ArHi SS: Dillagi - Thread 1 - (Chapter 1-9)

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Lily30

@Lily30

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Regards the teaser, I think Arnav has found Khushi and taken her someplace as Ratna not supporting him.
Eager for the chapter.

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rafiki84

@rafiki84

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

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Talk about being an a**hole of another level. I wonder how Ratna even agreed to get Arnav and Khushi married...? He must've staged a horrible drama to force Khushi to accept his proposal.

I just want to Khushi to run away and hide from him for years and train herself to not feel humongous fear. Ah! That's too far fetched 😆 Never mind.

Your Arnav's are usually extremely stubborn and always get what they want, either by hook or by crook. As much as I love this trait in them, sometimes it just gets really frustrating. Can you somehow introduce a character that will make him regret his mistakes and actually make him reflect on his behavior? That's be like really awesome ⭐️ Haha! Too far fetched again.

Looking forward to what happens next 😃

Update soon woman! 😊

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Angelsolanki

@Angelsolanki

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Nice teaser
All the best for ur exam
Update soon

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Swaran13

@Swaran13

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Love your work:)

Can u pls update sun rahi hai na tu pls

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seshatree

@seshatree

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#145

fantastic start...Pls add me in your pm list Hina...

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

It will be good if Arnav takes Khushi out with him, some new place, new country. She will go close to him, if others, esp Ratna isnt around to poke her nose in their matters. While I understand that Ratna is protecting Khushi and Arnav has only himself to blame for Khushi's behavior. But he needs to be around her for her to feel less scared. IF she keeps running away then she will never over-come her fear.

Ideally, Ratna shouldve convinced Khushi to shift to RM, so that Khushi can be around Arnav and also other family members are there for her. She shouldve convinced Khushi, that this is the right way for Khushi to overcome her fear.

Cause Khushi's condition of staying away is purely out of fear, i dont think Khushi has even attempted to overcome her fear, and she has no intention of going to Arnav ever. And by calling Khushi like that, Ratna has only intensified her fear.

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sarb

@sarb

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Love the chappy 2 and teaser as well...

Praying to God hina stressed out soon.😛😊😉

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bs1224

@bs1224

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Amazingly written

The concept is mind blowing never can imagine such a concept ...beautiful described 👏

Khushi is so scared of him but that's what happens when a thing is gone beyond the limit and now arnav has to face this...as you sow so shall you reap😈

Arnav is guilty to and is regretting things he had done to her in the name of jealousy😡

But I'm wondering if arnav hated her so much how did he end up falling for her😳

He has forced her to marry him 😭

Thanks for pm🤗

Amazing teaser..I guess he had found her hidden sonewhere and their stay in RM had started

Update soon Like supeeer sooon Hina di 😳