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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: parvathicanada

nice intro 👏
good job 👍🏼 👍🏼 plz post the firts part soon. 😊

Thanks alot for ur comments Yeah I will send it next part Soon...

Rabi

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Episode 1

Wo Lamhey (A Beautifull Love Story)

Episode 1:

Megha Enters Into The room Having Knocked Once.She Drages off the
blancket from Esha and says come on get up ....Esha Its
Morning.....esha trun into her bad and covering her face with pillow
pretending to sleep ......and say with drawzy Vioce "Oh" dii let me
sleep for more five mintus.....
Megha Says..Come on get up ...u know its special morning for you.I
have got a superise for u ...she goes out of the room with telling
her to get up and get ready... whn she again knock the door and
peeps in(A beautifull girl wearing blue jeans and nice top philips
her hair and says with charming beautifull eyes...dii look at me i m
ready to,how m i looking this morning.?Megha!Like every morning you
are looking too Beautifull.

Esha!She get close to megha and says i m ur Sister after all.by
the way wot is surprise for me and why today?today neither is my
birth nor your's.

Megha!you know ur parents ..(With Smile) they want to make
everyday surprising for u .

Esha!now di please open sesame ..and Megha give her a key of a
Car.Having seen the keys she broden her eyes with excitment
says"Wowww" And Ask with megha my result Has not been out yet and
precius Gift?

Megha! Oh Dear u know how much we trust on you so the papa is
confident for u that you would get the same position as you get
every years.

Esha!oh di I love u .Thanks u thank u so much for this gift and
trusting me. i would never break ur trust ever in my life and her
eyes get wet(Breaking her Expression) she say oh m getting late for
collage and she goes down stairs.

Prerna!(her Mom) calls from Back invite her for breakfast she
truns back come to her mother give her a hug and kiss.and say thanks
mom for that gift,and u have breakfast u know i cant ...i m on
dieting and she truns toward her father give him a hug saying thanks
papa i proud to be ur daughter she goes Off..

Scene Cut To Collage:


A collage play Ground is filled with the boys..who having baskcet
ball.."Rajeev"who is the Favourite boy of the collage .viewer are
calling his name Rajeev Rajeev Rajeev Rajeev..(The way of slowgun)
abrubtly a girl appears in the ground grabs the ball looks at Rajeev
with challenging eyes..Rajeev except the challenging she starts
playing and wins the match. on this defeat Rajeev veiwers get
startall.Rajeev keeps his hands on his sides and speaks with smile"I
love this defear"Eshaaa..

Esha!I love to give defeats both players come out off the
ground.pantingly she intrupts Rajeev would u join me in the class??

Rajeev!(Tauntingly)Looks at her says mr.Mathotra's class?No
Way.....

Esha! Rajeev u r really not paying attention towards
educations,Lets go with me She drages Him.Having held his hand
towards the class.

When the college get off Rajeev offers her for lift but she denied
showing the keys of her own car.

Esha!(Feigningly)Have my own convens and she unlocks her car.

Rajeev!(With excitment)Wowwww new Car .......Wow Great.
Esha!Papa has gifted me today m very happy Is it fine isnt it.
Rajeev!Lovly Car for Lovly Girl..Thn Seen at Jim at 4:30 pm.
Esha!(With Smile)Yup.And Drive off..


When in the evening they see each other into jim they have
friendly conversation and have good exchange of eye gimpses having
finished the excersise they come out the jim .Rajeev comes towards
his car.Esha says him good bye she had hold mind towards
him .abrubtly a car goes near to her with the razzing sound of
some "punk" Boys and just to molist her a bit side having fumbled
with the car she bumpt against an other praked car..Rajeev Yells !
Heyyyyyyyyyyy STOP THE CAR YOR IDIOTSS"..And rushed towards ehsa and
( ask with worry)r u alright? she says yes m alright he help her to
get up as she get up she keeps her hand on her head she says m
feeling Giddy he asks her to drop her home..she deneid and says no.
Esha!if i got home in this condition my family would be worried
alot..

Rajeev offers her to go his home which is near bye...

Scene Cute to Rajeev Home:

Rajeev make her sit on the bed and says you feel at home.I bring
tea for u .i make tea very good (With Smile)
Esha!self praising have no recomamdation(With Smile)
Rajeev!i m not praising myself people say about me.
While Talking tea she ask Rajeev.

Esha!alwayz when i ask abt your parents ...You avoide me.I have
esamated that you have some family problems which you never reveals.
u know Rajeev when we share are problems with the friends we are not
giving them ours problems we are just lighlt the weight which are
problems creat on a heart.Rajeev taking a seigh!yes i have got
something to, with you are for last couple of weeks i have been
thinking for sharing with u .u r the only friend of mine .I can
trust on.
Esha!!Thanks Rajeev trust on me so much.

