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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: kusima

first of all thaks 4 the pm
the update was so good and interesting
loved how u focus on raj-naina
want them to be together soon
waiting 4 next update😊


first of all thaks 4 the pm

No problem 😊

the update was so good and interesting

Thank you 😊

loved how u focus on raj-naina

😳

want them to be together soon

Sure, they'll be together soon 😊

waiting 4 next update😊

Will update soon 😊
Stay blessed!
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Originally posted by: Vtak123

Love it such a diffrent concept, the internal feelingsss and sufferingsss are so beautifuly potrayeddd... u r an awsmm writer... eagerly waiting for the next part .do continue soon nd add me to ur pm list dear.



Love it such a diffrent concept, the internal feelingsss and sufferingsss are so beautifuly potrayeddd...

Thank you so much 😊

u r an awsmm writer...

Thank you for the compliment 😊

eagerly waiting for the next part .do continue soon nd add me to ur pm list dear.

Sure will update soon and PM you 😊

Stay blessed!
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Chapter 2


At the mess, Suriji notices how Ali, Huda and Alekh are sitting all silent and serious, their coffees placed at the table, in front of them, untouched. Knowing the reason, Suriji feels concerned. He smiles as his eyes fall on Alekh's cup, which is filled with coffee rather than his medicine'! He smiles, thinking whatever Alekh might say, but the magic a cup of coffee holds, it can't be compared to anything else.

Reaching their table, Suriji in his own style says,

"aisa hai, ki tum ye coffee piyo, na piyo, tumhare khatey mein maine iska bill jod diya hai. Par main dekh raha hun ke ye bechari coffee jo hai, yahan parhi-parhi tumse requaast kar rahi hai ki ab to piyo mujhey, ab to piyo!' Aur koi mere mess ke kisi bhi cheez ka disrespaact kare ye mujhey pasand nahi, samjhey tussi?"

Ali looks at him and smiles a little,

"Nahi Suriji aisi koi baat nahi hai, hum to bus peene waley the coffee".

"Puttar ji tu to usoolon ka bada pakka hai, har kaam bina waqt gawaye fatafat kar deta hai, aaj kuch zada hi waqt le liya tu ne coffee peene mein",

smiles Suriji. The three of them lower their eyes.

"Sir, Captain Rajveer wapas to aa gaye hain, iss baat ki bohot khushi bhi hai humein par humse unki ye haalat dekhi nahi ja rahi",

says Huda, and remembers the scars on Captain Rajveer's face.


Smiling, Suriji sits next to him, resting his arms on the table he asks Huda,

"Chal puttar ek baat bata, jab tere our Captain Sahab ke beech mein wo boxing match hua tha, tab tu ne socha tha unhe maarte waqt ke unhe chot lag rahi hai, dard ho raha hoga?"

On listening to this, Huda lowers his eyes, feeling guilty. Thinking, how kidishly he behaved that day.

Smiling, on witnessing the guilt in his eyes, Suriji explains him,

"Jab dushman hamla karta hai tab wo ye nahi sochta ki samne waley ko kitni takleef ho rahi hogi".

Suriji's words increases the mercury of Huda's guilt. He tells him, in a low voice, his eyes lowered,

"main unka dushman nahi tha!"

Ali and Alekh stare each other, feeling sorry for their friend Huda.

Smiling, Suriji puts his hand on Huda's shoulder and says,

"oye puttar main janta hun ke tu unka dushman nahi tha. Par kuch palon ke liye tujhey wo tere dushman lagne lagey. Hai ke nahi?"

asks Suriji, lovingly, pointing a finger towards Huda. Huda stares at him,

"Wo meri galti thi, nadaani thi meri!" "Puttar, jab kisi ke sir par gussa sawar hota hai, tab koi ye nahi dekhta ke samne waley par uske gussey ka kya asar ho raha hoga. Isliye kehte hain, humein koi bhi bada faisla, gussey mein akar nahi lena chahiye. Kyunki humare ek faisle se sirf humari zindagi hi nahi balki unn tamam logon ki zindagi judi hui hoti hai jo humse judey hue hain".

