MADHUBALA aur PIYA -EK HI SIKKE KE DO PEHLU!!! - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the update 👏
Eager for the next part 😃
Thank you for the pm 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
abhay meeting madhu in bridal attire was wow...he didnt want her 2 b married 4 sure.What is Madhu's mystery?he says she didnt run from her wedding it was just 4 a play.but she seems 2 b upset.Abhay saying that they r actually a couple but just fought was cute n naughty.Piya saying that luv doesnt end in separation was so nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
nice one
so abhay met Madhu
mystery about the wedding dress
like how he sulks every time she says rude
does their love story have to end on sad note like the book though
hoping she comes to him in end
looking forward to story continuing
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Nice Part.😊
The Wedding dress part was so Interesting.😊
The Whole Part was so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow amazing update loved it can't wait for next part sorry for late reply thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
awesome update. loved it.
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awesome update



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Posted: 9 years ago
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EPISODE 4:


Banner credit : sameera 12

The episode starts with the boy seeing that girl and he stands up , he while coming near her says : Madhu...

when he's about to reach her , she disappears.

He is shocked and starts breaking things of his room while crying bitterly...


https://i.imgur.com/9JQ03vc.jpg

Piya is continuing reading the book:

The book:

I was now continuously looking out but still from the corner of my eye i was continuously trying to see her and her face was still indifferent, she was continuously staring her bag which was in her lap and was in deep thinking...

She suddenly fell asleep , no...no...not that serial type romance in simple words not on my shoulders.

She kept her head on her bag which was in her lap.


I now stared her smiling , her cute face looked more cute while sleeping but still something incomplete , i always felt seeing her...


https://pbs.twimg.com/media/BWi18N1CIAARj5b.jpg

I was continuously staring her and admiring hr beauty when i heard her murmur in sleep itself.

Madhubala (while sleeping): leave me i am not gonna marry you...leave me...kavitha how can you do this to her...i said leave...

I stared her with a shock.

Devil :maybe it will be lines of her play na yaar , why are you so tensed...

I was thinking this when the angel said : don't you see the pain in her eyes ...i find it real...not a drama...

I was convinced , i was continuously staring her this time in deep thinking ...her face expressions changed every time , it felt like she was having a horrifying dream...

"its just a dream " the devil spoke.

" but dreams reflect our condition na" came the rebellious tone of the angel..

I was now not thinking but staring her and suddenly...

She woke up with scream and hugged me...


All the people in the bus were staring me , i felt like i am a torturing husband whose wife has lodged a complaint against him and they are staring me just to start beating me in a few seconds...

I was shocked as she was not even moving...

"oh hello , leave me" i said slowly in her ears..

She left me and eyed me tensed and said: sorry...


All the people now turned there faces back ahead and i was relieved...

"no problem" i said adjusting myself.

She suddenly laughed .


I eyed her questionably when she said : you look cute when you are tensed.


I smiled at her and said : so will you be my friend...

She eyed me with a look that i crossed border without passport and i was about to draw back the hand which i showed her but she suddenly shaked her hand with mine...

I was on cloud nine.

" but only friendship" she said me smiling and i nodded happily.

She then resisted sleep and opened her bag and took out a book.

I eyed it, i was shocked the name inscribed on it was " Someone special in my love story"

The first book which i wrote , a flop.

I eyed her shocked while she started reading it, i said shocked : madhubala , why are you reading this...


I actually emphasis the last word.

"excuse me, why i can't read it " she asked me questionably.

" this is a flop book , the writer also will be flop and you are reading this??" i asked her trying to be over smart.

" oh hello , if you say anything about AR na , i'll kill you , he's a great writer , in his every book , i find true essence of love and you consider him flop writer, don't even speak a word against him" she told me in an angry tone.


https://i.imgur.com/UItYFBA.jpg

Oh , her anger also kills..

" but you can't deny this was a flop" i said smiling ..

"its because people doesn't understand true love " she again tried to convince me..

I was just smiling ,the angel was correct that this girl will make to write and she, for her smile i can write thousands of more books the thought that came to my mind .

She was staring me .

" ok sorry , you read , by the way have you read "extraordinary love" " i asked her in curiosity.

"i have read every book of AR thousand times , it gives me immense relief" i saw her eyes shining with an unknown happiness while she said so.

I was smiling at her and my angel just said : see if you can clear pain from her eyes by just the mention of the name of your books then you can make others also happy by this na...do write abhay...

Hey guys i end it here , badly in need of your feedback...

guys please suggest me an actor for a negative role and an actress for a positive supporting role...

Edited by Piyaliiii - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Loved the update 👏
Eager for the next part 😃
Thank you for the pm 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Madhu was disturbed in her sleep bcz of some painful thoughts.So guess its true that she was forced 4 marr n she ran away.She got up n hugged him in fear was nice.It was so nice 2 c her smiling after that.they r becoming friends.Without knowing who Abhay is she is reading his books n praising him.How will she react when she knows that he is Abhay?

I loved this:if you can clear pain from her eyes by just the mention of the name of your books then you can make others also happy by this na...do write abhay...

So Madhu becomes his inspiration to write n make others smile.sweet

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