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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

awesome collection...⭐️⭐️⭐️...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

its there under rishbala works

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
Erm...I think there is no link for My villain

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pavinitishiv

@pavinitishiv

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Any rangrasiya parud stories please post link

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pavinitishiv

@pavinitishiv

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

RR parud stories please post link

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Fantastic index Jasmine😊

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ixray

@ixray

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

I found your story "Hum Saath Saath Hai " on tellytube and then traced you to here via Googleji.

You have beautiful stories, though i am partial to IPKKND ones only.

Finished reading Hum Saath Saath Hai . The topic is closed but i still wanted to compliment you on it.

Totally loved it , specially the twist with mom being blackmailed.

Whilst reading i was like oh she made Shyam a baddie too ! but again you had a twist there too. ⭐️...

The movie is a personal favorite of mine. I loved the family bent the movie has, and which makes me shed a tear everytime I see or hear the songs.

As i was reading i was like Akash or Akshay Dogra physically resembles Mohnish Behl a lot .

I hope in future you will write another version of HSSH , where Arnav is the older brother.

Are you on Wattpad too ?

thank you for a wonderful story.

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ixray

@ixray

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

I read Pyaar to Hona hi Tha Season 2 .

I wasn't much interested in characters other than Arnav Khuhsi.

I liked Khushi, Arnav and Lavanya's characters. I also found it intriguing to read about Eijaz's character.

Lavanya's sister's story was heart breaking.

Arnav's parents story was silly. The crux of the problem was that his mom should have told her husband about her sister's lover. There was not much rhyme or reason to hiding that relationship.

I was put off by how Mr Raizada and his 1st wife were having eyelocks. That man had remarried , had a son with another woman but here he was playing again. His character was not as sincere as his wife.

These 2 needed to rebuild and that can only happen slowly, not lovelorn looks right away !

Was left wondering :

1. Did Arnav's Dad divorce his wife and then remarried ? He knew she was alive.

2. If they were not legally married or in case of bigamy now Danny has become an illegitimate child ?

Enough of me being me .

Thank you for writing on Arshi.

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ixray

@ixray

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Tried to read Yaadein 1 or 2 but just could not get into it , Sorry.

I just don't like my couples exchanging!

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ixray

@ixray

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

IPKKND Season 2

I loved your version. Aarav's parents, they suffered the most through no fault of their own. You treated the issue with sensitivity . Once a child has established someone as his / her parents, it becomes hard for them to replace them with someone new , however deserving. I just wish Arnav and Khushi had invited Aarav's parents to keep in touch with their son.

IPKKND Season 3

It took me 5 days to read it. I found it hard to keep the characters together. There were too many characters.

I concentrated on reading about Arnav and Khushi related chapters only, it still took me 5 days. Fell in love with Chahats character and arshi's story was good.

If i could i would have killed Shyam again and again!

Khushi said she suffered a lot in her 7 months captivity , what happened there was never addressed . I would have lked to see Arshi talk it over.

I would read Season 1 again but never season 2.

I felt season 2 , had too many characters and I couldn't relate to the grown up kids or whom you had pictured them as. I have only watched 4 tv series Kuch Is Tara, Kayamath, GHSP and IPKKND, so din't know the other actors/actresses.

Thank you for writing.

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ixray

@ixray

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

In your way where you live Teri Galliyan

This one was good but i came away thinking about Rudra and Sakshi rather than Arshi.

Poor Arnav and Khushi suffered due to their partners thoughtlessness.

Rudra and Sakshi love in the beginning was weak since a little pressure from outside tore them apart. I was glad they had the strength to break off with Arshi. Imagine if they had got married, all 4 would have suffered unnecessarily.

For Sakshi and Rudra to say their divorce was punishment for their misdeeds with Arshi was wrong. If they did not have the strength to carry their marriage forward its their problem.They should'nt use Arshi as a crutch.

Arshi were weak in the end that they let Rudra and Sakshi's repentance sooth their hurt egos. Its never funny when a marriage breaks up!

I liked the terrace scene, at least they were properly dressed and did the rituals whole heartedly..

Thank you for writing.

Edited by ixray - 8 years ago