All the three nod their heads silently, understanding the depth of his words. Patting on Hudas back, Suriji smiles a little and leaves.

At his room, sitting at his sofa, Rajveer shuts his eyes, arching his head backwards and silently fights with his desire to meet her, to talk to her.

(Slow Rajveer-Naina tune begins)

*Flashback*

Captain Rajveer opens his eyes slowly and shuts them back immediately. The bright light of sun entering his room blurs his vision. And why wont it do that, when he is opening his eyes almost after one week? Adjustments do take time! He opens his eyes again, this time very slowly; aware of the brightness hell face after opening his eyes. As he gets comfortable, his eyes adjust to the brightness that they are facing after a week, Rajveer lying at his cot notices his surroundings. Its a small cottage but well maintained. There are a few furnished furniture two sofas, that look old but neat and clean; one wooden round centre table, a simple one but elegant; a small television, by the look of which it is clear that it is not taken into much use. At the extreme left corner table, on which are placed few books, wherever he is, the owner of the house must be a student or habitual to reading.

The noise of anklets alerts Captain Rajveer and his hand naturally reaches his pocket to search for his gun. But as he does that, he realizes that the material of his clothing is nothing to that of denim jeans. He stares down in horror and discovers that he is wearing a dark green kurta paired up with a white pajama.
No, this is not the way Captain Rajveer dresses usually! As he takes his time to decide what to do next, the girl reaches him and stands in front of his cot. Captain Rajveer notices what she is wearing. In a plain light pink suit, she smiles at him, holding a tray on which is placed a glass of water.

Seeing a stranger, Captain Rajveer looks at her suspiciously and asks her, raising his voice a little, to make her clear that he is not a child, she can mess up with,

"Kaun ho tum? Aur main yahan kya kar raha hun?"

Placing the tray at a corner, she smiles and introduces herself to him,

"mera naam Suman hai. Aap jungle mein behoshi ki halat mein miley the, to main apko yahan le ayi"

Suman, who is in her twenties, well maintained body, notices how suspiciously he is looking at her. She turns back and starts moving away from him and continues with her dictation of the story.

"Main yahan rehti hun, isliye mujhey yahan ke har ped (tree) kef aide aur unse banai jane wali dawaiyon ki jaankari hai. Unhi se main apke liye dawaiyan banati hun aur apko wo dawaiyan deti hun, taki aap jaldi se theek ho jao. Dheere-dheere hi sahi, par lagta hai, ab aap par meri banayi gayi dawaiyan asar kar rahi hain", and as she ends up saying this, she reaches a cupboard from where she slowly brings out a pistol. Turning back, she points the pistol at Captain Rajveer, her eyes reflecting her anger and determination and she asks,

"Who are you?"

*Flashback ends*


The knock at the door brings Captain Rajveer back to the present. Fully aware of his body ache, he takes his time to reach the door. As he pulls the door open, he finds Bunty Chaubey standing there.

"Chaubey!",
exclaims Captain Rajveer, glad to meet him. Chaubey hugs his favorite captain tightly.

"Aauu!" ,
cries Captain Rajveer, as he feels a pang of pain at his chest. This alerts Chaubey and he quickly gets away from him. Holding Captain Rajveer lightly by his arms, he apologizes,

"I am sorry Sir, mere dimag mein hi nahi aya ke..."

Captain Rajveer smiles, amidst dealing with his pain which Chaubey has given him unintentionally, and halts him in the middle of his sentence,

"Relax Chaubey, I know tumne ye jaan bujh kar nahi kiya. Aao ander"

and he pulls Chaubey with him, into his room.

"Kya logey chai ya coffee?",
asks Captain Rajveer.

Smiling, still feeling guilty for causing him pain, Chaubey says,

"Kaisa mazak kar rahe hain aap Sir? Main apke saath kaise...?"

