Kuch Kuch...(Pt5Pg7:smth hap-n bwt A n K) - Page 2

it is a great part and seems interesting.. cant wait till u continue

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part sumra

Thx so much.

Originally posted by: memze

it was gr8

Glad that you liked it.

Originally posted by: angel85

waiting for more more more

I'll take that as –you liked it-…thx!! The next part will be up soon.

Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

great part

Thanks you.

Originally posted by: brainychild92

it is a great part and seems interesting.. cant wait till u continue

Thx so much........ The next part will be up soon.

Hey thanks a lot for your LOVELY comments. They mean a lot to me. Ummm.........since I've got the comments...that means I shall continue with it.......right? so the next part will be up………by.........😉

dat was a fab part hun!!!! very detailed lol but it was goood...im guessin its angad....neways continue sooon 😃 great job 👏

Originally posted by: cute_rabi

Great Really Like it 😊

Thanks so much!!

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

dat was a fab part hun!!!! very detailed lol but it was goood...im guessin its angad....neways continue sooon 😃 great job 👏

Hey Rach di.......I think..well it actually IS.......that you are the only one who tried to guess......n.....wweeelllllll.........keep guessing till the part comes.......n thx for the lovely comment.......

Originally posted by: issy

Great Part

Thx a lot!!

Hey I really liked the comments which I received till now........they'll keep me to continue the fanfic😉......remember......your comments are the water and food for my fanfic..........the more you give...the more energy it has.........wow...I just read the line again.....well I'm surprised myself that how good was it.....that your comments are the water and food and if you don't give enough to my fanfic....it will get weaker......

But I do mean it too!! I'm not just saying to give comments but I really do need them too.......😊

The next part coming soon!!!

Kuch Kuch…
PROMO

We can see a cupboard full of………well clothes. Someone is looking at it and thinking-but we don't see that person, we can only see the cupboard full of clothes. It's a big cupboard-how do we know it…because we look from the bottom to top slowly and it takes us 37 seconds to complete that one round of looking at the cupboard from down to up. It took us 37 seconds…..imagine how long it took that person? That person has been standing and looking at the cupboard-down to up…at the speed like just we did-for a long time, well not THAT long but you can say for about 5460 seconds (about 1 and a half hour). That person is not thinking 'What to wear there?' or 'What shall I wear today?'………that person is thinking something else………..YOU WILL KNOW IT IN THE NEXT PART-SO STAY TUNED!!

SCENES SHIFT

We see someone's hand holding a photo 'A Graduation Photo'. It looks like the people there were graduated from a big University. Then we hear a voice, a male voice, the voice sounds young, mature, deep and smooth, the voice spells these words out sighing (a little sadly) 'Man…who was she………why I never noticed her before…'

great promo i bet that was angad andhe didn't notice kripa 😳

i just read ur FF, it is really interesting!!!!!! 👏 👏 PLEASE
continue soon!!!!!!! 😊

it's really good ! keep up the good work and keep writing more and more.... can't wait to read more ....
your story is quite different n realistic so just keep it unique n keep rockin 😉

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great promo i bet that was angad andhe didn't notice kripa 😳

Um...well the photo is of a big University.....and Kripa is in high school........how can Kripa be there in the picture😉........I can feel that you're alreday thinking about 'Angad thinking about Kripa' and 'Kripa thinking about Angad '😊...and well if you're guessing Angad...for that you'll have to read the part which I'm going to post in a while. Thanks a lot though😉!!

Originally posted by: desikudi818

i just read ur FF, it is really interesting!!!!!! 👏 👏 PLEASE
continue soon!!!!!!! 😊

I'm happy to see more people liking it. Thank you.

Originally posted by: Romaine_27

it's really good ! keep up the good work and keep writing more and more.... can't wait to read more ....
your story is quite different n realistic so just keep it unique n keep rockin 😉

I surely will write more....thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: ~~RaZ~~

gr8 promo

Thanks so much.

