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Updated pg 19 Ch 10 Read from

Ali looks at Pooja quizzically. Understanding his confusion, Pooja smiles and says,

"Usse kuch der akela chor de. Dosti ka farz nibhana sirf saath rehne ko hi nahi kehte. Kabhi kabhi doston ko space dena bhi zaruri hota hai".

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Chapter 11

Blazing with anger, Naina reaches the games room. Thankfully she finds it empty. Getting inside she shouts, but keeping her voice under check.

"Aap aisa kaise kar sakte ho? Apko bilkul farak nahi parhta?"

Taking deep breathes, creasing her brows all the more she blurts out of anger and anxiety,

"Theek hai! Theek hai agar aap aisa chahte ho to yahi sahi!"

She points her index finger to no one in particular, and in anger she challenges,

"Theek hai Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat, agar aap aisa chahte hain, to yahi sahi. Aisa hi hoga!"

~*~*~

Naina reaches her room and finds Pooja's mobile at the corner table. Picking up she logs into messenger. Inside her heart she prays for VIDYAANSH to be online.

And online she finds her. The green light at the corner of VIDYAANSH's name brings a smile on Naina's face.

VIDYAANSH : Hi 😊

RAINAVEEN : Hi 😊

The both of them enter together as if both were desperately waiting to talk to each other. The message of both to each other brings a smile on the faces of both and make their hearts to flutter.

RAINAVEEN : I have something to tell you!

VIDYAANSH : I have something to tell you!

The same words again make the both of them to burst out in laughter.

RAINAVEEN : 😆 😆 😆

VIDYAANSH : 😆 😆 😆

The mirroring of emojis just adds into their fit of laughters.

RAINAVEEN : Sisters are we?

VIDYAANSH : Sisters are we?

None of them types for some moments as they enjoy yet another fit of laughter. This is hilarious! How can they talk exactly the same?

As Naina after getting back to her composure was about to type, she finds her typing, so she waits for her to write first and laughs as she thinks that they otherwise might end up typing same words again!

VIDYAANSH : Alright I wanted to inform you that tomorrow is my joining day, where I have taken admission.

RAINAVEEN : Arey waah ye to bohot khushi ki baat hai, congrats! 👏 👏 👏

VIDYAANSH : Thank you!

RAINAVEEN : And what about your parents? Have they allowed? 😕

VIDYAANSH : 😭 I have decided I'll try one another time and if they don't give permission even now then...

RAINAVEEN : Then????

VIDYAANSH : I would flee away!!! 😭 😭 😭

RAINAVEEN : What? Are you nuts? 😡 😡 😡You are going to do no such thing! That's an order! 😈

VIDYAANSH : Ay! Ay! Captain! 😭 😲

I am indeed going nuts. Just don't know what to do! 😭 😭 😭

RAINAVEEN : Hold on lemme think... 🤔

After a few moments...

RAINAVEEN : If you don't mind, can I call you through this messenger?

Vidya thinks for some moments.

VIDYAANSH : Alright! 😊

RAINAVEEN : Great! 👍🏼

RAINAVEEN calling...

VIDYAANSH receives the call...

"Hello",

says Vidya, smiling.

"Hi",

replies Naina, smiling.

True to their commitment, they don't ask each other's name.

"Ahmm... uncle ya aunty mein se kisi ko phone do",

says Naina.

"Alright hold on..."

Naina senses the doubt and nervousness in her voice.

"Ahmmm... I guess unhe mere barey mein kuch pata nahi hoga. So I would suggest ki tum ek baar unhe jakar bol do mere barey mein",

suggests Naina, smiling.

"Alright!",

smiling, feeling a bit relaxed, Vidya leaves for her parents' room.

After some moments...

"Alright they are here!",

saying that she alerts Naina.

"Hello. Namaste aunty. Namaste uncle"

"Namaste beta",

they smile a little, but their smiles don't touch their eyes.

"Ahmmm... dekhiye waise to mujhey apke personal matter mein bolne ka koi haq nahi hai. Par apki beti ko main jitna bhi samjh payi hun, I believe wo ek determined ladki hai. And you should feel proud about her".