Hearing this Captain Rajveer turns to look at him,
"Kyun Chaubey iss mein galat kya hai?",
asks Captain Rajveer, creasing his brows. Lowering his eyes, Chaubey says, out of hesitation,

"Arey nahi Sir, main to aise hi!"

Holding Chaubey by his shoulders, Captain Rajveer looks straight into his eyes,

"aaj keh diya hai, ainda aisi baat kabhi mat karn, samjhey tum?",

warns Captain Rajveer, mildly.

Chaubey nods his head twice, his eyes lowered. Captain Rajveer beats him lovigly on his forehead, smiles and hugs him.

Leaving him, he asks him to feel comfortable,

"tum baitho main abhi coffee bana kar lata hun",

and was about to turn to enter the kitchen when Chaubey offers him,

"ahmm... main bana deta hun na Sir, aap baithiye".
On listening to this Captain Rajveer turns to look at him, all serious, creasing his brows, he asks,

"Chaubey, tum mera mazak uda rahe ho?"
It scares Chaubey, he realizes that Captain Rajveer felt offended.

"Ahmm... nahi Sir, main bus... I am sorry Sir".
Smiling a little, hurt visible in his eyes, Captain Rajveer turns away from him and tells him,
"Ye zakham unn zakhmon ke samne kuch nahi hai Chaubey, jo mujhey mere apno ne diye hain".

Reaching the kitchen area, Captain Rajveer starts preparing coffee for both of them.

Anger ignites inside Chaubey! Taking his seat on the sofa, he tells him,

"Lala kabhi apka nahi tha Sir!"

Captain Rajveer who was busy preparing the coffee and some snacks, raises his head to look at him and realizes how angry Chaubey is right now. That swells his heart, witnessing Chaubey's respect and love towards himself.

"Apko apke kisi apne ne koi zakham nahi diya",
says Chaubey.
Captain Rajveer looks at him, as he utters those words.
"Apke sarey apne apse pyar karte hain. Sub pyar karte hain apse"
His words succeed in turning Captain Rajveer's eyes tearful. But thankfully Chaubey couldn't see how broken Captain Rajveer is feeling right now, since he is facing away from Chaubey.

"Nahi... nahi sub karte hain ya nahi, ye main ab tak nahi janta. Nahi janta main ab tak!"

(Rajveer-Naina slow tune begins)

Looking heavenwards, he controls his emotions.

Moving to his shelf of books, Chaubey picks up a random book and asks him simultaneously,

"ab agey kya karna hai Sir?"

His sudden question, asked casually, surprises Captain Rajveer. Fully aware that his eyes are on him, Chaubey says further,

"jisne bhi apke saath ye kiya hai, ussey saza to milni hi chahiye".

Adding sugar into the coffee mugs, Captain Rajveer thinks about the culprits. Mixing the sugar, his eyes fixed somewhere at the vase kept at a distance, in front of him, he says,

"saza to milegi, zarur milegi. Main dunga saza!"

"To kya aap apne mentor Lala...",

Chaubey halts as Captain Rajveer gives him a stern look, his disappointment and anger on hearing Lala's name visible in his eyes.

Moving to him, Captain Rajveer hands Chaubey a cup of coffee and sits on his arm chair, thinking about the matter constantly. Chaubey takes his seat in front of him. He chooses to remain quiet and waits for Captain Rajveer to say something.

Taking a sip of his coffee, he thinks further and at last breaks his silence by saying,

"Main Shakti Chandra ke gunehgaron ko saza zarur dunga. Main... Naveen ke gunehgaron ko saza dilawa kar rahunga!"

After sometime, Chaubey takes Captain Rajveer's permission to leave,

"theek hai Sir, main chalta hun. Agar koi bhi baat ho, kuch bhi zarurat ho, mujhey zarur bataiyega".

Captain Rajveer doesn't reply him in words, he just nods his head to a yes, his eyes still moist. Chaubey leaves, closing the door behind him.

~*~*~*~

Entering her room Pooja asks Naina,

"Le liya jitna waqt lena hai tujhey ya abhi bhi aur waqt chahiye?"

