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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Mrumi

Just Amazing..👏


I like BC's stand.. Crime pf passion bhi koi crime hain..

Lolita reminded me of scene when Naina got expelled from KMA after tests and she requested Naina to come at mess. That was the only scene where we could see soft Lolita..
After appraisals Lolita miss toh gayab hi thi.

Huda is still unconscious..😲😲... Get well soon Huda.. your friends need you.. aakhir plan banane wala koi toh chahiye.. Aalekh akela kya karega..

Come back soon Rajveer...😳

Update soon.. thanks for PM..
keep smiling.. keep writing..😊



Yes, even while writing I remembered that scene of Naina's explusion. Actually lolita mam was a nice character i feel...but somehow it disappeared. And as a warden of girls hostel, she understands girls better i think..thats why i decided to show this soft side of army women.
And show me jaise dikhaya tha ki huda fatak se theek hogya, i felt kuch zyada hi speedy recovery thi vo...ab bhai 3-4 bullets lagi hai, aur vo ek cadet hai...toh thoda time toh lgega hi recover hone me...And is baar planning BC ki hai😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you!!😛😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Reply for part 3:-

Hey sorry for late comment. Interesting part. 👏 👏
Thank you! and its ok...late hi sahi, comment toh kiya 😆

I just loved the way Suri jee convinced BC that he should at least try to listen cadet's pov may be they are right.😉 😉 yes I think itne saalo me Suriji n BC ki itni friendship hona toh banta hai yaar

Finally BC gave them an opportunity and was convinced that there are many loop holes in the story. Lolita was really sweet this time. 😊 😊 haan yaar ab he is a brigadier rank ka officer, usko agar ye sab nahi samjhe toh ye baat sahi nahi lagti...aakhir BC ne bhi apne career me aise conspiracy n corruption hote dekhi hogi


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Reply for part 4:-

Eventful update.

BC is really smart he sent all of them on a secret mission as only he know that where they have gone as all of them are in his touch and with Bunty as well.

Naina and her sadness is really boundless but when Alekh is with her she shouldn't have to worry.

Ali is worried for Pooja. These friends are missing each other after all they never got separated.

I am sure Huda will recover soon.

Continue soon.



yes huda will recover in next update 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: RNlove4life



<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Thank you!!</font>😛😛😛
<font color="#660000" size="5">Yes, i hope Raj will enter soon...but for now I cannot say anything as the story is taking completely new turn from the show. Also i want to keep Gunny in this story...so just be with me..! I hope you will like it😆</font>

i'll definitely love & excited for new turn & twist in your story but agar romanch ke sath chori-chori chupke-chupke romance bhi ho to kya baat hai;-) Gunny ka welcome hai waise ek baat bolu jab show me gunny ki entry hui jab uska first scene dekha to mujhe laga tha kahi wo raj to nahi i know it sounds silly & me like a stupid but kya karu uss time tv pe kekta mata ki kripa se memory loss/plastic surgery ki badi dhoom thi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: npksk8495

i'll definitely love & excited for new turn & twist in your story but agar romanch ke sath chori-chori chupke-chupke romance bhi ho to kya baat hai;-) Gunny ka welcome hai waise ek baat bolu jab show me gunny ki entry hui jab uska first scene dekha to mujhe laga tha kahi wo raj to nahi i know it sounds silly & me like a stupid but kya karu uss time tv pe kekta mata ki kripa se memory loss/plastic surgery ki badi dhoom thi


Well maine bhi aisa hi socha tha...n the ease with which he gelled with the cadets, Ali ka usko ustaad kehna...somewhere felt like aisa kuch hi hai ki he is Raj... And then jab vo Gunny n vidya k husband k flash back scenes dikhate the...mujhe tb bhi ye hi lagta tha ki ab Shayad dikhane vale h ki Raj ko terrorist pakad k le gye n then torture n fir plastic surgery
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
wow new fic on RN
cool yr
read all parts good work dear
but plz jaldi RN ko saath lao yr i want to see them together
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Reply 4 part one...
Awe update dear... so what if d team of 6 is reduced to 4,so what if rajveer isint dere eit dem,so what if someone is alive or dead..one thing is clear dat raj nd his cadets will never let d country down...someday somewhere sometime eveeything has to be alright nd fine...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Reply 4 part 2...
Is major ki aisi ki taisi ho...nd curious to know who is dat man jise raj ko marne ke liye hier kiya hai aur usne raj ka naam shayad tv ya kahin suna hoga...
Bd dis was a very coool update...pls pm me if u can when u update nxt..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reply 4 part 3...
Har jagah bade bade aksharon mein likha hota hai ki love is nt a crime...aur yahan to crime for passion ka itna bada bekheda hai...chalo mission to shuru hua nd am happy dat bc is helping d cadets...super update

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