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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Amazing..
self-respect is indeed important..She is brave ..she stands for hp ..good..he needs to know the effect of his words..

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

'loving the way the story ismoving

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

lovely update
wonder what the past is
thanks for the pm in advance

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shiv456

@shiv456

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

I like this Khushi awesome

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Aanchal

@aanchu19

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Hey Jagruti

Sorry I could not comment on last chapter. Your each update always filled me with a warmth. You are a fantastic writer when it comes to decribe feelings within stories. I always love the way you create petsonality of Arnav and Khushi.

This story is so different than others. Arnav has left Khushi for Lavanya and still she came back for nani or maybe for Arnav.

I will not ask any questions regarding the story. I trust you. You will bring the best story again.

And...I am not active on any other forum than our IPKKND that is why I was unaware of your presense.

Thanks for the update

Waiting for next

Take care

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shubhi15

@shubhi15

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Superb update

Happy to know that Khushi is having self respect..

Arnav should repent his decision badly

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: aanchu19
Hey Jagruti
Sorry I could not comment on last chapter. Your each update always filled me with a warmth. You are a fantastic writer when it comes to decribe feelings within stories. I always love the way you create petsonality of Arnav and Khushi.
This story is so different than others. Arnav has left Khushi for Lavanya and still she came back for nani or maybe for Arnav.
I will not ask any questions regarding the story. I trust you. You will bring the best story again.
And...I am not active on any other forum than our IPKKND that is why I was unaware of your presense.
Thanks for the update
Waiting for next
Take care

Its been a very long time but its great to see you here, i only started this a few days ago and this is the first thing i've written ever since the end of colors of compulsion and lessons in love i just randomly felt like writing for ipkknd again recently so went ahead with it. To be honest i'm not very active either on i.f i have this and one more SS running in the etr2 forum and that it is. I hope you enjoy this too..

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: GoGreen
Aww...jagguu new FF.
Update soon.

Give us happy ending after twists and turns.

good to see you on here - been a while! 👍🏼

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: MoonBow.
Nice update!
The only thing I struggle with is the Hindi dialogues. Sometimes there are eng translation. But sometimes not. Hopefully that is resolved.

So khushi is still in love? And arnav IDK what is up with his feelings. One day he is in love with La and another day he is fine with khushi's care and being the helper he needed.

I will try and make sure i translate all the hindi from the next updates where possible sorry I know i miss out things here and there. I havent gone into how Arnav feels as or where he stands as of yet that will be in the next chapter ..

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Writers response chapter 3
Thank you very much guys, your comments and feedback is always super encouraging!, some of you are far too kind with your words.. i've started writing the next chapter although I feel like what i've written reminds me too much of a moment in an older ff of mine when Arnav visits Khushi at her home so think i'm going to change it some what..
Thank you guys, dont think anyone had any major questions or things this time around, i'll try to incorporate more English translations in the next one and that's about it.

Edited by jagrutid - 9 years ago