Keeping her uniform into the cupboard, Naina ignores looking straight into Pooja's eyes and says,

"Pooja tu kya keh rahi hai mujhey kuch samjh nahi aa raha".

"Oye Naina pehle jab tera Ranjha tha nahi yahan tab tu silent mode par chali gayi thi. Kitni mushkil se tujhey normal mode par laye the hum sub. Ab jab wo wapas aa gaya hai, to tu fir humse connection tod kar silent mod par ja rahi hai?"

"Dekh Pooja, mere paas tere inn faltu baaton ke liye time nahi hai, tu please mujhey akela chor de",
says Naina, getting irritated.
"Akela chor dun? Taki tu fir se koi galat kadam uthaye? Pehle hi ek baar uthane ki soch chuki hai. Agar tere Captain Rajveer ko pata chala na ki tu..."

It irks Naina when she hears the words tere Captain Rajveer'! Raising her voice, Naina scolds her mildly,
"Pooja please, wo 'mere' Captain Rajveer nahi hai, samjhi tu?",
emphasizing on the word 'mere' out of irritation and frustration.
"Hun... rehne de tu Naina. Ye to sub jante hain ke tere aur Captain Rajveer ka ringtone ek hi hai. Tu bhul gayi Captain Salve ne kya kaha tha?"

As Pooja says this Naina remembers, Captain Salve's words...

"... unhe kisi ko kuch bhi prove karne ki zarurat nahi thi, na army ko; na duniya ko; na kisi aur ko. Siwaye ek shaks jo Naveen ke qatilon ko dhundhna chahta tha. Wo ek shaks jo K.M.A. mein sirf isliye aya tha taki wo Naveen me qatilon ko dhundhey. Wo ek insaan Captain Rajveer ke liye itna important bann chuka tha, ke uske liye koi baat important nahi thi. Aur wo tum ho cadet! Captain Rajveer wanted to prove his innocence to you, to the one he loves!"

She trembles as she realizes how easy it was for everyone to understand Captain Rajveer's feelings for Naina and Naina 's feelings for Captain Rajveer, Naina's hidden feelings, which she herself didn't realize that she had! Yes, they were there, deep down she also had feelings for him, only if she would have realized them earlier, so may be today it would have been a totally different story!

How did it escape from Naina's eyes, the feelings of Rajveer for her? How couldn't she understand the depth of Rajveer's feelings for her? How didn't she see that he desired for her? Did her desire of proving her brother innocent, blocked her mind and most importantly her heart that much, that she failed to distinguish between right and wrong? Sympathy and... love?
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Wow!!
You are a damn good writer yaar..
Sach mein..
Rajveer k accidebt k baad wapis aane per do writers ne do badhiya stories shuru ki hai..
Mera toh kaam hi hogaya ;)
Baithe bithaye dono taraf se raj k accident k baad ki do alag point of views se do stories..
Full on entertainment package..
Ab plz jaldi jaldi update karna..ur writing style is just too good..I can't wait more :)
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I'am literally speechless yaar..
You are simply a too good writer.
I will wait for your every update from now because I know it will always be an enjoyable read :)
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Thank you 😊
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: zishi01

Wow!!
You are a damn good writer yaar..
Sach mein..
Rajveer k accidebt k baad wapis aane per do writers ne do badhiya stories shuru ki hai..
Mera toh kaam hi hogaya ;)
Baithe bithaye dono taraf se raj k accident k baad ki do alag point of views se do stories..
Full on entertainment package..
Ab plz jaldi jaldi update karna..ur writing style is just too good..I can't wait more :)



Wow!!
You are a damn good writer yaar..

Thank you 😊

Sach mein..
Rajveer k accidebt k baad wapis aane per do writers ne do badhiya stories shuru ki hai..

Great! Apko materials mil gye read karne ke liye on Rajveer-Naina 👏👍🏼

Mera toh kaam hi hogaya ;)

Lolzz...! 😉

Baithe bithaye dono taraf se raj k accident k baad ki do alag point of views se do stories..

