~kyph continuation 2~Pg. 13 END.......... - Page 3

Originally posted by: Temi

only two comments,no one hardly reads my fanfic,za7n4b i appreciate it dat u liked it,i'm gonna continue if i get atleast 6 more comments from different members.anwayz eid mubarak to all of u!it's on dec 31st.

HAPPY EID MUBARAK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks for the eifd mubarak same to u i really want u to conntiue people may read it but dont comment so keep continuing for me

does no one ike the fanfic huh?

temi come on post the next part i am waiting

sorry everyone i have exams coming up in a few dayz and cant post any parts for about two weeks cause i have to study for my exams.i have the worst subject ever first which is global studies and i have to really study for dat so i'm really sorry but i promise when my exams r over i'll try to make the next part long.sorry!

Originally posted by: Temi

sorry everyone i have exams coming up in a few dayz and cant post any parts for about two weeks cause i have to study for my exams.i have the worst subject ever first which is global studies and i have to really study for dat so i'm really sorry but i promise when my exams r over i'll try to make the next part long.sorry!

oh its ok i will be lukng forward to the next part

thanks for letting us know from before

promo:


person(lady voice)- kripa tum nehi bacho gi!mai tumhe mardalungi!i hate u u ruined my life and snatched away my luv from me!all because of u my life is a wreck!i hate u!

we see kripa tied in a chair her hands and feet r tied.

kripa - maine kuch nehi kiya!angad mujhe bachaney aiyga!
tum kuch nehi karsakti!

angad finds dem and when he sees the person he gets surprised.

Who is it?wats going to happen

i'm gonna post the next part in a few days cause my exams r gonna be over on friday but i'm gonna be busy all next week,sorry!i hope u liked the promo.

grt promo u have made it even more itersting

i wanted to suggest that u move this fan fic to

kyph section becos more people will read it and

see it i dont go to fanfic area to see it i have

a link thats it

part 19:


the next day:

angad - kripa!

kripa - haan!ab kya

angad - kripa!

kripa - ati hoon ati hoon just wait!

angad - kripa!

kripa comes in the room,she sees angad shirt less and trying to decide wat shirt to wear.

kripa - lemme guess shirt nehi mil rehi right?

angad - haan,muhe doond do na.

kripa - uff!,angad tum kabhi nehi badlo gey!ur not a little kid anymore!

angad - okay okay watever meri shirt do na

kripa gives him his shirt and is about to leave when angad grabs kripa's hand and pulls her to him.

kripa - angad,choro mujhe,maine sur aur prateek ko nashta dena hai,choro mujhe!

angad - nehi,pehle mujhe apna kiss do.

kripa - angad!

angad - kripa!

kripa - okay okay.

kripa is about to kiss him and instead she bites him.

angad - owwww!dats it!i'll get u

kripa - hahaha!first catch me!

angad is chasing kripa around the room when kripa runs out and closes the door and the door hits angad's face!

angad - owwwwwwwwww!kripa!

kripa(imitating angad in a funny way)owwwww kripa!hahaha

angad - 4get it but i will definetly get my kiss!

kripa - keep dreaming hahaha!

angad gets ready and kripa is downstairs giving everyone breakfast.angad comes downstairs and sees kripa,kripa smiles at him and laughs a bit.

kannan - kripa kya hua,why r u laughing zara humko bhi batoa.

kripa - kuch nehi kannan vo vaise hi.

after everyone is done with their breakfast,the men go to work and the ladies do their own work.

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we see a dark place and a person sitting on a chair.

person - kaam achi tara se honey chai hai,koi galti nehi ho ney chai hai,varna tumhe pata hai.

guyz - yes madam humhe pata hai.

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kripa is in the madir and we see those two guyz standing outside in a van

guy1 - hey vo hi ladki ha,right

guy2 - haan vo hi hai.

kripa goes down and is about to go when in front of her a van stops and a guy opens the door and pulls kripa in.

the thali falls down and kripa screams.when she is in the car,she screams until the guy cover her mouth wid a napkin dat has something on it and then she faints.

then we see angad having lunch in his office wid nishant,karthik and shabbir.then angad gets a call

person - kripa hamare paas hai angad,tum pehle bolte te ki agar mai kuch karoo to tum mere wo haal karogey ki mei such nehi sakti lekin ab dekho mein kya kiya ke main kya karungi.agar tum kripa ko bacha ne chahtey ho phir is addrress mein ouw

the person tells angad where to come.angad hangs up and tells shabbir about evrything.they both go to dat place.

kripa then gains conscoies and sees the person

kripa - tum!

person - haan mein!

person(lady voice)- kripa tum nehi bacho gi!mai tumhe mardalungi!i hate u u ruined my life and snatched away my luv from me!all because of u my life is a wreck!i hate u!and all because of angad!he threatned me dat he will kill me if i do something dat will break up karthik and priya!i will show the both of u wat i can do!i will kill u!

kripa - maine kuch nehi kiya!angad mujhe bachaney aiyga! tum kuch nehi karsakti! nothing!

angad and shabbir reach the place and luk for kripa,when angad and shabbir find dem,angad sees the person and gets surprised and angry and then it ends!

who is it?what will angad do?
i hope u liked this part.my exams r finally over yay!but i still gotta go to school isnt dat sad.