"Mujhey aisa bilkul feel nahi hua ke wo bina kuch thaney iss decision par ayi hai ke usse kya karna hai. Aur uncle pata nahi kyun, mujhey shuru se isse ek connectivity ki feeling aa rahi hai. Waise to mujhse achi tarah aap apni beti ko jante honge, par uncle mujhey aisa laga ke agar aap isse ek mauka denge, to shayad ye wo kar dikhaye jo apki khwahish to hai, par aap bolne se darr rahe hain".

"Beta humein iski salamati; iski khushi ki chinta hai",

says Vidya's father.

"To apko kya lagta hai uncle, agar isne wo nahi kiya jo ye karna chahti hai, to kya ye khush rahegi?",

asks Naina.

"Nahi uncle. Baat chahey ye maan bhi le. Apke mana karne par ye wo na kare jo ye karna chahti hai, aur apke paas yahan reh jaye. Par kya wo khush reh payegi? Har pal kudeygi wo. Aur wo chahey wo sehn kar bhi le, par kya aap dekh payenge usse roz kud-kud kar jeete hue?"

"Aap jante hain uncle, subse zyada frustration kis baat se hoti hai? Jab aap jante ho ki aap kuch kar sakte ho, par apke haath baandh diye jaye! Wo dard; wo gussa, bardasht se bahar hota hai. Uncle aap jab tak uski baat to sunenge nahi; samjhne ki koshish nahi karenge, uske point of view se tab tak apko uski achayi kaise dikhegi? Gusse mein akar ek conclusion mein aa jana, ye to kisi baat ka sahi solution nahi hota na uncle? In fact I believe hum gusse mein aakar normally galat decision lete hain!"

A chill runs down Naina's spine as she ends up with saying this. What she is doing with Rajveer, isn't it the same? How can she get into a conclusion without listening to him completely, patiently? Trust and faith are the keys to any successful relationship. Where are these keys lying between Rajveer and Naina?

Clearing her throat, she clears her mind as well. She can dwell into this topic later, she has a situation in hand to control.

"Aur apki beti ki salamati ka waada main apse karti hun!",

promises Naina, smiling.

"Tum? Tum kaise?",

asks Vidya's father, creasing his brows out of confusion. Her mother and Vidya knit their brows too.

Smiling, Naina says,

"Main iske contact mein rahungi na. Agar kahin kuch galat kiya isne to purey haq se dant lagaungi!"

The Saxena family laugh together. Naina follows the suit, listening to their laughter.

"Par mujhey pura yakeen hai, ki apki beti ko kabhi kisi ke help ki zarurat nhi padegi. Par haan agar ye kabhi bhi dagmagaye, to main iska haath thamne ke liye humesha rahungi",

smiles Naina.

Vidya blushes at Naina's comment. Her heart swells with love for Naina.

Satisfied by Naina's words, Vidya's mother says, smiling,

"Theek hai beta, mujhey iska to nahi pata par mujhey tum par bharosa hai. To isko main tumhare bharose chor rahi hun".

"Apne mujh par bharosa kiya ye mere liye bohot badi baat hai aunty. Main waada karti hun, main apka bharosa kabhi nahi todungi",

smiles Naina.

Vidya smiles too with her parents.

The sudden change in the atmosphere from happiness to emotional, Vidya takes the initiative to change it,

"Arey waah yani mujh par koi bharosa nahi karta yahan?",

she asks to her parents.

Her parents along with Naina, burst out into another fit of laughter. Vidya follows it. Vidya's mother kisses her on her forehead.

"God bless you!",

blesses her mother.

Vidya's father places his hand on her head and blesses her.

"Awww...",

says Naina, lovingly as she hears the exchange.

"Khush raho tum bhi beta. Bhagwan tumhari har manokamna puri karey. Tumhe ek acha jeevansaathi miley",

blesses Vidya's mother to Naina.

Naina's heart skips a beat as she hears Vidya's mother's last wish. She lowers her eyes out of shyness. She doesn't understand why, the moment Vidya's mother uttered those words did Rajveer come to her mind, without any effort!

After enjoying her moment of bliss, she says, blushing,

"Ahmm... thank you aunty-uncle"

"Chalo beta ab tum apni dost se baat karo, hum chalte hain",

says Vidya's mother.

Vidya's parents leave for their room with a heart filled with satisfaction and happiness. Vidya closes the door behind them.