Thanks everyone....and I hope you really enjoyed and liked and loved everything til now and that you aren't just saying it but mean it. I hope that my fanfic will be one of the most popular and one of the best ......because there's not only one best fanfic na......there are many......and I hope in that group of many...you all will help me get in there.........coz if you guys don't comment then how will this fanfic be liked/ loved by the others......and if no one comment taht means.......I'll take that as my fanfic is not worth reading anymore and I'll stop it since no one will be reading then what's the point to continue.....and I don't just write it...I take a lot of time and think about each scene carefully and rewrite some scenes if I don't like my previous ideas......I really take it a little seriously....I mean seriously in th eway of making it a neat fanfic.....an interesting one....and without breaking any of the IF rules......and I think I shall stop now......seriously when I start writing or typing....I keep on writing and writing........I just can't seem to stop......either my mom has to come to me and say 'Sumra.....how long do you need to stay at the computer?' or something else...but not in a sarcastic way or a mean way.......she's really nice...she cares about my eye-sight that's why.....lolz....I will really stop now. The next part will be up in...........3 minutes and 10 seconds😉!!!

Oh yah.....lolz.....but really one last and final thing........YOUR COMMENTS MEAN A LOT TO ME.......remember your comments just like food and water for my fanfic........I think I'm posting my Thank You stuff just like a part or something.........I will really stop now.....Thanks again.

HEY SORRY ABOUT THE TENSE AGAIN……..IT GETS CONFUSING AS I WANT TO MAKE IT 'LIKE IT'S HAPPENING NOW'….. AND I JUST SIMPLY DON'T WANT IT TO SOUND LIKE I'M TELLING A BEDTIME TALE/ STORY!!

I think I might mess up with the past tenses and present. Sorry that you all have to bear that. I really hate making those mistakes…..I hope you understand.

Kuch Kuch…

Recap: (Last part page 2) The girl picks up the hair band and the wind starts blowing harder as she slowly walks towards her school gate. The hair is all getting messy as the wind is coming from behind her, so when we see her face it's mostly covered by her hair-many hair strands covering her face-so she turns her back-we can see her back now. The wind is now blowing on her face, so her hair is flying back now. Rani and Lina are waiting at the school gate for her to finish so that they can all three enter the school together. We see her hair in her hands tying up her hair. When she's gone, she turns around and we see that she is Kripa (Neha-from Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai- as Kripa).

Kuch Kuch…

Part 2

Kripa is walking towards Lina…hot tempered. Lina doesn't move but Rani is a bit surprised because she never saw Kripa like that before and what was up with her this morning. She didn't get a thing.

Kripa reached them and stopped right-7 inches-before Lina. Rani was going to start talking to Kripa to calm her down but Kripa was staring only at Lina with a fake expression: Anger. Kripa glanced at Rani and then turned back to stare at Lina. Lina burst out laughing and after 2 seconds Kripa started to laugh hard too. Rani was confused. When Rani figured everything out, the two of them had already started running inside the school towards their other friends (we can't see their faces, we can see their backs and Kripa and Lina running towards them) and Rani was running after them. When Kripa and Lina reached their other friends (can see Kripa's face and Lina's face only and their friends' backs) both of them went behind their friends and were hiding from Rani. They all understood that they played something on Rani today. Rani is in the front, Kripa and Lina are standing at the back and in the middle are standing their friends (We can see Rani's face and their friends' backs and Kripa and Lina's backs…once in a while you see Kripa and Lina's heads poking out from in between their friends-but you never see who their friends are). Rani is trying to get between her friends so that she can get the two of them. Kripa and Lina are trying to stay away from Rani. Their friends are trying to just stay in the middle-like a wall-between them. All this while Rani, Kripa, Lina and their friends are laughing hard-so hard that all of them can't even control themselves to breathe too, they each have one arm across their stomachs. Kripa, Lina, their friends and Rani-all of them-know that all this while Rani did not even once felt bad or got angry about what Kripa and Lina had done to her-a simple joke-because she knew that they didn't mean to hurt her or anything negative, she knew that they had no intentions of doing anything bad to her-but only to make the morning in their world laugh, enjoy, happy and playful-no stress, no tension. They all knew that what would be happening next. When all of them controlled themselves-because they were laughing hard before-. The group of friends in the middle broke and then Kripa hugged Rani. When they were hugging Kripa said 'Sorry'. Rani playfully hit Kripa's head. Then they parted. Lina and Rani hugged each other. Kripa then hugged one of their friends, we can see the back of the friend and Kripa's face. When they apart…we see Kripa's face smiling and the back of the girl-we know that because of her long tied up hair-we are determine to see who that friend is…so we walk around semi circle+ly around the two of them to see Kripa's friend…we see the big beautiful brown eyes-we better zoom out fast-we see the girl is no one other then DIA (Bipasha Basu as Dia).

