IPKKND SS: Mr & Mrs Raizada In The Making C6 P33 22st Nov conclude - Page 17

Originally posted by: Bakergirl

Dat was the cutest ending I have ever read...it made me curl my toes at their cuteness (which by the way is hard to get me to do, m mostly pratical dan romantic)

Kudos to ur wonderful stories & writing skill!

Originally posted by: gprs

👏👏Brilliant deard

though i expected her to call him Arnav i love the sound of "Mr and Mrs Raizada in the making"

beautiful..

he didn't want to see her sad and changed the topic..well done MR..

i was asking for a few more updates but now I'm very happy with this ..

THANK YOU😊

Originally posted by: asha_mehta

Thanks for a quick update.

Arnav is right...it was the planning for payal and akash wedding which brought him and khushi together.

Beautiful story.

Waiting to read more of your work.

Originally posted by: smilejans

Nice update. Sweet little movements at first half and understanding each other is on second half.

Originally posted by: jeb1

Beautiful ending
Loved it

Originally posted by: Onlooker

I just melted hearing Arnav "would you want me to court you or would you want it the traditional way"!!. I would have married the man right away..lol..Loved it. I for once thought that they would themselves marry not to waste the mandap and the decorations..I am being just hopeful that you stretched this story till their marriage..Thanks Jagruti..

Originally posted by: jagrutid

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<font color="#FF0099">Actually yeah at the end when comes to find i was going to use Arnav in her conversation to guess it slipped my mind. </font><font color="#FF0066">i see why you all wanted it to be longer but i had this in mind you see ..</font>