👏

Full on entertainment package..

👍🏼

Ab plz jaldi jaldi update karna..

Sure 👍🏼

ur writing style is just too good..

Thank you so much 😊

I can't wait more :)

Will update soon 😊

Stay blessed!
❤️

Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tiniminy

I'am literally speechless yaar..
You are simply a too good writer.
I will wait for your every update from now because I know it will always be an enjoyable read :)



I'am literally speechless yaar..

😳

You are simply a too good writer.

Thank you so much for the compliment 😳

I will wait for your every update from now because I know it will always be an enjoyable read :)

Aww... Thank you 🤗

Stay blessed!
❤️
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago
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Chapter 3

Captain Rajveer knocks the door of Brigadier Chandok's office and asks for his permission to get in,

"May I come in Sir?"

"Come in Captain",

permits Brigadier Chandok and sits straight, closing the file he had been reading before Captain Rajveer knocked the door. A smile, which justifies how much happy and proud he is on seeing Captain Rajveer back in KMA, comes on Brigadier Chandok's face as he looks at Captain Rajveer.

Standing in attention position, Captain Rajveer shows his respect like a true soldier, for his teacher, Brigadier Chandok. It swells Brigadier Chandok's heart to see Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat after such a long time but at the same time it pierces his heart too, to see his Captain in such a state! But being a soldier, that too the Principal of KMA, he understands, he ought to keep his emotions at a bay!

"Sit down Captain",


he permits him to sit, gesturing with his hand.

"Thank you Sir",


Captain Rajveer pulls the chair back,a little,in order to take his seat. But the unconsciously pulling of the chair, reminds him of the acute pain in his elbow. He hisses a little in pain, but keeps a check on his displaying of emotions. He, not at any cost, wants to come in front of anyone as a weak soldier, that too in front of his own teacher, Brigadier Chandok!

His hissing doesn't go unnoticed. And it does affect Brigadier Chandok! Brigadier Chandok smiles secretly on realizing how both of them are trying to keep their emotions at a bay. This is what a true soldier ought to be like. Thinking this Brigadier Chandok sits straight, smiling with all his heart and nods his head twice in a quick succession, feeling proud that they both are soldiers and are always ready for serving for their country.

"So Captain first thing first... Welcome back to KMA!",


greets Brigadier Chandok, proudly and happily. Smiling with joy and pride, Captain Rajveer replies,

"Thank you Sir! I accept your warm welcome, but Sir kindly address me as Rajveer Singh Shekhawat",


saying that he lowers his eyes.

"Main samjha nahi Rajveer, tum aisa kyun keh rahe ho? Aaj jab tumhe uniform pehn kar subke samne aane ko kaha gaya, tab bhi tumne uniform pehnne se inkaar kar dia! Kyun?",

Brigadier Chandok creases his brows, waiting eagerly for an answer.

Smiling, Captain Rajveer lowers his eyes, and says,

"Sir, I 'desire' to wear that uniform. Wo uniform, jo Rajveer ko Captain Rajveer banata hai; wo uniform, jo mujhey mere iss duniya mein aane ka maksat yaad dilata hai. Par Sir, ye uniform main tab tak nahi pehnunga jab tak main Naveen aur Major Shakti Chandra ke gunehgaron ko saza na dilwa dun!"

As he says that, his eyes turn tearful, out of hatred for all the traitors.

"Aur apne gunhegaron ko?",

asks Brigadier Chandok, concerned. Captain Rajveer looks at him, with sorrowful eyes.

"Captain I want to know kya hua tha tumhare saath? Humein to khabar mili thi ki tumhari jeep khai mein gir gayi hai aur blast hua tha. Aur...",

Brigadier Chandok could not continue further, he doesn't want to imagine all those stuffs that he has imagined all this time. He just wants the truth, the plain truth.

"Batao Captain, kya hua tha tumhare saath?"

Captain Rajveer takes his time before he starts with his narration. He stands up and walks towards the door of Brigadier Chandok's office, mustering the courage to tell Brigadier Chandok, the truth. He starts with the simple line,

"Mere car ka accident hua tha!"