REWIND------------PLAY-RIGHT BEFORE KRIPA WAS HUGGING DIA

Rani is hugging a girl, we can see her back. After two seconds Lina is also hugging a girl, we see the girl's (the one Lina is huuging) her eyes. Rani and the girl split and we see that she's ANGEL (Amrita Rao as Angel). Lina also parted when Kripa parted with Dia, we see the girl who Lina was hugging was REA (Priyanka Chopra as Rea).

FAST FORWARD-------------PLAY-KRIPA JUST PARTED FROM DIA

Lina is hugging Dia, Rani hugs Rea and Kripa hugsAngel. Then Kripa gives a friendly hug to Rea, Rani hugs Dia and Angel hugs Lina.

The guys were waiting for the girls to finish it all. They were all bored so they sat down. When the girls had finished…

We see slowly each guy sitting on the bench, Uday (Shahid Kapoor as Uday), Neal (Uday Chopra as Neal) ……the other guys weren't there and so as the other girls. Then Neal had stood up and was now walking towards the girls. While he was walking he opened his arms and said 'What about me?' The girls laughed 'Shut up Neal!!' Uday also stood and came towards everyone now.

Suddenly Lina spoke up 'Where are the others, guys?' Kripa walked behind her and hit the back of her (Lina's) head playfully and said 'Do you sleep when you stand?' Lina was confused now 'What does that have to do with them?' Kripa smiled and said 'For my General Knowledge.' Lina was totally confused now she was thinking 'What's up with her…….I don't get a word she'ds saying!' Kripa noticed that and hit Lina's head-at the back-again 'Because last Friday morning assembly they announced that the people who joined the camp will not be coming to school for this week as they will be enjoying their camp at the campsite…' Then Lina remembered and bent her head with one eye closed tightly (it looks like she winked-I'm sorry I don't know how to describe this bit of action). Kripa continued '…if each of them have twins, whom I don't know about, then only then we can see them and that is if their twins prefer to come to their twin brother's or twin sister's school…' Dia and Angel hold Kripa and Rani had covered Kripa's moth by then. The guys and the other girls were laughing hard and so was Dia, Angel and Rani. When the three of them freed Kripa Kripa said innocently and a little defending tone 'WHAT?' She opened her mouth to say something but this time Dia put her right hand index finger on Kripa's lips and she put her left hand index finger on her own lips and spelled 'S-s-s-h-h' and pronounced slow and steadily 'Sssshhhh'. Then Dia hold Kripa's index finger with her left hand and replaced her Kripa's index finger with her own index finger on Kripa's lips. Kripa stood like a doll and open-closed (kind of like blinking) her eyes fast several times-it's like an innocent look. The bell rang and Kripa panicked.

SCENES SHIFT

SOME WHERE….FAR AWAY………..