Originally posted by: Temi

yea,and thnx

oh ur welcome u still do have optipon to move it bak to kyph forum ateast that way u will have more comments

part20:

recap:angad and shabbir reach the place and luk for kripa,when angad and shabbir find dem,angad sees the person and gets surprised and angry

angad sees the person and gets surprised and angry.the person he sees is tanisha!

angad - tanisha tum!

tanisha - haan mein angad!wat!heraan ho tum!

angad - how could u do this and why!

tanisha - you know urself angad!dat why i'm doing this!u guyz kicked me out ur house and treated me so bad and seperated me from my luv,karthik!

angad - i feel like strangling u right u *****!😡

tanisha - hey!none of this would have happened if u didnt mess wid me!if u both didnt seperate me from karthik!

angad - tanisha we didnt seperate u from karthik cause u never were with karthik and u both were never together and one!karthik never liked u!

tanisha - oh shut up angad!

angad - if u do anything to kripa or else i.-

tanisha - u will wat huh!r u trying to threaten me!

tanisha goes to kripa and grabs her by her hair and says

tanisha - angad if u do anything or even move a bit closer.......then she is dead!

angad - TANISHA!😡

tanisha - shut up!

shabbir is behind tanisha and grabs her throat and takes the gun from her.then angad runs to kripa and unties her.then the guards come and are almost about to punch angad when angad grabs both of them and flips them and beats them up.more guards come and shabbbir starts to beat them up too.kripa is left in one side,tanisha is on the floor and right in front of her there is a gun,she then sees kripa and smiles her evil grin.then kripa sees her luking at the gun and runs to grab it,kripa grabs it and hits tanisha by kicking her and runs to angad.angad gets the gun and shoots and all the guards.kripa stands in another side watching everything and being worried.tanisha then gets up and runs to kripa and tries to strangle kripa,angad and shabbir dont see this and r busy fighting.

kripa then bites tanisha's hand and runs.tanisha then runs to a dead guard and takes out his gun and runs to kripa and kripa runs.kripa is running and tanisha is after her.

then angad notices he doesnt see kripa or tanisha and gets worried,he beats up one last guy and angad and shabbir run to luk for kripa and tanisha.then we see kripa still running and hides nehind a pillar,tanisha runs and luks for her.kripa is about to run when tanisha grabs her and says

tanisha - gud bye kripa!hahahaha

angad and shabbir find them and sees tanisha putting the gun toward kripa's stomach.angad gets surprised.when angad is about to run to them.........we hear the sound of a shot and we see that tanisha shot kripa and kripa falls down😭.tanisha runs and angad runs to kripa and shabbir runs to catch tanisha.

angad - KRIPA!😭

kripa - (weakly) angad.

kripa faints.angad takes kripa to the hospital and the doctors come

doctor - this luks like a attempt murder case,call the police

angad - doctor police ko hum bulaatey hai lekin plz kripa ko bachoa!plz!

doctor - okay okay,nurse take the patient to the operation theater.

soon the family members all come to the hospital.

dadi (crying)- yeh kya hogaya hai,meri kripa kai saat kyun!😭

kannan - dadi aap chup ho gaye,angad ko dekho bechara udar operation theater kai door sai nazar nehi hatara,baut rora hai,aapy ko angad ko samalney chaye.

dadi goes to angad

dadi - angad beta

angad (crying)- dadi,kripa...kripa ko kuch nehi hoga na ?😭

dadi - beta have some hope,dont worry vo teek hojaye gi.

the doctor comes out of the operation room and says

doctor - abhi hum kuch nehi bhol sakte,patient critical condition mein hai.agar wo kal subha takar nehi uti to....

angad - to kya!

doctor - patient ki jaan aur katre mein ho sakti hein.

angad gets surprised.and starts to cry.the sad version of kyph is being played in the background.

angad goes into her room and sits next to her and says

angad - kripa utho,mazak math karo plz utho!kripa! he starts to cry even harder.😭

everyone is watching him crying out side the glass window and they all are in tears.😭

dadi -(crying) mein nehi angad ko dukhi dek sakti,pata nehi uska kya hoga ab.😭

we see angad still crying.and then it ends.

i hope u liked it!i came back from school and i was free after such a long time so i decided to post the next part.i hope u liked it.😉