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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Beautiful:)

you did a brilliant work once again..
the emotions and the way of telling are so good..
her happiness on his arrival, hidden longing to be with him, speechless moments in his arms though much words are waiting to be shared with him, every role of her is awesome...

again and again you made me wonder about the basic idea of your stories..just brilliant..practical yet beautiful moments..just love this..more than other's ..

Thank you for the beautiful os:)

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: gprs
Beautiful:)

you did a brilliant work once again..
the emotions and the way of telling are so good..
her happiness on his arrival, hidden longing to be with him, speechless moments in his arms though much words are waiting to be shared with him, every role of her is awesome...

again and again you made me wonder about the basic idea of your stories..just brilliant..practical yet beautiful moments..just love this..more than other's ..

Thank you for the beautiful os:)

i've been meaning to write something along these lines for a while but i think you can think on something for ages but there comes a point where you are completely ready to write it out and i think i reached the point after a while with this one and i'm really happy with the results of this one. I feel like it is relatable in many ways.. so i'm proud of this one.

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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: jagrutid

<font color="#ff0099">i'vebeen meaning towrite something along these lines for a while but i think you can think onsomethingfor ages but there comes a point where you are completely ready to write it out and i think i reached the point after a while with this one and i'mreally happy with the results ofthis one. I feel like it is relatable in many ways.. so i'mproud of this one.</font>

for some unknown or unexplained reasons I loved it..you have every right to feel proud about it..it's just brilliant for me:) and please give me more like these..

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Thanks guys this is one of those that i myself have become very fond of..

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

reading over this again ..wondering how it fell together so well ..

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janu

@Janu75

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Nice portray of a woman...different roles ...and lots of emotions...where you long to stay in inspite of baggage being a babu,mom,etc

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Janu75
Nice portray of a woman...different roles ...and lots of emotions...where you long to stay in inspite of baggage being a babu,mom,etc

i love this one in so many ways it shows vulnerability at its roots how beautiful yet testing life can be..

i'm glad you enjoyed it ..