Returning back to the voice call, she says out of excitement,

"Can I shout???"

Her sudden question surprises Naina and she bursts out into a fit of laughter.

"Of course if you wish!",

replies Naina, laughing again at Vidya's sweetness.

"Aaa... I am jumping!",

shouts Vidya.

Both of them enjoy their moments filled with laughter.

"Thank you sooo muchhh!!!! I can't even begin to explain my excitement. I mean you did it girl. I didn't know when I decided to join this course that there would be a new entry in my life who would manage to convince parents. I am on cloud 10!!!",

says Vidya out of excitement.

"Hahaha!! Cloud 10?? Now what was that?? I have only heard about Cloud 9! Hahaha!!",

says Naina, laughing.

"Ohho 10 ko bhi kyun chorein?? If there is something beyond 9, then I am surely there right now. Because this mission looked almost impossible to me!"

"And someone was talking about fleeing away?"

"Oh yeah! Now I won't have to flee. That's a relief! Hahaha!!!"

"Hahaha!!! If you have any other problem feel free to share don't try opting for wrong roads, walk on the right ones",

advises Naina.

"Surely. Thank you so much!",

smiles Vidya, apologetically.


VIDYAANSH : Alright so we have solved my problem, thanks to you. 😳 Now let's discuss about yours. What was it that you were suppose to tell me?

RAINAVEEN : Oh! Well it is like... how to say... See I am happy about someone's return but I am confused about something!

Naina tries to put her feelings into words.

VIDYAANSH : Okayyy!!! And you are unable to talk to that person, is it?

RAINAVEEN : Yeahh...

Naina feels embarrassed.

VIDYAANSH : I can't believe this! 🥱

RAINAVEEN : What?

VIDYAANSH : Just now you, without even knowing my parents personally, managed to convince them so amazingly and now when it has come upon yourself, you are nervous and unable to understand what to do?

Naina blushes on Vidya's reply.

RAINAVEEN : Just for your info, I am blushing 😆 😆 😆

VIDYAANSH : 😆 😆 😆
Alright getting serious, see just go to that person and let your heart do the talking. Don't hesitate or feel embarrassed about anything. If you are angry - shout; if you are happy - hug; if you are unable to control your overflowing emotions... - KISS!

Holy hell! What is she talking about? Here she is not even able to talk to Rajveer, there her friend wants her to... to... to... NO!!!!! This is so not going to happen! Jeez! She can't even bring herself to think about it, let alone doing it!

RAINAVEEN : What??? Seriously!!! This is so not going to happen!

Naina rolls her eyes out of shyness

VIDYANSH : Why? Are you scared of him, that you can't shout at him? 😉

Naina thinks about the possibility. Why? Why would she be scared of him? Of course not!

(Slow Rajveer-Naina guitar tune begins)

RAINAVEEN : No, I am not! 😡

VIDYAANSH :😆 😆 😆Acha baba just kidding!

Her reply makes Naina to blush.

VIDYANSH : Okay so may be angry?

RAINAVEEN : No!

'Oh god, why did I say that? Of course I am angry at him... I mean... no... yes... goshhh...',

thinks Naina.

VIDYANSH : Woh!!! That was quick. Okay one thing I am certain about is that, that you are not angry at him! 😉

RAINAVEEN : Of course I am angry at him. Do you even know what did he do?

VIDYAANSH : What did he do? 😛 Trust me I am curious here, to know.😉

Naina shakes her head smiling, blushing, shutting her eyes out of shyness.

VIDYAANSH : Alright that's fine if you don't wanna share 😉

'No... I mean...',

thinks Naina.

Blushing, she chooses to let go off this part.

VIDYAANSH : So are you happy about something related to him?

RAINAVEEN : You think? 🤢

VIDYAANSH : Oh yeah! 😉

RAINAVEEN : Seriously? 😲 And what gave you that impression?

VIDYAANSH : Trust me, your each and every word! 😆 😉 😛

Naina blushes further. Was it that clear?

What the hell! What is she thinking about?

RAINAVEEN : Can we change this topic as well?

VIDYAANSH : Well I have already ended the topic as you have already given the answer. 😉

RAINAVEEN : Oh god, you are thinking way too much! 🤓

VIDYAANSH : 😆 😆 😆Alright listen, trying talking to him as soon as possible. Remember, a matter can be sorted out only if talked clearly.