Rajeev!well you well abt me .I belong to a rich family having
money Ever but i have been tantelizing for parents love since my
childhood. my parents give me everything but love.and now when m
here with good friend like u who taught me how to laugh,How to live
life.They want me back to india and marring me with a girl who i
dont know and the whole introduction they gave me about her,she is
the only daughter of a rich business man ,Now tell me how can i
marry with a girl who i dont know,and dont know weather she would
like me or not.I m worried ohh really i m worried.

Having heard this all she'(esha) gets startle(With the eyes full
with the tears)
Esha! u know Rajeev any paraints never do bad for their children,U
know why couldnt they pay attention towards you. They must be busy
to furnish ur wish and fullfil the requairment of a successfull life
for u .

Rajeev! (With a bit loud sound and excitement) thats y they could
never ever seen weather in my requairment there is some love of
parents which Is remaining Unfurnish.
Esha!This is wot u r thinking being negative loot at the positive
side u would come to know the reality and you would get back ur
missing love! She come close to him(Both their eyes full with tears)
she keep her hand on his shoulder "dont worry Rajeev everything
will ...Rajeev cut his sentence and Hug Her tightly....

End.

Dear friends! Inshallah we shall send it next Part Soon...Take
care babye and we are waiting for ur comments...

Regards:
Rajeev Admirer Rabi and Arabia.

Wo Lamhey (A Beautifull Love Story)
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
really nice parttt....
ffeel bad for rajeev,,,,

continue sooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14

Wo Lamhey
Recap:Rajeev Tell everything to Esha abt her Family and Also that his parents wana marry him with a stranger Girl..Esha Try to Make him understand ...Ab Agay

Episode 2:

Esha' Cell Rings While they were hugging Each Other..(Both are separate) Esha picks up Her cell.
Esha! Hi megha dii wats Happening?
Megha! How r u doing and where r u ?
Esha!dii m at my friend's Home it will take 30 mins to reach home.
Megha!wot happen is everything is ok?
Esha!well dii m going to cum in half hour i will tell u everything abt.
Megha!Ya ok Bye..

She Speak to Rajeev in solomn vioce ok Rajeev i have to leave will see u soon.He ask her to drop her but she says no i m ok enough to go my self. Bye

Now While in the Car she was think of calling her best friend Arabia.

Esha!Hello Arabia
Arabia!Hey Esha how r u doing today?
Esha!says m fine and start weaping.
Arabia!hey why r u weaping Dear.Wots the matter tell me.dont do it hey pls pls tell me wot is the matter??
Thn Esha tell out everything abt Rajeev
Arabia!Does he know that ypu are in love with him?
Esha!Might Not
Arabia!and do u know weather he love's you or not?
Esha!Might i belive he love's me.
Arabia!How can you say? it can be your conception only?
Esha! No This is not my conception I know we love each other but we ....are unable to express our feeling to each other...Might we are scard of being rejected but that is...5% chance .
Arabia!So Would ypu talk to him or u want me to talk with him?Wot can i do for my Dear ?
Esha! No I shall manage to talk to him.
Arabia! ok wot is the matter ,you go and talk to him .1st You bring it to his congnition that if he perposes you!your answer will not be not.
Esha! Thank u i shall be in touch with you take care and bye.
Arabia!Yes u to my dear bye...

Morning at 7 o'Clock Scene Cut to London:

A Handsome Boy Sitting in his car waiting for someone with discontation. peeping towards the flats and giving horns again and again.A Girl come tp in the balcony dring hairs with tower.Cant you hold for a min.m just coming ...just comming.Truns back into room(muttring)(He Cant hold for a moment whn he get late it make no different but when i m a bit late a twister come's out in his life.Huhh"Sharim's car gate open she put her sandle into car and then her Beg then sit with the flip and close the door.
Sharim!Shouts alwayz you are late ,dont u feel like going collage or yor keep waking up whole the night?

Arabia!Please stop speaking m not late daily on late onec in a month well stop corralling now Esha called me yesterday.

Sharim!Oh howz Is She ..Is She fine?
Arabia!Yes She is fine but.......
Esha!But wot?? everything is ok?
Arabia!No Yaar nothing is ok.!she was weaping badly.
Sharim!Why ever ,did she tell u?
Arabia!Yeh ,She is in love with somone
Sharim!So Wot is to worry About.
Arabia!listen to me properly 1st.
Sharim!Yeah Yeah say
Arabia!Sharim They Love Each Other But havent confessed yet!
Sharim!Oh you confusing me
Arabia!there is a matter of confusing they have been friends for last 4 years they dont want to lose each other,Rajeev Family want him to marry Someone Else.
Sharim!Hmm So thats Really problem but wot Rajeev wishes?
Arabia!Rajeev does not wish to marry where his parents intend.
Sharim!So this is the problem .But Dont you think.....no one can ...help apart of themselves
Arabia! offcourse i agree with you but being friends we should do somthing for them
Sharim!Yeah Lets think wot can we do for them....But 1st you think we are entering into the collage gate

