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Posted: 8 years ago
Nihaar waali samasya ka koi to hal nikalna parega. Ek taraf yeh dono, who can't wait to be together and the other side is this innocent child who is torturing himself because he feels he's betraying his mom. Poor thing, can very well understand what he's going through emotionally, it's difficult for an eleven year to suddenly accept another woman as his mom, someone who has caputred his dads imagination in such a way. losing the woman of the house, the most precious person for both of them was the common factor until now and he feels cheated of this emotion. Time , infinite patience and love is the only thing that can make him feel happy again.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ok signing in ...for the double sundae treat. I woudnt mind a triple sundae actually. And when nisha is preparing the triple sundae for us, I promise to keep Tai knocked out of their way meds or no mEds. My k kind of triple sundae would be one of musk melon with chaat masala, another of jackfruit with honey and the third of guava with chilli powder.

As they are going to Mumbai for the wedding , pls send them to Lokhandwala Andheri,and make them
Have guava with chilli powder or their paan icecream and all the kids can have red velvet icecream. My return treat for the triple sundae
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
"Mamaji is on your side na?" Gags enquired

"sab hain bhi, aur nahi bhi... aisa sochen aap" Neel said

It's but natural . Them as ppl with their backgrounds are chalk and cheese. It's ok to be skeptical as it's not a sooraj Bajratiya kind of hunky dory weddings.
The most important thing is people should not poison nihaars mind with their comparisons of suvi and nupur even unintentional in a random conversation. He needs to be handled with care and space must be given by everyone including Neel for suvi to figure out her way with nihaar. It's not easy though... easier said than done
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Posted: 8 years ago
Alpashcha kaalo bahavashcha vignaa... too short a time and the obstacles many...hmmm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Goood Mooorrrninh Muuummmbai!! This is Kalpana on Nisha Space Radio Station. Shaher ki is daud me daud ke karna kya hai? Jab yehi jeena hai dosto to phir marna kya hai?

So Mumbai... Here we come the Baarathis for a ride in MUMBAI LOCAL rephrasing the dialogues from munnabhai going to Once upon a time in Mumbai Dobara!!! Ha Ha!!

Arre kya update update chillarela hai ... izzat lootrein hai kya teri? ...

Nisha Nisha Chillaneka!!


Waiich lafada hai na maamu ...
Apun ke bheje mein saala chemical locha hai!

Udhareech kabhi Sosy ne update dekar Sulaya hai ... ya idhareech ID ne maatha chumkar uthaya hai

Updates bhaut bade googly hote hai ... mil jaye toh badam varna saala moongphali bhi nahi hote hai

Chaubees ghante ka time hai ... khud nahi aaye ...

Toh fir kya karneka... phir toh Apun

Full confidence mein janeka aur ekdum vinamrata ke saath Update maangdaalneka!!

Apun ke paas Nisha hai mamu
Boletho yeh NishaGiri hai!!!!
NishaGiri Zindabaad!!!!

Toh Doston...shaher ki is daud me daud ke karna kya hai? Jab yehi jeena hai dosto to phir marna kya hai?

So Good day all. Before mera bye bye, leaving you with this MARATHI SONG of Neel singing to Suvi...

Ha Chandra Tujha Sathi ... romancing in the balcony... while Tai remains knocked out...

Ummeed hai Kal ko phir mulakaath hogi update ke saath
Yahi par Isi samay

Don't forget to tune in tmrw
Friends till then don't worry ,
Be Happy, Saionora!!!


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Posted: 8 years ago
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=a-8J10o2N3U

Copy pasting the links for the song. Be forewarned with the video of Mallika doesn't do justice to this melody ... strictly my personal opinion. Ha ha...


Phew !!! That post was as lengthy as That of an update.

