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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#341

liked the chapter, but m sorry to say this but Arnav is fast loosing respect in my eyes. I wouldnt have minded if he had been in a relationship with LA before marriage, pressurized by Nani to marry Khushi and continued with his relationship, staying detached from Khushi.

But here he was totally enjoying married life with Khushi, at the same time having sex with LA...maybe they started before his marriage...but m sure there mustve been an instant where he had both n compared n figured out that with LA it was better.

And he is not even regretting it... honesty is fine but where is the guilt...what if it had been Khushi cheating him with some other man ?

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roopathomas

@roopathomas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#342

Love all your stories... This is not one of them esp because of Arnav's character. As a writer you have great imagination n comes up with such different stories.

As someone mentioned the whole story continues to be biased to arnav n khushi continues to suffer. Arnav married, tested, divorced, with no remorse went with another lady n now shamelessly calling khushi back when other woman left him. In all this khushi suffered. Where is the justice here for khushi.? If it was other way around would arnav have taken all these quietly? I can understand arnav is an open minded character in this but still any man with common sense would think twice before discussion his sex life with his girl friends to his wife. Oh my.. That even sounds sounds blasphemous. Even if he repents he can't be redeemed in front of my eyes. That too kind of a guy who compares n leaves his wife because she is shy or not adventurous in bed. How pathetic.! He should have a lonely life.

Give some respect to a woman yaar. Khushi shouldn't have relented so easily.

Look forward to reading your next story.

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#343

amazing updates.. well Khushi is right just a day and Arnav concluded that Khushi is one for him and she missed him for long.. want Khushi to be strong.. loved the updates 😊

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sanasahel

@sanasahel

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#344

We didnt have se* here ...hahahaha kushi should strangle himmm

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#345

okay seen as its an unexpectedly early update i'm going to let everyone catch up before i respond to all the comments but in the mean time thank you guys!

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: jagrutid
okay seen as its an unexpectedly early update i'm going to let everyone catch up before i respond to all the comments but in the mean time thank you guys!

Did you start writing the next update 🤣

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#347

^ haha no but i'm going to write a response to everyones feedback because it takes too long replying to each one.. one by one ..

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: jagrutid
^ haha no but i'm going to write a response to everyones feedback because it takes too long replying to each one.. one by one ..

I can understand how hard it is to reply to each and everyone

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Manasa

@ManKiBaath

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#349

I was not at all expecting this early an update, and least of all the sudden turn of events in the story, which were nicely set-up 😊. It was indeed a very long chapter, Jagruti, but worth every word of it 👏⭐️.

Khushi's anguish was spot on. "Aap Kahe aur ham maanle.." and the frustration along with her anger was so evident in every word she said. The way she laid out her perspective when she said "ab kyun...aap akele hai is liye, ya phir ab lavanya nahein hai is liye" or the way she laid bare her heart and said "Aap ne hamare bare mein kuch palon ke liyey kya liyay aap itne behchen hogayey hamne toh salon betayey hai Arnavji" or the way she put Arnav on the spot when she said "Kya tha usmein joh usmein joh ham aap ko na de sake" or when she finally wanted him to answer if this is the real deal "aap kahin phir se apna irada badal de toh?". She was every bit what she had to be and I am really glad that she ended up making the right call for everyone's sake and most of all for her sanity.

After the verbal assualt of sorts like that from Khushi, I have to give credit to Arnav for coming back with equally brutal honesty and not beating around the bush.

Gearing myself for an exciting next chapter given the sneak peek you gave in the teaser.