone out of his pocket and texting II

"Hey"

"Enna venum? u cant be missing ME?" she goaded

"I think Nivi and her Dadu miss you" he texted

"Tell them I might stay the night here" she texted

"Her Dad says you are in trouble" he texted

"Tell her Dad "I cause" trouble I am never IN trouble" II responded

He chuckled wandering over to the fiberglass rail and leaning

Facing inward and texting, his feet crossed at the ankle

"Her Dad will then go off to play poker"

"You WOULDNT" she was furious

"See you in 10"

"rakshasaney!!!" she cursed

He smiled

As Manny approached

"Does she talk to this cousin of hers?" she asked

"Who?" he asked preoccupied

"Wohi... banda... u know.. Venkat ka saala? cousin?" she said

"Its his brother" he said quietly gazing at Manny's face intently.

"How did the guy get approval for so many millions in funding?" Manny asked

"Umm... its a long process" he said shortly

"Matlab?" she was poking

"Do u want to work at Argent?" he asked

"Tu sabko jobs de raha hai?" Manya laughed not amused
"Umm... no... but u asked" he said

"I am not asking about the process, I mean I am... but mujhe yeh baat samajh nahi aayi, how did the whole thing go unnoticed" she was relentless

"It didnt... we have checkpoints every 6 weeks" he said

"When the lab tests were not revealing satisfactory results at Hema Health why did u approve the 5th round of funding?" she was upset

"Are u curious about the pathology? or about the funding?" he was being very guarded

"Pathology to I read dimpal, they were a disaster" she was furious

He exhaled

"I read everything" she muttered

"thats why Sam says u shud get a job" he tried to laugh it off politely.

Twilight was turning into a clear night... a few stars could be spotted


"Because main idhar udhar mooh maar rahi hoon? unable to get off my bio tech high horse?" she laughed

"Umm... maybe" he nodded

"I am just not getting the whole thing"

"Why the sudden curiosity in a venture argent has funded? We have many busts, in fact twice as many as hits" he said

She looked unconvinced

"How can u settle out of court, you wont get anything" she was livid

"U shud let the attorneys investigate first" he was exasperated

"I am just not getting it... millions paid to a family member and the money vanishes before the promised product is delivered?"

"Hes not exactly family"

"To YOu hes not dimpal... II ka to hai na?" she said it FINALLLY. "Hes trying to get rich because" Manny swallowed ("II married you")

He exhaled and clenched his jaw.

"Its her family" she said

"So? she plotted the embezzelment?" he asked calmly

Manya couldnt meet his gaze

Ranjan pointed them to Nivi, she looked at his pointed index finger and did the same

He laughed and hugged her
He looked up at the sky wondering which one was Savvy

Nivi finally put Ranjan's lesson into practice, a grape was still joined, she split it into three...
He rewarded her with a big hug...

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Posted: 8 years ago
What an amazingly warm update. The playful bater of the family the doting Daadu and gudiya the flirting dude and his II...the invitation to the sisters to be gainfully employed... the malicious snoopy Manny who will not stay within her limits. Thank you Nisha.
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A comfortable, warm, toasty, sweet type of an update giving me a faraway look in my eyes..possibly because of the starry reference towards the end. The easy camaraderie between all of them, the laughter, the comfort level all,warms your heart. Daadoo and Nivi bond seems so precious. I disnt feel angry at Manyas suspicions or accusations this time. And What's come onto RB... actually texting her to indicate he misses her and I love the way he addresses himself as Nivi's dad.. that just stole my heart.

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