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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hope you all like it….SORRY FOR THE DELAY but I hope the part is worth it!!! I hope no one mind's because today's part is smaller than the last one.


Kuch Kuch…


Recap: (Last part page 5) Angad was hardly listening, he was just staring out of the window and just thinking about what to do with his life.

Prithvi tried to cheer Angad up. But nothing happened and he sat on the bed a little furious and sad for his brother-like-friend.

Kripa looked up 'Yah that's perfect. Thanks a lot.' She looks behind and notices that they were blocking other people Kripa was a little guilty 'Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! I'm really sorry for blocking all of you.' Kripa and her friends moved out of the way [and stood on either side of the staircase> and they were packing their stuffs while the students were racing up the stairs.

'Hello. Is this Mr. Khanna here……...Yes. Yes. ……You've been appointed as an English Assistant teacher at……<They talk in mute>……Don't worry…….See you tomorrow then……..Bye.' Mr. Shah hangs up and is happy and relieved that now his students will finally improve in their English skills.





Kuch Kuch…
Part 4


The next day-At Meridian High School.

Outside the school gate we see a car parked. The driver's door opens; someone's black-leather shoe touches the ground/ road. We look up slowly, blue Levi's jeans and then a designer's shirt with a black jacket-like-coat (you know the jackets which look like coats but they aren't…..yah….so those ones!!). Do you think we shall look up to see the person's face…ummm……okay then…let's see…….Oh My God……the person's ANGAD!!! Angad looks up at the High School building and looks comfortable. He's confident. <Note: the paperwork had been done long time back, the principal had hired him after looking at his certificates, files, etc…>. Some girls in their uniforms enter the school while looking at the new guy on the road with his car. Angad smiles at them and they some of them start whispering, some blush, some laughs, in return while walking through the school gate. After a few more seconds standing there and looking around, adjusting to the surroundings as he has never been any where near that area before, Angad walks through the high school gates towards the General Office. While he is walking he is getting stares (mostly admiring) from almost everyone whom he passes by. He smiles to everyone whom he meets on the way. He enters the Office and is about to ask something when the lift doors (at the left side of the General Office Lobby) open and some teachers come out and some go in. Mr. Shah spots Angad.

'Hello Mr. Khanna. Welcome to Meridian High School.'

'Thank you Sir. But Angad will go.'

'Okay Angad then.' Mr. Shah smiles.

'So…uummm…what do…' Mr. Shah interrupts him 'First of all Angad you will come with me to meet the principal then we'll have to get you a cabin in the staff room and introduce you to the other teachers too…' He looks at his watch. '…and all that in just 35 minutes. After that the bell will ring and then school starts.'

Angad takes a big breathe then says 'Okay then let's start the day.'


Outside the General Office after 20 minutes, the B friends are talking and fooling around and enjoying themselves at a bench. Kripa looks at her watch and sees it's 7: 55 am, 15 minutes left for the bell to ring. Kripa remembers something.

Kripa: 'Guys I have to go up now.'

Rani: 'Why?'

Kripa: 'Sir said that today the new teacher would be coming so he wants me to meet the teacher first.'

Dia: 'Oh…umm….okay then.'

Lina: 'See ya at recess!'

Kripa: 'K. Bye guys.'

And with that she takes her backpack with her and starts walking up the stairs (using the front staircase). Meanwhile a few meters away (25 meters you can say), Angad walks out the school gates while playing with his car keys around his finger. Rea notices the new guy and gasps, the others look at her while Rea points at the guy walking out, some of them catch his sight while some don't. Rea points towards a car a few meters away from the fence, for the others (who didn't see him yet) to see him. They all see the new guy in his car driving away. The girls start talking about him soon after they recover. The guys are a liitle annoyed as they've lost the little attention they had.

Kripa reaches the 7th floor and walks towards the staff room. She opens the door and the janitor receives her. Kripa asks for Mr. Shah then the janitor goes inside and dials a 3-numbered-code. After two minutes Mr. Shah appears at the door.

Kripa: 'Good morning Sir.'

Mr. Shah 'Good morning.'

Kripa: 'Sir you asked me to…' Mr. Shah interrupts. 'Yah…I wanted you to meet him now but he's gone to park his car at the back of the school, the school's car park.'
Kripa: 'Oh…'

Mr. Shah: 'I think maybe I'll introduce you both to each other at lunch, after you finish your lunch come up and find me and then Miss Reena, him and you can decide how to begin the lessons and everything. Is that fine with you?'