RAINAVEEN : I can't promise you about doing the same, but will surely think about it. Trust me right now I am in no mood to talk. I am thoroughly pissed off! 😡 🤬 🥺

VIDYAANSH : That bad? Fine then I would suggest to think calmly and do what is best for the situation. 😊 If you need any kinda help, know that I am always here to help you. 😳❤️

RAINAVEEN : I know 😳 🤗 It's just that I wanna shout. It's becoming unbearable for me. 😭 😳

VIDYAANSH : Shout as much as you like but kisi ke samne nahi. Akele mein! 😊 Sometimes it's very relaxing.

👍🏼

RAINAVEEN : Oh thank you so much for understanding. 😊 Trust me it means a lot to me. 😊

VIDYAANSH : No problem! 😊

RAINAVEEN : Alright I'll take your leave now. 😊

VIDYAANSH : Sure 😊

VIDYAANSH : Hey I might not be able to come online henceforth on regular basis. But feel free to drop your messages whenever you feel like. I shall reply as soon as I get time to come online. Alright? 😊

RAINAVEEN : Alright. No problem 😊

VIDYAANSH : Alright. Take care then. See ya! Talk to you, hopefully soon. 😊

RAINAVEEN : Alright. Enjoy your packing and your work. All the best for your new journey! 👍🏼

VIDYAANSH : Thank you so much. Bubyee 😳❤️

RAINAVEEN : But do try to come online often, as I have promised aunty that I shall make sure about your well being 😊 I really meant it, when I said that. 😳

VIDYAANSH : Awww... thank you so much. 😳❤️ Will sure stay in touch, as often as possible. 😊

RAINAVEEN : Bubyee 😊

VIDYAANSH : Bubyee 😊

~*~*~

Brigadier Chandok sends an orderly for Alekh. On getting the call Alekh walks towards Brigadier Chandok's cabin.

As he crosses from in front of the left corridor, someone slips and was about to reach the ground with a thud, that Alekh holds her right at the correct moment. Her heart skips a beat as she slips. Skips another as Alekh's strong hands hold her. Skips third as they enjoy an eye contact.

(Alekh's background tune begins as they stare each other)

Acting to be irritated, Alekh looks away. But knowing his nature perfectly, the girl places her left hand on his right cheek and forces him to look towards her. Look towards her, he does.

"Kyun be shaney, aadat ho gayi hai kya mujhey girane ki?",

she asks him, smirking.

Her words reminds Alekh about the day when he was punished and had turned into an orderly and she slipped while he was mopping the floor.

"Girane ki nahi bachane ki. Girti tu rehti hai, phokat mein apun ka waqt bhi barbad karti hai!",

Alekh looks away, showing his irritation, still holding Neelu.

"Haye agar tu aise bachata rahega, to main baar baar girne ko taiyar hun",

sighs Neelu, smiling, embracing him by his neck.

"Ho gayi teri nautanki shuru. Chal jaldi uth apun ko kaam karna hai. Teri tarah vella nahi hai apun",

says Alekh.

Getting back to her normal position, Neelu again embraces Alekh by her neck.

"Haye main to velli hun humesha tere liye mere hero. How I desire to spend my whole life with you Alekh!"

Speaking in English, out of habit, she begins to explain in Hindi.

"Mera matlab..."

But Alekh stops her,

"Apun ko pata hai. Boley to itni angrezi samjh aati hai!"

Neelu smiles, lovingly. Alekh notices that she has turned serious suddenly.

"Kya hua? Teri battery kyun down ho gayi?",

he asks her.

"Tujhse kuch baat karni hai",

says Neelu, thinking about something.

"Abhi apun ko Brigadier Chandok ke office mein jana hai. Unhone bulaya hai. Baad mein baat karey apun to chalega?",

asks Alekh.

Smiling, Neelu assures,

"Chalega. Par baat kar liyo!"

Smiling, Alekh says,

"Theek hai. Ab apun chaley?"

"Haan!"

"Aur ek baat...",

interrupts Neelu, as Alekh walks a step. Alekh turns to look at her, to know what she wants to say.

