ROSID FF - The Pen Pals (Updtd Pg 13) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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She happily retires to bed thinking how understanding her father is. She secretly wishes her life partner should be similar to him. The moment she thinks about life partner, she tries to think who should she choose, Prem or the alliance which her parents are going to bring and drifts into sleep eventually.

Yesterday's pondering made her get up late and rush to office alone as she missed the bus and Simar had travelled earlier. On reaching office, Roli moves through the aisles thinking. She had not realized that Simar came rushing and standing in front of her and waving her hand. Simar without a choice, taps on Roli's shoulder. "Oye my dear buddy, where are you lost?" Roli tells Simar what worries her. Simar then guides her saying, "Since it's difficult for you to choose, why not leave the decision to. God". Roli wonders how and Simar explains, "have both the options in lots, throw them in front of God and ask someone to choose". Though Roli finds this silly, she has no other alternatives. In the evening she rushes home, refreshes herself, writes the lot and sits before the God. Roli's mom hardly understands a thing and wonders what her beloved daughter does. That's when her father enters home, she rushes to him and explains Simar's technique. Her father laughs at his crazy daughter and excuses himself for time being and then returns after retiring into his night suit.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Cute update love it waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ha ha that lot idea was crazy he he let's see what happens now waiting for next eagerly update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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omg,now what happens with this silly game? but what i think is if Roli agrees to her papa for marriage as per his wish ,there might b chance that groom is none othr but our Sid only...n like this thy get married n with time get to know that thy both r pen pals...is my guess correct deeksha?or any other twist?...whatever, love ur narration n story...Great job dear...
pls pls pls update soon😊😊
Edited by i_am_PRASANNA - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
ThnQ all... Next update coming in few minutes
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Roli wonders as to who should pick the lot.

That's when she remembers her dear brother Gautham. Gautham does his sister the favour and earns a small slab of chocolate. "THE LOT". Though Gautham has picked it up for her, she is yet to unfold it. Prays heavily to the God once again. Meena has never seen her daughter being so pious. She is yet to know what Roli is praying for.

That's when Jamanalal arrives to collect his tea from her and explains what's going on. Finally Roli musters up all her courage and opens the lot to find that she has to accept her father's decision.

Though she knows, what her father is going to do will be the best, she also has a thought about Prem. She wonders if she could write asking about his opinion on her. But, what if he has never thought about her like that. He could easily mistake her.

Without giving no more food to her thoughts, she goes to her father and informs him about the result of the lot. He then questions her, "so, shall I proceed with our astrologer? You are fine with it, right?". Roli nods. He again iterates, "Remember that your mom and me will love you always. We are there for you, whenever you need us". Roli hugged her father and said, "I will also love you both forever. you can go ahead and see the astrologer, papa".

Jamanalal lovingly pats her head and says, "good, I shall meet him tomorrow". Roli has her dinner and returns to her room with a lot of thoughts. But, tries to brush off all other thoughts and sleep peacefully which is impossible for her at the moment.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Now roli ready to accept her father decision and may be that guy our sid but roli didn't know that he is that guy just guess really interesting eagerly waiting for nxt dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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so fabulous...but these small updates seems not sufficient compared to ur beautiful narration...want to stay in that feel for some more time...so pls lengthen it if time permits
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sure di, I try to write whenever my little one rests.. Would try to lengthen the updates next time..
Thanx for understanding

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