TR 2S - your love haS changed me [completed]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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YOUR LOVE HAS CHANGED ME


SHORT 1



Rey: "see Taani we r together from past 3 years we like each others company now you are moving to London and I am not that's it this is end I don't want any relationship at all"



Taani: "Rey it's not my dream only it's ur dream also from past three years main aap ko itna toh Jaan gayi hoon that you also love to dance but for some reasons you are leaving your dream behind"


Rey: "it's not my dream Taani it's not mine you have mistaken something"


Taani: "OK fine see this and tell this is also fake the guy who is dancing like it's life depends on that moment only is not you say that I had made this fake video" she said while putting CD in video player and started it



Rey: "stop this non sense you only care about yourself your dream that's it" he said while snatching remote from her and off the video player and throws it harshly on mirror


Taani: "OK fine you think like this na I am ready to not go to London for you I love you rey yes I really love you" she said while holding his arms


Rey: "but I don't love you and I can never love you you was just a attraction for me as I was for you that's it we get physically once that's it now you go and get a life fulfill your dream and let me live mine" he said while throwing her hands harshly and turned around Taani was hurt by his words bcoz Rey was giving physical attraction name to her love and the person she loves is using her physically


Taani: "OK fine Mr.Reyaansh Singhaniya if you want this only na then I will not come in between your success hope you will reach at Hugh level like this only by using girls but I am not like you I loved you and will fulfill your wish if you want me to go and pursue my dream will go now at venue and will accept offer byee for ever" she said and went before she get weak at her decision only after she left Rey punched his hand on wall which cause blood flow from his hands like water someone tap at his shoulder



Rey: "Taani just leave me alone" he said controlling his anger but that person took his injured hand



Rey: "Taani can't you understand once...dad aap" he was scolding bciz he thinks that person was Taani but was shock seeing his dad


Hareesh: "haan main tumhara dad Taani nahi" he said


Rey: "but aap yahan kab aaye?" He asked ub confusion



Hareesh: "abhi when you were fighting with love of your life and vaise bhi ye ghar mere bete ka hai I can come here whenever i want can't I?" He said while searching first aid box


Rey: "of course dad you can but dad I don't lover Her get that clear" he said and got up from bed to leave the room but his dad stopped him in middle



Hareesh: "calm down angry young man OK fine I believe you that you don't love her waise bhi she is not that capable ki wo tumhari girl friend and singhaniya's ki future daughter in law ban paaye I Also believe ki she was just behind your money,fame and was her only motive was to go physical with you..." he didn't completed his sentence when Rey got up with jerk



Rey: "dad how can you say about Taani such a shit things you say you treat her like your daughter and now what are you saying" he said while his dad again made him sit



Hareesh: "this shit ye shit hai toh you finally accept that this all are shit and I am just repeating your words what you said to that innocent soul few moment ago Rey that time I was feeling Shame that how can my son use some girl like this and the thing you are calling physical attraction was her virginity you has used her and just throw her I don't know about with Taani was your first time or like this many girl you have used but about Taani you was her first and last time I can't do anything to you also bcoz you are my son" he said and started to dressing his wound there was silent for few minutes



Rey: "ahhh taani slowly it's painin..." but he stopped realizing it his dad



Hareesh: "Rey accept it you love her isse pehle bhot dher ho jaye aur wo hamesha ke liye London chali jaye" he said



Rey: "no I don't lover her" he said looking down


Hareesh: "yes you do" he said looking at rey


Rey: "NO " he said little louder


Hareesh: "Yes" he said with same pitch


Rey: "NO"


Hareesh: "yes you do accept it..." he said very loudly but interrupted by rey


Rey: "yes I love her but I can't be with her but hum without commitment hi ache hai relationship main aane ke baad shaadi hogi uske baad wohi roz roz ke jhagde like you and mom did then divorce I can't tolerate all this" he said irritatedly and sat with hand on his head



Hareesh: "Rey you have to understand that sab marriages ek jaisi nahi hoti me and your mom we both were not happy with each other if one can want to live one's life according to their conditions if one's marriage is unsuccessful it really doesn't mean that sab unsuccessful hoo you guys are made for each other get some brain Rey yrrr"



Rey: "I guess you are right dad mujhe Taani ke saath aisa nahi karana chahiye tha she don't deserve me dad" he said almost in crying tone



Hareesh: "Rey don't behave like girls who are you to decide that she deserves you or not let her take this decision"



Rey: "but it's too late dad usne contract bhi sign kar diya hoga" he said while crying



Hareesh: "Rey get up and go it's never too late don't act like girls" he said while pushing him towards door



Rey: "thanks dad" he said while kissing his dad cheeks



Hareesh: "arghh I am not Taani kiss her go" his dad said and Rey was blushing "don't blush you are getting late kahanse ye ladkiyo wali aadat seekha hai" his dad said While Rey nodded



Rey: "by the way dad with Taani it was my first time and with her only my last time will be there aapka beta itna bhi bigdela nahi hai" he said while stopping at his tracks


Hareesh: "I know I said just to realize you your love" Rey smiled and went





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsm 2s update next part update soon..
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HELLO GUYS I KNOW YOU ALL ARE READY TO KILL ME AND I AM READY FOR IT SRY FOR NOT POSTING STRY ACTUALLY I AM NOT WELL MY TREATMENT IS GOING ON AND MY RESULTS ARE ALSO ON THE WAY SO IN TENSION KUCH SUUJ HI NAHI RAHA HAI THIS TOPIC IS REVOLVING IN MY HEAD FROM SO LONG SO I PINNED IT DONT KNOW HOW HAS STRY CAME IT I WANT TO WRITE OS BUT BHOT BADA HO RAHA THA SO I MADE IT 2S I HAD WROTE SHOT 2 BUT WILL POST AFTER SEEING UR RESPONSE SO DO LEAVE FEEDBACK PLZZZ NEGATIVE COMMENTS ARE ALSO WELCOME...




Edited by Snehalokwani200 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
waiting for next shot
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start
loved it
take care of ur health dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome chapter
Taarey were relationship 3years
Rey though his marriage will also not succeed
Lovd the update
Egarly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update...fight n realization of luv for Tanni...ray now go n stop her...
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Nice start
Loved to see how rey stop taani
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Nice concept
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Awesome start
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