In my quest for a good Marathi lullaby in place of an update to put me to sleep, chanced upon this beautiful melody. Copy pasting the lyrics here for our combined HOMEWORK OF ATLEAST THREE MARATHI WORDS For Those who are unfamiliar with the Language

, ,
this moon is for u , this night is for u ,
, ...
will tie flower garland to the sky only if u say "will be with me forever."
...
come ...
, ,
bring blossoming dreams with u , bring your shivering touch with u ,
, !!!
come as Indian bride with passion/desire near me , ,
come as a sweet , soft angel near me
, ,
these early instance of loneliness , have deeply surrounded me,
, -...
To tell me your sound/presence , this night has became very soft silky ...

So basically if we be good girls and do the homework ,Nisha might reward us with a DOUBLE SUNDAE AGAIN

😆 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Utsphurta Mudra (Spontaneous gesture)

"He leaned on Suvi's forehead and fumbled to free his fingers from inside her shirt, he cursed and hissed

She reached for his phone in case Preet ended up calling.

Which she did

Suvi answered the call and placed it on his ear

"Neel... ghar pe ho? Light nahi jal rahi" Preet asked

"Umm... nahi... thoda bahar nikal gaye they hum" Neel mumbled
Between his convo, freeing his hand but stroking and feeling her neck and curves

He was big and tall, she was short and curvy

She "fit well" into his frame

They teased each other with a smile as he spoke

"Aandhi aayegi lagta hai, are u doing ur walk?" Preet asked

He kissed Suvi's cheek firmly, hoping it was inaudible

"Umm... no... I think I tore the skin under my thumb nail... Sector 40 Rana Medicos aaye hum" he said

"AREY... U shud have told me na"

Neel was exhausted... he appreciated the concern and care, but he craved for privacy, much like a giddy teen that had just found sex

"Its OK" he reassured

"Nihar ko dein hum phone?" she asked

"Jee" he nodded

"Dadd... I am over 2 hours for video games for the night can I play one more please?"

"Niharrr... rules are rules puttar" Preet chided

"Dad please... I promise I wont play much tomorrow"

Which one are u playing?" he asked

He was now leaning on the wall, Suvi was being cuddled

"Super Mario" Nihar said

Neel laughed

One time Aadhya had beat Nihar in the "child version" of the game

"Aadhya will be jealous... but she is asleep" he blurted

Nihar was stunned

"Umm... are u at her house?" he asked shrilly

"No... no... No..." Neel bit his lower lip

Suvi stepped away... pale and afraid

"Are at my house?" Nihar stressed

"Yes beta... hum ghar hee hain" Neel shut his eyes and moved his head side to side

Suvi turned on the kitchen light and started making chai
She put away the half melted ice cream

She heard Aadhya moan and mutter she went into shush her

Neel was wrapping up

"To theek hai beta... hum Monday evening le aayenge?" he was reassuring his son

"Dad it will get sold out. Can we go tomorrow? please please please?" he was begging

"We can try" Neel said wearily


Suvi brought the chai and sat in the low divan, frantically smoothening the sheets
Hoping there were no bhel crumbs

"I came to Rana Medicos. But they are closed" he said "Chaliye aap so jaayen" he said firmly

"Good night" Nihar said eagerly as his friends pulled on his arm

He ended the call and came and sat by her

Pulling her by her shoulder, seeking that intimacy again

Suvi leaned as they drank the tea quietly

"Finger mein hey chot?" she asked

He shook his head

"Kya kehta usko main"

"U are right" she nodded

"Ice cream kyon nahi laayin?" he demanded

She looked at him funny

"Aise demand karte ho tum roj?" she asked

"Aur gusse mein" he said softly, smiling

Aadhya was mellow and easy, nobody demanded anything from her

Tai stole... what she wanted

"I dont believe" she said

"Khaana hamey time par chahiye, paani, nahaane ka paani, saabun" he listed

"U do some work or not?"

"Not a thing. Bhai hum shaadi kis liye kar rahe hain" he cackled

She punched him
The chai spilled over, splashing on his thigh...

She picked up a draped dupatta from a sofa backrest and sponged it off

They smiled when they both realized that the act was so spontaneous... Nihar was again forgotten as they circled hapy thoughts...





