Kuch Kuch...(Pt5Pg7:smth hap-n bwt A n K)

Kuch Kuch…

The story hasn't begun yet-in this post……..but in this post I'll just explain things, introduce people, give some important details, etc…

Some details might not sound important, but in the future I might have some scenes for which you'll have to look for references here.

The introduction part at some points will be very detailed.

INTRODUCTION(S)

Angad Khanna

He finished his studies. He's 20. Have many friends. Girls die for him, ask him out, flirt with him but just stays till the limit of flirting with them for a while only, not more than that. He never went on a date with a girl. He will only go out on a date, kiss, etc…with the girl who IS the ONE for him. Before he starts an actual job, he'll only do part-time job and rest for a while before he actually starts to do a REAL job. He helps his dad with the work too. Josh is his best friend. Prithvi is like a brother to him…they are brotherly-friends. Alliyah is his close-cousin. Angad helps his friends a lot.
• Angad is close to his family and they love each other dearly.

Kripa Sharma

She is in Grade 11. She's 17. She has many friends. In their school, they have to wear UNIFORMS (Reference: Picture below). She goes to school by bus (public bus, sometimes it's a NON-AIR CONDITIONING BUS and sometimes it's an AIR-CONDITIONING BUS). On her way to school, after 5 or 6 stops, her friend, Lina gets on the bus the same as her. She can either take bus number '33A' (the last stop is at a bus terminal which is near school) or '37' (the stop where she and her friend has to get off is a little far from school, when she and her friend gets off, they have to walk to school for 5-10 minutes). She has one more friend, Rani which takes bus, but a different one, bus number '87A'. Her bus's last stop is at the terminal (the same terminal as the bus number '33A'). Lina and Rani are very close to Kripa. Sometimes Kripa tells some things to Rani and share with her and sometimes she can only talk about things or share stuff with Lina. Sneha is Kripa's best friend (they know each other since Grade 5, Sneha used to live in Canada with her mom and 2 younger sisters and brother but her dad used to live in Manchester since he worked there and only went to Canada once in two months for only a week. So because of that they moved to Manchester but Sneha's dad is a businessman so he has to leave Manchester sometimes for business meetings, conference meetings, business deals, etc…). They both are in different high Schools now, Sneha studies at a Canadian High School (this isn't the name of her high school, I'll mention the name of her high school in the parts). Sneha and Kripa don't meet or chat or talk on the phone much since they are study at different high schools. But they meet like once in six months or talk on the phone once in three months or just simply e-mail each other sometimes. Sneha and Kripa are best friends and they hardly meet or talk because they are busy. If someone tells Kripa not to tell others about it, she won't tell no matter what. She is someone who can be trusted. She helps others a lot…….she once even helped her friend finish her Science project when they were in junior class/ junior high school. Once in her primary, it was Christmas and children bought gifts to exchange…..and Kripa bought for all most all the students in her class…but one of her friend needed help and Kripa gave 1/3 of the gifts to her since some of the gifts were like bags and stuffs like that which her friend needed to put her things inside, etc…so Kripa was generous enough to give her friend 1/3 of the gifts she bought for other friends.
• Kripa is close to her family and they all love each other a lot.

Primary 1 to Primary six means Grade 1 to Grade 6.

Secondary 1/ Form 1 to Secondary 7/ Form 7 means Grade 7 to Grade 13(there's no grade 13 in some places but there are in some places…….so in my fanfic there will be.)

From grade 7 to grade 9, Kripa and her friends were all in the same class. When grade 9 finished and they all got promoted to grade 10, they were supposed to choose subjects. Some chose the Science stream and some of them chose the Arts/ Humanities stream.

For the Arts/ Humanities stream, students could choose an elective subject (compulsory) [Biology, Computer and Information Technology (CIT, Visual Arts, History] and a second elective subject (optional), Eng Literature.

For the Science stream students, they could choose an elective subject (compulsory) [Economics, Computer and Information Technology (CIT, Visual Arts, History] and a second elective subject (optional) either English Literature or Additional Maths.

They can only choose one subject as their elective subject. For Science students, if they want to have a second elective subject, they can only have one not two.