He doesn't hurry up, and waits for Brigadier Chandok to feel what he felt when he met with that accident.

"Mere jeep mein kisi ne bomb plant kia tha!",

he adds further, with almost no emotion, what so ever! But the line does have it's affect on Brigadier Chandok, in exactly the way, Captain Rajveer had expected before uttering those words.

Out of anger, Brigadier Chandok says, raising his voice,

"Mujhey afsos hai Captain, ki humein iss baat ki koi jankari nahi thi. Kuch pata nahi chala humein. Aur jab pata chala..." ,


lowering his head, Brigadier Chandok continues,

"tab tak bohot der ho chuki thi!",


his hatred, his anger for Lala visible in his voice; and his guilt towards Captain Rajveer is also clearly visible.

Smirking, Captain Rajveer says,

"Kisne kaha ki mujhey iss barey mein nahi pata tha?"


This comes as a surprise for Brigadier Chandok. He stares Captain Rajveer, shocked.

"Matlab? Tum kehna kya chahte ho Captain?",


asks Brigadier Chandok, creasing his brows.

And hence starts the narration of his story...

*Flashback*


"Haye Rabba ye signal kahin milta hi nahi hai mujhey",


curses Pooja as she walks to and fro on the terrace of KMA, at night, trying to catch her mobile's signal.

She succeeds in getting the signal, only that, it is a cross connection. At first she curses her lucks that it is none other than Major Nayyer's voice and having her heart filled with too much hatred for him, she doesn't take much time to pull down the mobile phone in order to disconnect the call, but something catches her attention, the words of Major Nayyer,

"Aap fikar mat kijiye maine sara intazaam kar diya hai. Ab Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat, apke raaste ka subse bada kanta, humesha-humesha ke liye iss duniya se... out!"

Pooja gets tensed on listening to his words. Pulling down the receiver and covering the speaker, she mummers,

"Haye rabba! Ye log kya bol rahe hain? Ye log mere ShahRukh ko...! Nahi, main ye nahi hone dungi".

She puts the mobile back on her ear to listen further. But by the time she places the mobile on her ear, they had already completed with most parts of their conversation.

"Gadi dekh lena!",

were the last words that the person on the other end says, which Pooja hears.

To it, Major Nayyer replies in an affirmative,

"Theek hai Sir!",

and ends the call. By the sound of it, it is clear that the call was very professional. No personal touch such as greeting each other with 'hi'! 'bye'! were exchanged between the caller and the receiver.

"Mujhey Captain Rajveer ya Naina mein se kisi ko ye baat batani hi hogi!",

decides a tensed and terrified Pooja and runs for her room to meet Naina and tell her everything.

But as she reaches her room, she finds Naina asleep. She jerks her to wake her up, tensed and excited out of fear.

"Naina, Naina jaldi uth. Ye bohot zaruri hai",

she calls out to Naina.

Rubbing her eyes and switching on the table lamp at the corner of her bed, Naina sits up slowly,

"Kya hua Pooja? Tu iss waqt iss tarah se?"

Suddenly she realizes that something is amiss. She opens her eyes wide, fully awake now. She jerks Pooja and asks her,

"Bata Pooja kya hua? Tu theek to hai na?",

concerned, her brows creased, her heart thumping, as she waits for Pooja's answer.

Shaking her head thrice, in negative, in quick succession, she points towards the door, her eyes fixed on Naina and utters nervously,

"Wo... wo... Rajveer Sir..."

His name drains the blood out of Naina's face. She gets tensed, worried all over again, this time with a greater magnitude.

"Kya hua unhe?"

Jerking her, Naina shouts,

"Bata Pooja, Rajveer Sir... kya?"

Suddenly Pooja realizes that she should not disclose the truth in front of Naina, she should rather share it with someone else.

"Pooja bata...!",

shouts Naina, jerking her, getting impatient.

