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@CoolTareen_123

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Rida

@CoolTareen_123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

Now i am starting to think ke u ppl don't like my fan-fic, 😭

Anyway,
even if that's the case,
plz do comment,

Episode 2
Scene 1

2 hrs later, prena and the nurse are outside a small house(makan). They knock on the door.
Mukti's voice can be heard,

Mukti: "Kon hai"

Nurse: "Mein hoon yaar, Bhumi"

Mukti opens the door not expecting wht is out there,

Mukti:(looking at Prena) "Ji aap"
She said in a scared voice,

Prena: "haan mein"

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Scene 2

Prena: "Yehi hai na Mukti"

Bhomi: "Ji yehi to hai"

Prena thanked Bhomi and she left

Prena: "To Mukti Deshmuk zinda hai, yahan panchmeshmar mein hai, aur udhar Mumbai mein mera beta Prem, teri moot ki khabar sun kar kudh mar gaya"

Prem ki moot ki khabar sun kar Mukti drops the glass of milk she is holding,

Mukti:(now in tears) "Pr…prem…mera..prem"

Prena: :Haan! Mar gaya tera prem! mar gaya tera beta…who hum sab ko chor kar kahin chala gaya….chala gaya mera Prem"

Mukti: ' Naaaaahin! Jhoot bol rahi hain aap, Who zinda hai, Who mujhe chor kar nahin ja sakta, Who….maine…..kudh use…."

Prena: "Maine kudh use kia Mukti…To jana chahgi who kaise mara….to ne mara use….to use chor kar chali gayi….is liye who hamien chor kar chala gaya………"

Mukti and Prena are both crying

Prena: "Lakin who wapis aye ga,….zarror aye ga,….aur use wapis laye gi tu Mukti,….To ne mara na use,…is liye ab to hi use zinda kare gi"

Mukti: "Lakin aap ne to kaha ke Prem"

Prena: "Maine sach hi kaha tha, prem ek zinda lash ban kar reh gaya hai. Na kissi se baat karta hai, Kuch bhi to nahin karta hai who, Yahan tak ke tumhare liye rota bhi nahin hai,
Aur is sab ki zimedar ho tum mukti, sirf tum, Kyun kia tum ne aesa mukti,…KYUN"

Mukti is standing still, just staring at Prena,

Prena: "KYUN MUKTI!, KYUN"

Mukti: "Maine prem ko mara nahin us ki jaan bachai hai,"

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Sorry, for leaving u guys in suspense, 😆 😉
Anyway,
plz do comment, 😡 😡 😡
even if u don't like it, 😭 😭 😭
atleast tell, 😊 😊 😊

CoolTareen_123 (Rida)