Kripa smiles 'Yes sir. It's totally fine with me. So see you at class then. Bye sir!!'

Mr. Shah: 'Bye!'

Meanwhile Angad was parking his car.

Kripa was racing down the stairs (using the back stairs-her classroom/ homeroom is near the back staircase). She reached the 5th floor and was going to her classroom. She remembered that she had wanted to buy a drink for recess from the canteen. She put her backpack on her desk. When she was about to leave the classroom one of her classmates asked if she could drop a piece of paper in the library box. Kripa didn't mind and so she took the paper and raced back up to the 7th floor using the back staircase again. She entered the library and dropped the paper in the box and came out and started racing down the back staircase (The canteen is near the back staircase area).

{The details now might sound like they aren't racing but only walking….but actually it's like they are racing and the scenes shift to each of them after every two seconds. But since I'm so detailed each 2 seconds might be a paragraph long!! Hope you don't mind that.}

Angad was walking towards the back staircase, he started racing up the stairs to the 7th floor, to the staff room, to his cabin.

Angad was racing up the stairs at full speed since he thought that the students would be hardly using the back stairs at this time since the bell haven't rang yet so most of them must be just using the front stair case (the back staircase and the front staircase are directly opposite each other; they are at either end of the corridors of each floor).

Kripa was racing down the stairs not thinking that there can be someone coming up the stairs too.

Angad racing up.

Kripa racing down.

Kripa was about to reach the 4th floor and Angad too. Both of them had no idea that there might be someone at the other side.

Then. Suddenly. Angad. Reached. The. 4th. Floor. And. Kripa. Too.

Kripa was going to turn (just the way you turn when you reach a floor and you are going to continue down/ up the stairs) and so was Angad. They were too blind in their speed that they didn't see the other coming then:

Angad and Kripa bumped into each other. To prevent Kripa from falling on the floor and getting hurt and not falling himself, Angad hold the handrail with his left hand and slid his right hand at the back of Kripa's waist to hold Kripa from falling. Angad was bent over Kripa and Kripa was bent backwards with Angad almost exactly on top of her but they didn't fall down. (I think you know the position of Kripa already if you know that Angad is bending over Kripa with his right hand holding her waist.)

(<only music no lyrics of-remember that the music will be kind of going a little faster than the original one> Kabhi Na Sakoon Aya starts playing behind)

..............................

After a few seconds when they were settled in that position. Kripa saw the guy's eyes and Angad saw the girls eyes too. They both had just began to stare at each other's eyes.




Preview: What will happen between Angad and Kripa? Will love blossom or enmity be born or something else is in stored for them or nothiing's going to change? Stay tuned!!


Bear in mind: When Kripa fell in Angad's arms the original song <the original song means that the song which I always imagine the scene with> was the song which was played in KUM KUM (from Star Plus) behind Sharman and Neeti (When they first met in the festival celebration party held at the Wadhwa Household <after a few scenes they were also playing dandiya>, ) Neeti had fallen in Sharman's arms and they were staring at each other and there was a song <a little fast-in a happy rhythm with no lyrics but only music> behind them playing.

When you see this dotted line ".............................." that means the song have started when you see the dotted line again that means the song have stopped. Everything which happens in between the two dotted lines that means that all that while the song was playing at the back. If you don't see the 2nd dotted line yet (just like in today's part) that means that the song haven't stopped yet. I may not sometimes use the dotted lines but when I do, just like toadys's part, and then you'll know why it's there but I'll be mainly using those dotted lines for music (song with no lyrics).


Guys sorry for the delay…actually on 10 Dec it was my grand-mom's birthday and then on 11 Dec it was my friend's birthday and 12 Dec it was my Aunt's birthday…..so I think you can understand.

I hope no one here is left confused. I'll be waiting to read your comments and I hope that you liked it. Do tell me if it was interesting or not and if you don't mind can you tell me if you like or don't like the way I put things into details? I want to know so that next time I'll write something which you'll love to read too. And one important thing….does anyone here need translations for the hindi/ urdu words into English? Do let me know.


Can listen to today's song here: <maybe if you listen to the ad version of the song, the music might be clearer as the sad version starts with the music while the happy version starts with the lyrics and the music.>

http://www.musicindiaonline.com/music/hindi_bollywood/s/movi e_name.8095/



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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
wowo... interesting.. plz continue sooon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part sumra it was really good
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
i just read ur fanfic and i think it's fantastic......plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: koolaries4

wowo... interesting.. plz continue sooon...

Thx a lot...😊

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part sumra it was really good

Thx so much😉

Thanks.

