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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: PriteeMisra

Kalpana, your post was dhinchak.



Barobar preeti 😳 . Aai shapath! Tai gets me going 😆 .

And isn't Marathi cool 😛 ?!!

Oh I forgot to add !! This is only a Draft. You could , being the legal go to add on a few more clauses to make the prenup fool proof... no loop holes possible... 😆
Edited by Errantnomad - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
saadha khalbhala (Plain excitement)

Tai had to be taken to an urgent care hospital after she threw up her breakfast that Sat morning. When they returned home that night there was no time to cook
Suvi made a quick poha and boiled eggs again...

Tai was knocked out with the meds she was given

Neel was spending the day with Gags and the boys

Some science and art camp in Faridabad at some tech company

"Shaadi idhar karta to ghar use kar sakta tha" Gagan handed his two and Nihar an ice cream cone

"The family is all in Mumbai" Neel nodded

"No no toppings for me" "thanks" Neel shook his head at the clerk

Gagan handed him his scoop of plain vanilla

"Aisa kaise khayega... plain?" Gags teased

"My life has all the excitement I need" Neel chuckled

"Amma ne kuch kaha?" he asked

"Umm... no... no not really... u know... she is not thrilled... she is ambivalent" Neel walked with Gags

The kids were all at a corner table

"She will come around"

"the question they ask is if "I" will come around" Neel said softly

"Kya matlab?" Gags paused wiping smudge off his tightly wound Sikh beard and moustache

"U know... she suspects I will wake up one day and realize this is not what I wanted" Neel said gruffly

"Huh" Gags listened

"Since Nihar is completelly against it... I cant even make a strong case" Neel said

"Yes you can boss!" Gags said firmly

Neel looked at him

"Tu gall sun... Nihar is 11... he will obviously be pissed" "Dont connect the two issues"

His oldest came running "Dad... can I have a five rupee coin?" for the arcade machine in the corner

Gags felt his pocket, Neel handed him a Rs.50... "get change from the clerk" he pointed

Gags felt his pocket for his wallet

"Forget it" Neel stopped him

"Mamaji is on your side na?" Gags enquired

"sab hain bhi, aur nahi bhi... aisa sochen aap" Neel said

Gags understood

He nodded

"Dont let their sitting on the fence get to you... if you think its right... DO IT" Gags urged

"there is no IF anymore" Neel grinned
"haan sorry sorry" Gags chuckled

"August 7th keh rahin hain Amma" he pulled his phone out and showed Gags the text

Nihar was obviously not paying attention to the game
He was shooting daggers at his Dad

He had spent the whole afternoon doing that

"I am sure about this Gags... Nihar ka sochkar humey bahut dar hai" Neel whispered

Gags stood in front of Neel blocking out Nihar's view

"He will be fine yaar... trust me... Preet hai pados mein... if he doesnt get along with Suvi... Preet can step in" he said

Neel's face clouded with fear and concern

"Ummm..." he sighed

"GALL SUN... ik second... meri gall to sun" Gags placed a hand on Neel's shoulder

"Dont go in thinking the worst" he whispered

"Inko humne jab se kaha tab se inhoney na Suvechha ke texts ka response diya na baat karte hain" Neel was shocked

"You know kids... they have nothing in their hearts... they are extra expressive, just so as to make a point"

Neel was unconvinced

Gags turned around to check on the boys

Since the "view" was cut off Nihar was secretly relaxing and enjoying with his friends

Gags took the opp to sneak Neel out of the store into the 47C heat to be able to talk freely


"Dont make it look like you are unsure yaar, Suvi nu bura lagega..." Gags said as soon as he shut the heavy glass door

"Bilqul nahi... the thought of being with her makes me crazy" Neel broke into a glorious smile

"OYE HOYE... kee muskraahat hai boss" Gags punched him fondly

"When its this quick and this crazy then its normal for people to suspect its abnormal?" he asked


"Loki jo mann mein aaye... sochan de... tuannu ki?" Gags asked sipping his fast melting ice cream

"In all this I dont even know if Aadhya will like this" Neel said

"Kinne saal di haigi?" "Panj?" he asked

Neel nodded

"Bass... tu chinta nahi kar..." Gags reassured

"Hafte ki chutthi nahi le sakte aap?" Neel asked sadly

"Kaash yaar... do din tere waaste le liye maine... Preet ko karta hoon tere hawale, " Gags laughed

"Desh Nirmaan ka annual convention hai Aug 15th-20th Talkatora Stadium mein, I want to be back by 14th" he said

they talked about work for 20 minutes.. going back in when the boys ran out of money for the machines

Suvi called him late on Saturday night

He was overjoyed to hear from her

"Kisi kaam se kiya?" he asked

she laughed

"Batayen kya kar sakten hai aapke liye?" he asked smiling

"Tai so gayi... aur Aadhya bhi" she said

His heart hammered...

"Nihar awake hey?" she asked

"Nahi... aaj woh Gags ke ghar hai" Neel explained

"Oh" she said sadly

"Uski jagah hum hain" Neel said

He got in his car and drove to her society...





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Posted: 8 years ago
Your daily stalker has signed the log for the day Nisha !! 😳
Just one query...Is the timeline and calendar in ID on another track or are they too in Feb now ? Matlab shaadi ke liye kitne din baaki hai ? 😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
Vani
I have a lousy memory

But as far as I can recall
I ended the previous part sometime around the end of the school year?
The story begins in April? or May?

So I placed the wedding in August

IF and IF I publish it (yeah... like thats happening) I will have to massage the dates to sync it all up

For now... I am not going to bother too much with accuracy
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nooo not feb...then aug 7 will be too long!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
She said 47c
It can't be in feb in delhi
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Vani

I have a lousy memory

But as far as I can recall
I ended the previous part sometime around the end of the school year?
The story begins in April? or May?

So I placed the wedding in August

IF and IF I publish it (yeah... like thats happening) I will have to massage the dates to sync it all up

For now... I am not going to bother too much with accuracy

Great ! Iam behaving as though there is a wedding in the family to prep for ... lagnaachi tayyari 😆
Wish you well and hope you really, seriously take on publishing both your works !!

Though Sosy would be a monstrous challenge with its very size and with us loyal readers unwilling to let go of any teensy weensie bit even !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its so so exciting.
I am loving this.

Lil concerned for Nihar but I am sure he will come around.

Not worried about other members including Amma as I am sure that once she see's Nihar happy she will be happy.

Nisha, please society pahuchne ke baad kya hua aaj batado na. Please.

P.s.: It really doesn't mater which day date it is.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yes Nisha aage kya hua aaj hi bata do na please kyunki as u know its early morning here and I don't want to keep thinking all day ki aage kya hua
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: VeeIyer

Great ! Iam behaving as though there is a wedding in the family to prep for ... lagnaachi tayyari 😆
Wish you well and hope you really, seriously take on publishing both your works !!

Though Sosy would be a monstrous challenge with its very size and with us loyal readers unwilling to let go of any teensy weensie bit even !!


Vani, Sosy will be in part(s).

Part I - Before marriage
Part II - Post marriage before kids
Part III - Nivi being born and her early years.
Part IV - Wait for twins so on and so forth

Nisha, it indeed was awesome to read that you are considering of publishing the work.

I guess, we here would be happiest to have our copies whenever it is published.

Good Luck and we await the good news.
Edited by PriteeMisra - 8 years ago

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