Arhi FF: Nilagiri Diaries - Part 11 Updated 30th May

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coderlady

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Posted: 7 years ago

#221

Just started reading this one. I hope there won't be a triangle between Arnav, Nina, and Khushi. What happened to Khushi's previous relationship?

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#222

Hi,

Read all the chapters at single shot. To be honest, the story really started connecting to me only from Chapter 6... From Chapter 7 to 10 I have read about 3 times !!

Loved the mature way in which both Abhi and Surabhi are handling their misunderstandings...

His "whenever you are ready" is countered by her "I suppose.. we will talk... when You are ready"..⭐️

His message of wanting Love against her mere Marital Relationship is well discussed by them, in a most mature manner (against an usual war of words between newly weds - that I was expecting), clearing off the air between the youthful crush between Arnav and Khushi, and getting geared for Abhi-Surabhi's path from being a mere Habit of each other - to setting boundaries - to a meaning walk towards eternal bonding...👏

Surabhi comes out clear with him in all her dealings so far --- be it disclosing that his sister had hidden his letter (or) the disconnect she felt when she realised his fondness towards her (or) that she has not yet reached where he is already at and the pressure that she is in to cover the distance (or) his aunt's cheekiness in spiking her milk... (or) even questioning him outright "Would you, abhi?"

But Abhi is yet to open up and be transparent with her. He still looks calculative in his approach towards her.

One thing I admired in Chapter 10 is ... Abhi choosing not to drink his cup of spiked milk... and choosing not to touch her, despite her spiked up hormonal wants.

Surabhi is going through a lot, physically now...

He could have easily relieved her off her spiked medicinal desire for a day... but in the process, he might end up hurting her and making her feel emotionally crippled for the rest of her life.

Instead he chose to stand by her pain for a day, and relieved her a lifetime full of regrets...Suggesting for a Walk in the chill Ooty Night is a good way to wear off the spiked desires... If she chose to sleep to him owing to the medicine, it will be her call. It will be totally Her decision... Not because he chose to make use of her body because of the spiked up milk... 👍🏼

Edited by rajatshweta - 7 years ago

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 7 years ago

#223

😛 good to see you back ...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: -Mitra
Is sorry going to cut it? :(

Life has gotten busy. My mom's health took downhill and I had to take a trip back home to handle it and ever since, its been one thing after another. I'm going to get back to writing shortly, but just wanted to post that I fully intend to keep the story going. Thanks for your patience, persistence and encouragement. Hope to meet you all back, right here... soon at that. ;)

@Reflorated - Belated birthday wishes.

@Kishmish - Oh! I miss it... Been quite nostalgic about it.

we miss you more 😆

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 7 years ago

#225

Can understand exactly what Abhi is going through !

I really wonder if going for a walk was the solution at all .

I wonder how they will go through the walk together both feeling the way they are 😆

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johngalt

@johngalt

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Posted: 7 years ago

#226

intriguing story...

stumbled upon it..

pls do continue..

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#227

Nice story

Just found it

Nina seems in love with arnav

And glad that arnav didn't drink the spiked milk

I wonder how the walk and the night will turn out

Loved the story behind why arnav bought the old couple's house

Update soon

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fundy

@fundy

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#228

its so deep and intruiging...something found very rarely nowadays...plz do continue.n.update soon ...its like a fresh breath of air amongst d normal , cliche love stories...as much as i love such cliche ones, wid ur work i realised dat i hav something deeper inside me ...ur work is helping me discover my inner thoughts on certain aspects related to marriage ...tjank u

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#229

Are you planning to complete the story?

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-Mitra

@-Mitra

Navigator

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Posted: 7 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: fundy
its so deep and intruiging...something found very rarely nowadays...plz do continue.n.update soon ...its like a fresh breath of air amongst d normal , cliche love stories...as much as i love such cliche ones, wid ur work i realised dat i hav something deeper inside me ...ur work is helping me discover my inner thoughts on certain aspects related to marriage ...tjank u

Wow, that made my day. I recently got back to writing and to warm up I'm writing for a drabble contest that Pari is hosting for IPPNKD anniversary. Will get back here, after that.