Using her presence of mind, Pooja tells Naina,

"Yaar main bahar mobile ka signal dhundh rahi thi, aur Captain Rajveer dikh gaye. Main jaise-taise unse bach kar yahan ayi hun".

Saying that Pooja holds her breath, waiting to know how much it worked! How much believable were her words!

After few moments Naina bursts out into a laugh,

"Pooja... Pooja tujhey pata hai tu jitni strong dikhti hai, ussey kayi zada tu darpok hai! Hahaha! Pagal, chal so ja. Dara dia mujhey bhi",

laughing at her best friend, Naina gets back to her bed.

On the other hand Pooja sighs in relief after getting the desired result. How much she desires to tell Naina the truth, but she knows it would be better to deal with it herself first, before telling it to Naina. She knows how disturbed and occupied Naina already is! She doesn't want to give her another reason to worry about. Rubbing her hand on Naina's head Pooja bends down and kisses Naina's forehead lovingly, plastering a smile on her face, just for Naina, otherwise smiling for her right now is just unimaginable, when she knows a horrific truth!

*Flashback Ends*

~*~*~*~

"Captain tum ye sub kaise jante ho?",

asks Brigadier Chandok. Smirking, Captain Rajveer continues,

"agli subah jab main ja raha tha, mere accident se theek pehle..."

*Flashback*

Captain Rajveer was getting ready to reach a particular destination, when Pooja comes running to him and knocks the door impatiently.

"Rajveer Sir, Sir please darwaza kholiye",

says Pooja.

Hearing the urgency in Pooja's voice, Captain Rajveer opens the door hurriedly. His expressions justify how worried he is on finding Pooja in that state, terrified.

"Kya hua Cadet Ghai sub theek to hai na? Aap iss tarah mere room mein?"

"Sir, mujhey apse kuch zaruri baat kehni hai"

"Sure Cadet, pehle aap theek se ander aa jayiye room ke",

offers Captain Rajveer.

"Abhi time nahi hai!",

says a worried Pooja.

"Sir, abhi mere phone ka cross-connection, Muchhad ke phone se lag gaya aur...",

in her anxiety she forgets to exchange the word 'Muchhad' with 'Major Nayyer'.

"Ek... Ek minute, 'Mucchad'?",

asks Captain Rajveer, creasing his brows unable to comprehend with her words.

"Mera... mera matlab Major Nayyer... Major Nayyer aur mere phone ka cross-connection lag gaya".

On hearing that she addresses Major Nayyer as'Muchhad', Captain Rajveer smiles a little, but ignores it and focuses on the main issue.

"Sir... Sir wo kuch galat kar rahe hain!"

Now that attracts Captain Rajveer's attention. Creasing his brows, all serious, he asks,

"What do you mean kuch galat kar rahe hain, Cadet Ghai?"

And she tells him what she heard Major Nayyer saying over the phone.
That was indeed alarming for Captain Rajveer. Creasing his brows, thinking, pondering the situation, Captain Rajveer asks Pooja,

"Cadet apne ye baat kisi aur ko to nahi kahi na?"

"Nahi Sir. Naina ko kehna tha par..."

"Par?",

asks Captain Rajveer, turning to look at her.

"Par maine ussey kuch nahi kaha!"

Captain Rajveer takes a sigh of relief as he hears that she hasn't told anything to Naina. Smiling, he says,

"Good! Cadet ye baat sirf apke aur mere beech rahegi am I clear?"

asks Captain Rajveer, turning to face her directly. Cadet Pooja shakes her head twice in a quick succession.

Walking to his left, thinking about the matter, his left hand resting under his right elbow and her index finger touching his chin, Captain Rajveer utters the words,

"Ab iss 'mucchadd' se main deal karunga!"

He realizes what how he has addressed Major Nayyer, only after addressing him! Remembering that he is not alone, he quickly rectifies his word...

"Mera matlab Major Nayyer!"

But it's late, Pooja has already heard him. And is trying to hide her amusement on hearing her not so favorite word from her favorite teacher!

