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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: utsha

PART 8.

Yeh Dr. Yogendra Vashisth sirf doc hai ya phir kuch aur bhi. Kya yeh RAW ki doc toh nehi hai na. At first i thought that ab jab anika and yog doesnt have any differences b/w them then its not needed for yog to take these matters this lightly. But what exactly did he hinted by dheere dheere sab pata chalega???? See even anika is stunned. More than anything and everything else Yog very much true to his name is the most mysterious character so far in the story. Shiv ji ko sab bhikhari hi samajh te hai , bohot kaam logo ko unki asli shakti pata hai. And sachme woh utne bhole bhi nehi jitna unhe samjha jaata hai. He he he.

MLA though absolutely disgusting but kya kare they r the actual face of the society now a days. A terrible pain in the neck for people like anika. OMG office me kaam nehi bana toh MLA sahab sidha ghar padhare!!!!!. Seriously di , i thought anika will manage to make that idiot realise ACCHE SE without being violent but never ever in my dreams i could have anticipated the way she chose. Ha ha ha . Yog is having his effects on anika, even she also started using one liners.

Loved the father son bonding and their convo. Yog is such a balanced person. Even his exchange of words with girish too is so warm and comforting. Finally girish uncle ko bandi awastha se chutkara mila and he was welcomed by malai ladoo. Sab ko mili ladoo. Arey mujhe bhi pasand hai bohot, koi meri bhi khyal karo .

Yeh anika ki step mom ko kya maza aati hai yog se bhirne me??? Hamesha khudki majak udhati rehti hai. Jara sa bhi self respect nehi hai. Silly woman. Yog answered her well. Lovely , that they went to dinner for the first time. They both r going through such a troubled phase in life, its necessary for them to spend some quality time with each other which will eventually bring them closer. Yog again maturedly pacified anika. They r bonding well now and becoming emotionally dependent on each other. They will become inseparable in near future.


Thanks Utsha dear glad you liked it

Heheehehhe Yog is Man with many colors ... tabhi to Yog ne kaha dheere dheere sab pata chalega πŸ˜†πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰

Yog doesn't take things lightly but intelligently 😊

Yog is not mysterious but an intelligent person who knows how to tackle things practically 😊

Shiv ji vaali pe to I agree with you dear πŸ‘πŸΌ

People like MLA deserve this kind of treatment & yes they are quite a pain in neck

Not only for people like Anika but for the entire system & the way Anika show them their position was apt ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Haan hero heroine hai thoda dialogue to marrenge hi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Manohar & Yog are really sweet father & son duo ... you will see that in coming parts 😊

Girish ki iccha Anika ne ladoo khila ke poori kardi really wo jail se hi choote hai πŸ˜ƒ

Tumhe khane hai to virtual bhej sakti hon chalega na πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Kuch loog aadat se majboor hote hai na unka kuch nahi ho skata 😑😑😑

Yog took her out to ease things between them & also to relax her from the mental agony which she faced for a long time

The way Yog supported Anika in terms of Girish it's obvious that it touched Anika somewhere deeply & she took this first step to share her emotional turmoil 😊

Sure they are inseparable 😳

Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --GOLD--


Your most welcome dear πŸ˜ƒ
Not an issue dear even if you have posted a single comment that was OK
I really appreciate that you are posting it like this πŸ€—
I don't mind even if you get carried away ... itna chalta hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
& it's not just you dear I reply to all my readers & you are one of the special one 😳😳😳
Stay tuned and enjoy the story


THANK U THSNK U THANK U SOOO MUCH DI.
Ur last line just made my day.
U r super special to me as well.
Love u loads.
And mujhe virtual ladoo bhi chahiye. He he.
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Posted: 8 years ago
PART 9:
Anika and yog's relationship is showing signs of normalcy though at snails pace and both r very much aware of it.

These party people r horrible. When they couldnt have their way, thet started harrassing the commoners. True, we being on the otherside of the table most often cant understand the plight of the police officers. Even their hands r tied. But anika found a way tough enough to keep the MLA at bay. Liked anika and her senior's convo.

OMG. These stupids caused so much chaos and anika got hurt in controlling the situation. She is indeed a very capable and strong officer. Anika's answer to jannat had left me stunned for a moment. She is still suffering deep inside. Hope her insecurities r eased soon so that she can accept all the love and happiness knocking at her door whole heartedly. And they both got blessings too from the lady.

