ArHi SS: Dillagi - Thread 1 - (Chapter 1-9)

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Rimi

@Rimi_BS

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#651

After these super teasing pics...I just can't wait for the whole update...well u had said previously that something is going to happen which will make khushi's fear go away... so may be in her unconscious state she will feel arnav do something which will end her fear of him...

Plz update soon... dono story ka ek to update karo

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kowshira9

@kowshira9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#652

I think Kushi had a hearts attackiert and Arnav will free her :-(

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clairvoyance

@clairvoyance

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Posted: 8 years ago

#653

about chapter 8 i can say its very well a turning point and a good written. From now onwards your story can take a big transformation,Upto you. let me say some things

do you know why even after 4 yrs of ipkknd finished readers still come to india forums to read arshi fanfictions?

one of the many reasons is...people love reading the brutal ASR and the naive khushi, the playboy asr , the traditional khushi , the guilty asr the righteous khushi. This can never be out of fashion or boring.These stories are presented in different ways since 4 yrs and people still love it.

IN the show the makers didnt do justice to the redemption track, so people love reading redemption tracks here, even if its is written by writers here thousand times. Or else why would people still flock here even after 4 yrs of the show ended,

please dont assume redemption track is boring. The cardiac arrest shows how to the extreme extent arnav has pushed her. when arnav says his life his breath will stop if khushi divorces him Arnav has to realise that let him embrace death even if it helps khushi to be happy.THAT IS LOVE. Not being selfish. Gaining is not always love, Losing is also Love.

I fear that in order to be hatke and too different please dont do too many experiments. i dont want to see the stubborn ASR forcing khushi. He has no ounce of guilt for what a big blunder he did and he is still forcing khushi just because he needs her. He is just atrracted ,lusting ..he doesnt love her. True love is spiritual in nature which is always about giving not commanding forcibly. Hatss off to you for writing arnav's mothers scenes and her dialogues so beautifully. You are a gem as a writer. I dont mind khushi being dead ..i want a sad end so that arnav leads his whole life in guilt. Mental torture for years is more painful than anything.Khushi was facing this torture since school. He spoiled her career , her dreams. He might take her for world tour, give rich items, or evn love her whole heartedly but can the gone time return back..Those old times when she didnt had proper sleep at night thinking about next dreadful day in college. Her health got affected due to this tension.

In real life dear one of my relatives i have seen facing nervous breakdown due to tension given by husband and his dominating acts.

So here A brat ASR now crazy for his wife is not something to be proud of . So what if he is now on a good mission. Cant endorse such thinking of a harsh husband.

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#654

Khushi's heart will stop beating...arnav will apologize or cries which will bring her back...he might even promise her to divorce her or not to show his face but that makes less sense coz divorcing arnav means forgetting him...and arnav will not want that...

This work of yours is fantabulous...the way of turning arnav from a bully to a helpless lover...and how the fall of khushi from confident to a fearful.girl is also an entirely different concept...no doubts there are many stories with the same type of arnav khushi but you have written beautifully and presented a story so praise worthy...hatsoff to you girl...

Khushi 's days with her father...mending her parents and grandparents relationship...arnav's bond with his dad...especially their last conversation...his bond with his mother...with brother and a lil bit with bhabhi...khushi's relation with his mother and brother bhabhi...khushi and sheetals friendship...sheetal being a mother hen...
The only relation left to be mended is Arnav and Khushi...

Waiting for the new twist you will bring out in the story
Thank you for all the pms
:) :)

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#655

Interesting teaser

I don't wana predict... just feel like reading the next update...

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AdeebA

@pirl18

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#656

I think he's gonna leave khushi...
But Aisa ni krna...

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Farzana

@AMAL722

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#657

Due to the Stroke she loses her memory

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Sakhi2013

@Sakhi2013

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#658

OMG !!!!!!! Look like Kushi has seveare nervous breakdown... or may be in coma ...

Stroke with memory loss...

Edited by Sakhi2013 - 8 years ago

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#659

I think after this arnav will set khushi free...

And will realize his redemption needs to be more polite..

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guy3

@guy3

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#660

OMG! I really hope khushi survives this. But somehow I don't feel any sympathy for arnav. He needs to see that you can't force someone to love you. You need to work on it with love and care and not force and anger. And like clairvoyance wrote, he spoiled her childhood and career. Nothing he does now can give her the time she has lost

Edited by guy3 - 8 years ago