Originally posted by: meme25

i just read ur fanfic and i think it's fantastic......plz continue soon

Thanks a lot......glad that you liked it.....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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woohoooo they meet and wow how brilliant was their meeting...i can jus imagine angad holding kripa like tht its sooooo great plzzzz hunni continue soooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

woohoooo they meet and wow how brilliant was their meeting...i can jus imagine angad holding kripa like tht its sooooo great plzzzz hunni continue soooon 👏

Thanks a lot....I hope you and the otehrs like the next part....I didn't check it overally I just wrote it and will just post it here without reading it once overally...I hope it's not bad....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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So did you like the last part……..I was very impatient to write the part and the way they met…….lolz…I was really waiting for myself to get all the other scenes done so that I can write my favourite Part till now……it was in my head for like about 2 or 3 months……I had thought about the story long back…..


Kuch Kuch…


Recap: (Last part page 6) 'So…uummm…what do…' Mr. Shah interrupts him 'First of all Angad you will come with me to meet the principal then we'll have to get you a cabin in the staff room and introduce you to the other teachers too…' He looks at his watch. '…and all that in just 35 minutes. After that the bell will ring and then school starts.'

She entered the library and dropped the paper in the box and came out and started racing down the back staircase (The canteen is near the back staircase area).

Angad was racing up the stairs at full speed since he thought that the students would be hardly using the back stairs at this time since the bell haven't rang yet so most of them must be just using the front stair case (the back staircase and the front staircase are directly opposite each other; they are at either end of the corridors of each floor).

Angad racing up.
Kripa racing down.

Angad and Kripa bumped into each other. To prevent Kripa from falling on the floor and getting hurt and not falling himself, Angad hold the handrail with his left hand and slid his right hand at the back of Kripa's waist to hold Kripa from falling. Angad was bent over Kripa and Kripa was bent backwards with Angad almost exactly on top of her but they didn't fall down.

..............................

After a few seconds when they were settled in that position. Kripa saw the guy's eyes and Angad saw the girls eyes too. They both had just began to stare at each other's eyes.





Kuch Kuch…
Part 5




(note that the song is still playing at the back until the next dotted line is shown….so all this is happening while the song is playing at the back…) Kripa had unknowing had put her right hand on Angad's left shoulder and her right hand had slid around Angad's neck while falling down (but after Angad caught her). (…that was so that you can know which kind of position I'm talking about.). After a few seconds of the staring session. Kripa came back to her senses but Angad had not. Kripa was thinking 'I never saw this guy here before, who is he?' Kripa then said (we can only see her mouthing them as the song has covered the voice too….everything said while the song is playing is muted…but we can see them mouthing) 'Erm, excuse me?' He was still staring at her. She was a bit embarrassed now 'Umm…Thank you…excuse me…uumm I'm in control, you can leave me.' He hadn't heard her, he hadn't returned back to his senses yet but he noticed her say something, he said -while still lost in her- 'Not a bad one…' Kripa was confused now. She tried getting out but she couldn't, she kept struggling but he never moved an inch even. She began to feel annoyed 'Who the hell is he?' she thought.

She gave an annoyed look and then tried to struggle and get out from his arms again. She was irritated because she didn't get out from his arms and he didn't let go of her too. She struggled more to free herself. The hand she had around Angad's neck was now on his chest trying to push him of her. She struggled to free herself by trying to push Angad of her. Angad was still staring at her but was getting a little annoyed by someone who was like poking him, pushing him. He came back to his senses and realized the position he was in and who was poking, pushing him. He at once steadied himself/ let go of Kripa. Kripa was standing in front of Angad and had a frustrated look on her while she was fixing her uniform. Angad was standing in front of Kripa, he had an annoyed look on him and looked at his clothes if they were okay: looked good or messy as in weird or bad or out of place. He got furious at the girl when he saw his shirt's collar button had come out.