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Posted: 8 years ago
Vishwasaghaata Nahi

"Aaj kal koi bura nahi maanta. Aap hamare yahan ruk jaayen" Amma spoke in her soft kind voice, inviting Suvi to stay over at matunga at Mamaji's house
when she will be in Mumbai for the wedding


Suvi smiled gently "Aunty mere friend hey, Borivili, Panvel, Thane har station par" Suvi chuckled

"Yeh to bahut achhi baat hai, par yahan kisi ko pareshaani nahi" she insisted

"Umm... Neel ka apartment bhi khali hai" Amma continued

The women paused... as they both let that last bit sink in

Amma was voluntarily offering up a piece of Nupur's domain

Suvi was being invite to usurp a thing Nupur owned

"Aunty... umm... Am... uh" Suvi trembled unsure

"Amma keh sakteen hai beta" Amma insisted

"Amma" Suvi practised audibly and inaudibly

"Jee" Amma agreed

"Amma... it will be too soon... mere ko Nup... Nihar.. mera matlab Neel ke ghar pe reyna theek nahi feel hota" she said

"Woh ghar bhi hamare ghar ki tarah hai" Amma said

"Umm... Amma... Nupur ke parents" she said

"Hmmm" Amma paused as if not ready for the Q

Suvi bit her tongue... and shook her head

She realized she had no right to put such a dignified lady in a spot

"Woh baat yeh hai" Amma struggled to answer that Q

"Amma... its OK... its OK... mere ko poochhne ka nahi tha mee uddhata (I am being rude)" Suvi said quickly

"We all want Nihar and Neel's happiness beta" Amma said clearly

Suvi nodded suddenly emotional

She noticed she was not in the mix

"AND yours" Amma said quickly "and Aadhya's"

Now the tears came...

"They will be happy if Neel lived with their daughter's memory" Amma said almost in a whisper "Atleast for now... atleast for now... woh hamesha ke liye aisa nirnay nahi lenge" Amma was being very rational

"Jaldi ho gaya nai?" Suvi said calmly

Amma didnt agree

She did not disagree either

"Like I said Neel, (pause) YOU and Nihar have to be happy "aur aadhya"

"Aadhya Nihar ko both pasand karti hai amma" Suvi said with pride

"Bachon mein aur badon mein yahi antar hai beta" Amma said

"Ya" Suvi agreed

"Bhuvanji aur Ragini are struggling to let go" Amma wept

Suvi realized she was struggling herself

Suvi wept for a woman she has never met

"Neel is a very simple, earnest man" Amma said "Unke liye khel nahi hai" she said reassuring Suvi that he didnt go around making impulsive decisions like this daily

Suvi wept harder... and nodded, covering her wet eyes first, with her hands, then clamping her mouth shut so a sob wouldnt escape
She had married a con artist, such humble good faith statements from Amma instantly appealed to Suvi's heart that was sorely in need of attention and reassurance.
Rutwik's treachery required an investigation of undue gravitas, but Suvi had wanted none of it...
For now, she was just going to savor Amma's lines







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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you sooo much for the Double sundae Nisha. Good Day to you.
Both of them...belter of updates...
Oooh!! We are getting into serious territories here as you layer them for us. The sensitivities involves falls so very delicately in folds.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Utsphurta mudra
Not only was suvs gesture of wiping off the spill off his trousers spontaneous, even her reaching for his phone having her wits about her in that amorous moment and placing it on his ear was spontaneous too. Even seeing the dicsomfort of seeing Neel cover up his presence in Adhyas house to Nihar, her having her own kid makes her understand the sensitivity here for children.

YES, she not only is fitting well in to his frame. she is tuning in beautifully mentally too. The discomfort of the feeling that they are cheating in front of Nihar ... is my God... such a difficult spot to be.

But i'm a little more concerned about Aadhaar here. The ' Are you in MY HOUSE' shrieking from Nihaar ... this MY HOUSE COULD spell some trouble for Aadhaar here as that poor kid Nihaar is going to be touchy about Aadhya's new increased space now in his home now. SO MUCH IN PLAY HERE NISHA.








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