FF: Welcome: Chapter 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wet, gloomy and grey, that's one intense welcome. Thank you Manchester for welcoming me with such a warm hello.

Heer, had just landed herself in the city of her dreams. Or at least it looked like the city of her dreams in the glossy brochures and the fancy website. Coming to the best business school for my masters was her late mother's dream. She always wanted her daughter to be qualified and not dependant on anyone; like she was all her life.

Making her way to the welcome desk, dragging her luggage with her; at the same time soaking because of the crazy weather made her dread her decision. Okay maybe for just a few seconds, before she gathered herself and reminded her of her oh so big ambitions and desires.

Heer had her mind in the right place, focus and determined to achieve what she sought after. She knew what she wanted from her life.

Trying to take her check in- form out from her backpack she finally made her way to the welcome desk.

After completing all the formalities, she finally got the keys to her home for the next year. She knew her room would be dingy, but small was an overstatement for this room.

Well, I guess this was all part of growing up and having new experiences. Brushing all the negative thoughts, she picked herself grabbed her bag and head out the door.

She was trying to figure out how to get to the town centre to get all the necessities for a good night's sleep. That was all that concerned her at this moment, she needed to sleep. She didn't care about brushing her teeth, eating or surviving. All that mattered at that moment was sleep.

Frazzled by the confusion, she saw a group of people standing nearby. She could tell they were speaking in hindi. She found rejoice in hearing her mother tongue after 23 hours. That seemed like the only viable option at that time, to approach them and see if they could help her out.

As she approached them, she figured that they too were freshers who were as confused as she was. Suddenly out of no where, a guy interrupted their conversation.

He was kind of cute, okay who was she joking, he was really cute. Butterflies, ravens, parrots, elephants everything fluttered in her tummy. He started speaking and Heer lost her train of thought completely. Had she ever felt so fuzzy in her body?


To be continued guys! Let me know how you liked it!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi I'm athi and what's your name ?
Nice meeting you here. Welcome to Kis Desh forum. 😃

This is a cool surprise. Wow you're really good. Heer's thoughts and her background is very clearly described.
I love it already. This is different starting from Heer's perspective.
Let's see how her life is in new city, Really excited to know more about her and whom she met that got her all excited. 😆

Please continue.
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Hi I'm Trisha... Welcome to kis desh forum
Nice meeting u
N love ur story which u hv written
WHT a story.. Simply beautiful... Waiting for ur new post n further story
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Hi I'm Samana welcome to kis desh forum
Really nice meeting u
Your story was so nice & intresting
You did a nice start & u describe heer's
character in new way
Realy loving it plz continue & dont stop
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Hey 😃 I'm tara 😃 welcome to kis desh Forum 🤗 Wowww Awosome Start I just love it Heer ke character Different and loving it plsss continue 😃
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Welcome to kis desh forum 🤗
Loved the concept & amazing start !!
Please continue soon !!!
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Fabulous 👏 😃
Lovely start
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Hi I'm kulsum...😊
Welcome 2 kis desh forum!!!
Heers character is diffrnt nd nyc start...👏 ur start has captured me 2 read nxt upate... 😊I know u will write well so plls continue ur story...😊
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Amazing superb start wow
loving heer's character
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry Guys for the Delay!
Loved all your comments, honestly they made me feel amazing! And I will be replying to every comment individually! Lots of love and thank you so much for such a warm welcome.


Chapter 2

Heer
She knew as soon as he opened his mouth, that she had never seen someone speak like that before. The way he was talking made her go weak in the knees and completely helpless.

Are you mad heer? You just arrived in a new country and all you can think of is this handsome boy who you don't even know. Please seedhi hojao.

Hi my name is Prem Juneja, and you are? Excuse me, I'm talking to you! I'm Prem Juneja and you are?

Oh Me, snapping out of her day dreams, Hi Prem, I'm Heer Mann.

Nice name, so everyone's left to check in their dorms, what was it you were confused about?

Oh, me! I was looking for a way to get to the town centre, wanted to get some general supplies for my room.

Oh that's Great, I'm heading to the town anyway, want to come along?

Oh sure, that will be of great help Prem. Thank you so much.



Heer headed with Prem, boarded a bus and started taking in her new surroundings. She was liking it, it was different and It was surely going to teach her a new way of life. A way of life she never knew. A life of freedom and openness, communication and love. This was going to be her chance to create her life as she wanted it to be. Not a life that she was given.


Prem

Prem she's a fresher, please control your thoughts. So what if she's a fresher? She's a Masters Fresher, that means technically we're in the same year. So that makes it okay, doesn't it?
Remember Prem, you've never been given the option to love. Your destiny has been decided. I can't believe even in this day and age, parents can fix someone's marriage when they're born. So, does that mean I can control my heart from feeling.


So Heer, why did you come to Manchester?

To find Love, ummm, I mean to find myself.

Oh, why Manchester?

It's the perfect blend, a busy city but not too busy. I won't lose myself here, I'll find me.

Interesting Heer, usually people say that I've come here because it's a good university or something else. This is the first time I've heard someone say that they came to university to find themselves.

You can say I'm a bit different than the rest.

I sense a friendship Ms. Heer Mann. I like you, this is going to be interesting.




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