"Hans liya kar kabhi kabhi. Acha lagta hai tu hanste hue!",

smiles Neelu.

Alekh smiles too, enjoying an eye contact with Neelu.

(Alekh's background tune begins)

Smiling for the last time, Alekh turns to leave for Brigadier Chandok's cabin.

~*~*~

Neelu leaves in search of Yudi and finds him in the mess.

"Hi bro!",

she greets him.

"Hey! Kaisi ho?",

smiles Yudi but his smile doesn't touch his eyes.

"Theek hun bro. Aap kaise ho?",

she asks, doubting.

"Yeah I am fine!",

Yudi gives a fake smile.

"Fine? Apko dekh kar to nahi lag raha ke aap fine ho?"

"Oh come on Neelu, I said I am fine. Ab har baat bataun ye zaruri to nahi na?",

shouts Yudi.

Neelu hasn't seen him shouting at her ever. There has to be something messy in his life, which he is not sharing with her. But gauging his reaction, Neelu could make out that he is in no mood to listen to any nonsense. He won't take the pity words from her. So she chooses to show that she has let go of the topic. And focuses back on her issue.

"Cool! Agar nahi batana so it's okay. Anyways I am here to discuss with you, something important... about Alekh!",

she says, gauging his reactions after announcing the subject that she is looking forward to discuss with him.

He creases his brows, looking towards Neelu.

"Alekh? What about him?",

he asks, doubtedly.

"Don't tell me you guys are planning about getting married or something",

says Yudi, suspiciously.

Then something comes into his mind and he widens his eyes,

"Or worse, you guys have already got married???"

"What rubbish bro!",

shouts Neelu.

Her shouts instead of irking Yudi, relaxes him, as it ensures him that everything is under control.

"Sorry! Acha anyways batao kya bol rahi thi tum?"

"Leave it. Main kisi aur se baat kar leti hun",

saying that she turns to leave that Yudi holds her hand.

"Hey sis please. I said I am sorry!",

apologizes Yudi, earnestly.

Neelu turns to look at him, feeling that he is upset about something, she chooses to forgive him and sits down.

Taking a deep breath, Neelu looks towards him and says,

"I know bro there something that's disturbing you. And I know this too that you want to share it with someone but you are unable to do that. I know that you trust me too. But what I am unable to understand is why is it taking you this much time to share it with me? Just spill the beans, man!"

Smiling, Yudi looks towards his sister.

"Sis, it's just that... I wanna help someone. Help someone to get out of a relationship that that person doesn't desire to continue. I am unable to understand what is it that that person is unable to let go of the bond?"

Smiling lovingly, Neelu asks him,

"Bro, pehle kya tum ye janna chahoge ke main tumse Alekh ke barey mein kya bolna chahti thi?"

Yudi understands that there is something important, or else she can never give preference to her subject than his. It's unlike Neelu. So there has to be something!

"Bolo!",

says Yudi, all alert.

"Bro, main Alekh se pyar karti hun. Ye baat kisi se chupi nahi hai. Akash aur mere beech jo kuch bhi hua, sub janne ke baad bhi Alekh had been very supportive. Mujhey ussi dauran ye ehsaas ho gaya tha ki Alekh se acha insaan mujhey koi nahi mil sakta! I desired to be with him since then! I still desire to be with him, till eternity!"

Yudi takes a deep breath, as frustration surges through him.

"Sis...",

he begins to speak only to get interrupted by Neelu.

"Bro please! Main bhaley hi jitni marzi ye baat show kar dun ki mujhey kisi se darr nahi lagta; kisi se farak nahi parhta, but the truth is mujhey apke aur Mom-Dad ke soch se bohot farak parhta hai. I mean how can it be possible ki mujh par aap logo ki soch ka asar na ho? You guys are my family god dammit!",

says a frustrated Neelu.

"Abhi bohot mushkil se, himmat juta kar baat kar rahi hun tumse. I know I am calling a trouble for myself, but I won't give up. This is about my life, my love! So please ek baar mujhey jo bolna hai bol lene do. I request!",

pleads Neelu.

Yudi grants her wish.

"Par saath hi saath mujhey meri aap logo ke towards apni responsibility ka bhi ehsaas hai. I won't let anyone of you down",

she tells him earnestly.