…………………………

He kind of scold her –he had almost forgotten about the few minutes which had just passed by- 'Can't you see who's coming around the corner if you can't at least you can…' he shows her the button 'you see because of your carelessness you spoiled my shirt!! You know how much this shirt cost me...' he looks at her and notices that she's a student 'oohhh…no wonder, you know you high school girls, you girls are so dumb, retarded idiots, whenever you see a hot guy like me…' Kripa is surprised and has her mouth open for a while then closes and thinks while he is still talking 'What the hell does he think he is?' '…you girls can't stop yourselves and try some way to get physically in contact with them and then pretend that you are disgusted…' Kripa interrupts 'Aye (pronounce as the letter 'A') Mister…' points a finger towards him 'Who the hell do you think you are? You think you'll say anything and I'll listen. Look mister I didn't came falling into your arms willingly…I was just coming down and you came to happen there so I just bumped into you okay? Get that straight…and by the way if I want I can say the same to you so better watch your step next time.' She says the last bit as a warning and puts her finger down and is about to go down. But before she can move…


…THE SCHOOL BELL RINGS…

…she looks furiously at Angad and says 'Because of you I couldn't buy my drink….aarrggg' She gets furious again because she was very thirsty and because of that guy she couldn't buy a drink. She moves to go when she goes up one step she's forced to stop because…Angad is still standing there still annoyed by the girl but then something else starts to irritate him and he sees that the girl's bracelet was stuck into his jacket's zipper (all that while they were standing close to each other but had not noticed this before till now) Angad smirks while taking out the bracelet/ fixing his jacket zipper and the bracelet 'I know I'm irresistible but girl you don't have to look for ways to come closer you can just speak, you've got a mouth, then at least it won't be that embarrassing for you…and you don't seem shy too.' He is done fixing the bracelet with his jacket, before he leaves the bracelet, he holds her wrist (the one which has a bracelet on) up and then leaves it –she was too confused in an annoyed way by what he was talking about that she didn't notice what he was doing- her hand just falls down in the air and she comes back to her senses. He says 'You're welcome' in an I-did-a-favour-for-you way –he has one of his eyebrows arched-. And she smiles sarcastically and in an anger tone she says (still smiling sarcastically) 'Thank you' and went up. Angad, after a while started, going up and since she was in front of him, he was looking at her back. And both were thinking about each other annoyingly: how the other had behaved or how the other exaggerated the whole scene, etc...

Kripa angrily went back to her classroom and sat pouted.

Angad reached his cabin and called one of his friends because he had nothing better to do.



Preview: What will happen between Angad and Kripa? Was this a trailer or the complete film? Stay tuned to know how the first English lesson would pass by when Angad and Kripa are assigned to stay together.



Bear in mind: When Kripa fell in Angad's arms the original song <the original song means that the song which I always imagine the scene with> was the song which was played in KUM KUM (from Star Plus) behind Sharman and Neeti (When they first met in the festival celebration party held at the Wadhwa Household <after a few scenes they were also playing dandiya>, ) Neeti had fallen in Sharman's arms and they were staring at each other and there was a song <a little fast-in a happy rhythm with no lyrics but only music> behind them playing.

Reminder again: When you see this dotted line ".............................." that means the song have started when you see the dotted line again that means the song have stopped. Everything which happens in between the two dotted lines that means that all that while the song was playing at the back. If you don't see the 2nd dotted line yet (just like in today's part) that means that the song haven't stopped yet. I may not sometimes use the dotted lines but when I do, just like toadys's part, and then you'll know why it's there but I'll be mainly using those dotted lines for music (song with no lyrics).

Some scenes I make them very detailed so they seem long but they aren't.


Please comment……..I tried my best to make it good. One important thing (no one has told me answered me yet)….does anyone here need translations for the hindi/ urdu words into English? Do let me know. Can you tell me if anyone sounded gay or childish or weird……is there any part which you guys feel weird about please do tell me……..because I felt something didn't sound good about this part…..I don't know hwy….pleased o let me know so that I'd be less careless next time. I didn't quite put much effort in this part…..and please do let me know if there were any grammatical mistakes I mean you don't have to tell me which ones and all but just let me know since I didn't read it after I typed in everything so I'm not sure about the mistakes or any other stuff…

Can listen to today's (and last part's) song here: <maybe if you listen to the sad version of the song, the music might be clearer as the sad version starts with the music while the happy version starts with the lyrics and the music.>

http://www.musicindiaonline.com/music/hindi_bollywood/s/movi e_name.8095/
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Posted: 18 years ago
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just caught up sorry for not commenting on the last parts they were all awesome luved the way u made everyones charachters kaash angad came to my school itd be so nice id love school anyways it was gr8 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks...

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part sumra cont soon

Thanks...

Originally posted by: memze

just caught up sorry for not commenting on the last parts they were all awesome luved the way u made everyones charachters kaash angad came to my school itd be so nice id love school anyways it was gr8 😛

Thx a lot.......Angad'll come to your school......lolz....that makes feel that you kind of like the concept....thx....

I had begun to think that this fanfic of mine isn't good or something because everything is just too detailed and all.........but since I've got at least a few comments they make me feel better......

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