IPKKND OS: Deedar 29/08/2016 new! - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pdrover

Beautiful os
You have penned down the emotions so realistic



Thank you ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: loves_aishu

Beautiful OS,

Lovely way of showing that how sometimes in between the barrels roles bring played to perfection everything forgets that she is a wife first!!!
Loved the way he reminded this to her!!!!!!
Take Care!!!



Thank you very much ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Serene77

Beautiful os. It's such a lovely scene with her longing for him and him longing for her. What was special was the way they handled and worked their way with their other relations and then finally found solace in each other's company . The melancholy tone was perfect as their love and affection was pure , true and deep but not as expressive as they probably wanted or could have ...



Thank you, i don't know i think there is something very special that as people we can be so in-tune to those we care about (some people in particular ) you can speak across distances, eyes make conversation as does the feeling and the silence between people at least for me anyway and so i guess this OS a little about that.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jagrutid



<font color="#FF0099">Thank you, i don't know i think there is something very special that as people we can be so in-tune to those we care about (some people in particular ) you can speak across distances, eyes make conversation as does the feeling and the silence between people at least for me anyway and so i guess this OS a little about that.</font>



Oh I so agree with you on that :).. And to have such wordless eye to eye or heart to heart conversation is so precious and it's absolutely beautiful if it's one's life partner .. Distances or differences don't matter .. Such a precious fragile meaningful OS it was . Thank you !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Serene77



Oh I so agree with you on that :).. And to have such wordless eye to eye or heart to heart conversation is so precious and it's absolutely beautiful if it's one's life partner .. Distances or differences don't matter .. Such a precious fragile meaningful OS it was . Thank you !



Thank you for reading what i have to write! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wohhh such beautiful story out of mundane things yet so important...really touching 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you guys i feel like would like to more os's and short stories from now on rather than longer ff's
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i don't know what to say it was too beautiful .only you could write this just felt sad it had come to an end .keep writing such short os it so nice to read
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: abivicky86

i don't know what to say it was too beautiful .only you could write this just felt sad it had come to an end .keep writing such short os it so nice to read



I love this os myself at the moment and dare i say it more than my current ss - providence..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really love this story . .

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