We see a cupboard which is packed with clothes only. We move back and see someone's back looking at the cupboard, the person looks like a guy. He is lookind at a……..well it's a giant…um…..cupboard. It's a big cupboard-how do we know it…because we look from the bottom to top slowly and it takes us 37 seconds to complete that one round of looking at the cupboard from down to up. It took us 37 seconds…..imagine how long it took that person? That person has been standing and looking at the cupboard-down to up…at the speed like just we did-for a long time, well not THAT long but you can say for about 5460 seconds (about 1 and a half hour). What is that person thinking……do we want to know…….okay so let's see…….actually let's get into the guy's mind '…me this blue jacket. Josh gave me those POLO caps, Alliyah gave me that red shirt, John gave me that blue………..' Um…..so we really want to hear all this….let's get out of his mind…..hold on a sec…wait let's just stay for a few seconds more….'…Oh my God….what shall I throw now, more than half of it are gifts from my family and friends…….umm....I'll just throw a few of those shirts.' He is bending and we come out of his mind and see him picking some shirts in his hand and dumping in the a black bag. So that person was not thinking 'What to wear there?' or 'What shall I wear today?'

We look back and see someone sitting on a couch, we come closer to that person, we don't see the face but we see the person's clothes, by that we can judge that the person is a guy, there's no chance of that person being a girl…not even 1% we see his hand holding a photo 'A Graduation Photo'. It looks like the people there were graduated from a big University. Then we hear a voice, a male voice, the guy sitting on the couch-his voice, the voice sounds young, mature, deep and smooth, the voice spells these words out sighing (a little sadly) 'Man…who was she………why I never noticed her before?'

The guy standing on near the cupboard turns and we look at his shoes and he is saying ''Now who is…' we see his dark blue jeans '…she? Meena or…' we see a white and blue designer shirt with the first two buttons (on the top) open and the collars a little up and open-like '…..Tina or Mary or…'

The guy on the couch interrupts 'Angad I'm not even that worse okay……you know up till now I just saw…'

We see the face of the guy who was standing, he is Angad (Iqbal Khan-from Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai and currently is Karam Apnaa Apnaa-as Angad). He opens his mouth to interrupt the guy sitting on the couch '34 and a half girls.'

We look back to see the guy on the couch stand up and walk to Angad and say with a wide smile-we see his lips only-on his face 'Yah…you know me' Angad tiredly says 'Prithvi…'. We see the guy who was standing next to Angad and had one of his arms around Angad's shoulder-in a man-ly style (just like guys do…you know) – by now and we see he is Prithvi (Prithvi from Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai). Prithvi says 'What?' innocently and continues 'You know Josh has seen 35 complete girls.' At that both Angad and Prithvi laugh.

Preview: Why did Kripa panick? What is 'half girl' and 'complete girl'?

I think this was longer than the first part…hope you enjoy…..I know I took so much time…….but I made it neat…….I hope I never make my fanfic messy….I mean I want all my parts to be posted in a style in my fanfic. Hope you enjoy…….you remember the comment system na…at the end of INTRODUCTIONS….I think you remembered….so please comment………………………I hope you liked it….I'm sorry if I did some silly mistakes…..and also for being so detailed……I hope it's nice though.......I'll be waiting for your lovely comments…and I'll post the next part faster….at least faster then I posted this one. Sorry for the delay.

I'm sorry because some of you were thinking that the person who was looking at the picture was Angad but actually he was Prithvi. I just wanted this fanfic to be a little different and unique…..you remember how I didn't introduce Kripa first but her friend. I knew that some of you might think that he was Angad……but I had decided long ago that he was not Angad………

You know……I just can't be not-detailed……I don't know why but I want to let the other imagine the scenes similar to the way I do….and that's not the only reason….I feel something is incomplete in my writing if it's not detailed well. I'm sorry if it confused you…..I hope it didn't though.

I'm desperate for your comments…..do give comments and give suggestions too…..if you want it to be more boring or longer or shorter or more funny or more serious, etc……….tell me in the comments.

I hope silent readers also post their comments…….and I hope all of you loved and enjoyed everything and all the scenes till now.