"I know bro ki Alekh mein bohot kamiyan hain. But trust me bro wo kamiyan uski achayi ke mukable kuch bhi nahi hai!",

pleads Neelu.

"Tell me something bro, agar itna hi bura hai wo to aap uske dost kyun hain?"

Her question makes Yudi to look towards her as he realizes that she is not wrong. She asked a worthy question to him. Yudi lowers his eyes out of embarrassment, without answering Neelu.

Smiling, Neelu says,

"Main janti hun bro, aap mujhey lekar bohot possessive ho. Mere liye best ladka chahte ho. But trust me for once bro ke Alekh hi wo best ladka hai jisko aap aur Mom-Dad dhundh rahe hain mere liye".

"Bro abhi apne kaha ki you want to help someone out to get out of a relationship that person doesn't desire to be in, right?",

asks Neelu.

Yudi looks towards Neelu, silently, waiting for her to proceed.

"Aaj agar aap logo ne zabardasti mera rishta kisi aur ke saath kara diya, to kal yahi baat aap mere liye kisi aur ko keh rahe hoge!",

says Neelu, firmly, as a matter of fact.

This skips Yudi's heartbeat.

"Anyways my main point doesn't lie here. Bro jis tarah se aap logo ne koshish ki hai Alekh ko sudharne ki; jiske wajah se Alekh jo bhi aaj hai, wo hai! Main bhi Alekh ke liye kuch karna chahti hun. Par uske liye mujhey apki, aur apke doston ki madad chahiye!",

requests Neelu.

"Bro main Alekh ko puri tarah nahi badal paungi main janti hun, it's just next to impossible! And truth be told main chahti bhi nahi ke Alekh puri tarah badle, kyunki agar wo puri tarah badal gaya, to shayad mera pyar uske liye khatam ho jaye. Mujhey yahi Alekh chahiye par han kuch badlaw laney hain, uske khud ke liye! Taki kabhi koi uska mazak na uda paye!",

says a determined Neelu.

"Neelu tum kya bol rahi ho, mujhey kuch samjh nahi aa raha!",

says a confused Yudi.

"I'll explain...",

saying that Neelu whispers her plan into Yudi's ear.

At first Yudi's brows remain knitted as he tries to understand her plan, gradually his brows relax as she proceeds with the plan. And a big smile stretches on Yudi's lips.

"You are the best sis!",

says an excited Yudi, giving Neelu a high five!

~*~*~

Alekh knocks the door of Brigadier Chandok's cabin, hesitantly. He fails to understand what could be the possible reason that Brigadier Chandok called him!

"Kya apun ander aa sakta hai Sir?",

asks Alekh.

Brigadier Chandok looks towards Alekh. Smiling, he permits him to get in. This skips Alekh's heartbeat. Instead of getting into the cabin his feet freeze at it's place.

'Zarur koi solid locha hai! Warna Mogambo apun ko dekh kar itna hansta kyun?',

thinks Alekh, looking towards Brigadier Chandok, suspiciously.

As he begins to enter, he hears a song playing somewhere in the academy. By the lyrics of it, he gets assured that it's Ali, who is listening to it.

In his given state, Alekh realizes that the lyrics of the song is so apt! At this moment more than Ali, he could feel the depth of the lyrics of the song...

Aani-jaani hai kahani,
bulbule si zindagani.
Banti kabhi bigadti,
tez hawa se ladti-bhidti.

At this moment, he thinks about - what could possibly be the reason that he has been called by Brigadier Chandok. What mistake has he committed now?

Ha reham ha reham,
farma aye khuda.
Ha reham ha reham,
farma aye khuda.

He prays to god for helping him, in case he is about to get scolded by Brigadier Chandok, for some reason unknown to him right now.

Mehfuz har kadam,
karna aye khuda aye khuda.
Mehfuz har kadam,
karna aye khuda aye khuda.

Allah...

(Tune)

He prays to keep him safe and his anger under control in front of Brigadier Chandok.

Saanson ki surti,
dor anoothi.
Jal jaayegi,
jal jaayegi.


How would he face his friends thereafter? He doesn't care about others but what his five friends would think about him! Will they stay by his side even after this thrashing he is about to get from Brigadier Chandok? Hell, what is he thinking about? They are his friends; his family, why would they leave his side anyways?

