Prem-Mukti===Kasautii Zindagii

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys,

I am starting this new fan-fic for all the fans of KZK,
This is my first try, hope u like it,

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok, so here's the first one,(No posts for encouragements 😭 )

First Episode

I'll start from where Prem is holding Mukti's dupata, and suddenly looses it's grip and the dupata gently flows and is placed on Deviti's head. Prem tries to find where the dupata is, he sees it on some girl's head. She has her back to him. He walks towards her, without uttering a word, he silently takes the dupata. Deviti is amazed at the behaviour of this stranger.She is forced to look at him.As she is turning, we can see this weird expression that she has, which is impossible to read. She sees prem and tears start flowing down her face. Prem who hadn't uttered a word since Mukti died, silently says "Mukti". Kabhi Na Sukkon Aya is played in the back,
Mukti: (she wipes her tears) Aap ko koi ghalatfami hui hai, hamara naam Mukti nahin Deviti hai,
And without another word she walks away,
Prem tries to get hold of her dupat but instead falls on the ground.
Prerna sees him on the ground, she immediately comes, she sees the dupata and thinks that it has sth to do with Mukti yaadien.

EPISODE END!,

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ,
Write your comments and tell if i should continue or not,
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Posted: 18 years ago
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GR8, MINDBLASTING, MINDBLOWING part.......AWESOME PART........U SHLD WITHOUT ANY OFFENCE CONTINUE I AM FOR SURE THERE TO COMMENT AND ENCOURAGE U!!!!



CONT SOOOOON




Saraa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i m also a fan mukti and prem, since she died i stopped watching kzk and cab;t bear to c prem's conidtion like that. anyways nice prt 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#5
2 GR8 PPL, 😃 😃
2 GR8 Posts, 😃 😃
but i intend to see more,
Anyway, i'll post the next episode as soon as i have typed it,
sometime today,
maybe,


CoolTareen_123 (Rida)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i like where this is going... i wonder wats up.. im sure as hel that is mukti.. now only if ekta did it this way or anyway as long as deviki turns out to be mukti sooooooooooonn
sry had to vent some of my frusterationn.. great partt
continue sooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
Episode 2
Scene 1

Recap: Prem meets Deviti( Mukti look-alike)

Some changes have been made,
Wherever there is sth new I'll add it in the bracket *( )

*(I forgot to add Prem and Prerna are in Panchmeshmar)

Next day Prena goes out to all the places wherever there are beautifull yadien of Mr Bajaj and her, *(There is no misunderstanding between them, she just came her on the hope that maybe Prem would get better). Kasautii Zindagii Tittle song is played in the back.
Than the scene shifts to a girl, wearing a rajistani lehnga and jewelry, her face is not shown, just the dressing. Prena is lost in her own thoughts, not aware of the fact that she is about to walk into the girl. She bumps into the girl, and the basket that the girl is holding falls and so does the fruits which are in the basket.
Prena comes back to her senses and helps the girl to pick up the fruits. They both rose to their feet, and only than Prena realize that the girl is none other than her own Mukti.
They are both looking at each other with amazed and scared looks.
Prena: "Mukti"
Deviti takes a step backward. Prena moves forward.
Deviti: " Hum mutki nahin deviti hain. Aap ko koi ghaltfami hui hai"
Prena is stunned. Before Prena could stop her, she runs away.
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Scene 2
Three days later Prena takes Prem to the hospital. Prem is having the checkup while Prena goes to get the medicines from the medical store. There she sees the same girl who had told her name Deviti talking to a nurse. As soon as deviti left Prena walked over to the nurse.
Prena: "kia aap is larki ko janti hain"
Nurse: "Ji haan, meri dost hai"
Prena: "kia aap ko pata hai yeh kahan rehti hai, is ke
maan baap kon hain"
Nurse: "Ji haan pata hai, yeh mere ghar ke paas hi
rehti hai, apne baba ke saath"
Prena: "Kia aap mujhe is ka naam bata sakti hain,"
Nurse gives her a funny look,
Prena: "Dekhiye mujhe lagta hai, mein is ko janti hoon,
Plz aap mujhe bata dien"
Nurse: "Theek hai, is ka naam Mukti hai, Mukti Deshmuk"

Prena is STUNNED!

Prena: "Kia….aap..mujhe us ke paas…le jaen gi…I
mean….mein us se milna chahti hoon"
Nurse: "Ji, agar aap use janti hain, to mein aap
ko us se zaroor mila doon gi. Meri duty
Khatam hone mein abhi 2 ghante rehte hain,
aap chahien to us ke baad
mein aap ko Mukti ke paas le jaon gi"
Prena: (Smiling) "Thankyou, thankyou very much, mein
aap ko 2 ghante mein yahin milti hoon"

Prena takes Prem home and leaves him there with a care-taker.

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I hope u enjoyed this.

Ppl i'm telling u if i don't see any more comments, I'll stop writing,
Plz do comment and if u have any suggestions or want me to write on any topic, don't hesitate,
PLZ DO TELL,

CoolTareen_123
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, i really like ur fanfic!continue sn!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#9
nice ff 👏 👏 👏 plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#10
😃 😃

THANKYOU

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