So anika and yog r going to attend the first social function after marriage. It will be good for them. Loved this down to earth side of yog. The second part of the update is filled with love and compassion. Anika finally realised her feelings towards yog. Its only a matter of time now that she will confess to yog.

As sleep finally claims anika, i put my comment to rest as well hoping that both these loving souls find the correct track of life shedding all hitches.
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Posted: 8 years ago
PART 10:

Its great to see that anika with the help of gyan prakash could put the last nail in the coffin of that MLA. Ab akal thikane ayega uske. He he usse toh party ne bhi chod diya. Gud gud finally MLA chapter close hua.

Oh toh dutta got a solid lead this time. Loving this utmost professional and capable guy. The way he not only finding all the infos but also suggesting anika how to deal wih the case in each step as well as boosting her mentally is quite commendable. They have to go deeper to get hold of this Dheerendra Shah. Upay chahe jitne bhi hatke ho, the way anika and dutta r teaming u , they will definitely make a head way soon. Even i am waiting to see whether yog's father can provide some important insight into the case.

Toh finally anika started expressing her feelings for yog. The outfits r beautiful and i am sure both looked stunning as well. Ha ha ha the way yog complemented anika was unique. Anika is trying to leave the past behind and start afresh.

OMG Yog drank bhang by mistake. Thank god anika got to know in time before a scene happened. Sloshed yog is really cute as well as more capable as finally he in this state could make anika confess atleast. He he.

Anika probably will now realise the depth of his love and extent of his affection for her. Yog too is battling a gripping fear and bubbling insecurity of losing her. But that day is not far enough that they will get rid of all the sufferings of heart and mind.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: utsha

PART 9:

Anika and yog's relationship is showing signs of normalcy though at snails pace and both r very much aware of it.

These party people r horrible. When they couldnt have their way, thet started harrassing the commoners. True, we being on the otherside of the table most often cant understand the plight of the police officers. Even their hands r tied. But anika found a way tough enough to keep the MLA at bay. Liked anika and her senior's convo.

OMG. These stupids caused so much chaos and anika got hurt in controlling the situation. She is indeed a very capable and strong officer. Anika's answer to jannat had left me stunned for a moment. She is still suffering deep inside. Hope her insecurities r eased soon so that she can accept all the love and happiness knocking at her door whole heartedly. And they both got blessings too from the lady.

So anika and yog r going to attend the first social function after marriage. It will be good for them. Loved this down to earth side of yog. The second part of the update is filled with love and compassion. Anika finally realised her feelings towards yog. Its only a matter of time now that she will confess to yog.

As sleep finally claims anika, i put my comment to rest as well hoping that both these loving souls find the correct track of life shedding all hitches.


Thanks Utsha Dear glad you liked it

As it's said slow & steady wins the race ... so for sure they will be a normal Man & wife very soon 😊

That's an irony of Politics these days the ultimate sufferers are common people 🀒🀒

Yes grass is always green on the other side dear... very few people understand what honest Police officers actually face in reality

Anika knows odds & evens of her job so she deal them accordingly

Their ultimate motto was to create mess ... & Anika confronted them nicely & yea she is really strong in her work

Anika is in deep guilt feeling for hurting Yog & the way Yog supported her in terms of Girish health added to her pain now

She had realized the depth of Yog's love & for her it's all new ... she will surely embrace love & happiness with open arms 😳

Yes for the first time they are to attend any social gathering ... Yog is down to earth & free soul person

Anika is acknowledging Yog's love ... ab confess kaise karti hai ye dekhne laayak hoga πŸ˜†

Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: utsha

PART 10:


Its great to see that anika with the help of gyan prakash could put the last nail in the coffin of that MLA. Ab akal thikane ayega uske. He he usse toh party ne bhi chod diya. Gud gud finally MLA chapter close hua.

Oh toh dutta got a solid lead this time. Loving this utmost professional and capable guy. The way he not only finding all the infos but also suggesting anika how to deal wih the case in each step as well as boosting her mentally is quite commendable. They have to go deeper to get hold of this Dheerendra Shah. Upay chahe jitne bhi hatke ho, the way anika and dutta r teaming u , they will definitely make a head way soon. Even i am waiting to see whether yog's father can provide some important insight into the case.

