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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#291

Khushi should seriously consider joining politics.

She is too good. She gets what she wants yet she handles it being politically correct.

Payal is pregnant. Well their contraception ideas are apparently not working properly. 😆

This story was too cute Chaitali.

"The struggles of the modern man", Indeed.

Thank you for writing this story.

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#292

Read the story in a go. I didn't know the meaning of KLPD before this SS :P

And btw, I had guessed that they had an arranged marriage. I wasn't surprised by this revelation later even though they were frustrated beyond point to do the deed. Actually, I will tell you the reason personally. Can't reveal it here😛😳

And I loved how you used 'Sneezing' as a bad omen here. You know, This is the only omen which I consider bad.. When I am going out and I sneeze, I forget something. Always!

Living with a joint family in such a small space can be a pain. Though I've never lived with my extended family for a period more than 2 months, its a pain. Even with large space.

Loved those momentary digs that you took on Indian TV serials. One may wonder that how does it happen, one night and BAM! You are pregnant :P

Lux was a dog, I knew this when I read his introduction :P

Well it was a good move by sheetal to go to US. She helped herself and other frustrated members of the family too.

How can a masala story be completed without an overacting member of the family? I actually imagined that whole lavanya marriage scene in my head, of the accusations & insults thrown her way. 😛

All in all, it was full package entertaining story!

Housefull ----there couldn't be a better title!

Edited by Dee_J - 8 years ago

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#293

Beautiful story...enjoyed reading...will wait for another beautiful story from you...

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#294

I'm confused! Honestly I'm confused C!

But man wasn't it funny! This was one different story.

Good show. Loved the work.

Cheers

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Shereen_J

@Shereen_J

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#295

It was hilarious. .

Keep it up ..

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Param

@pup03

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#296

Thanks a ton for this wonderful story Chaitalee!! we know you love challenges and then delivering the best.. like our own dear ARSHI.. will be always checking out the mail box to see if there is anything from my lovely writer.. till then take care and keep dropping one shots.. 😃

thanks for mail 😊

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#297

Thanks for gmail.😃

I loved the update.👏

Thanks a ton for this beautiful & totally different journey of Arnav-Khushi in 'Housefull'.⭐️

Will wait for you to come back with another interesting concept on Arnav-Khushi.

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Jay

@jduke

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#298

Hello Chaitalee,
Housefull is full of laughter and mischief. Enjoyed reading it a lot. Thank you for writing this feel good story.
Testosterone in Raizada seems to be very powerful 😊. Even after hardly having any chance to be together Payal and Akash are popping kids so easily.
Please don't stop writing. Waiting for your next story :)

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#299

I still don't know what is KLPD 😕

this SS was different..

interesting...

entertaining..

everything..

but less of funny n more of frustrating..

Chaitali..

pls don't put my Arshi in such a situation ever again..

🤣

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Sheetal

@Prettycool

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Posted: 8 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: Zeffy
Shame on me who took things for granted. It is almost time for the next update. How has this story garnered less than 50 pages?😔
Back to the awesome update,

What one got was a reversal of these roles in an artistically twisted manner! Your mind works wonders👏

- NK was about to seek admission into college, while La graduated? He is doing an MBA, right? He cried his heart out leaving Anjali behind.

- Where did La study? Dhruv was certainly a catch.

- Hopefully Arnav didn't do this in front of his family, Khushi would have.. Well it is your mind, I wouldn't dare imagine the scenario that follows.

<img src="https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/1b/90/bc/1b90bc1d44bccec8fdb575c8eacb5f2c.jpg" alt="" />

The Gif's are to watch out for, Ruchi di, Kavi di, what apt choices! Somehow I felt inspired to google the images above.

Prettycool ji, pretty cool comment. If only Google translate helped.

Pup03 ji - I am sure Chaitu is gleaming. She writes really well, undoubtedly.

Yoga ji - Puspaka vimahan, waah ji waah! Wonderfully said. Sheetal ji shouldn't drop by for a vacation.

Last but not the least, I am jealous of your lovely readers. They write such short and sweet comments in less than a line. Wish I could do that.😳

@zeffy translation- story is so cute .. it took me to my mayka .. the culture and situation rendered realistically

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