There are 4 classes for Grade 11 students, they are divided like,

5I-a Science class for students who chose ADDITIONAL MATHS as their second elective subject.

5C-a Science class.

5R-an Arts/ Humanities class for students who choose ECONOMICS as their core subject.

5D-an Arts/ Humanities class for students who choose COMMERCE as their core subject.

Some students who chose ENGLISH LITERATURE as their second elective are in class 5C, 5R and 5D. Students in 5I can't take ENGLISH LITERAUTURE since ADDITIONAL MATHS is their second elective subject already.

Any of Kripa's friends did not choose Additional Maths as their second elective-some didn't choose because they thought it'll be too hard. After grade 9, when the big group of friends turned into small groups and went to different classes in grade 10, Kripa was the only one left alone in her new class-because she took Additional Maths and none of her friends took that. The only lesson when Kripa could attend a lesson with all of her friends was FRENCH. French was the only lesson which was taken by Kripa and her friends. When Kripa was in grade 7, the friends she had then were still her friends now, in grade 11 but they are in different classes now. Kripa is not exactly alone in her class, she knows some of her classmates and they are friends but she's not VERY close to them (she's just not as close to her friends in her class as she is with her friends), they talk and work together but they hardly hang out together.
• The same goes for Kripa's friends (but they aren't alone in their classes like Kripa, they have at least 2 other friends with them in their classes).

Kripa's friends will be known as A BIG GROUP OF FRIENDS/ B friend too.

Kripa's friends (who she's not VERY close to [example: her friends in her class or her B friend's friends]) will be known as distant friends/ not close friends/ C friends.

B friends were the friends whom I talked about everytime-like when they all split up and all.

Between the B friends are some friends whom Kripa is not close to and there are some whom Kripa is close to too!!

List of B friends: Kripa (5I), Rani(5C), Lina(5C), Dia(5C), Angel(5R), Rea(5D), Chameli(5D), Bhumika(5R), Sanjana(5R), Niti(she went to UK before grade 11 started), Amaan (5D-he left in the beginning of the year for Manchester), Aditya(5D), Vivek(5D), Uday(5C), Neal(4T-he was supposed to be in grade 11 but he had left school for one year and went to Australia, after a year when he came back he became a year behind-also in a Science class but did not take any second elective subject)

In grade 11-school finishes mid-year because students have to study for their PUBLIC exams. Students have their first public exams in their lives in grade 11.

This is the school PLAYGROUND-do remember that.

This is how their homerooms/ classrooms look (HALF-FRONT).

You can see their UNIFORMS too. In them a boney person just looks thin and a normal sized person can slightly look bigger. It just simply makes people look a little bigger. Some wear full sleeved white cardigans and some where no-sleeve ones-which are called vests. These are their summer uniforms for both for boys and girls. There is a NOTICE board on your left and a big blackboard too.

This is how their homerooms/ classrooms look (HALF-BACK). There is a decoration board at the back. Remember that every term they have to decorate their decoration board.

***Whenever I post a picture of any other part of the 'High School' or a new character in the story later on….I'll always post their pictures here, on PAGE 1 also[the new characters pictures will be posted on the part where they enter and as well as on the first page (the new characters: the ones whose names are not mentioned above)]. Angad and Kripa's families and friends will be introduced when they enter the story.***

Please post comments as I will only know then if I shall continue this or not. I was thinking to start a fanfic in August and I well started in November. So please if you really want me to continue……post comments (Silent readers-please post comments if possible otherwise let me know if you want me to continue my fanfic my clicking the THANK YOU button or PM me.) I'll really appreciate if you all post your comments. My first fanfic at India-Forums. Please PM me if you don't like something about my fanfic, e.g.: the layout, the name of the fanfic (to change the name of the fanfic, I'll only permit 2 weeks time, after 2 weeks I won't be able to change it as everyone by then would be used to it.), the style of my fanfic, etc…

I'm really looking forward to your comments. Comment on it no matter if it's good or not. Do not hesitate, comment on both good and bad sides of the fanfic if you want to. I won't mind anything……I hope I didn't do anything which upset anyone and Thanks for reading it all……..I really mean it. Also tell me if it confused you-the introduction might be a little confusing for some of you but don't worry the actual parts won't be. Oh yes…….and do tell me if I shall make it longer or shorter or boring or interesting. I'll always try my best to fulfill your wishes and make this fanfic ROCKING!!!

