IPKKND OS: Deedar 29/08/2016 new! - Page 2

Originally posted by: ManKiBaath

What can I say!! That was amazing and awesome.

You have so beautifully written about Khushi trying to get in the groove and a comfortable routine despite the melancholy that sorrounds her whenever Arnav goes and returns from a business trip. To all the onlookers it seems that everything is just perfect in Khushi's little world except for the man around whom words fail her - the one and only Arnav. You were too good with her character..

With everything going on, you have showed that their bond is strong. The love, respect and understanding is still there. I love the way they understand each other without expressing them.

And finally the couple moment - there cannot be a more beautiful ending than what you have portrayed. Loved it to bits..

Thanks for penning down such a beautiful one shot. Hope to read more of your one shot creations!!!

Originally posted by: jagrutid

Thank you for coming back to read yet another one and i'm chuffed you enjoyed it and were able to feel what I was trying to portray. Like a said there are not many spoke words in this but who needs words when you can express yourself without (my attempt between ASR and Khushi anyway.)
I know you say you all enjoy reading my work but I cannot begin to tell you how much joy I take in writing these little pieces..
My older OS's and short stories are still sat in my index.. below in my signature but this is one i've done after a long time on Arnav and Khushi.

Originally posted by: ManKiBaath

"Providence" is my first from your treasure hole and you had me hooked. With Deedar you blew me away, so I'm here to stay. I shall read and catch up with your other works.