Band jo laye the,
haath ki muthi.
Khul jaayegi,
khul jaayegi.

Out of nervousness and anxiety, he opens and closes his right hand into fist, in order to keep himself calm in front of Brigadier Chandok.

Kya khumar karey kaya ye ujli,
Mitti mein mil jaayegi.
Chaahe jitni shamayein roshan karle,
Dhoop dhal jaayegi, jaayegi.

The words 'mitti mein mil jayegi' make him to think - 'aj agar kisi baat par Brigadier Chandok ne bezati kar di, to apun ki thodi-bohot jitni bhi izzat karte hain ye log, sub mitti mein mil jani hai! Saala samjh nahi aa raha, apun ko darr kayeko lag raha hai?'

Ha reham ha reham,
farma aye khuda
Ha reham ha reham,
farma aye khuda

Mehfuz har kadam
Karna aye khuda aye khuda
Mehfuz har kadam
Karna aye khuda aye khuda

He looks heavenwards and prays for his safety.

(Instrumental Break)

Kya mazaal teri marzi ke aagey ,
bandoo ki chal jaayegi.
Taane ungli jo qatputli ki,
chaal badal jaayegi jaayegi.

He knows, how hard he tries, he cannot escape this situation. God has already written this script in the book of his life. All he can do now is face the decision of god!

Ha reham ha reham,
farma aye khuda
Ha reham ha reham,
farma aye khuda.

Mehfuz har kadam,
Karna aye khuda aye khuda.
Mehfuz har kadam,
Karna aye khuda aye khuda.

Praying for the last time, he looks towards Brigadier Chandok, like a true soldier, ready for a war that would decide his fate.

Haa reham haa reham allah
Haa reham haa reham allah
Haa reham haa reham allah
Haa reham haa reham allah

With these lines as the background tune, Alekh, with a determination in his eyes, walks into Brigadier Chandok's cabin.

"Baitho Cadet Alekh",

asks Brigadier Chandok, smiling.

"Nahi... apun theek hai Sir",

says Alekh, out of nervousness.

"Arey please baitho, I request",

smiles Brigadier Chandok.

A request from Brigadier Chandok? That too addressed to Alekh? What is he up to? Nevertheless, Alekh nervously, doubting Brigadier Chandok's motive, takes his seat in front of him.

"Cadet, main tumse ek favour chahta hun! Ahmm... ehsaan!",

says Brigadier Chandok, smiling.

First he was polite, smiling and now a favour? What else is coming Alekh's way? Wonders Alekh!
"Boley to apko apun se ehsaan mangne ki kya zarurat hai? Bus order dijiye. Pehle bhi to apun jab orderly tha, sub order hi dete the!",
Alekh doesn't understand why he said this but right now he is shell nervous. His heart indicated him to say these words so he said without pondering before speaking!
His words soften the eyes of Brigadier Chandok. Smiling, he says,
"Cadet Alekh, mere liye yahan ka ek ordinary orderly se le kar high ranked officers tak sub ek jaise hain. Agar main subko ek jaisa dant sakta hun, to subko galey bhi laga sakta hun. Chahey wo ek ordinary orderly hi kyun na ho! To aaj keh diya hai, ainda mere samne ranks ki baat bilkul mat karna samjhey tum?"
His stern voice, makes Alekh to feel guilty for saying those previously uttered words. But his words bring a small smile on Alekh's face.
Smiling, Brigadier Chandok says,
"Khair..."
He brings out few papers from a file kept on his desk, at the left of his left hand and forwards it in front of Alekh. Alekh creases his brows, confused. What could they be? Are they his termination letters? What has he done exactly that they are throwing them out of the academy? Alekh's throat goes dry out of nervousness. He desperately misses his medicine! Nervously he takes the papers.
He discovers that it's written in English. Giving back the papers to him, Alekh says,
"Apun ko angrezi nahi aati!"
"Ohhhooo ab ye kaam tum kaise karoge Alekh?",
asks Brigadier Chandok, concerned.
Alekh looks towards Brigadier Chandok and gives him a puzzled look. How can he forget that Alekh doesn't know English? Everyone in the academy knows about it! Or is it that he has called him on purpose, to humiliate him? The thought really hurts Alekh because whatever it is he really respects Brigadier Chandok.
"Aap ek kaam karo aap ye kaam Yudi ko de do. Yudi ki angrezi boley to bilkul hawayijahaz mafik hai!",
suggests Alekh, genuinely happy that Yudi is going to get a responsibility from Brigadier Chandok.
"Nahi cadet ye kaam karna to tumhe hi hoga. Maine ek baar keh diya to ab main apni kahi hui baat se peechey nahi hatne wala!",
says Brigadier Chandok, sternly.
Unable to believe his words. Alekh in a state of shock, points towards Brigadier Chandok, with his palm indicated horizontally towards him. And before he could control his feelings, he blurts out,
"Yede ho gaye ho kya aap?"
This comes as a shock not only for Brigadier Chandok but for Alekh as well!
"Kya?",
asks Brigadier Chandok, raising his voice out of anger.
"Apun... apun ka matlab...",
Alekh gets nervous. He didn't mean what he said. It was a blooper.
Gulping his saliva out of nervousness,
he asks nervously,
"Apun... apun ka matlab... apun kaise kar sakta hai ye jab apun ko angrezi hi nahi aati?"
"Cadet sochlo tum ek mission par ho aur tumhare samne ek situation aa jaye jisse tumne kabhi pehle deal na kiya ho. To kya tum ek kayar ki tarah bhaag kar aa jaoge? Aur mujhse aa kar ye kahoge ke tum dar gaye kyunki tumne wo situation pehle kabhi face nahi kiya tha?",
asks Brigadier Chandok, sternly.
"Darta nahi hai apun kisi halaat se!",
comes Alekh's immediate reply.