*I'm sorry for the age gap…but I believe in a real relationship age gaps don't matter.

In my fanfic Angad had to be going-to-be-20 since he completed all his studies. I tried to do my best to close their age gaps by making Kripa a year older (in my fanfic she's supposed to be 16 but I made her 17)and by making Angad over 19 but not exactly 20 yet but soon he will be. So Angad is going-to-be 20 and Kripa is 17*

The first part will be only up if there are many comments here and I see desperation in them!!!!

The characters (pictures) will be updated when the first part is up.

Thank You. Hope you all will not only like it but also love it and ENJOY it!!!

i am not understanding exacly what kind of story r u trying 2 put up?
plz explain.

i like the intro.... and i'm sure you're story will be very interesting . i think it would be good if you would post the beginning of ur fanfic so that we'll know more abt ur concept. 😉
All the best!

lol wow so much introooooooo start the story soooon 😃

great intro and Concept Sumra that was really good can't wait to read it

gr8 ff and gr8 concept loved it and uve explained it excellentley love it pls cont soon

Hey right now I'm at school-we can use computer...don't worry I'm not violating school rules-I've seen the comments and as it's my first fanfic....and I think the comments I've received before I post my first part are enough.........and they are actually more than enough because I'M GLAD THAT ALL OF YOU LIKE THE CONCEPT AND THE INTRO OF MY FANFIC!!


I'll try my best to make them tidy....I hope they won't turn out to be messy. So since I'm at school now....I'll post the first part up when I reach home. That's a promise that today-monday-20/ 11/ 06-I'm going to post the first part up. Well I hope that you all will love it.

Thanks for your lovely comments again. This post was just to say THANK YOU to all of you for letting me proceed with my fanfic-without your comments, I would not have continued this fanfic-and to let you know that within 8 hours time from now onwards, the first part will be up.


I think I'm doing a little to much...well I really care about this fanfic... 😊

Hey just a small note……I'll be writing it mostly in English (I don't have a problem in Hindi or Urdu…….but just for some readers)……but as this is a fanfic…….I don't really know if I shall use the past tense or present tense…….that's confusing me……….I might mix them up……..I'm writing for a fanfic so it's confusing which tense to use. I don't want to to be like as if someone is telling a story like: Once there was a girl who was planting a bomb in her schoolyard………but then I don't know…..it's confusing which tense to use…..I hope you'll understand what I'm writing…..and I hope no one minds my use of tense……I'm not that bad in English. (Main itni bhi guzari hui nahi hoon.) I'll try to make everything in present tense though!! Hope I'm successful.


