~kyph continuation 2~Pg. 13 END.......... - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nobody liked it! 😭 am i dat bad.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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No I liked it a lot plz contuine soon can't wait for you to pla contuine soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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when r u continuing then im waiting so eagerly
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome fanfic!! loved the part!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey everyone i'm gonna post the next part in a while just wait 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 18:

angad sees kripa pick up da crumbled paper and gets worried.he runs to his cabin and says


angad - hey kripa tum kya karehi ho ider sub kuch teek hain na.

kripa sees angad and puts down da crumbled paper on the desk.

kripa - vo kuch nehi sub teek hai wo tum apna lunch bhool gey.

angad - thnx kripa.

kripa - angad mein jaati hoon rishi ko meiney kannan ke paas chora hain,vo baut tung kara ho ga kannan ko mein jaati hoon take care bye.

angad - bye

kripa leaves.then angad takes the crumbled paper and puts it in his pocket in case he might need it.

kripa goes home and sees rishi asleep on his bed.she goes to kannan.

kripa - kannan thnx so much sorry agar rishi ne tumhe tang kiya ho.

kannan - no problem kripa rishi ne nehi tung kiya mujhe.

kripa goes to pick up prateek and sur from school.while she's driving the car we see angad sitting in his cabin doing some work,then he gets a call.

angad - hello

guy - kripa ab nehi bache gi hahaha

angad - WHO R U ?!

guy - dat doesnt matter,meiney kripa ke gari ka breaks ko fail kiya hai ab wo nehi bache gi say bye bye to ur lyfe angad hahaha!

angad gets up and calls kannan

angad - kannan kripa kahan gehi hai

kannan - wo sur aur prateek ko school se leney gehi hai kyun kya hua angad any problem

angad - kannan kuch nehi hua anywayz thnx

we see kripa driving she sees a red light and presses on the breaks but the car doesnt stop she keeps pressing on the breaks but they dont work.she calls angad

kripa crying - angad mere breaks nehi kaam kare gari nehi rook rehi plz mujhe bachoa!

angad - kripa dont worry i'm coming tum kider ho

kripa tells him and angad gets there.

kripa is driving the car and trying not to hit the other cars angad is behind her. kripa then sees a truck coming towards her car and gets worried and scared angad calls her and tell her to jump out of the car,she jumps out and angad gets out of his car.we see kripa roll down to a tree and she bumps her head on it and faints.we see angad run towards her and picks her up and takes her to the hospital.angad tells nishant to go and pick up sur and prateek.

the doctor checks kripa and comes out.

angad - doctor kripa teek hai na

doctor - haan vo teek hai lekin ap ko uske achi si take care karne pari ge,unko sar tori si chaot aye hain lekin wo teek ho jaygi.

angad - thnx doctor

doctor - ur welcome take gud care of her.

angad goes to kripa' s room to meet her.

angad - kripa tum teek ho.

kripa - haan angad, angad kuch dinno se mujhe hain itni attacks ho rehe hain,tum muhjse kuch chupare ho?

angad - kripa kuch nehi chuparaha hoon me tumse.abh chalo hum ghar jare hain

kripa - okay.

they go home.sur and prateek are sitting on the sofa watching tv when they see kripa has something wrapped aroung her head.

they both run towards her and say

sur prateek - mama ap ko kya hua hai.

angad - mama ko kuch nehi hua beta tori se chot aye hai.

kripa - haan beta kuch nehi hua

angad takes kripa in the room and makes her lay down and go to sleep

angad goes downstairs and sees shabeer.he decides to tell everything to shabeer about the letters he is getting and everything abut wat calls he is getting and about wat happened today.

angad - shabeer

shabbir - haan angad

angad - i want to tell u something

shabbir - kya hai angad kuch problem

angad tells everything to shabbir

shabbir - angad tum police ko kyun nehi kcuh batatey

angad - nehi shabbir usne mujhe mana kiya hain,agar mein police ko kuch batoa phir wo kripa ko kuch karle ga aur mein nehi chata kai kissi ko kuch pata chale is bare mein.shabbir promise me ke tum kissi ko kuch nehi batoa ge is problem ka bare okay.

shabbir - okay angad i promise and i promise i will help u with this problem.

they both hug and it ends.

i hope u guyz liked it.and people eid is gonna be on december 31st so happy almost eid ul adha! 😃 yay!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no replys ? how cam this is a wicked fanfic
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Posted: 18 years ago
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only two comments,no one hardly reads my fanfic,za7n4b i appreciate it dat u liked it,i'm gonna continue if i get atleast 6 more comments from different members.anwayz eid mubarak to all of u!it's on dec 31st.

HAPPY EID MUBARAK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY ITS AWSOME something to look forward to after kyph and something that should have happened in the real show hope ur in the place of kekta awsome work 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: armaghan0

HEY ITS AWSOME something to look forward to after kyph and something that should have happened in the real show hope ur in the place of kekta awsome work 😊

omg thnx 😃

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