"Good! Darna bhi mat warna academy wapas jab aoge to tumhare swagat ke liye mere haathon mein phool nahi, rifle hoga!",

warns Brigadier Chandok, sternly.

Alekh's heartbeat picks up pace as he visualize the scene when he would be returning back, failing in a mission and Brigadier Chandok would first shoot on him his angry glares, followed by the bullet in his rifle!

Getting out of his daze he looks back towards Brigadier Chandok.

"Par ab apun ye kaam karega kaise jab apun ko angrezi hi nahi aati?",

asks Alekh, creasing his brows, unable to understand what can he do about it!

"To seekho. Tumhare dost-dushman sub hain iss academy mein!",

says Brigadier Chandok, raising his voice.

The word 'dushman' succeeds in skipping the heartbeat of Alekh.

"Jisse marzi seekho. Mujhey bus itna pata hai ke mujhey ye kaam chahiye, by hook or by crook! Aur wo bhi tumhi se chahiye!",

declares Brigadier Chandok.

"You may leave now!",

declares Brigadier Chandok.

"Yes Sir!",

replies Alekh, grinding his teeth, glaring Brigadier Chandok, while Brigadier Chandok indulges himself into reading a file.

~*~*~

In infirmary

"Anyways meri baat abhi choriye. I am worried about you!",

says Rajveer.

"And I about you!",

replies Dr. Shalini, instantly.

"Ek minute Captain. Kahin aap ye to nahi bolna chahte ki ek mard akele zindagi jee sakta hai. Lekin ek aurat nahi? Are you being biased here?",

asks Dr. Shalini, knitting her brows.


"What? Dr. Shalini please! Do you really think main uss type ka insaan hun jo aurton ko kamzor samjhta ho?",

he asks, disappointed that Dr. Shalini dared to think about him, that way.

"What? Dr. Shalini please! Do you really think main uss type ka insaan hun jo aurton ko kamzor samjhta ho?",

he asks, disappointed that Dr. Shalini dared to think about him, that way.

"Haan apki choice dekh kar waise bhi samjh aata hai ke apko strong woman hi pasand hai!",

mummers Dr. Shalini under her breath.

"What?",

asks Raj, narrowing his eyes on her.

"Nahi... nahi maine kya bola... kuch bhi nahi!",

says Dr. Shalini, avoiding looking directly towards Raj.

"Hmmm...!",

says Raj, looking towards her sternly. Giving her a knowing look.

"So main ye bol raha tha ke Dr. Shalini mujhey apse ek waada chahiye!",

says Raj.


Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago
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Awesome update
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