Kuch Kuch…
Part 1


Someone just got of from the bus number 33A. Another person got of from the same bus. It is 7:50 am. It is a winter morning (late November). We hear laughter. We see the both of their backs; we now know that they are girls by their long hair. One of them has tied up her hair into a pony tail and the other girl has left them open. They are walking in the bus terminus. Suddenly they stop when they see another bus has entered the terminal. That bus is bus number 87A. The two girls stand there waiting for someone. When the bus is parked, a girl comes out. We see her beautiful eyes, then we see her lips mouthing (we cannot year as she is speaking in mute) 'HEY'. The other two girls who were standing turn around to see who shouted 'HEY'. We see the other girl's back, she is walking up to them, we see her legs. When she reaches them, we see a pair of blank shoes, then we see white socks, then we see bare legs (and knees), then we see a green and blue dress (like a uniform), then we see that the girl is holding a white school vest (the sleeveless one) in one of her hands, then we see her neck with a necklace which has a sharp-pink beaded-heart locket, then we see her lips (again), we see her nose, then we see her eyes (again) and finally our eyes zoom out and we see her full face, she is Rani (Sushmita Sen as Rani). The girl who has tied her hair is looking at the road (the path where the buses enter the terminal) so we just see her hair. She's looking at the few buses which entered the terminal; she's waiting for the buses to pass them so that they can safely walk across the bus-pathway to the pavement (in the terminal). We don't see the other girl, but we know that the girl whose hair is open is talking (we see her green-blue uniform dress only) 'Where were you? We were waiting for you for so long. It's been 10 minutes and 37 point 5 seconds to be exact.' The other girl turns around, her pony tail swirls in the air, and we now see that she's Lina (Aishwarya Rai as Lina). She looks at her friends, the girl and Rani, a little confusedly in a cute way. After Rani heard that she starts to laugh 'Oh really. Looks like A. Maths has partly taken over you already. So umm…….let's finish the other…..what is that…….ummm…I think the other 20 seconds before we go.' The three girls start to laugh hard. Some passer-bys look at them. The girl says (still laughing) 'Well it's supposed to be 22.5 seconds not 20.' All the three girls were trying to calm themselves but before they could one of them (the girl) had said something which made them burst into laughter again. Lina was laughing too hard and Rani was trying to control herself and Lina. The three of them were laughing too hard that each of them had to put one of their arms against their stomachs to try to control themselves but it was of no help too. They couldn't control themselves. When again they were recovering, Lina looked at her watch and her eyes widen. 'Hey let's go now. The others will be waiting for us.' All three of them started to walk. They crossed the pathway and were walking on the pavement. When they were outside the bus terminal walking on the pavement, the girl jerked up. 'Oh My God!! Oh My God!! Where's my hair band?' she now brought her backpack from her back to the front (one of her arms are still carrying the backpack-I hope you know what movement/ action that is) now. She is opening the zips back and forth now. 'Where is it? Gosh how could I forget that the teachers are walking here and there in the morning to check the students uniforms if they are tidy or not.' Still finding. 'Gosh!! Where IS it?' Lina is grinning. Rani looks at Lina a little confused then smile knowingly. Lina pretends to cough. The girl is still finding her hair band between the books now. Lina says 'Let's go now. We might get late.' Rani says (grinning) 'Umm……yah let's go……you can find your hair band while walking.' The girl-still searching-without looking up says 'Okay…but walk slowly…' When the three of them were walking, Lina purposely takes out the hair band from her uniform's right pocket can kind of takes it half way out from the pocket so that anyone who glances that way can see the hair band there. They are 10 meters away from school. Out of desperation, the girl looks up from the back, then side ways, then when she's about to look back in the bag she spots something like a black fluffy object poking out from Lina's pockets. The girl now realizes that Lina was playing a little prank on her. She says out loud (kind of knowingly)'Oh…NO…..You aren't getting away from this.' (this-the prank not the hair band). Lina starts running-jogging actually, while running she purposely takes out the hair band and drop it on the floor. Rani is laughing at the back and now running to catch them up. The girl picks up the hair band and the wind starts blowing harder as she slowly walks towards her school gate. The hair is all getting messy as the wind is coming from behind her, so when we see her face it's mostly covered by her hair-many hair strands covering her face-so she turns her back-we can see her back now. The wind is now blowing on her face, so her hair is flying back now. Rani and Lina are waiting at the school gate for her to finish so that they can all three enter the school together. We see her hair in her hands tying up her hair. When she's gone, she turns around and we see that she is Kripa (Neha-from Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai- as Kripa).


Preview: Someone is looking at the graduation photos. Is that person a she or a he? If she, then guess who is she. If he, guess who is he.


So that's for the first time. It's short I know but if you want it to be longer or shorter or interesting or boring, etc…you've got to tell me in the comments.


Hey for the girl whom I introduced first, Rani, where you expecting her to be someone else…..I mean I didn't introduce Kripa first (I wanted it to be special……introducing the MAIN-LEAD character is common…so I introduced her friend first!!).

Please do tell me how you like it. It's my first part…………….I'm eager to know how I did it. I can only know and improve myself if you comment. If you want more nice-interesting-cool scenes, you've got to comment or PM me. Do not hesitate….tell me my good and bad sides…..that's a request….I really need to know. If you don't have a problem-(I don't mind)-than you can rate me out of 10 too. Not only this time but every time-as you like. It'd be nice if you rate me out of 10.