Scene Cut to Esha:

Esha Sitting in her room !Megha knock the door cume with the glass of Jouise.
Megha!Wot Happen Esha you are looking So tensed Everything is fine ?
Esha!Yeah Megha dii everything is fine...Thanks for jouise
Megha!Yeah ok But are you Sure you are ok ? If anything making you distrup then pls tell me..
Esha!dii ....dii
Megha! Yes Tell me? everything is fine with Arabia??
Esha!Yes dii Everything is fine with Arabia!
Megha!So wot is the matter??
Esha!Dii m Tensed abt Ra...(Suddenly her cell rings)
Esha picks up the fone and Say Yes m comming..
Esha!Megha dii m sorry i will tell u soon everything now i have to leave..
Megha!Yes Its fine but u take care your self..
Eshs goes.

Scene Cut to Rajeev and Esha !!!

They Are sitting in the hotel
Rajeev!Drawn in the thoughts
Esha interups him
Esha!Rajeev wot are u thinking? why r u worried?
Rajeev! shouldnot i be worried while i m too persestent to go such a pth which i...have never seen
Esha!so have you seen any path where you wish to go?
Rajeev!Yeah offcourse and thats u.
Esha!Shockk starts looking at him..you know wot are you saying......?
Rajeev!Offcourse yes,we know each other for long time,we understand each other we share our problems our happiness everything with each other!
Esha! Is it enough to marry with someone.
Rajeev!more then this all,we love each other
Esha!Smile(Shying)say Rajeev you took lots of time to say,You dont you think that you should have said this 2years back.
Rajeev!i spoke out somewhere but you didnt listen to me or might i could'nt give my expreration the worlds.
Esha!My ears were also tantelizing to hear these wards while my heart were alwayz knew this that you are just mine.(Both stand up)

Esha!(her Eyes full with happiness tears)Thank you Rajeev Thank you so much for feel me so speical please Rajeev Never ever leave me .....

Rajeev!(Removes her tears) I m alwayz with you...i will never leave you ever.Its Maa Promiss.He look At her with smile...I cant live without you mu sweetheart!!...Esha look into his eyes with smiling....

Rajeev(Offer her to dance )May I........??
Esha!give a sweet smile accept his offer and gives her hand to him!!

Back ground Song:

Ek Din aap yoo hum ko mijaygay...........
Phool hi phool Rahaoo main khil jaygay..
Maine ne Socha na tha

Ek Din aap yoo hum ko mijaygay...........
Phool hi phool Rahaoo main khil jaygay..
Maine Socha na tha.........(Rajeev puts his hand on Esha waist)

Ek Din Zindagi kitni hogi hassi ....
Zhumayga Assmaaa Gaygi ye Zamee..
Maine Socha na tha.......(Rajeev pulls her closer to him)

Ek Din Zindagi kitni hogi hassi ....
Zhumayga Assmaaa Gaygi ye Zamee..
Maine Socha na tha

Dil ki Dali se Kaliyan si khilnay Lagi
Jab Nigahay nigahoo se milnay Lagi..(Esha Look itno his eyes)

Ek Din Istarhan Hosh Khoo jaygay
Pass aytoo Madhosh ho jay gay..(Rajeev kisses her on her cheeks)
Maine Socha na Tha..(Esha Smile with shying)

Jagmagati hui Jagtii Raat hai....
Raat hai ya sitarooki barat hai....(Esha runs into his arms and Hug Him tighly)

Ek Din Dil ki Rahoo main apne Liye
Jal uthaygay Mohabbat ki itnay Diye.......
Maine Socha Na Tha

Ek Din Dil ki Rahoo main apne Liye
Jal uthaygay Mohabbat ki itnay Diye.....
Maine Socha Na Tha.....(Stil Hug Each other)

End
Frens!! We hopw U like it pls dont forget to give ur comments we are waiting ...
Take Care and we shall soon send it next Part...

Regards:
Rajeev Admirer Rabi and Arabia😊
Edited by cute_rabi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great intro, part 1 and part 2 didnt know this fanfic before so i just want to say continue soon please
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

really nice parttt....
ffeel bad for rajeev,,,,

continue sooonn

Thanks ALOT 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
Hi Frens Here is New Promo of Wo Lamhey

2nd promo Online Link!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=igvotj7SVB4

Here its Donwload Link
http://www.savefile.com/files/241013

Enjoy...!

Rabi 😊
Edited by cute_rabi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
awsome promo!! cant wait till u continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
absolutely fantastic part & promo rabi dear.. you are just too good.... keep up the good work going..... 👏 please continue soon..me waiting for you to continue.... 😃
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Wow... aboustly awsome! 👏

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