Toh finally anika started expressing her feelings for yog. The outfits r beautiful and i am sure both looked stunning as well. Ha ha ha the way yog complemented anika was unique. Anika is trying to leave the past behind and start afresh.

OMG Yog drank bhang by mistake. Thank god anika got to know in time before a scene happened. Sloshed yog is really cute as well as more capable as finally he in this state could make anika confess atleast. He he.

Anika probably will now realise the depth of his love and extent of his affection for her. Yog too is battling a gripping fear and bubbling insecurity of losing her. But that day is not far enough that they will get rid of all the sufferings of heart and mind.


Thanks Utsha Dear glad you liked it

Anika fulfilled her all duties as a police officer & MLA was sent at the right place πŸ˜ƒ

Yes Dutta finally got a main lead & as an informer Dutta is really a right hand of Anika

He knows her nature well as they are working together from a long time & this time they will surely get some more vital information πŸ˜ƒ

Yog's Family & other involvements will surely come later

Yes Finally Anika started to confess at least to herself that she is in love ... & true they really looked good in the outfit πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Yog & his one liners ... as Yog is unique so his compliments too πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Sloshed Yog is really cute & strong as well ... Nashe main insaan sach hi bolta hai πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Anika & Yog surely will get rid of all their insecurities & hitches soon

Anika will surely realize that not only she but Yog too has his own set of insecurities & fear

More fun coming up ...

Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: utsha


THANK U THSNK U THANK U SOOO MUCH DI.
Ur last line just made my day.
U r super special to me as well.
Love u loads.
And mujhe virtual ladoo bhi chahiye. He he.

Your Most welcome dear
Ladoo jaldi bhjungi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Enjoy & happy reading πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
PART 11:
Thank god yog woke up but could remember only a part of what he did the previous night. They r slowly yet steadily progressing in their relationship and unnecessary rushing into it will only lead to complexity.

Ha ha ha. Even i am laughing holding my aching stomach.πŸ˜†. The way anika dealt with Neeta... he he he he. Loved the entire convo b/w yog and anika in this update. This is the best till now. They r gelling really well. Hope that their short trip to their ancestral home will help them come closer further.

Oh no, even pandit ji also foretell the incidents related to the attacks on yog. Finally they reached home and received a warm welcome by the members. Anika's hitches about yog's high class family will be removed now, i guess. She already made a place for herself in the household in a very short span if time. She is proving herself an ideal in every relation.

Finally the much awaited convo b/n FIL & DIL can be expected. Waiting for it. Stopping for now , will cont my bakbak in the next comment di.
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Posted: 8 years ago
PART 12.
The entire convo b/w anika & Manohar was quite meaningful. It was worth waiting. Even i too have full faith on anika that she will nab the criminals soon. Ha ha ha yog's lines on chedna was too good. This is the best one of the story so far. Agey pata nehi aur kinte punch lines milenge. Even anika's answer was damn good.The fb was really nice. Gud that father and son had the same choice.

So this is the reason the family lawyer was called. This is a nice system to honour the members of the family and value them.



Ok now finally coming to the point. Enough of behaving as if i havent received the 4000 volt jhatka. So i was right when i asked u about the back stabber as in the SARSON KA BHOOT and u said may me i was thinking in the right track. There r many q s disturbing my mind and making it restless.

1st one. Can it really be any one of the family member involved in it??? If yes then its not related to yog's research & DRDO. Probably someone is trying to harm the entire family due to any political dispute and using the members without their knowledge. Maybe then it will be easier for anika to get hold in him.

2nd if terrorists r involved then it has become all the more difficult as it seems to be a full proof plan and they have used the family account to deliberately change the track of investigation.

Waiting eagerly to see whether the case is politically connected or terrorists r involved. The game is on so am i. Though i was expecting something like this , still its no less than a shock. I am now having a doubt on the family lawyer too. Anyways lets see what happens next. Hope to see some major advancements and breakthrough in the next update di.

Thanks for the pm. Do update tomorrow if possible.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank god finally i am done with all my pending comments.
Biting my nails and waiting for the mystery to be solved.
He he aap na suspense as well as romance and comedy queen ho.

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