A Love Story....ChanDu FF - Part 5A updated

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Apurva Deep

@Poo_2208

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello dear friends..😊

Would U like to read a love story before the hate story begins??

This is my first work on IF as well as in Fan Fictions Forum😊..and the original idea of this TS goes to one of my friends,so the credit for d plot goes to her 😊

Its a TS on ChanDhu or ChandraGupt-Dhurdhara

Part 1 - Page 1

Part 2 - Page 4

Part 3 - Page 7

Part 4 - Page 8

Part 5 A - Page 10

Part 5 B - Page 11

Part 6 - Page 12

Part 7 - Page 13

Part 8 - Page 14

Edited by Poo_2208 - 7 years ago

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Apurva Deep

@Poo_2208

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wishing U all a very Happy Diwali..😃

So,I'm giving a short intro for my TS..

Here it goes..

A boy & a girl were playing and running in d jungle amidst d trees...

The boy was ahead of the girl & asked her to catch himself..

Chandra-"Arey Dhara,maine to tumhe pakad liya,Ab tum v bhi mujhe pakad kar dikhao.."

Dhurdhara-"Tumhe kya lagta hai Chandra,mai tumhe nahi pakad paungi..abhi dikhati hu tumhe.."

The boy increases his speed a bit to tease the girl..

Chandra-"Arey Dhara,tum to bahut sust ho gayi ho,thoda khud par dhyan diya karo..

Sirf khati ho,kuchh kaam nhi karti..

Aise to tum moti ho jaogi.."

Dhurdhara-"Tum zyada baatein mat banao,samjhe.."

The boy slows himself purposefully and thus,she catches him..

Dhurdhara-"Dekha,hamne tumhe pakad liya na.."

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Okk..this is all for now,but I promise,I will b back soon..

Til then..please hit like & post reply who are interested 😊

Love,

Poo😃

Edited by Poo_2208 - 8 years ago

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VERONICA(Zoya

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Posted: 8 years ago

im eagerly waiting for it :))))))))))))))))))))))))) pls post soon

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Apurva Deep

@Poo_2208

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ZOYA_K
im eagerly waiting for it :))))))))))))))))))))))))) pls post soon

Hello Zoya..😊

Thank U for posting reply on my TS..

Had given a short intro..please have a look..!!😊

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Apurva Deep

@Poo_2208

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello friends..

I would like to ask Ur opinion..

U would like to read their convo with Hindi dialogues or English ones..I will give them according to Ur response 😊

I would b waiting for Ur replies!!

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

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Posted: 8 years ago

Kuch bhi chalega.. Anything u wish and find more comfortable to write in..

Since its a historical story, would not it be better if we get it in hindi??

But if you wish you can write in english too.

After all its the story that matters and a good writer will definitely reach the hearts of her readers, no matter what the medium is.

Liked ur trailer.. So eagerly waiting for ur story..

Please continue

Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 8 years ago

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Apurva Deep

@Poo_2208

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629
Kuch bhi chalega.. Anything u wish and find more comfortable to write in..
Since its a historical story, would not it be better if we get it in hindi??

But if you wish you can write in english too.
After all its the story that matters and a good writer will definitely reach the hearts of her readers, no matter what the medium is.
Liked ur trailer.. So eagerly waiting for ur story..
Please continue

Yes..I agree..in fact mujhe v Hindi zyada sahi lag rhi thi..thats why I asked for suggestion..😊

Thank U..I will b posting part 1 tomorrow😃

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Apurva Deep

@Poo_2208

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Apurva Deep

@Poo_2208

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sohinisen
do continue

thank wiil be waiting for your comments on part 1

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

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Posted: 8 years ago

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hey dear.. Sorry for being very late.. actually I was quite busy with my personal stuff so did not get time to come here and read your update..

Ok so now when i am done with part 1, I must say that your writing is really good..

So chandra and dhara were childhood sweethearts, i guess.. Chandra got married to her later but used to be her friend earlier.. aisa kya?

ok you dont reveal the story now.. i will be waiting to read how you gradually unfold your FF..

Great job dear and honestly i have liked it..

Dhurdhara was a true character who was actually there in CGM's life, so its easy for me to imagine their love story..

Thanks for alerting me..

Do continue.. I know you did not get many likes and responses becoz its not about the story of the onscreen couple of CN but i am sure silent and non members must be reading and enjoying your story.. chup chup ke..

All the best... keep up your interesting piece of work