"Ab aap jaiye aur don't forget to act normal!",

smiles Captain Rajveer for two reasons, first, to assure her that everything will be perfectly okay and second, out of embarrassment on addressing his senior in such a way in front of his own student. Whatever it is he would never teach his students to bully a teacher, a senior! Nodding her head twice, Pooja leaves after giving him a concerned look. Smiling, Captain Rajveer reassures her,

"Trust me Cadet, you have done a great job!".

In a state of nervousness and concern, Pooja leaves.

As she leaves, Captain Rajveer brings out his cellphone and dials a number, and says,

"Chaubey, meri baat dhyan se suno..."

*Flashback ends*

"Aur fir maine Chaubey ko apna plan bataya!",

says Captain Rajveer, proudly, with a smile on his face.

"Kaisa plan?",

asks Brigadier Chandok, curious to know the further story. Arching an eyebrow, swirling his chair to the right, he crosses his hands in front of his nose, thinking.

"Plan ye tha ki...",

as he was about to continue, he gets interrupted by the ringing of Brigadier Chandok's phone.

"Excuse me Captain, this is urgent!",

he apologizes, looking at the caller's name. Captain Rajveer shakes his head in an affirmative.

On receiving the call, Brigadier Chandok replies seriously,

"Alright main abhi aata hun!"

Ending the call, he apologizes again to Captain Rajveer,

"Rajveer, kuch delegates aye hain. I'll have to go".

"It's okay Sir, I can understand",

smiles Captain Rajveer.

"Thank you! Tum yahan ruk sakte ho, main jald sub kuch wrap up karke ata hun",

smiles Brigadier Chandok.

"Sure Sir, main kuch der wait karunga, agar mujhey laga ki late ho raha hai, I'll leave",

smiles Captain Rajveer.

"Sure Captain!",

smiles Brigadier Chandok, extending his right hand to him. Accepting it, Captain Rajveer reminds Brigadier Chandok,

"Rajveer! Rajveer... without the prefix! Raj would also be fine!",

smiles Captain Rajveer. Smiling, shaking his head to a negative, Brigadier Chandok leaves.

As Brigadier Chandok leaves, Rajveer sighs and looks heavenwards and says, smiling sarcastically,

"I am sorry Sir, iss kahani ka ek hissa apse chupane ke liye..."

And he remembers Pooja's reply, when he asked her,

"Cadet Singh! Naina! Naina to theek hai na?"

*Flashback*

Shaking her head vigorously, out of utter disbelief, she asks,

"aap dono ka pehla connection humesha ek dusre se hi lagta hai na?",

her voice raised, out of anger, frustration.

"Kya matlab?",

asks Captain Rajveer, creasing his brows, unable to comprehend with her words.

"Heer ko apne Ranjhe ki fikar hai, aur Ranjhe ko apne Heer ki!",

says an utterly pissed off Pooja.

"Heer-Ranjha? What are you talking about Cadet?",

asks Captain Rajveer, frustrated that he is unable to understand her.

"Wait a minute...",

Captain Rajveer points his index finger to her, then getting closer to her, he asks in a hushed voice,

"Kya ye koi code hai? Do you want my help in cracking it or something?"

Listening to this, Pooja roles her eyes and slaps her forehead, uttering curses out of irritation,

"Haye rabba. Such inn teachers ke paas parhai ke alwa aur koi topic nahi hota. Bechari Naina!"

Her last two words succeed in skipping his heartbeat. He fumbles as he asks,

"Kya... kya matlab? What about Naina?"

and lowers his eyes, unable to meet Pooja's eyes as if he has been caught red handed, doing something shameful!

Pooja blushes, shaking her head, seeing him blushed too! Then suddenly she remembers that she has a serious issue in hand to deal with. The sudden remembrance changes her mood anticlockwise. She again becomes tensed and serious and dictates him the whole conversation that she heard between Major Nayyer and the unknown person on the other end of the call!

*Flashback ends*

Smiling, Captain Rajveer closes his eyes and rests his head back.
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago
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